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*** Love story of SKN***
PART 31

3 years later...

sujal aur naina ki zindagi khusiyon se bhari thi, koi kami nahi thi unki zindagi me, naina fir se maa banne waali hai aur parso uski jaan uske naveen ka 3rd birthday hai.aur is khusi me ghar me bahut shaan daar party bhi hone wali hai, in 3 saalo me bahut saari khusiyaan aayi hai sabhi ki zindagi me, rishi aur mehek ko 1 aur pyara sa beta hua hai jo abhi 1 saal ka hai jiska naam unhone rohan rakha hai , roshan aur naveen rohan ko bahut pyaar karte hai , neelu aur aalekh ko 1 pyari si beti aanchal hai, pooja uar ali k twins hue the ek beta aur ek beti jinka naam ishaan aur ishaani hai, huda aur sherry ki bhi sadi ho gayi hai pichle saal aur sherry pregnant hai, yudi ki sadi neelam se ho gayi hai & he is waiting for good news from his life, akki ne bhi do saal pehle finally charu ko prapose kar hi diya aur unki saadi bhi ho gayi aur charu aur akki apni zindagi me bahut khus hai,aman is still single but he like kanan par wo kehne se darta hai,sanjana ki sadi bahut bade NRI se karwaayi vasu ne, aur mauli ki sadi kartik naam k ladke se ho gayi hai aur uski 1 beti bhi hai .par is duniyaan ke ek kone me ek insaan aisa bhi tha jiski zindagi tabhi ruk gayi thi jab usne apne pyar apne sujal ko kho diya tha , 4 saal se jyada ho gaya hai sujal aur naina ki saadi ko par kashish aaj bhi wahi khadi hai, in 4 saalo me sabhi ne kosis ki , ki kashish apni zindagi phir se basa le par wo nahi maani, par ab proff saab ne jidd pakad li hai isliye kashish shimla wapas aa rahi hai.

r&g house


naina:- navs navs kaha ho beta plzz dhudh pi lo, hey bhagwaan ye ladka mujhe itana pareshaan kyun karta hai ( tabhi sujal aata hai offc se )

sujal:- kya hua nia kyun itana chilla rahi ho, koi bhukamp aa gaya hai kya

naina:- chillau na to aur kya karu ?, aapka ye beta , abhi roshan ke sath yahi tha par dhudh dekhte hi bhaag gaya hai ,3 saal ka h, par harkate 10 saal ke bachho ki karta hai aur mehek ne roshan ko pakad ke use dudh pila diya main gayi ise pilaane to ye maharaaj , ( naina sir pakad kar bed par baith jati hai aur sujal muskura raha hai) aapko hansi aa rahi hai.

sujal:- plzzz niaa is haalat me itani tension mat lo waise bhi agar tum itani tension logi to meri beti naraj ho jayegi

naina:- sujal aapko abhi se uski chinta hai meri nahi, aur waise bhi maine faysla kiya hai ki main abhi leave k liye application nahi dungi,

sujal:- kyunn, maine tumse kaha tha na, ki application de do , tum pregnent ho naina agar tumhe

naina:- sujal abhi main sirf 3 weeks pregnent hu, 7 mahine nahin jo aap itana panic ho rahe ho. aur ( tabhi naina ki nazar sujal par padi jo ki bahut hi intence nazaro se use dekh raha tha)aap mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho

sujal:- u know what u r looking v bful today ( he frwd to kiss her tabhi piche se )

naveen(his hands r on his hips ):- ye tya ho laha hai (naina pushes sujal)

naina:- kaha chala gaya tha tu chal dudh pi

naveen:- pehle aap batao papa tya tal lahe the ( sujal & naina both feel embarassed)

naina:- kuchhh nahi chal yahan se ( naina naveen ka haanth pakad kar le jaati h )

sujal:- hey bhagwaan iska naam naveen kya rakh diya , mujhe meri hi biwi se romance karne nahi deta, jab dekho bhai ban kar tapak padta hai, hnnn ( sujal wash room me chala jata hai)

next morning sinha hause


proff sinha hall me baithe hue koi book padh rahe the tabhi

kashish:- papa...,

proff sinha:- are kashish , beta kaisi hai tu pure 3 saal baad dekha hai tujhe aur apna khyal rakha na jyada tension to nahi leti thi, aur

kashish ( with smile):- bas bas bas papa ek sath itane saare sawaal aap bhi na, sabe pehli baat ki main bilkul theek hu aur aapke saamne khadi hu aur jahan tak baat tension ki wo to mujhe thi lekin aap ki, dekhiye na kitane duble ho gaye hai aap aur kanan kaha hai, ab to bas wahi hogi baki sab to apne apne ghar me hongi aur ( tabhi kashish , sinha saab ko dekhti hai jo use bahut pyarr se dekh rahe the)aap mujhe aisre kyun dekh rahe hai

proff sinha:-dekh raha hu ki meri sabse pyari beti aaj aur badi aur pyari ho gayi hai, jise sabki khusiyon ka khayal hai siway apne.,par agar itana hi khyal hai to 1 baar aana tha na , na tu mauli ki saadi me aayi na hi charu ki , q?

kashish:- papa plzz main bahut busy thi dono hi baar main india me thi hi nahi , par main apni sabhi behno k liye khush hu, ab mehek,rishi aur apne bachho k sath khush hai, mauli apne ghar me khush hai aur humari charu akki k ghar me ,bas ab kanan bachi hai, aur mujhe pura yakeen hai ki humari kanan ko bhi bahut pyarr karne wala jeevan sathi milega .

proff sinha:-aur tum?

kashish:- mera kya hai papa , main to bahut khush hu apni zindagi me , business world me kashish sinha ka bahut bada naam ban gaya hai

proff sinha:-kashish mujhe pata hai ki tum apne kaam me bahut kaamyaab ho par , tumhari personal life ka kya beta, kashish 4 saal se jyada ho gaya hai, mat kar aisa apne sath beta abhi teri umra hi kya hai, puri zindagi padi hai tere saamne, bhool ja sujal ko...

kashish:- basss papa , jo mere bass me nahi , plzzz wo karne ko mat kihiye , main khush hu.( kashish left frm there )

par dono ko hi nahi pata tha ki koi unki baat sunn raha hai, naina ne unki baat sunn li thi wo yahan sab ko naveen ke birthday par invite karne aayi thi, usne apne aanshu poche aur knock kiya , proff saab ne use dekha aur


proff sinha:-are naina beta , tum kab aayi

naina:- bas abhi abhi uncle , uncle aapko ko to pata hai , kal naveen ka birthday hai, to usi k liye invite karne aayi thi, waise kanan kaha hai.


proff sinha:- kanan , kashish dekho naina aayi hai

naina:- kashish ,uncle, kashish kab aayi?

proff sinha:- bas beta thode hi der hua hai ( tabhi kash aur kanan bahar aate hai)

kashish:- naina, what a pleasent surprise , kaisi ho tum? , aur ghar me sab kaise hai ?

naina:- main to bilkul theek hu , aur ghar me bhi sab theek hai, par main tumse bahut naaraz hu in 3 saalo me 1 bhi baar tumne na phone kiya na milne aayi

kashish:- wo kya hai na main busy thi par ab to aa gayi hu na , i m sorry & promise u bahut sare din reh kar hi wapas jaaungi

naina:- kanan tum kaisi ho.

kanan:- main to theek hu naina di aap kaise ho aur humara junior ?

naina:- hum dono hi bilkul theek hai

kashish:- junior, ye junior kaun hai?

kanan:- di... naina di maa banne wali hai.

kashish:- sach naina oh i m so happy for u, congratulations, aur ha kal to naveen ka birth day hai na?

naina:-thankyou kashish, aur tumhe navs ka birthday yaad hai tum us waqt yahan thi hi nahin

kashish:- to kya hua jo nahin thi yahan ,naveen mere bhi to bete ki tarah hai,

naina:- haa wo toh hai, isiliye , kal tumhe aur aap sab ko party me aana hai ,ok uncle

kashish:- hum sab aayenge naina, waise bhi mujhe sabse milna jo hai.

naina:- haan sab surprise ho jaayenge tumhe dekh kar , main kisi ko nahi bataungi ,tumhi kal aana aur sab ko surprise dena ,achha ab main chalti hu, abhi mujhe aalekh , akki aur mauli k yahan bhi jana hai,. byeee

kashish :- byeee ( and naina left )

kanan:- kya soch rahi hai di

kashish:- kuchh nahi kanan bas yahi sochh rahi hu ki waqt kitani jaldi beet jata hai.

naina in her car:- driver base camp le lo

naina in her mind with tears :- kashish aaj bhi sujal se pyarr karti hai, aaj meri wajah se hi sayad , wo apni zindagi me aage nahi badh payi hai, main aur sujal to yahi soch rahe the ki kashish apni zindagi me khush hai par nahi wo to , agar sujal ko pata chala to unhe kitana bura lagega , nahi main sujal ko kuchh nahi kahungi.

base camp

naina:-capt naina garewal reporting sir

brig :- relax ,aao naina , whats going on d case, kaha tak pahuncha

naina:- sir the case is going on v well aur jahan tak tushar rathore ka sawaal hai to wo pagal khane me hai is waqt sabhi bas isi k intezaar me hai ki 1 baar wo theek ho jaaye to hum uska jyada achhe tarah se interogation kar sakte hai.

brig :- ok carry on ,

naina:-sir kal naveen ka birthday hai, aur ghar me choti si party hai aap jarur aayiye ga

brig:- choti si party ?,,,,, sujal garewal ke bete ka birthday hai, aur choti party... kabhi ho hi nahi sakta ( naina smiles )main jarur aaunga

naina:- ok i take ur leave sir ( then naina apne office mein kaam karne lagti hai par abhi bhi kashish ka hi khyayal hai uske dil me tabhi aalekh aata hai)

aalekh:- naina kya hua tune apun ko bulaya ,

naina;- ha aalekh wo kal party me to tujhe aana hi hai, waise abhi tu free hai ( aalekh nods ) to jaakar aaj roshan ko school se aur navs ko play school se pic kark ghar chhod de , i m busy aur mehek ki aaj kuchh tabiyat sahi nahi hai

aalekh:- thik hai thik hai , apun chala jayega tu chinta mat kar , chal apun chalta hai, waise tu kahin us hatele tushaar k baare me to nahin soch rahi thi.

naina:-ha aalekh uska darr to hai, maine abhi bhi sujal ko kuchh nahi bayaha hai tusharr k bare mein aur

aalekh:- naina tu pagal ho gayi hai, tushar sirf pagal hone ka natak kar raha hai, taki wo hum sab se badla le sake , wo pagal hai nahi, ye tu achhi tarah se jaanti hai , agar usne kisi k sath kuchh bura, apun ko lagta hai tujhe sujal ko bata dena chahiye taaki wo bhi saavdhaan rahe.

naina:- hmmm , main unhe sambhalne ko keh dungi , achha abhi tu jaa mujhe reports tayyar karni hai ( aalekh left and naina thinks hey bhagwaan mere sujal aur meri pariwaar ki uss tushar se raksha karna kyuki mujhe pata hai agar tushar kisi se sabse jyada nafrat karta hai to wo main , kashish, sujal aur rishi hai plzzz god plzzz.)

r&g house

sujal offc se aata hai to dekhta hai ki naina bahut pareshaan hai

sujal:- nia kya hua koi pareshaani hai.

naina:- are sujal aap kab aaye woh bus aise hi ( sujal holds her hands )

sujal:-kya baat hai nia mujhe bhi nahi bataogi?

naina:-sujal wo ( then naina told him abt tushaar and his intensions )

sujal:- bus itani si baat are main capt naina garewal ka husband hu mera to koi baal bhi baka nahi kar sakta hai

naina:- sujal main itani tension me hu aur aapko mazaak sooj raha hai.

sujal( places his hand on her cheek):- dekho naina aaj tak humare rishtey me kai mukaam aaye, par hum nahi haare to aage jo wo upar wala chahega wahi hoga bus hamein sabra se kaam lena hoga aur ek dusre ka sath kabhi nahi chodna hai... hai na? aur tum mujhse wada karo ki mujhe chhod kar kahin nahi jaogi, humesha mere sath rahogi, to main to hamesha jitunga

naina:- main aapko chhod k kaha jaa sakti hu sujal main to humesha aapke dil mein rahungi ( then both hugs tightly)

its 12 in the night sujal aur naina dono hi naveen ke room me jaate hai aur sings

sujal & naina:- happy birthday 2 u ,happy birthday 2 u, happy birthday dear naveen, happy birthday 2 u

naveen:- thankq mumma , thankq papa i love u both

sujal:- we love u 2 beta

naveen:- papa mela gift

sujal:- to bolo kya chahiye , navs jo kahega ,papa aur mumma use denge

naveen :- to mujhe mere papa aul mumma k chhaat disney land jana hai

naina:- bus , we promise u is baar jaise hi mumma ko chhuti milegi mumma aur papa aapko lekar jarur jayenge

naveen:- sach mumma , sach papa

sujal & naina:- yes bachha.

its evening grand party for naveen garewal's birthday

sabhi guest aa chuke hai but naina ki nazar enterance par hai , aaj naina ne red colour ki saree pehnee hai aur sujal ne black colour ka suit they both r looking perfect tabhi naina ka intezaar khatm hua aur gate par use uske maa baba aalekh neelu aanchal aur kashish aur kashish ki family dikhi , naina daud kar gayi sabse pehle wo apne maa baba se mili then kashish se , baki sab kashish ko itane salo baad dekh kar bahut khush the sujal unke paas gaya aur usne sabhi bado ka ashirwaad liya , kashish ki nazar sirf sujal par thi kyuki aaj poore 3 saal 8 mahine baad usne sujal ko dekha tha aur wo uske chehre se hi bata sakti thi ki sujal apni zindagi me kitana khush hai aur aaj kashish ko apne faysle par naaz hai ki usne sujal aur naina ko milaya tha.

sujal:- kashish what a pleasent surprise ( aaj itane saalo baad kashish ko apnaa naam itana pyara laga hai & she smiles widely , naina can notice this) i m so haapy that u came. how r u?

kashish:- i m fine sujal,tum batao tum kaise ho , naina se main kal hi mil chuki hu but naveen kaha hai.

sujal:- are wo navs to ( tabhi naveen daud kar aata hai aur sujal ki paint khichta hai)

naveen:- papa , lauchhan bhaiya ko bolo na , mujhe meli chocolates nahi de lahe hai ( sujal smiles, tabhi naveen sinha saab ko dekhta hai) naanu aap aa gaye meli chocolates... ?

proff sinha:- are mere naveen se main milne aau aur uski chocolates naa lau ( then he gives him lots of chocolates kashish bas naveen ko hi dekhe jaa rahi hai aur uski baato par mushkura rahi hai)

naina:- are uncle itani sari mat dijiye ye badmaash aaj hi saari kha jayega .

sujal:- are nia aaj uska birthday hai , khane do na , kha beta kha aur kam pade na to mujhe bolana (tabhi some one calls sujal & sujal left and others too, now there r only kashish naina and naveen)

naina:- navs beta inse milo ye aapki kashish aunty hai, jaise charu masi, kanan masi, mehek chachi ,waise hi

naveen:- hello aunty & kisses on kashish's cheeks

kashish( kashish picks up naveen );- oh!! u r so sweet, beta aapka naam kya hai? ( naina is smiling)

naveen:- my name is naveen sujal galewal

kashish:- woww u have best name

rishi on the stage
ladies & gentle man a very walm wlcm to my camp's birthday party , lets cut the cake
then naina and sujal holds naveen hand & makes him cut the cake naveen firstly feeds to naina then to sujal then to others , naina makes naveen to feed kashish also , kashish is very happy arround naveen

par tabhi humari nazar window par padi waha koi khada tha jisne apne upar shawl odh rakhi thi uski sirf aankhein hi nazar aa rahi thi , wo sabko aise dekh raha hai jaise abhi sab ko khatm kar dega...

end of part 31
plzzz do comment
with love Chandni...
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*** Love story of SKN***
PART 32

par tabhi humari nazar window par padi waha koi khada tha jisne apne upar shawl odh rakhi thi uski sirf aankhein hi nazar aa rahi thi , wo sabko aise dekh raha hai jaise abhi sab ko khatm kar dega...

Yahan party bade joro soro se chal rahi hai sab dance kar rahe hai kashish, door khadi naina aur sujal ko dekh rahi hai , tabhi aalekh ki nazar window par padi usne dekha aur bahar ki taraf gaya, usne us insaan ko dhundhne ki kosis bhi ki par tab tak wo insaan jaa chuka tha , aur aalekh wapas aa gaya ,thodi der baad sabhi apne ghar chale gaye

kashish:- achha naina, sujal ab main chalti hu, papa ki bhi dawa ka waqt ho raha hai, sujal waise jo merger hone wala hai malhotras ke sath uske k liye press confrence aur party kab ki organise ki hai

sujal:- ha kshish bas do din k baad hi hai, parso and believe me kashish is merger k baad humari co. sabse powerfull hogi and thanks to u kashish ki tumne banglore me sab itane acche se sambhal liya... par ye kya tum sirf dad aur uncle ko sab phone kark batati thi progress k baare me mujhe 1 baar nhi phone nahi kiya.

kashish:- nahin sujal aisa nahin hai maine kayi baar try kiya tha par hamesha tumhara phone busy ya fir out of reach hota tha , isliye main papa ko sab bata deti thi aur fir jahan tak baat hai charu aur mauli ki saadi ki to main india me thi hi nahin us samay ye to tum jaante ho.

sujal:- its ok kashish , no problem

kashish:- waise congrats u r again going to be father, dekhna is baar beti hogi

sujal:- thanx , waise beti to mujhe bhi chahiye , kyuki wo apne papa se jyada pyarr karti hai , ye navs to naina ka chamcha hai

kashish( laughing):- sujal tum bhi na, chalo ab main chalti hu byeee, ( then kashish naina aur sabhi ko byee keh kar ghar chali jati hai sinha saab aur kanan k sath)

next day

naina is not feeling well is liye usne aaj ki leave le rakhi hai ,sujal offc me hai aur naveen play school gaya hai
naina apne kamre me yunhi baithi kuchh sochh rahi thi, tabhi mehek aur veena uske paas aate hai

mehek:- bhabhi ab aap kaisa feel kar rahe ho?

naina:- i m feeling muchh better now mehek dont worry( mehek & veena smiles)

veena:- naina kya baat hai kuchh paresaan lag rahi ho,

naina:- actually mumma main, navs ko lekar paresaan hu

veena:- kyun kaya hua navs ko?

naina:- mumma navs 3 saal ka ho gaya hai , par abhi bhi wo sahi se bol nahi pata hai, abhi bhi kuchh words , kahin aage jakar use koi pareshaani , kya hume doc ko consult karna chahiye.?

veena( smiling):- are bus itani si baat, aisa kuchh nahi hai ,wo sirf 3 saal ka hai sujal to jab 5 saal ka tha tab bhi navs ki tarah hi baat karta tha,fir dheere dheere uski jabaan sahi hui, ab navs sujal ka beta hai to apne papa ki tarah hi hoga na

naina:- ohh! mujhe laga , kya sachh mumma me sujal 5 yrs ki age tak aise hi baat karte the?

veena:- haan beta aur jitana navs tumhe pareshaan karta hai, sujal to usse kahin jyada sharaarti tha.( mehek and naina both r smiling) achha ab tu tension mat le is haal me ( tabhi aalekh calls naina)

naina:- ha aalekh bol

aalekh:- naina ek bahut buri khabar hai tushar pagal khane se bhag gaya hai.

naina:- what?( dhamaka on naina's face)

aalekh:-ha naina par tu chinta mat kar apun ne uske peeche poori military force laga di hai

naina:-thik h main kal aati hu byee

mehek:- kya hua bhabhi sab theek to hai na

naina:- nahi mehek , actually wo tushaar pagal khane se bhag nikla hai, aur sach yeh hai ki wo pagal nahi hai, wo sirf pagal hone ka natak kar raha hai. ( veena & mehek are shocked)

veena:- tu chinta mat kr bhagwaan chahega to sab theek hoga apna khyala rakh ( mehek & veena left )

next day evening

its a merger party of R&G and Malhotras, all r there even today naina's ma & baba also there for thier daughter's happiness , all of them r very happy ki finally their dreams come true for r&g

sujal ( on the stage):- thanks to all of u for coming to night , today is on of the most precious day in the history of r&g and the merger which is going to take place after few minutes will create another history in wine business and exports , so plzz wlcm to the stage mr sanjeev malhotra , the president of malhotra group and my dad mr chetan garewal and my dearest uncle mr lalit raheja. ( mr sanjeev , cg and lalit r now on the stage)

sanjeev:- thankyou mr sujal garewal , for this oportunity and now i personally annownce that in future , r&g and malhora will work together and will be one ( then he opens the bottle of their new launched drink )

all of them are very happy , and press is taking interviwes of the business tycoons ki tabhi naina ki nazar 1 saksh pe padi jo window k pass pipe pe khada tha , and he is aiming sujal, to shoot him , he is far away and naina dont have gun , so in this process she ran towards sujal to save him

naina:- SUJAAALLL...

tabhi sabko bullet ki awaaj sunayi di jo ki naina ke tummy me lagi thi aur naina ki cheekh bhi sabhi bahut shocked the sujal ko to kuchh samajh nahi aaya , naina ne use bachane k liye sujal ko push kiya isi process me goli naina ko lag gayi, aalekh ne us insaan ko dekha wo koi aur nahi balki tushaar tha , aalekh se turant apni gun nikali aur tusharr par fire kiya par tushar waha se bhaga, goli uske pair pe lagi par abhi aalekh ko naina ko dekhna tha isliye wo tushaar ko chhod kar naina k pass aaya

kashish:- sujal jaldi karo naina ko hume hospital lekar jana hoga

akki:- ha sujal jaldi kar

sujal ne naina ko apni god me uthana chaha tabhi

naina:- nahi sujal, ab bahut der ho chuki hai, , maa baba aaj bhaiya ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai, ab mujhe unke pass jana hoga, plzz sujal dont cry , agar aap tut jayenge to navs ka kya hoga aur sujal aapko yaad hai ki maine 1 baar aap se kaha tha ki IS DUNIYAAN ME KOI AISA INSAAN HAI JO AAPKE LIYE APNI JAAN BHI DE SAKTA HAI, wo maine apne hi liye kaha tha , aur aaj dekhiye main kitani khush naseeb hu ki aaj apne sujal k liye jaan de rahi hu.

sujal:- shut up just shut up niaa kuchh nahi hoga tumhe samjhi,

naveen:- mumma, mumma ( he is crying badly buts kashish holds him & comforting him and naina smiles )

naina:- sujal, main is duniyaan se puri hokar jaa rahi hu

kashish:- ye tum kya keh rahi ho naina tumhe kuchh nahi hoga samjhi, abhi to tumhe sujal ka dhyan rakhna hai naveen ko sambhlna hai ( naina smiles)

naina:- nahi kashish kisne kaha ki mere sujal aur naveen ko main akela chhod kar jaa rahi hu , main tumhe inki jimmedaari de rahi hu( all r shocked , aalekh aur sujal sirf naina ko dekh rahe hai na kuchh bol rahe hai na hi ro rahe hai) aur meri prem kahani to puri ki hai tumne ,ab mera ye farz hai ki tumhari prem kahani ko main puri karu mujhe to sab mil gaya jise chaha , usne mujhe chaha , usse meri saadi hui aur usi k bachhe ki maa bhi bani main. main puri ho chuki hu aur sath hi sath meri prem kahani bhi puri ho gayi hai ab mujhe kuchh nahi chahiye, bas ek wada chahiye tumse aur sujal se boliye sujal karenge na meri akhiri khwaish ko poora ( sujal just staring at her) wada kijiye sujal ki aap kashish se saadi karoge aur use bahut pyarr doge aur ha kashish wada karo ki tum navs ko maa ki kami mehsoos nahi hone dogi ( all shocked & r crying) aur bus ek kaam adhura reh gaya hai ki maine sujal ko unki beti dene ka wada kiiya tha par wo pura nahinn kar payi par ab tum unki us kwaaish ko pura zaroor karana ( naina ki saansein bhari ho rahi thi)sujal plzz wada kijiye wada karo kashish tum karogi, nahin to chain se nahiin jaa paaungi plzzz wada karrroo, (naina ki aankhein bas band hi hone wali thi ki) sujjjalll www aadddaaa

kashish:- haan naina main waada karti hu, but plzz dont go

Naina:- S S...Ssujjjalll ?????

sujal:- karunga jo tum kahogi sab karunga but plzzz dont leave me naina, tumne mujhse kaha tha ki mujhe akela chhod kar kahin nahi jaaogi plzzz plzzz dont leave me

niana:-main tooo hhhamesha aapke dil me rahunngggi sssuuujaalll ( & with sweet smile she left her beautiful world & closed her eyes )

ma:- nainaaa, meri bachhiii

sujal bilkul chup ho gaya aur , sujal aur aalekh kuchh nahi bol rahe hai baki sabhi naina k pass baith kar ro rahe hai aur kashish naveen ko apne seene laga kar ro rahi hai

end of part 32
plzzz do comment
with love Chandni...
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Such a new concept...so fresh...so new and such a delight to read such new piece writing. I am excited to read more.
Lots of luck
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superb parts loved it
all are so happy and wonderful moments
omg what a tragic end of beautiful moments
naina is no more but she wants sujal and kashish to get married
excited for next part
continue soon
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Hey Chandni..
Wow yaar..I can't express in words that how you have described it so well..it is a mixture of tragic and happy moments...It's just an awesome part!!
I will seriously curse the person who shot our Naina!! 🤬...
It is hard to believe that Naina is no more !! Feeling very terrible for Sujal!!😭..And her last wish was SK to get married..I hope Sujal gets married to Kashish..and Kashish also supports him during his rough time kyunki Sujal ne uska Nia ko kho diya hai!! Please continue soon dear!!
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Thanx every one for liking my fic😊 till now plzzz do read and do ur valuable comments which means a lot to me and I m really very sorry if I have hurted any ones feeling about naina's death😭 thanx for alls supports 😊😊
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*** Love story of SKN***
PART 33

sujal bilkul chup ho gaya aur , sujal aur aalekh kuchh nahi bol rahe hai baki sabhi naina k pass baith kar ro rahe hai aur kashish naveen ko apne seene laga kar ro rahi hai , Thodi der baad sab naina ko ghar laate hai, aur akki ne naina k frnds ko inform kiya to yudi ali aur pooja to subah tak pahuch gaye par huda aur sherry abhi tak nahi pahuche the subah ho chuki thi aur sabhi ne antim sanskaar ki tayyari bhi kar li hai , sujal bas naina ko dekhe jaa raha hai puri raat usne apni palke nahi jhapkaayi aur veena ko sujal k liye bahut darr lag raha hai

akki( places his hand on sujal's soulder):- sujal chal naina ko le jana hai ( par sujal hila tak nahi, sab ne kosis ki par sujal bas baitha hai kuchh nahi bol raha, tabhi aalekh aur akki sujal ko pakad kar apne sath le gaye )

sujal ne saari vidhiya ki naina ka antim sanskaar bhi kar diya hai par abhi bhi chupp hai , yahan ghar par naveen naina ke liye ro raha hai sab use chup karane ki kosis kar rahe hai par wo kisi ki baat nahi maan raha phir kashish badi mushkil se use chup kara kar use uske kamre me le jaati hai aur sula deti hai bahut rone ki wajah se naveen turant so gaya.sabhi wapas aa gaye aur sujal sidha apne kamre me chala gaya aur door lock kar liya usne

akki:- aunty mujhe sujal ki bahut chinta ho rahi hai , wo na kuchh bol raha hai na ro raha hai, bus ander hi ghut raha hai, hum sab jaante hai ki sujal, naina ko kitana chahta hai ( kashish ye sab sunn rahi hai aur hazaar maut marr rahi thi usne faysla kiya ki wo sujal ko naina ki maut k gam se baahar jarur nikalegi , par abhi sujal ko akela chhodna hi behtar hoga)

aise hi 13 din beet gaye aaj naina ki terahwi thi sab kuchh acche se ho gaya par ab bhi sujal kisi se baat nahi karta siway naveena aur veena k wo naveen ko apne paas sulata hai kashish rozz aati hai aur naveen se baat karne ki use pyar dene ki kosis karti hai par naveen kashish se door bhagta hai. naina k sabhi frnds bhi wapas chale gaye hai

1 month later...
is 1 mahine me sujal 1 bhi din office nahi gaya bas apne kamre me hi rehta hai , kashish rozz apne ghar se r&g house aati hai, aur naveen ko play school chodne jaati hai phir use pic kark , ghar me chhod kar wapas chali jaati hai . offc me bhi sujal ka pura kaam kashish hi dekh rahi hai , par wo utana achhe se office nahi sambhal paa rahi jaise sujal karta tha , ek din aalekh aaya aur sujal k kamre me gaya

aalekh:- sujal, ( sujal looks at him and agian looked at down) sujal apun jaanta hai ki tu apun ki naina se kitana pyaar karta hai , par sujal kisi k jaane se zindagi nahi rukti , phir to naina to humesha hi tujhe khush dekhna chahti thi , achha chal apne liye na sahi navs k liye kya uske liye teri koi zimmedaari nahi banti, apni maa to kho hi chuka hai ,aur dheere dheere apne baap ko bhi kho dega wo aur khud bhi

sujal:- chupp khbardaar jo naveen k baare me khuchh bhi galat bola to

aalekh;- bura laga na , apne bete k baare me galat sunte hi bura laga to soch us maa pe kya guzar rahi hogi jo apne bete ko roz marta dekhti hai , soch us bhai pe guzarti hogi jo apne big b ki khusiyaan chahta hai, soch us bacche pe kya guzar rahi hogi jisne sirf 3 saal ki umra me apni maa kho di ab apne papa ko bhi unhi yaadon me khota hua dekhta hai, main yeh nahin keh raha ki tu naina ko bhul ja, naina ko tu kya koi bhi nahi bhul sakta par apna khyal rakh apne bachhe ka khayal rakh tere upar uski bahut badi zimmedari hai ( aur itana keh kar aalekh apne aanshun pochhte hue kamre se bahar chala gaya & veena ne sab suna aur wo bhi rote hue wahan se chali gayi abhi bhi naina k maa aur baba r&g house me hai aur kal jaa rahe hai, naina ki maa veena k paas gayi jo apne kamre me ro rahi thi)

maa:- behen ji,( veena looks at her & wipes her tears )

veena:- are ander aaiye waha kyun khadi hai

maa:- main aapse kuchh baat karna chahti hu, main jaanti hu ki abhi sahi waqt nahi hai, maine apni beti ko bhi kho diya hai par apne sujal aur naveen ko nahin khona chahti hu, sujal ko ek sahare aur naveen ko ek maa ki jarurat hai , hum sab hai, par naina ki kami to hum puri nahin kar sakte na, apni beti k baare me aisa bol rahi hu wo bhi sirf uske jaane k 1 mahine baad, par behenji sujal bhi mera beta hai , aur naina ne jate waqt kashish ko sujal aur naveen ki jimmedaari saupi thi, aur mujhe pura yakeen hai ki agar meri beti ne kashish ko sujal aur naveen k liye chuna hai to sahi hoga bas main yahi chahti hu ki humare jane baad chahe kuchh din baad hi sahi aap sujal aur kashish ki saadi kara de taki meri beti ki aatma ko shanti mil jaye, sujal ko ek jeevan sathi aur naveen ko uski maa

veena:- main aapki baat samjh rahi hu behen ji par mujhe nahi lagta ki abhi sujal maanega thode din baad main use jarur baat karungi , aur aap kuchh din aur ruk jaati to

maa:- nahin behen ji, ab humen jana hi hoga par main sujal aur kashish ki sadi ki khabar ka intezaar jarur karungi.

aur agle hi din naina k ma baba nainital wapas laut gaye, is umeed se ki saayad sujal maan jaye.
ab aise hi din kat rahe hai, sujal ab kuchh bat karne laga hai , ofc bhi jata hai par uska mann nahin lagta hai kisi bhi kaam me aur kashish jitana hi naveen k paas jane ki kosis karti hai wo nakamyaab ho jati hai, kashish ko samajh nahi aa raha hai ki din b din naveen usse door kyun ho raha hai usse darta kyun hai.
sujal apne kamre me hai use naina ki bahut yaad aa rahi , wo bed par baitha hua sirf naina ki tasveer dekh raha hai

tadap yeh ishq ki dil se kabhi nahin jaati
ki jaan dege k bhi , diwaangi nahi jaati
na jaane kaun si duniyaan hai wo mere rabba
jahan se laut kar koi, sada nahi aati

( sujal naina ki tasveer ko haanth me liye hue baitha hai aur uski aankhon ke saamne naina ka chehra hai jab wo apni aakhiri saansein le rahi thi)

ishq me to har cheez mitt jati hai
bekarari banke humein tadpaati hai
bekarari banke humein tadpaati hai
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai

(sujal apne kamre ki khidki pe khada chand ko dekh raha hai aur uski aankhon se lagataar aanshun beh rahe hai)

ishq me to har
cheez mitt jati hai
bekarari banke humein tadpaati hai
bekarari banke humein tadpaati hai
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai
woh teri yaad yaad , wo teriii yaad yaaad
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai
( sujal akela raste pe chal raha hai uski aankhien sujhi hui hai aur baal bikhre hue hai aur apni hi duniyaan me khoya hua hai)

kark tanha yeh, zindagaaniii
tum gayi chhod k, kahaaaniii
ab ye aanshun, piyaa na jaayee
bin tere ab jiya naa jayeee
dard se tootati, mere saansein
zakhm dil ka, siyaan na jaye
dard se tootati, mere saansein
zakhm dil ka, siyaan na jaye
aaja aaja meri wafa tujhe bulaati hai
aaja aaja meri wafa tujhe bulaati hai
( sujal chalte chalte ek pool site resutrant k paas pahuch jata hai aur use uske aur naina k saare pal yaad aa rahe h jo kabhi usne yahan bitaye the aur sujal ke chehre par muskaan aa jati hai par turant hi wo mushkaan gayab bhi ho jaati hai)

yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai
woh teri yaad yaad , wo teriii yaad yaaad
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai

yaad me dekho bana hai yeh haseen taaj mahal
yaad me koi likhe , samom seher shokh gazal
aahaaahhhahhhahhh
yaad me dekho bana hai yeh haseen taaj mahal
yaad me koi likhe , samom seher shokh gazal
dil k dariyaan me khilta hai, kawaaabo ka kawal
yaad aate hai hume saamo guzre hur pall
( sujal apne kamre me jata hai jahan naveen bed par so raha hai aur kashish uske bagal me baithi hai kashish sujal ko dekhte hi uth k wahan se chali jaati hai aur sujal naveen k paas jaakar use apne seene se laga lleta hai aur uske baalo pe apna haanth fer raha hai)

tu nahi hain, terrii yadien mujhe satati hai
tu nahi hain, terrii yadien mujhe satati hai
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai
(sujal naveen ko pakde hai aur saamne deewaar pe lagi naina ki tasweer ko dekhe ja raha hai)

ishq me to har
cheez mitt jati hai
bekarari banke humein tadpaati hai
ishq me to har mitt jati hai
bekarari banke humein tadpaati hai
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai
woh teri yaad yaad , wo teriii yaad yaaad
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai
yaad yaad yaad , bas yaad reh jaati hai
( kashish door par khadi hai aur sujal ko dekh rahi hai use sujal ki haalat dekhi nahi jaa rahi hai , sujal ka har ek aanshun kashish k dil ko cheer ker nikal raha hai , tabhi mehek aati hai aur kashish k soulder par apna haanth rakhti hai aur kashish mehek ki taraf 1 nazar dekh kar wahan se chali jaati hai)

aise hi ab naina ko gaye hue 5 mahine se jyada ho raha hai, sabki life normal ho chuki hai siway sujal aur naveen k ab veena ne faysla kiya hai ki wo sujal aur naveen ki zindagi me , khusiyaan lakar hi rahegi , saam ka waqt hai sujal ofc se aata hai , tabhi wo dekhta hai ki naveen so raha hai aur veena uske bagal mein baithti hai sujal veena ko dekh kar halka musukura deta hai

veena:- sujal tu fresh ho ja main tere liye khana laga deti hu

sujal:- nahin mumma rehne dijiye mujhe bhook nahin hai ( tabhi veena sujal k paas jati hai uska haanth pakad kar use bed pe bitha deti hai tabhi naveen ki neend khul jati hai par wo kuchh nahih bolta )

veena:- sujal tujhe yaad hai ki naina kya chahti thi , kya tu uski aakhiri icchha poori nahin karega beta mere khyayal se tujhe ,tujhe kashish se saadi

sujal:- plzzz mumma , naina ne jab apna wada nahin nibhaya to main bhi apna wada nahin nibhaunga , usne wada kiya tha mujhse ki mujhe chhod kar kabhi nahi jayegi to kyun chali gayi ha , mere aur mere naveen k liye naina ki yaadien kafi hai main saadi nahin karunga

veena:- thik hai mana ki tere liye naina ki yaadien kafi hai , par naveen k liye nahin 1 baar to uske baare soch wo bachha hai aur use uski maa ki jarurat hai aur jahan tak mujhe pata h kashish se achhi tujhe na patni mil sakti hai aur na hi naveen ko kashish se achhi koi maa, aur kya main dekh nahi rahi jabse naina gayi hai tera har kaam kashish sambhal rahi hai , tere bachhe ko wo sambhal rahi hai,tere pariwaar ka dhyaan rakhti hai, haan hum sab hai par use uski maa ki jarurat hai, ek baar naina ka pati nahi sirf naveen ka pita ban kae soch sujal , maan ja ,maan ja beta apne bachhe k liye , apni is maa k liye jo tujhe aise nahin dekh sakti ( aur veena rote rote wahan se chali jati hai)

yahan sujal ko naina ki akhiri ichha yaad aa rahi hai veena k sabd, aur naveen yeh soch raha ki kashish aunty uski mumma banegi

aise hi 3 din gujar gaye sujal sirf aur sirf veena ki baato me uljha hua hai ab ek din saam ko wo kashish k ghar aata hai, proff sinha use dekh kar khush ho jate hai

proff sinha:- are sujal beta , kaise ho , itane dino baad aye ho aao baitho

sujal:- uncle mujhe kashish se baat karni hai wo kahan hai

proff sinha:- kashish kanan dekho sujal aaya hai ( aur kashish aur kanan bahar aate )

sujal:- kashish mujhe tumse kuchh baat karni hai

kashish:- haan bolo sujal sab theek to hai naa?

sujal:- kashish kya tumhari zindagi me koi hai ( kashish shocked ho jati hai ki sujal aise baatein kyun kar raha hai)

kashish:sujal ye tum

sinha saab aur kanan ko bhi kuchh samajh nahi aa raha hai

sujal:- kashish kya tum kisi se pyar karti ho?

kashish;- nahin , meri zindagi me koi nahin hai

sujal:- MUJHSE SAADI KAROGI KASHISH ( kashish ko to yakeen hi nahin ho raha tha ki sujal usse yeh puchh raha hai),,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,


end of part 33
plzzz do comment
with love Chandni...
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*** Love story of SKN***
PART 34

sujal:- MUJHSE SAADI KAROGI KASHISH ( kashish ko to yakeen hi nahin ho raha tha ki sujal usse yeh puchh raha hai)

kashish:- sujalll

sujal:- kashish main tumpe koi dawaav nahi daal raha hu , tum naina ki ichhha achhi tarah se jaanti ho, aur main bus use poori karna chahta hu aur mujhe mere bete ki parvarish k liye , tumhara sath chahiye kya dogi tum mera sath ?, aakhiri faysla tumhara hi hoga , & i m sorry agar tumhe meri koi bhi baat buri lagi ho to, apna faysla mujhe bata dena byeee ( sujal turns to go tabhi)

kashish:- main taiyyaar hu sujal, main tumse sadi karungi ( sujal turns )

sujall:- kashish koi jaldi nahin hain , tum aaraam se, uncle se baat

kashish:- maine kaha na sujal main taiyyar hu, saayad tum bhuul rahe ho ki maine bhi naina se 1 wada kiya tha , aur jahan tak papa ka sawaal hai to mujhe pura yakeen hai ki wo bhi mere is fasley se sehmat hai (sujal looks at proff & he nods with smile)

sujal:- theek hai par main nahi chahta ki yeh saadi dhoom dhaam se ho main court marriage chahta hu, agar tumhe

kashish:- mujhe koi pareshaani nahi hai , jab tum chaho

proff sinha:- to sujal hum kal hi court marriage karwa lete hai , kya fark padta hai

kashish:- papa kal hi

sujal:- q tumhe koi prblm hai?

kashish:- nahi jaisa aap loge chaho

sujal:- theek hai to main kal subah 11 baje , aap sab ka court me intezaar karunga , chalta hu ( aur sujal ghar chala jata hai)

kashish:- papa maine

proff sinha:- tumne bilkul sahi faysla kia hai kashish , mujhe tum par naaz hai ( kashish smiles & hugs her father)

sujal ghar jata hai aur sabko uski aur kashish ki court marriage ki baat batata hai , sab pehle court marriage ki baat se khush nahi the , par baad me maan gaye

court:-----
sujal apne pure pariwaar k sath court k bahar khada hai, aalekh aur neelu bhi hai, tabhi kashish pure red colour ki saree me aati hai , use dekhte hi sujal ko naina ki yaad aati hai jab pehli baar naina ne aisi hi red colour ki saaree pehni thi fir sab court me jaate hai , registraar sujal aur kashish ko paper sign karne k liye deta hai ,pehle sujal karta hai aur fir kashish , aur is tarah sujal aur kashish ki sadi ho jaati hai

veena:- sujal beta , mana ki tum dono ne court marriage ki hai par beta main chahti hu ki tu kashish ki maang bharkar use mangal sutra pehna aur tum dodno 1 dusre ko ye angoothi bhi pehnaao

sujal veena k haanth se angoothi lekar kashish ko pehna deta hai, fir kashish bhi sujal ko ring pehna deti hai, fir sujal sindur thani lekar kashish ki maang bhar deta hai aur kashish apni aankhien band kar leti hai aaj kashish apne aap ko bahut khushnaseeb samajh rahi thi aur fir sujal kashish ko mangal sutra pehna deta hai , aur sab court k baahar khade hai

kashish:- papa plzz apna dhyan rakhna aur kanan tumhe papa ki dawai aur khane ka dhyaan rakhna hai

kashish ki aankh me aanshu the akhir jaise bhi ho aaj uski saadi hui hai aur ye uski bidaai hai , fir sinha saab kashish aur sujal dono ko hi aashirwaad dete hai aur kashish sab ke sath r&g house chali jaati hai, veena kashish ki aarti karti hai par sujal ke chehre par koi expression nahi hai wo stern face k sath kada hai, fir veena kashish ko chawal ka kalash gira kar , kumkum wale thaal par pair rakh kar grah pravesh karne ko kehti h, aur kashish bilkul waisa hi karti hai sath hi uske dil me hai ki sujal ki zindagi se dhukh aur takleef mita kar hi rahegi

veena:- mehek jaao beta kashish ko uske kamre me le jao

vasu:- veena tum to aise keh rahi ho ki, kashish is ghar me nayi hai aur usne sujal ka kamra dekha hi na ho hnnn

lalit:- vasubdhara bas bhi karo

mehek :- kashish di chaliye ( aur mehek kashish ko sujal k kamre me le jati hai aur sujal wahi se ofc chala jata hai)

mehek:- di aap thik to hai na?

kashish:- haan mehek main bilkul theek hu tum chinta mat karo, aur ye naveen kaha hai? (tabhi naveen aata hai )

naveen:- chaachi , chaachi, mujhe bhook lagi hai

mehek:- ha navs dekho beta ye tumhari mumma hai

naveen :- yeh meri mumma nahi hai, yeh to kashish aunty hai,meri mumma to ( points his little finger on naina's pic) wo hai.

kashish( bends on her knees & holds naveen frm his soulder):- beta aapne bilkul sahi kaha ki wo hi aapki mumma hai, par beta maine na aapke papa se saadi ki hai ,isliye ab main aapki kashish ma hu aap mujhe kashish ma bulaoge na( navs looks at mehek & mehek nods in yes )

naveen:- ok , par aap mujhe maloge to nahi

kashish:- no beta , main to aapko bahut pyar karungi ( naveen nods , with fear)

naveen:- chachi mujhe bhook lagi hai

kashish:- mehek tum iske liye khana la do main ise khila dungi ( mehek nods)

naveen:- nahi mujhe mehek chachi k haanth chhe tana hai , main sirf apni mumma , dadi ya mehek chachi k haanth chhe hi tana tata hu( aur naveen wahan se bhaag jata hai)

mehek:-dii sorry wo kya hai ki navs , par dont worry dheere dheere use aapki bhi aadat ho jayegi , main use khana khila kar aati hu ( kashish nods & thinks ki ye naveen ko kya hota jaa raha hai jitna wo uske pass jaane ki kosis karti hai utna hi wo usse door ho rahi hai)

isi tarah pura din beet jata hai aur raat ko sujal aata hai to dekhta hai ki naveen kamre me nahiin hai aur kashish bed par baithi kuchh soch rahi hai, sujal kuchh nahi kehta seedhe wash room me chala jata kashish ko bahut bura lagta hai par wo neeche sujal ke liye khana lane chali jati hai jab sujal wash room se aata hai to dekta hai ki kashish room me nahi hai aur wo sofe me jaa kar baith jata hai aur kuchh soch raha hai tabhi kashish khane ki plate lekar aati hai

kashish:- sujal khana kha lo ( sujal nods & starts eating)

sujal:- navs kaha hai kashish

kashish:- wo to mehek k kamre me hai aur mehek ne use khana bhi khila diya hai wo roshan aur rohan k sath khel raha hai, main abhi thodi der baad use le aaungi.

sujal:- hmmm

kashish:- sujal yeh main bhi achhi tarah se jaanti hu aur tum bhi ki humne saadi q ki hai , sujal hum pehle bhi frnds the aur aaj bhi hai, to mujhe lagta hai ki hume apne rishtey ki suruaat frndship se hi karni chahiye , humare beech ye jo awkwardness aa gayi hai sadi k baad wo nahi honi chahiye ( sujal nods & finishes his food then kashish pics up the and turn to go )

sujal;- kashish( kashish turns)i m sorry , i know kashish tumne bhi apni sadi k liye bahut se sapne dekhe honge but , i need some time mujhe humare naye rishtey ko accept karne me time lagega , main naina ko kabhi nahi bhul sakta aur na hi naina ki jagah tumhe de sakta hu par apni taraf se is ristey ko puri imaan daari se nibhane ki kosis jarur karunga bas tum mere navs ka khayal rakho aur mujhe kuchh nahi chahiye

kashish:- sujal juth nahi bolungi, par mujhe tumhare dil me naina ki jagah nahin chahiye, kyuki main jaanti hu, main tumhare dil me to kya kisi k dil me naina ki jagah nahi le sakti , main bus sabke dil apni ek nayi jagah banana chahti hu aur kuchh nahi ( sujal nods & smiles) sujal frnds( she frwd her hand and sujal takes it) main naveen ko lekar aati hu

sujal:- waise u can call him navs , ghar me sab use navs hi kehte hai ( kashish smiles and left )

kashish comes to meheks room jahan rohan aur navs khel rahe hai

kashish:- navs chalo beta chal kar so jaao, aapke papa aapko bula rahe hai ( navs daud kar waha se chala jata hai )

mehek:-di sujal bhaiya ne kuchh kaha aapse se, aaj to aapki aur unki ,

kashish:- mehek tum sujal k baare me aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho,jaanti ho mehek main intne saal sujal se door thi par , jitana usse door rahi hu utana hi jayada achhe se jana hai use , utana hi jayada chaha hai, ha mehek main sujal se aaj bhi bahut pyaar karti hu , in chaar salo me aisa 1 pal nahi gujra jab maine use yaad na kiya ho, bas main ab sujal ka pyarr pana chahti hu aur , navs ki maa banna chahti hu, use itana pyarr dena chahti hu ki navs ko kabhi yeh mehsoos na ho ki main uski mumma nahi hu, use naina ki kami kabhi mehsoos na ho , par ha main kabhi bhi navs k dil se naina ki yaadien mitane nahi dungi,use hamesha yaad rahega ki uski mumma duniya ki sabse achhi beti , sabse achhi behen, sabse achhi patni aur sabse achhi ma thi , mehek aaj naina ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai,tumse jhut nahi bolungi mehek, jis din mujhe pata chala ki sujal naina se pyaar karta hai, us din mujhe naina se nafarat ho rahi thi gussa thi main usse ki, kyun wo meri aur sujal ki zindagi me aayi aur mujhse mere sujal ko humesha k liye door kar diya , mujhse sujal ko chheen liya , par main galat thi, naina ne sujal ko chheena nahi tha , usne to sujal ko paya tha apni acchayiyon se , aur maine use isliye kho diya tha kyuki mujhe apne pyar par vishwaas nahi tha, par ab main apni taraf se poori kosis karungi ki sujal k dil me wahi jagah bana sakun jo kabhi meri hua karti thi

mehek:- aapne bilkul sahi kaha di, bhabhi thi hi aisi, par mujhe pura yakeen hai ki aap apne maksad me 1 din jarur kamiyaab hongi aur aapne jitane gam dekhein hai aapko kayi jayada khushiyaan milengi. jaanti hai di bhabhi humesha kehti thi, ki'' main is duniyaan ki sabse khusnaseeb ladki hu jinhe sujal jaisa pati mila hai aur sujal se jyada pyar karne wala pati to kabhi mujhe mil hi nahiin sakta tha'' aur mujhe pura yakeen hai ki meri di bhi ek din mujhse yahi kahegi

kashish:- bhagwaan kare mehek , ki jo tumne kaha hai wo sach ho jaye aur sujal mujhe thoda sa pyaar karne lage aur mujhe kuchh nahi chahiye

mehek:- aisa hi hoga ( & both smiles )

par dono ko hi nahi pata tha ki rishi aur veena bahar khade unki baat sunn rahe the

veena:-rishi ab mujhe puraa yakeen hai ki , mere sujal ki zidagi mein khusiyaan phir se aa jayengi, naina ne bilkul sahi aysla kiya hai , hai na?

rishi:-ha mumma ( then veena left & rishi enters in his room )

kashish:- main chalti hu gn

rishi:- kashish wo, aa kashish bhabhi wo, aap theek to hona ?

kashish:- ya rishi i m fine gn

rishi:- gn

jab kashish kamre pahunchi h to usne dekha ki sujal ne naveen ko bed pe sula diya tha aur, use dekhte hi wo bed se uth gaya

sujal:-kashish navs so gaya hai tum bhi so jaao, gn ( kashish nods aur sujal bed se ap na pillow le kar sofe me jaa kar late jata hai)

kashish:- sujal tum bed pe so jaao navs ke pass main sofe pe

sujal:- no kashish i m fine ( fir kash jaa kar change karti hai aur naveen k pass aakar use pakad kar so jaati hai)

aise hi din beetne lage inkni zindagi me par kashish ko abhi bhi navs k sath prblms hai, abhi bhi navs usse jyada baat nahi karta hai , usse darta hai, par sujal aur kash ab jyada achhe dost bann gaye hai ,sujal kashish ka khayal bhi rakhta hai jisse kashish bahut khus hai, par kashish ko navs ki chinta lagi rehti hai

one morning

sujal is getting ready for the ofc aur kashish navs ko play school k liye ready kar rahi hai

sujal:- achha kashish main chalta hu , i m getting v late , meri bahut impt meeting hai to plzz tum aaj navs ko school chhod dena ok , navs aapko aapki kashish maa school drop karegi ok byee

naveen :- papa mujhe inke chhath nahi jaana , yeh gandi hai( dhamake on sujal & kashish's face)

sujal:- beta aapse kisne kaha ki yeh gandi hai, dekho yeh aapka kitana khayal rakhti hai, kya kabhi inhone aapko danta hai ? ( navs nos in no) to fir , aisa, nahi kehte na, ye bhi to aapki mumma ki tarah hai na?

naveen ( crying):- wo papa , mujhe vachhu dadi ne bola tha, ki yeh meli mumma nahi hai, she hates my mumma, she hates me ( dhamake on sujal & kashish's face), yeh mujhe malengi, tana bhi nahi tilayeingi, aul jaise mumma chali gayi hai, waichhe aapko bhi mujhchhe dool kal deingi( dhamake on sujal & kashish's face & navs hugs sujal v tightly aur kashish ko ab samajh me aa gaya ki kyun naveen usse darta hai aur usse door bhagta hai then kash wipes her tears and holds naveen by his soulder)

kashish:- beta kya maine kabhi aapko maara hai ?( navs nods in no) kya kabhi aapko danta hai ya chilla kar baat ki hai,?( navs nods in no)kya kabhi apko khelne se roka?( navs nods in no)kya kabhi aapko chocolates dene se mana kiya hai?( navs nods in no), to phir... nahi beta, main aapki mumma nahin hu, aapki mumma wo ( points at naina's pic) hai, main to aapki best frnd hu aapki kashish maa hu hai na ( navs smiles & sujal too)

naveen:- to aap mujhcche hate nahi kalti

kashish:- no beta , i love u very muchh sabse jyada

naveen:- aap mucche malogi bhi nahi aur datogi bhi nahi?

kashish:- kabhi nahi meri jaan , aapki kashish maa apko bahhhuuutt pyaar karti hai, but 1 promise karo ki aaj ke baad aap apni kashish maa se kabhi daroge nahin , naa hi koi baat chipaoge aur koi kuchh galat kahe aapko to aap apni kashish maa ko bataoge , phir hum dono mil kar uski khoob pitayi karenge, promise ( kashish frwds her hand and naveen places his tiny hand on top of hers)

naveen:- promichh

kashish:- now stop crying aur neeche jaao kashish maa abhi aati hai ok ( kashish wipes navs's tears and navs ran away) sujal mujhe to yakeen nahi ho raha ki vasu mumma is hadd tak

sujal:- ha kashish, main abhi aunty se ( he frwds to go to vasu , but kashish holds his hands)

kashish:- nahi sujal, tum unhe kuchh nahi kahoge , unhone mere bachhe ko takleef di hai,aur main yeh bardaast nahi karungi , us masum ke dil me na jane kya kya, par ab i m not going to spare her , tum office jao ( sujal nods & left )

fir kashish roshan ko school chhodti hai aur navs ko uske play school aur ghar aati hai wo bahut gusse me hai kyuki roshan ne kashish ko bataya hai ki naina k jaane baad , vasu ne navs pe haanth bhi uthaya tha aur use daraya bhi tha ki wo kisi ko kuchh na bole , sabhi bade sofe par baithe aur mehek kuchh kaam kar rahi hai.

kashish:-MRS VASHUNDHARA RAHEJAaa...

end of part 34
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with love Chandni...
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*** Love story of SKN***
PART 35

kashish:- MRS VASHUNDHARA RAHEJA
( sabhi shocked the ki kashish , jo kabhi kisi se unchi awaaj me baat tak nahi karti wo aaj is tarah) aap ke char bachhe the haina, par unme se 1 jaanwar tha aur dusra bahut hi achha par ab dono hi is duniyaan me nahi hai

vasu:- kashish tum ye bhool rahi ho ki

kashish:- ji nahin main kuchh nahi bhool rahi, aapko aapki asliyat dikha rahi hu, bhagwaan ne aapse aapk bachhe cheene kyuki aap maa kehlane k layak hi nahi hai, kyuki jo aurat dusro k bachho k sath aisa salook kare

veena:- kashish beta kya hua , ye tum is tarah

kashish:- ha mumma , aapko pata hai , jabse naina gayi hai, ye navs ko darati hai ( dhamake on all's face), use marti hai( dhamake on all's face)aur use dhamkaya bhi ki agar usne kisi ko kuchh bataya to ye uske papa ko bhi usse door kar dengi , yahan tak ki inhone navs k dil me mere liye zahar bhar rakha hai ( dhamake on all's face), usse ye kaha hai ki main usse uske papa chhin lungi, use maarungi, usse aur uski mumma se nafarat karti hu main, aur isliye mumma navs mujhe door bhagta tha , darta tha mujhse ( dhamake on all's face) ( tuns to vasu)aapko sharm nayi us maasum se bachhe k upar haanth uthate hue, use mere khilaaf bhadkaate hue, main aapko last warning de rahi hu ki agar aapne mere bachhe ki taraf aankh utha kar bhi dekha na to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga ye baat dhyaan me rakhana, aur ha sukra manaiye ki sujal ko ye nahi pata hai ki aapne kai baar navs ko mara hai aur use dhamkkaya hai,warna jo aap is ghar me ho naa wo bhi nahi rahengi

vasu:- kashish tumhari himmat kaisi hui

kashish:- kyuki main kashish sujal garewal hu , sujal garewaal ki patni, wo sujal garewaal jiski badaulat aap yahan araam se khadi hai, kyuki aapke mahaan bete piyush raheja ne to is ghar ko barbaad kar hi diya tha, aap jo 70% ,70% ka raagh gati hai na , to sachhayi ye hai ki, piyush ki badaulat is ghar me aur is business me aap ka 1% bhi nahi bacha tha ( dhamake on vasu's face ) kyuki piyush ne wo saara paisa drugs aur weapons me invest kark rakha tha aur baad me wo drugs aur weapons aarmy ne baramad kiye the , yahan tak jo property sujal k naam thi , jo baad me papa ne piyush k naam kar di thi wo bhi piyush ne barbaad kar diya tha bus jo property rishi k naam thi bas wahi bacha tha jo sirf aur sirf 15% thi aur usi 15% ko sujal aur rishi fir se 100 % banaya hai aur aaj r&g no1 hai..., aur ha yeh sab mujhe ,rishi ,naina aur papa ko 4 saal pehele se pata hai, par sujal ne aap sabko batane se mana kiya tha aur agar sujal ko yeh pata chala ki aapne, uske bete navs pe to, wo kya karega iska andaza bhi aapko nahin hai ,(turns to lalit)maanf kijiyega papa aaj mujhe bolna pada ,(back to vasu) aur haan aap, aaj k baad mere bete ki taraf aankh utha k bhi mat dekhna. ( kashish left in anger)

vasu:- lalit ye ye kya bol kar gayi

lalit:- usne jo bola hai bilkul sahi bola hai, aur vasundhara tumne us bachhe k sath , mujhe sharm aati hai tum par ( vasu rote rote apne kamre me chali jati hai) bhabhi, cg, vasundhra ki taraf se main aap dono se manfi

veena:- nahin bhai saab aaj bhi aap sab ka utana hi hissa hai jitana pehle tha aur jahan tak sawaal vasu ka hai, to mujhe lag raha hai ki use apni galti ka ehsaas jaldi hi ho jayega,aur kashish ko maanf kar dijiye , maa hai wo , jab apne bachhe ko koi takleef pahunchaye to koi bhi maa bardaast nahi kar sakti.

lalit:- mujhe kashish se koi sikayat nahi hai. usne jo kiya sahi kiya

in d evening kashish roshan aur navs ko ghar waapas lati hai par , use sharmindagi mehsoos ho rahi hai, ki usne gusse me kuchh jayada hi bol diya isliye wo vasu aur lalit k room me jaati hai

kashish:-papa,

lalit:- are kashish ander aao

kashish:-papa main aap dono se maanfi maangne aayi hu, subah maine gusse me , mumma i m really sorry aaj bhi aapka mujhse kahin jyada adhikaar hai is ghar me, aapka wahi audha hai jo pehle tha, plzz mujhe

vasu:- nahi kashish, manfi to mujhe maangni chahiye, tumne to mujhe meri asliyat dikhayi hai, aur maine navs k sath galat kiya hai, aur mujhe pata hai ki tum naveen ko apne bete ki tarah pyarr karti ho isliye tumne aisa kiya koi bhi maa apne bachhe k sath bura hote nahiin dekh sakti hai, i m sorry beta

kashish:- nahi mumma , aap badi hai & thankyou (kashish left and lalit hugs vasu with smile)

vasu:- mujhe ab ehsaas ho raha hai ki maine humesha sujal ko paraya mana , apna beta nahi mana , lekin usne kabhi bhi veena aur mujhme koi farkk nahi kiya

lalit :- yahi fark hai sujal kashish aur humme , sujal khud toot jayega lekin apno par aanch nahi aane dega aur jise humne janm diya usi ne humare sir par bandook taani thi.

vasu:- hmmm, ab mere mann me koi paraya pan nahi hai ,sujal rishi mere apne bete hai, i m sorry lalit , maine bahut der kardi naa?

lalit :- nahi koi der nahi hui, tumhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya yehi kafi hai...

jab sujal ghar aaya to veena ne use sab bata diya aur sujal ko pehle vasu par bahut gussa aya tha par veena ne use samjha diya ki vasu ko apni galalti ka ehsaas hai isliye wo kuchh na kahe aur sujal ke dil me kashish k liye izzat aur samman aur bhi badh gaya.

isi tarah inki zindagi bhi aage badh rahi thi kashish aur naveen ek dusre ke kafi kareeb aa gaye hai

4 months later...

in 4 mahino me sujal aur kashish ek dusre ko aur achhi tarahh se samajhne lage hai , sujal ko kashish me apni wahi 5 saal puraani kashish nazar aati hai jisse wo kabhi wehad pyar karta tha sujal ko, kashish ki masumiyat achhi lagti hai , jis tarah usne naveen ko sambhala hai , koi aur kar hi nahin sakta tha, par kashish ne kar dikhaya yahan tak ki naveen ki zubaan bhi kafi hadd tak sahi karwa di hai kashish ne roz use sahi tarike se bolna sikhati hai, vasu bhi ab puri tarah badal gayi hai aur sabhi ab khush hai ghar me yahan tak ki sujal bhi kyuki uska beta khush hai

sujal palam pur gaya hai aur kal lautega bahar bahut tej baarish ho rahi hai naveen bed par so raha hai aur kashish wash room me hai , kashish ko koi awaaj sunaayi di aur wo bahar aayi to dekha ki naveen neend me kuchh badbada raha hai , bahar bahut hi tufaani raat hai sayad naveen ko bahut darr lag raha hai kashish bhag kar gayi navs k pass aur use apni bahon me utha liya usne aur apne seene se laga kar uske baalo par hanth fer rahi hai jisse naveen ko sukoon mila aur shanti se so gaya aur kashish puri raat jagti rahi taki uska bachha chain se so sake, jab subah navs utha to usne dekha ki kashish use bade pyaar se dekh rahi hai ,

navs:-kash maa main yahan, main yahan kaise aaya main to bed pe soya tha naa?

kashish:- baccha aap na kal rat ko tufaan ki wajah darr gaye the isliye aapki kash maa ne aapko apni baahon me sula liya aur apko dekh rahi thi ki kahin aap uth na jaao

navs:- kash maa aap raat bhar soyi nahi? ( kashish nods in no) i love u kash maa u r the best kash maa in this world

kashish:- i love u 2 my bachha and u r the best navs in this world ( they both hugs)

yunhi pura din beet gaya , kashish apne kamre me akele bore ho rahi thi to usne socha kuchh kaam karle isliye wo
table par chad kar parde change karne lagi tabhi sujal palampur se wapas aaya usne dekha ki kashish table pe chad kar parde badalne ki kosis kar rahi hai par uska haanth nahi pahuch paa raha tha usne apni saree ko apni kamar me khosa jo use, uske kaam me disturb kar rahi thi aur fir kosis karne lagi sujal use dekhe ja raha tha badi hi cute lag rahi thi wo is tarah, ki achanak uska balance bigda aur wo girne hi waali thi ki achaanak sujal ki majboot bahon ne use sambhaal liya, sujal ne use uski bare waist se pakda hua tha jisse kashish ki body me 1 current sa daud gaya kyuki aaj pehli baar wo sujal ke itane kareeb thi aur usne apni aankhein kas k band karli, aur sujal use dekh kar mushkura raha hai.

sujal:- kashish tum apni aakhien khol sakti ho, u r all right ( sujal ki awaaz sunte hi kash ne apni 1 aankh kholi aur sujal ko dekha jo use dekh kar muhskura raha tha , fir dono ankh khol kar khud se khadi hui)

kashish:- wo main parde change (and both laughs )

sujal:- sambhal kar kashish aur tumhe yeh sab karne ko kisne kaha haa

kashish:- wo sujal navs na aaj roshan k sath khelte khelte wahi so gaya , aur main akeli room me bore ho rahi thi

sujal:- to socha ki table se gir kar , taang ( leg) tod kar time pass karloo hai na?( sujal raised in on eye brow in typical rajeev style)

kashish;- haa wo, kyaaa... ? sujal tum bhi na , achha jao fresh ho aao, main tumhare liye khana laati hoon ( sujal haste hue wash room me chala gaya)

kashish in her mind:- bhagwaan kare ki mere sujal k honthon ki yeh hasee yun hi kaayam rahe ( aur kashish neeche kitchen me jaati hai)

sunday
sujal apne sofe par baith kar kuchh kaam kar raha tha aur kash apna cupboard sahi kar rahi hai ki tabhi naveen bahar se daud kar aata hai

navs:-papa papa aapne aur mumma ne mujhe birthday gift abhi tak nahi diya ( yeh sunte hi kash ne navs aur sujal ki taraf dekha , sujal ki aankhon me aanshun aa gaye the kashish un dono k pass aakar k boli)

kashish:- navs kaisa gift bachha ?

navs:- kash maa, mere last birthday pe papa aur mumma ne mujhe promise kiya tha ki jab mumma ko unki leave mil jaayegi to, mumma aur papa mujhe disney land lekar jayege par mumma to god k pass hai naa to hum kaise jayeinge ab, aur ab to mera 1 month k baad next birthday aane waala hai ( kashish ne sujal ki taraf dekha)

kashish:- to mere navs ko kisne keh diya ki wo nahi jaayega, bachha mumma ne aapko promise kiya tha na ki wo aur aapke papa aapko disney land leke jayenge to beta aapki mumma ne god k paas se aapki kash ma ko bheja hai taaki aap apni kash ma aur papa k sath disney land jaa sako( sujal looks at kashish)

navs :- really kash maa ( kashish nods in yes sweetly ) i love u kash maa ( he kissed kashish on her cheek) i love u papa ( he kissed on sujal cheek , sujal ruffles his hair & he ran away to told her dadi ki he is going to disney land )

sujal:- kashish ye tumne

kashish:- kyun sujal maine kuchh galat kiya kya , ab tum hi batao uska itana mann hai, ab kya yeh saabit karna chahte ho ki uski mumma nahi hai to uski wish puri nahi ho sakti, sujal tumne khud mujhe navs ki maa ka adhikaar diya hai , mera uspe koi haq nahi hai kya ?(tears flowings down on her cheek & sujal moves frwd wipes her tears and kissed her fore head & she shivered by his touch)

sujal:- i m sorry, tumhara navs par mujhse jyada haq hai samjhi aur ha hum disney land jarur jayenge main kal hi tickets book karwaata hoon

kashish:- sach sujal ,oh thankyou, sujal kyun na hum sab chale matalab rishi aalekh mehek neelu charu akki

sujal:- nahi kashish akki ko confrence me jana hai kuchh case k silsile me aur bache main aur rishi , to ya main jaunga ya rishi, aur jahan tak sawaal hai aalekh neelu ka , to aalekh ne kuchh hi din pehle hi leaves li thi to i dont think so ,ki use leave milegi phir bhi main puchh lunga , par ha aanchal humare sath aa sakti hai , aur roshan bhi par rohan ko hum nahi sambhal paayeinge wo mehek k bina nahi reh paayega

kashish:- ohh ok to fir tum main navs raushan aur aanchal chalenge, thik hai

sujal:- ok tum aisa karna ki kal aalekh k ghar jaa kar un logon se puchh lena agar wo chale to aur badiyaa nahi to aanchal k liye puchh lena

kashish:-ok done

next day kashish navs k sath aalekh k ghar aati hai

neelu:- are kashish aao

kashish:- kaisi ho neelu aur tum aalekh ?

aalekh :- apun 3 no to mast hai tu bata tu kaisi hai aur sujal

kashish;- i m fine aur sujal bhi bilkul theek hai

navs:-kya mamu sirf kash maa aur papa se pyaar hai apun se nahi,apun k baare me kyun nahi puchha ? ( all laughs)

aalekh:- oye khajur tu to mera dil - e- zigar hai, bol bidu kaisa hai

navs;- apun to ek dum mast hai

neelu:- aalekh plzz navs ko apni lingo mat sikhaao

kashish:- nahi neelu aisa kuchh nahi hai navs sirf aalekh se aise baat karta baki kisi se nahi, mera bachha bahut samajh daar hai

navs:- i love u kash maa , dekha mamu sirf kash maa ko apun ki value pata hai baaki kisi ko nahi, waise aanchal kaha hai

neelu:- wo padosh me uske 1 frnd ka bday hai wahi gayi hai

kashish:- achha aalekh tumhe 15 days ki leave mil sakti hai kya

neelu:- kyun kashish kya baat hai?

kashish:- actually naina aur sujal ne naveen k last bday par use promise kiya tha ki wo ise disney land le kar jaayenge par , ab naina nahiin hai to, main aur sujal use disney land lekar jaa rahe hai,isliye humne socha ki kyun na sab sath me chale bachho k sath par, rishi aur akki business ki wajah se nahi aa rahe hai , isliye hum roshan ko apne sath le jaa rahe hai par agar tum dono aanchal k sath chalte to use bhi khushi hogi

aalekh:- apun brig se baat karega agar leave mil gayi to hum jarur jayenge, nahi to tum dono anchal ko le jana

kashish:- par kal tak bata dena, kya hai na sujal ko tickets aur hotel ki booking bhi karni hogi naa

aalekh:- thik hai apun kal tak sujal ko bata dega, neelu ja chai lekar aa ( neelu left) kashish thanx yaar tune apun k naveen aur apun k sujal ko sambhaal liya ( aalekh ki aankhon me aanshun aa gaye) warna , naina ne sujal k liye tujhe chun kar bahut sahi fasla kiya hai, aur apun ko bhi pata hai ki tu sujal se aaj bhi utana hi pyaar karti hai ( kashish is shocked ki aalekh ko kaise pata) aise chauk mat apun sab samajhta hai par us ghanchakkar sujal ko samajhne me bahut time lagne wala hai ki, tu hi uske liye bani hai( kashish smiles), wo kehte ho na tum loge made for each other, par jis din use samajh aa jayega meri is behen ko bhi uska pyaar mil jayega ( kashish looks at aalekh with teary eyes)

kashish:- thanx aalekh mujhe samajhne k liye par sujal se ,na pyar karna mere bas me nahin tha , maine sujal aur naina ki sadi to kara di thi par sujal ko apne dil se kabhi nahi nikaal paayi, par yakeen maan aalekh humesha sirf yahi chahti thi ki sujal aur naina sath rahe par

aalekh:- lekin aisa ho na saka , tujhe yaad hai naina ne jaate waqt kya kaha tha? ki uski aur uske pyar sujal ki kahaani puri ho gayi par teri kahani to bhachi thi na aur jis kahani ka ant achha na ho wo kahani puri nahi hoti isliye teri kahaani abhi puri honi baaki hai, aur naina ki prem kahani ka ant bahut pyara hua hai naveen k roop me . ha sujal ko jarur dard hua par , use kisne kaha tha do-do heroine k beech single hero banne ko ( kashish laughs)
aur ha tu apna thanx apne paas rakh , tu bhi apun behen hai jaise naina thi, samjhi aur naina ne to apun ko jaldi hi good news di thi ki apun mama banne wala hai par tu kab degi ?

kashish:- kya aalekh tu bhi, kuchh bhi

aalekh:- are tum dono ko pahad todne ko thodi na keh raha hu

kashish:- aaalekh ( kashish hugs aalekh , neelu un dono ko 1 pyari si smile k sath dekh rahi hai )

ab kashish sabke dil me apni jagah bana chuki thi sayad sujal k dil me bhi par sujal ko ehsaas nahi hai abhi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

end of part 35
plzzz do comment
with love Chandni
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Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: naujoker

Oh god!!!
I am crying, this is the most beautiful updates u have given
I really don't have the words for this updates
Naina and sujal marriage
Their lovely moments
Their honeymoon awww!!!
Their dance at the restaurant
The happy news of naina and Sujal's baby
After 8 months the baby
Loved the scene where he was pacing outside the operation theatre and mehak teasing sujal
Naina saying she won that beta uha hai, that was awesome!
And sujal saying jee naina ji
I was soo sad varun died 😭
But happy that rishi accepted mehak and roshan
Alekh and neelu married!!!!
Ali and pooja married!!!!!
Huda realized his love for sherry that was nice!
Yudi also found his soulmate!!!
What will happen after 3 yrs?




Thanks for the pm
Eagerly waiting for the next updat

👏 ❤️ 🤗
Loved the scenes were they named the baby naveen
And naina said to alekh when is he going to make her bua
And alekh saying that he is ready as😊😊😊k neelu
Neelu saying no way first u grow up
That hilarious 🤣



awww!! thanks dear keep reading... thanks for ur comments
😛

Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: psruthi

You have portrayed everyone's emotions very nicely...

I feel bad for kashish but i love sujal and naina together. Plz never separate them.
Let Kashish meet someone in Bangalore who will love her and make her fall in love
Eagerly waiting for the next update..




hey sruthi...
dont worry dear kashish ko b apna pyar milega jaisa naina ko mila...
thanks for ur lovely commnts...😊😊
keep raeding ...
😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanjana4Rajeev

Hey Chandni..

Wow yaar..I can't express in words that how you have described it so well..it is a mixture of tragic and happy moments...It's just an awesome part!!
I will seriously curse the person who shot our Naina!! 🤬...
It is hard to believe that Naina is no more !! Feeling very terrible for Sujal!!😭..And her last wish was SK to get married..I hope Sujal gets married to Kashish..and Kashish also supports him during his rough time kyunki Sujal ne uska Nia ko kho diya hai!! Please continue soon dear!!




Hey !! sanjana awww !! thanks dear...😊😊😊

sorry dear there r only one hero that is my super hero my jaan... only Rajeev khandelwal i.e. SUJAL😛😳...

and jis tarah naina ko uska pyar mila uski kahani puri hui usi tarah ab kashish ko b uska pyar mulega😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

thanx again keep reading...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Originally posted by: nilusoni

superb parts loved it

all are so happy and wonderful moments
omg what a tragic end of beautiful moments
naina is no more but she wants sujal and kashish to get married
excited for next part
continue soon



hey nilu...

thanx dear...

there r more store for them and may b naina wapas aa jaye...

kuchh b ho sakta hai...😊😊😊😊😊

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