Mahabharat In Modern Days _By Frankie123_

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Aishwarya Kommu

@aishwarya48

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

ooo! Nice story yar!!!
So they all have a gf or a bf but Arjun and Drau😉😳

oops..there's also Subhi😕😛

NO! DRAU IS GOING TO GET KIDNAPPED!😭😭

Yudi and Devika part was so cute😊

How can the Kauravas kill the boy at the begginging?! They're so evil😡

Thanks for the PM⭐️⭐️

Please update fast...we are all waiting here!!!!!!😆

Edited by nadine_lopez_48 - 10 years ago

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8520NK

@8520NK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Great chapter!

The shooting of the little child was really sad! How could someone be so cruel!😡

Glad Karna is with the Pandavas this time😃

That Devika Yudhishtir part was really cute!😳

Omgg! Whose planning to kidnap Drau? *bites nails*

Update soon!😊

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Amazing 1st chapter Shristi 👏

Opening was shocking... poor boy got shot all becoz he was bringing a mango for his sister 😭... but this certainly explains how grim the tension betwn the two sides are 😳
Liked the teasing parts when Kunti teases Vru & the later blushes😳
Vru kicks Karn😆
Poor Yudi ... did not understand why Devika speaks shyly to him... come one Karn apne bhai ko tuition dena shuru karo 😉 😆
& Bheem... girl friend ko chocolate mana kya kar diya toh khud hi kha liya 🤣
God...now who ordered to kidnap Krishnaa...must be shakuni😡

Wonderful start dear 😛
Continue soon

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LiveYourDream

@LiveYourDream

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Very nice story line...

You grabbed my attention with the shocking start😆

And now suspense in the end ... good job!

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Interesting start! Those men were def. the epitome of cowardliness to have shot a harmless boy!! Anyways waiting for the ParAv convo.!

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Sethu parvathi

@SethuParvathi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

thnxx 4 the pm dear!!! continue soon!!!

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Krishnaa Nair Kooriyil

@Regina_Lupa

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

wwooiieeww i like this...

i'm having a sort of Ramleela feeling.. shoting... guns.. wwooiieeww... iof normal characters are like this.. what will be of draupadi the fire queen... uff!!

karn and vrushali is adorable.
yudi n devika is sweet...
bheem n his gf... ha ha ha.. the choco incidednt is cute,..

waiting for the next update.. update fast!!

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Shristi

@frankie123

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Bella02pie
Nice chapter Frankie😃
it is a big relief to see karna with his brothers😊
who is going to kidnap draupadi?
waiting for next part eagerly😊

hehe thank u 😊 U will see in next chapter the who will kidnap Draupadi 😳