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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: naujoker
Update was fabulous
All emotions were presented very nicely
Hope its sujal and Naina
Lovely i was touched with the description of naina and sujal's pain
Eagerly waiting for the next update

Thanx dear for ur lovely comments

There r more pain stored for three of them

Till then keep reading keep enjoyyy

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Originally posted by: nilusoni
wow gr8 part
sujal is all sad and naina is also unhappy
omg finally sn confrontation and all compromises
omg all wedding sermonies and all so happy
i think and infact i am sure sujal and naina is got married
excited for next part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

Thanx dear...

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*** Love story of SKN***
PART 27

garewal house

sujal ki car ghar k bahar khadi hai aur abhi tak veena log nahi pahunche the unke sawagat ke liye fir kareeb 5 mint baad veena aur sabhi gharwale ghar pahunch kar apni nayi bahu k swagat me lag jaate hai. sujal ke face par koi bhi expression nahi hai wo sirf seedha khada saamne dekh raha hai aur veena unka tika aur aarti kar rahi hai.

veena:- beta ab tum is kalash ko apne pair gira kar ,is kumkum wale thal par pair rakh kar apne subh kadam humare ghar ki bahu aur sujal ki patni ke taur par rakho.

kashish bilkul waisa hi karti hai aur fir sujal apni patni ke sath ghar ke ander aur apni nayi zindagi me pehla kadam rakhta hai.

lalit :- beta tum bahu ko lekar apne kamre me jaao , tum dono bahut thak gaye hoge.

varun:- are aise kasie , papa aap bhul gaye kya, sujal bhaiya ko bhabhi ko apni bahon me utha kar apne kamre me le jaana hoga

sujal:- varun plzz rehne do

cg:- kya rehne do chalo sujal, bahu ko uthao aur lekar jaao

sujal kashish ko apni bahon me uthata hai aur stairs chadne lagta hai baaki sab peeche se hooting kar rahe the

sujal in his mind:- oh god yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai, maine kashish ko uthaya aur mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki maine naina ko apni baahon me liya hai , plzzz help me ab mujhe naina k baare me sochna bhi nahi chahiye aur ( yahi sab sochte sochte sujal kashish ko apne kamre me le gaya aur bed k pass utar diya use aur kamra lock kar diya ).

sujal is feeling very awkward tabhi wo bola

sujal:- kashish , mujhe tumse kuchh baat karni hai ( kashish just nods) kashish main tab se tumhe ye baat batana chahta tha par mujhe tumse baat karne ka mauka hi nahi mila par, ab hum pati patni hai kashish aur aaj se humari nayi zidagi ki suruaat bhi hone jaa rahi hai, kashish yeh sach hai ki main kabhi tumhe bahut chahta tha par ab , ab nahi kashish , main kisi aur se pyar karta hu kashish , main main naina se pyar kata hu, par naina ne mujhe kabhi nahi chaha, main tumhe kisi dhoke me nahi rakhna chahta ,isliye tumhe yeh sab keh raha hu, main tumse puri tarah wafa ka wada karta hu, bas mujhe thoda waqt dedo ,main apni taraf se is rishtey ko puri imaandaari se nibhaunga. (now sujal turns to kashish) tum kuchh bol kyun nahi rahi kashish , mujhe pata hai tumhe bahut bura laga hoga but main kya karta , mujhe tumhe sab pehle batane ka mauka hi nahi mila, tumhe yaad hai, sangeet wale din main tumhe bahar yahi batane k liye lekar gaya tha par isse pehle main kuchh bol pata mumma tumhe aakar legayi.
aur ha ek baat kahunga , pata nahi kyun aaj mujhe apne paas naina ka ehsaas ho raha hai, yahan tak mandap me tum mere sath baithi thi par mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise naina mere sath hai, jab maine tumhe uthaya to , tab bhi mujhe aisa laga jaise maine naina ko apni bahon me uthaya hai, i m sorry par aaj mujhe har jagah sirf naina dikhyi de rahi hai. i know main galat hu mera waham hai ye par plzz mujhe thoda waqt dedo , plzz kuchh bolo

kashish:- sujal mera ghunghat nahi uthayenge?

sujal:- kya , main tumhe itani serious baat bata raha hu aur tumhe apne ghunghat ki lagi hai , oh god kashish mujhe lagta hai main pagal ho gaya hu dekho na i m sorry but abhi tumne mujhe baat ki par mujhe aisa laga jaise naina mujhse baat kar rahi hai

kashish:- sujalll plzzz rasam hai

sujal:- oh god tum ladkiyan aur tumhari yeh rasme

fir sujal apni patni ka gunghat utha kar uska chand sa chera dekhta hai aur shocked reh jata hai

sujal:- oh god kashish , main sach muchh pagal ho gaya hu, mujhe tumhare chehre par naina nazar aa rahi hai.

naina:- hey bhagwaan, kashish , kashish, kashish, sujal main naina hu kashish nahi , aapki sadii mujhse hui hai naina se kashish se nahi ( sujal shakes him head and then touch naina on her cheeks )

sujal:- naina tum yahan kya kar rahi ho, kashish kaha hai, aur meri sadi?

naina gusse se jaakar bed par baith jaati hai, aur muh fula kar bolti hai.

naina:- ji haan , aapki saadi mujhse hui hai naina singh alhuwaalia se , sabhi gharwalo ko pata hai , aap hi wo aakhiri insaan ho jise apnni patni ka naam ab pata chala hai

sujal bhi jaa kar bed par apne knees k bal par baith jata hai

sujal:- tumne mujhse sadi kyun ki, tum to wo huda se pyar karti ho na

naina:- maine us din jhuth bola tha, taki aap kashish se sadi karlo aur mujhe bhool jaao.main to sirf aapse pyar karti hu

sujal:-sachhh, tum mujhse pyar karti ho. ( hmmm) par tumne aisa kiya kyun

naina:- wo kashish, aapse bahut pyar karti thi aur piyush ki wajah se pehle hi uski zindagi barbaad ho chuki thi, mujhe laga ki aapse achha insaan to koi aur ho nahi sakta kashish k liye, kyuki kabhi aap bhi use chahte the, aur mera kya tha main to jee leti ,aapki yadien hi meri liye kafi thi zidagi gujarane k liye ( sujal ko ab naina pe gussa aur pyaar dono hi aa raha tha, gussaa is baat par ki usne bina soche samjhe itana bada kadam utha liya tha, aur pyarr is baat par ki wo kitani masum hai aur kitani achhi usne apne se pehle kashish ki khusi k baare me socha)

sujal:- ek baar bhi mere baare me nahi socha,

naina:- socha na bahut socha, jab aap kisi insaan se pyarr karte to uski zidagi ke faisle lene ka aapko poora haq hot hai isliye maine aapki zindagi ka faisla le liya .

sujal:- but tumhare ye mahaaan vichaar badal kaise gaye ,mandap me kaise pahunchi tum, yahan kaise aayi aur kashish kaha hai, use kya hua , wo theek to hai naa,?

naina:- ha baba kashish bilkul theek hai aur araam se apne ghar me so rahi hogi, wo to main hi hu jo aapse behesh baazi kar rahi hu

sujal:- kyaaa

naina:- aur nahi to kya, aur yeh sab maine nahi .kashish ne kiya hai, hua yeh ki kal uski mehndi ke baad main apna parsh ander hi bhul aayi thi aur fir kashish mujhe wo lautane bahar aayi ,tab neelu mujhe lecture de rahi thi ki maine kitani badi galti ki hai aapke pyarr ko thukra kar & bla bla bla aur wo sab kashish ne sunn liya tha hume pata bhi nahi chala tha , fir jab aaj main mehek aur akki uske kamre me gaye tab

flashback

kashish:- akki , plzz dawaja band karo , mujhe tum logon se kuchh kam hai

mehek:- di is waqt aap kyakar rahi ho, kisi bhi waqt pandit ji aap ko bula sakte hai

kashish:- naina sujal se itana pyarr karti ho ki sujal ki zindagi ka faysla khud kar liya( akki, naina and mehek are shocked)

mehek:- di aap yeh

kashish:- 1 mint mehek, bolo naina, tumne sujal se aisa kya kaha ki wo mujhse saadi k liye maan gaya, main jaanti hu ki sujal mujhse nahi tumse pyar karta hai( dhamake on naina face) ha mehek sujal mujhse pyarr nahi karta , wo sirf naina ko chahta hai, main maanti hu naina ki main sujal se pyar karti thi, aur aaj bhi karti hu, lekin main fir se sujal ki khusiyon ka gala nahi ghot sakti, main sujal se saadi nahi kar sakti , naina kal jab tum neelu se baat kar rahi thi to main tumhara bag lautane aayi thi aur maine tumahari aur neelu ki saari baatein sunn li thi.ab jhuth mat bolan naina.

naina:- kashish , tum yeh kya keh rahi ho, neeche mandap me sujal baithe hai aur apni patni ka intezaar kar rahe hai aur tum mana kar rahi ho, dekho kashish agar aaj shadi nahi hui to,

kashish:- maine kab kaha ki aaj saadi nahin hogi , aaj shadi jarur hogi, sujal apni dulhan bhi le kar jayega is chaukhat se par wo dulhan main tum hogi ( dhamake on naina, akki and mehek's face)naina tumne jo galti ki hai use sudhaar lo kyuki main ek aise insaan se saadi kar sakti ,jo kisi aur ko chahta hai, plzzz naina mere khatir ye sadi kar lo.

mehek;- par di jab sab neeche sawal karenge ki aap ki jagah naina,to

kashish:- koi sawaal nahi karega , naina tum mera ye saadi ka joda pehen kar mandap me baithna , par tumhara chehra ghunghat se dhaka hoga , sab tumhe kashish samjhege sujal bhi aur mehek tum is baat ka dhyaan rakhna ki jab tak naina ,garewal house pahuch jaye uska ghunghat upar na uthe,aur akki jaise hi sujal aur naina, apne ghar k liye nikal jaayein, tum sabhi gharwalo ko naina ke baare me samjha dena , aur fikar mat karo papa ko main sammbhal lungi.

naina:- kashish main aisa kuchh bhi karungii, tumhari khusiyaan chheen kar main apna ghar nahi basa sakti

akki:- tum bahut achhi ho naina, tum apne se pehle dusro k baare me sochti ho, par itana achha hona bhi achhi baat nahi hai, main to bahut pehle batana chahta tha sabko par sujal ne mujhe apni kasam de kar rok diya

kashish:- aur aaj main tumhe apni kasam deti hun ki tume sujal se sadi karni hi hogi.

flashback end

fir jaisa kashish ne kaha waisa hi hua main uska sadi ka joda pehen kar ghunghat daal kar,mandap me baith gayi aur mehek ne mera ghunghat kisi ko uthane nahi diya isliye aapko aisa lag raha ki main aapke paas hu, aur fir jab hum waha se nikle to akki ne sabhi gharwalo sab bata diya , pehle sab shocked the fir sab maan gaye aur shina uncle ko bhi kashish ne samjha diya hoga , fir isliye jab aap mujhe utha kar la rahe to aapko aisa laga ki aapne kashish ko nahi,balki mujhe uthaya hai.ab aapko poori kahani samajh me aa gaya gayi mr buddhu ram, aur ab aap kya soch rahe ho,

sujal:- ha sab samajh me aa gaya , aur main ye soch raha hu, ki main sayad is duniyaan ka pehla insaan hounga jisse apni patni ka sahi naam tak nahi pata tha sadi k waqt , hai na?.( then sujal frwds and hugs naina tightly)oh naina i love u , main tumse bahut naraz tha but now its ok

naina:- i love u 2,thank god kuchh to romace ka chance abhi bhi bacha hai, warna mujhe laga tha ki meri suhagrat sirf rone aur ladne me gujregi.

sujal :- kya kaha tumne abhi batata hu ( sujal starts tickling her she is laughing)

after some time sujal presses his lips against hers and it was their first kiss ever , the kiss was very passionate , both are deeply involved in the kiss and then sujals hands goes to switched off the lights & scene become blurred and two lovers and their painfull souls become one ( give them some privacy)

shinha house
kashish apne kamre ki khidki par khadi hai aur chand ko dekh rahi hai uski aankhon se aanshun rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the

toot kar maine humdum , pyar tumse kiya hai...
yeh meri chahto ka kyasila mujhko mila hai...
ki na jo maine khata , uski sajaa mili hai...
meri aankhon me tum, aaj bhi kitani nami hai...
yeh muhababbt thi teriii...
jisse nafarat thi mitiii...
fir kyun yeh duri, aayiii...
thoda sa pyar huaa tha , kuchh nahi bakii...
thoda sa pyar huaa tha , kuchh nahi bakii...
thoda sa pyarr hua tha, ab bhi hai baakii ...
( kash ko wo sare pal yaad aa rahe the jo usne sujal k sath bitaye , unka milna unka bichhadna aur fir use neelu aur naina ki baat yaad aati hai ki sujal usse nahi balki naina ko chahta hai)

kashish:- sayad mujhe mere kiye ki saja mili hai , jab main piyush k sath aage badh gayi thi to sujal ka bhi haq tha aage badhne ka, kyun maine kabhi ye nahi socha ki sujal ko kisi aur se, aur phir naina bhi sirf mere liye apni khusiyaan kurbaan kar rahi thi, aaj agar meri aur sujal ki sadi ho jati to main apne aap ko kabhi maanf nahi kar paati ,aur main ro kyun rahi hu mujhe mere sujal k liye khush hona chahiye, sorry naina, maine sujal to tumhe de diya par usse pyar na karna mere bas me nahi, jab main sujal ko galat samjhati thi tab bhi mere dil me sirf sujal tha to ab to bhagwaan bhi is kashish ko sujal se pyar karne se nahi rok payenge.

next morning garewal house,,,,,,,,

end of part27
plzz do comment,,,
with love Chandni ,,,,,,,,,

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*** Love story of SKN***
PART 28

next morning garewal house,

naina opens her eyes and finds herself in a completely new place.She moves her head and feels Sujal's head leaning on top of her's.She slowly remembers what happened the other day,her marriage, the conversation she had with Sujal, Sujal kissing her and etc.etc. She looks up at Sujal who is pleasantly smiling in his sleep. Mischief strikes her... as she sees him sleeping peacefully .She slowly removes her anklet and puts it in Sujal's ears and shakes it.Sujal makes an irritated face turns to the other side still sleeping.naina smiles and again puts the anklet in his other ear.Sujal gets irritated and sits up opening his eyes.He sees naina looking at him mischieviously...

Sujal:tum?

naina:-haan main, aapki biwi... kal raat ko hamari shaadi hui thi remember?

Sujal smiles and pulls her close to himself holding her by waist.She is almost lying on him.

Sujal:-arre tumhe kaise bhool sakta hoon nia

naina :-achha, to phir aap itne shock kyun hogaye mujhe apne paas dekhkar?

Sujal:-woh to mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki main sapna dekh raha tha ya phir tum wakahi mere saamne ho..isliye

naina:-theek hain, chalo ab uth jaiye...jaldi tayyar hokar hum dono ko neeche jaana hain

Sujal(groans):-no naina...itni jaldi nahin

naina:-to phir theek hain, aap yahi baithiye.. main abhi tayyar hokar aati hoon

Sujal:-tumhe tayyar hone ki kya zaroorat hain?tum to aisi hee achi lag rahi ho

naina(smiles sweetly):-aap paagal ho Sujal

Sujal:-woh to main hoon

naina smile and take her cloths and goes to washroom for taking bath, after some time she returns and finds sujal again asleep,she slowlly goes to him and lightly strocks his hair and kisses his 4head , sujal instantly open his eyes and smile at her

naina:chaliye ab to uth jaiye... neeche jaana hain, phir hum jaakar kashish ka shukriya aada karenge

Sujal:-haan, agar aaj hum ek saath hain to sirf uski wajah se

Saying this, he goes into the washroom and naina goes to the dressing table to get ready.she puts on light makeup and is putting on bangles when she notices the mehndi on her hand.she looks at both of her hands and remembers what happened on the day of her mehndi of kashish.

Flashback:

jab kashish ko mehndi lagayi jaa rahi thi

kashish:- naina tum bhi mehndi lagwalo

naina:- nahin kashish main mehndi kaise laga sakti hu , mujhe parso duty bhi to join karni hai

mehek:- are naina kuchh nahi hota , tum ek lady officer ho unhe to chhut hogi na ,aakhir we bhi to apni sadi wagairah me mehndi lagati hongi naa, tumhe lagani hi hogi.

naina:- mehek par

kashish:- plzz naina sab ke haanthon me mehndi hai siwaay tumhare plzz laga lo thodi si ,aao yahan baitho mere paas, suniye inhe bhi mehndi laga dijiye .

naina kashish k kareeb baith jaati hai , mehndi wali lady naina ke haanthon me bhi mehndi lagane lagti hai
tabhi mehndi wali lady kashish se puchhti hai ki mehndi par kya naam likhna haito

kashish & naina:- 'S' ( and both kashish and naina smiles)

naina ne us waqt to dhyan nahi diya par baad me dekha to us lady ne uske haanth me bhi S likh diya tha

fir naina ko yaad aata hai ki

neelu:- aunty aap ye kya kar rahi ho?

veena:- beta , waise to haldi sasural se aati , yehi haldi abhi sujal ko lagayi gayi thi ab yehi, kashish ko, sabse pehle uski saas yani main lagaungi , taki meri bahu mere bete k rang me rang jaye , wo kya hai na, bahut der se rakhe hone k karan , haldi paani chhod deti hai , isliye ise mix kar rahi hu taki kashish ko laga saku
( tabhi achanak kisi ka hanth veena k hanth par lagta hai jisse haldi girne hi wali hoti hai ki naina us bowl ko pakad leti hai )

veena place her hand in naina's cheeks :- thanx beta, agar tum na hoti to apsagun ho jata

naina:- its ok aunty

mehek:- are aunty , yeh kya dekhiye galti se apke hantho ki haldi naina ke gal par lag gayi .( naina shocked thi ki kashish ki haldi use lag gayi)

veena:-sorry beta dhyan nahi diya

naina:- koi baat nahi aunty ho jata hai,main saaf kark aati hu ( aur naina wash room chali gayi.)

Flaceback end

naina:(smiling to herself):-aaj mujhe pata chal gaya hain Sujal ki kyun meri mehndi mujhe aapse jod rahi thi , sagun ki haldi kashish se pehle muhe lag gayi thi ,bhagwan ki bhi yehi marzi thi ki meri zindagi mein sirf aur sirf aapka naam ho, isliye unhone mere haathon mein aapkaa naam likhwaa diya... shayad isliye us waqt chahte hue bhi main isse mitha nahin paayi kyunki mere haath mein uss insaan ka naam likha tha jiske saath main apni poori zindagi guzarne wali hoon..aur woh insaan aap hai Sujal... SIRF AAP"

Sujal comes out of the washroom and sees naina in front of the dressing table looking at her hands.He goes and holds her from behind resting his head on her shoulders touching her face.He hits her gently with his head and says...

Sujal:(now even he is looking into her hands):-kya dekh rahi ho nia?

naina:-apni haathon ki mehndi ko, jaante hai Sujal is mehndi ke rang ko dekh kar pata chalta hain ki aap mujhse kitna pyaar karte ho..."

Sujal:-lekin woh kaise? mehndi kabse bolne lagi?"

naina(hits him slightly):-sujal... kehte hain mehndi ka rang jitna gehra hota hain, pati utna hee pyar karta hain

Sujal:-oh... to tum isliye hans rahi thi apni mehndi ko dekhkar, maine socha ki shayad tumhe apne haathon mein koi joker nazar aa raha hain

naina:-joker to nazar aa raha hain... dehkna chahenge? yeh dekhiye

She shows her hand to him, he is surprised to see 'S' written on her hand...

Sujal:-is mein to 'S' likha hain

naina:-haan...'S' for Sujal

Sujal:-lekin mera naam kyun likha hain tumhaare haath pe?

She tells him how the 'S' was written on her hand.

naina:mujhe to ussi waqt samaj jaana chahiye tha parr, i m sorry sujal

Sujal:-nia..tum phirse wahi baatein lekar bait gayi... maine kaha tha na jo beet chuka hain usse bhool jaao, ab to hum ek saath hain na? aur ab keliye sirf yehi important hain"

naina nods her head and goes into his arms.

naina:-(still in his arms)Sujal..."

Sujal:-hmmm

naina:aap mujhe kabhi chodkar to nahi jaaoge na

Sujal:(separates from her and holds her by shoulders) arre main kahan jaoonga apni zindagi ko chodkar?tum meri zindagi ho naina , aur apni zindagi ko main hamesha apne paas sambhalkar rakhoonga, ab koi usse mujhse alag nahi kar sakta

naina:-aur mujhe kabhi khudse alag hone bhi mat dena sujal..warna main jee nahi paoongi, ek baar judaai bardaasht kar chuki hoon, ab dobara mujhse nahin hoga... ab agar aap mujhse door gaye to main mar jaoongi Sujal"

Sujal:(places his hand on her mouth) usse pehle main mar jaoonga naina

naina:- plzzz sujal aisa mat kahiye , agar mujhe kabhi kuchh ho bhi jaye to aap apni zindagi me aage badh jaoge aur mujhe iske aage kuchh nahi sunna.

He then goes and sits on the sofa ruffling his hair.naina opens sindoor thaani (the box in which sindoor is normally put) and is about to fill her maang but stops seeing Sujal through the mirror..She takes the mangalsutra and sindoor taani along with her and goes and stands before Sujal.Sujal lifts his head and looks at her.

Sujal:-kya hua?

naina(bending before him):-Sujal,aapse shaadi karna mera sapna tha aur, aur mujhe apnaakar aaj aapne mere saare sapne poore kardiye, aapne meri zindagi mein khushiyon ke rang bhar diye, ab main chahti hoon (holding the sindoor taani before him) ki aap meri maang bhi ussi rang se bhar do

Sujal smilingly takes the sindoor taani from her hand and fills her maang and then puts the mangalsutra.naina closes her eyes.She opens her eyes and sees Sujal smiling at her naughtily.

naina:kya hua?aap aise kyun muskura rahe ho?

Sujal makes her get up and takes her to the mirror. They are looking into the mirror side by side.naina notices that some of the sindoor had fallen on her nose seeing this naina smiles.

Sujal:ab tum kyun hans rahi ho?

naina:woh kehte hain agar maang bharte waqt sindoor naak pe gir jaaye toh pati bahut pyar karta hain

Sujal(getting romantic):-really?

He leans forward to hug her but naina holds him back.

naina:kya kar rahe hai aap Sujal?

sujal:-mehndi aur sindoor ki baaton ko sach kar raha hoon.. aur kya

Saying this he pulls her into a tight hug.
now sujal and naina are downstairs taking blessings from their elders and all the youngers are verry happy to see the re- union of two lovers
veena:- sujal abhi tum log jaao aur ready ho jao , naina ko uske pagfere ke liye uske ghar chhod aanaa, aur ha naina beta tumhare maa aur papa ko sab bata diya hai wo bhi bas aalekh k yahan pahunchne hi waale hai

naina:- ji mumma

naina is getting ready for the pakphera ,she wears blue saree ,Sujal enters from behind as she is setting her
saree and sits on the sofa

naina:-kya hua Sujal? aise kyun baithe hai

Sujal:-aur kya karoon? tumjo jaa rahi ho

naina:-main kaha hamesha keliye jaa rahi hoon? shaam tak wapas aajaoongi na

Sujal:yaha main tumhe ek din bhejne keliye maraa jaa raha hoon aur tum hamesha ki baat kar rahi ho? main to marr hee jaoonga

naina:- sujal kisi k jaane se duniyaan khatm nahi hoti, aur aap yeh bhool rahe hai ki main ek aarmy officer hoon sochiye ki agar kisi mission me mujhe kuchh

sujal:- shut up naina, tum mujhe chhod kar kabhi nahi jaogi.samjhi aur haan hum pehle sinha house kashish ko thanx kahenge phir tumhare us hatele bhai ke ghar

naina:- sujalll aapp

Sinha house,
Proff Sinha is sitting at the dining table with his daughters

Charu:di mera juice kahan hain?
tabhi kashish ander se jiuce aur kuchh nashata le kar aati hai.

kashish:- yeh raha tumhara juice, aur yeh raha tumhara upma

sujal:- aur humaaraa?

all of them turn and see Sujal and naina standing at the door.

kashish:- are sujal naina , what a pleasent surprize ,aao ander to aao

sujal:- kashish , samajh nahi aa raha hai ki tumhara sukriya kaise ada kare agar agar aaj tum na hoti to

kashish:- sujal, maine jo kiya apne liya kiya ,apni galti sudhaari hai maine, ek baar maine tumse tumhara pyarr cheena tha aur ( she takes naina's hand and placed on sujal's)lauta diya, aur sujal main tumhare sath khush bhi nahi reh paati , kyuki main achhi tarah se jaanti hu ki tum naina se bahut pyarr karte ho

naina:- thanx kashish

charu:- sujal jiju

sujal looks at charu

charu:- are aise dekh rahe hai naina bhi to meri di ki tarah hi hai kyun isliye aaj se main naina ko naina di aur aapko sujal jiju bulaungi , manzoor

sujal ( with smile ):- manzoor

proff sinha to naina:-tum khush ho na beta

naina:- uncle thankyou so much aapne mera kanya daan kiya hai aur

proff sinha:- tum bhi beti hi ho samjhi aur fir tum meri kashish k liye apni khusiyaan kurbaan karne jaa rahi thi, khabar daar aaj k baad kisi aur k liye khud ko dukhi kiya to ( all smiles) aur yakeen mano beta main tumhare liye bhi utana hi khush hu jitana main kashish k liye hota

sujal:- achha uncle kashish, ab hume chalna chaiye wo actually naina ko pag phere k liye le kar jana hai.

sujal aur naina waha se nikal jaate hai aur kashish abhi bhi wahi khadi unhe dekh rahi hai

proff sinha (places his hand on her soulder):- beta tum theek hona?

kashish ( wipes her tears ):- ji papa i m absolutly fine & she goes from there.

proff sinha:- ( thinks):- main jaanta hu beta tum khush nahi ho, tum aaj bhi sujal se bahut pyaarr karti ho, aur main itana majboor hu ki apni bachhi k liye kuchh kar nahi sakta.par main naina k liye khush hu

sujal and naina aalekh k ghar pahuchte hai, yahan already naina k maa baba aa chuke hai , naina unhe dekhtie hi daud kar unke pass jati hai aur unhe hugg kark ro rahi hai

maa:- are beta tu ro kyun rahi hai, hume aalekh ne sab bata diya hai, aur hum tere aur sujal bete k liye bahut khush hai

baba:- ha beta ab rona band kar

sujal goes and touch their inlaws feet and they blessed him,fir sabhi thoda tome spend karte hai

sujal:- achh naina main abhi office jata hu saam ko tumhe lene aa jaunga byeee

then sujal leaves for his office but is unable to concentrate.He is getting irritated for everything and at everyone at the office.He is very restless and waiting for the evening so that he can go and get his newly wedded bride home.He keeps calling naina for every 1/2hr who very patiently is attending each of his calls as she too is missing him inspite of her brother and parrents arround her.akki notices sujal's state of mind and comes to his cabin.

akki:- yaar Sujal, tu ghar chala jaa

Sujal:lekin kyun

akki:-tu yahan koi kaam kar to nahi raha, upar se sab ko daantke kaam bigaad raha hain...isliye tu ja"

Sujal:- arre nahi yaar, woh to main..."

akki:-maine kaha...JAAA"

Sujal puts up a funny expression , nods and goes home not wanting to annoy akki anymore but he takes his restlessness along with him self.he is loosing his temper easily and almost snapped at Rishi, and Aman many times.rishi aman r enjoying Sujal's way of sulking and his acting grumpy. Soon it is evening and Sujal rushes to naina's place to get her.There is a reception party for the newly wedded couple that night and hence the two of them are in their room getting ready.

naina:(is ready and stands before him) :-kaisi lag rahi hoon main?

Sujal:hmmm theek ho"

naina:sirf theek?

Sujal:-haan ab theek lag rahi ho to wahi boloonga na?

naina:-kya sujal? itne ache se tayyar hui thi aur aap keh rahe ho ki sirf theek lag rahi hoon

Sujal:-well... tumhara dress to bahut sundar hain but the jewellery...(nodding his head negative way)..nope

naina:-to theek hain...(Showing him another jewellery set) yeh set lagaalu?

Sujal shakes his head as no.She shows him another set which he again rejects.naina gets irritated...

naina:-to aap hee bataao na kya pehnoon?

Sujal goes towards her in a very romantic way and naina moves back and is leaning to the cupboard now.Sujal brings his face very near to her's and moves his hand towards her waist. naina looks into his eyes gets lost and Sujal slowly moves his hand behind her waist and opens the cupboard.naina doesnt notice this, Sujal then takes out a jewellery box and puts it before her eyes.naina is surprised and looks at Sujal questioningly.Sujal looks at her
mischievously.

Sujal:tum mujhe aise kyun dekh rahi ho? main to isse nikal raha tha cupboard se

naina:-(sees the box and feels very stupid for expecting something else )nahin kuch nahi, main to bas...she is searching for words and Sujal is enjoying her awkwardness.

Sujal:-tum to bas kya naina? Oh! lagta hain tum ne kuch aur hee soch liya, Oh god naina (Shaking his head)... tum sochti bahut ho

naina(hits his arm playfully):-sujal...Bahut shaitan hogaye ho aap,acha laiye dikhaiye yeh kya hain?" She is about to take the box from him but Sujal stops her.

Sujal:-nnnhhh... aise nahin

naina:toh phir kaise?

Sujal:bandhe ko bakshish deni padegi

naina:-matlab?

Sujal:(Pointing towards his cheek) aise

naina:-abhi?

Sujal:-to phir kabhi?

naina:-baad mein, ab dijiye na mujhe

Sujal:-pehle baksheesh

naina:-to theek hain.. apni aankhen band kariye

Sujal:- arre tum to aise sharmaa rahi ho jaise kisi anjaan ne tumhe kiss karne keliye kaha.. if u remember, main tumhara pati hoon madam.

naina;-wo jo bhi ho,aap pehle aankhen band karo

Sujal:- if u insist

He closes his eyes and naina come forward and holds his cheek with her left hand and comes very close to him.Sujal can feel her closeness to him and smell her perfume.he loses his senses for a minute and naina snatches the jewellery box from him and slaps him slightly on the cheek.

naina:-yeh rahi aapki baksheesh

sujal:-tummm... this is a cheating haa

naina:-anything is fair in love and war...pati parmeshwar.

Sujal:tumhe to main abhi bataata hoon

He runs behind naina and holds her from the back.

Sujal:ab kaha bhaagogi

naina:-Sujal please chodiye mujhe...neeche jaana hain...plzzz

Sujal:-nahin chodoonga

naina:-please Sujal... chodo naa

After some more time, he leaves her and naina opens the box and finds a platinum and diamond set in it.She is overjoyed and hugs Sujal.

naina:-oh sujal ,this is SO BEAUTIFUL

Sujal:-tumse zyaada nahin hai nia

naina:-aap jaante hai,.aaj tak itna pyaara tohfa mujhe kisine nahin diya

Sujal:-yeh darasal mujhe tumhe kal dena chahiye tha lekin nahin de paaya...isliye ab de raha hoon...Ab issi tarah se dekhti rahogi kya? pehankar dikhaao na

naina:-aaphi pehna dijiye na Sujal

Sujal takes the necklace and puts it around her neck.Then he turns her to the mirror so that both are staring side by side into the mirror.He kisses her on the neck and says...

Sujal(pointing to both of them:-Not a bad pair huh

naina:- (smiles and hits him with her forehead ):-not at all... we make the v good pair. achha sujal aap mujhe nia kyun kehte ho?

sujal:-are sab to tumhe naina kehte hai, but aap humhare liye bahut khas hai isliye ek naya naam nia , naina me se 1n aur1a hata dia to ban gaya nia

naina:- thats interesting, but 1 more question, agar aapki sadi kashish se ho jati to kya aap ye tohfa use de dete?

sujal:- kabhi nahi ,kyuki ye jab main khareed raha tha na to meri aakhon k saamne sirf tumhara chahra tha aur maine ye tab bhi tumhare liye hi kharida tha aur tumhe pata hai jab main kashish k liye sadi ka joda khareeda na tab bhi mujhe us jode me tum dikhi thi

naina:-sachhh, itana pyar karte hai mujhse aap?

sujal:- yeh to mujhe khud bhi nahi pata ki main tumse kitana pyar karta hu, bas itana karta hu ki agar tum khush ho to main khush , tum dukhi to main (naina huggs him tightly ,when Varun enters suddenly)

Varun:-sujal bhaiyyaaa...aap ab tak...(he stops seeing the situation there and Sujal-naina are very embarassed.)

Varun:woh...bhaiyya, bhabhi... main kehne aaya tha ki saare mehmaan aagaye aur neeche sab aap dono ka intezaar kar rahe hain... but u seem to be much more busy, its ok u people can carry on.. the guests can wait

Sujal(very happily):-really

naina(hits him with her elbow):-nahin Varun, tum jaao.. hum bas aa rahe hain.

Varun leaves and Sujal and Naina follow him .they enter hand in hand and have a big blast at the party.sujal didnot let go off his wife even for a second and introduced her to all the guests personally.It felt very proud to call her HIS WIFE.'She is mine & she was holding his arm with both her hands all the time ,she didnot want to go away from him even for a single minute.

After the party,Only the Raheja's & garewal's are left.Everyone is seated on the Sofa and Sujal and naina are sitting beside each other.Then Varun comes from his room and stands behind Sujal and Naina.

Varun:bhaiyya, yeh meri taraf se aap dono keliye (hegives an envelope to Sujal.Sujal opens
it an finds air-tickets to Australia on his and naina's name.

Sujal:yeh kya hain Varun

varun:welll mere khayaal se aapke honeymoon ke tickets hain... mujhe to aisa hee lagta hain, kyun Papa?

Lalit smiles at Varun.

naina:-hamara?

Sujal:-nahin Lalit uncle ka... ab shaadi hamari hui hain to honeymoon pe bhi hum hi jaayenge na?

Everyone laugh and naina feels very embarassed.

varun:haan... taaki aayinda agar aap dono aaj ki tarah busy ho to meri tarah koi aur kabab mein haddi achanak na tapak pade beech mein (now even Sujal is embarassed)

after some time everyone go to their rooms.

next day morning, Sujal and naina are in the flight and naina is unable to stop herself from smiling.she is very glad at the turn of events in her life.She remembers each moment fondly..sujal ka kma pahuchna , uska dard, unka mission, then getting attracted to him, then falling in love with him,then sujal confessing his love , then marriage, their first night, reception party etc.etc. Sujal sees her smiling and smiles back with satisfaction.They fasten the seat belts and naina holds Sujal's arm and places her head on his shoulder.Sujal places his arm around her and leans his head on top of her's.naina feels very secure with his arm thrown her protectively and smiles even more.She looks into the clouds and then at Sujal's face.. Soon their flight takes off taking them into an unknown world full of happiness and dreams...

end of part 28
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*** Love story of SKN***
PART 29

sujal aur naina reached australia , they are having great time together within few days they both fall for each other more and more and understand eachother verry well , today they r returning from australia after most presious 15 days of their life , rishi have gone to airport to pick them and now all r seated at the R&G house.

varun:- to bhaiya bhabhi kaisa laga australia.

sujal:- it was awsm varun , aur hum aap sab k liye gift bhi le kar aaye hai

veena:-isaki kya jarurat thi

sujal:- wahi to mumma , maine kitana mana kiya tha par yeh maani hi nahi

naina:- nahi mumma , main lena chahti thi, mehek

mehek:- ji bhabhi

naina:- wo maine ,kashish, sinha uncle aur baaki sab k liye bhi kuchh liya hai tum unhe pahucha dogii kya? actually mujhe kal se jayada time nahi milega mujhe duty bhi join karni hai naa,aur aalekh ko base camp me hi de dungi.

mehek:- ok bhabhi main pahuncha dungi, lekin kya aap aaj hi to aaye ho aur kal se duty bhi

naina:- mehek i cant leave my duty, duty & my country comes first for me

veena:- chalo bahut raat ho gayi tum dono ja kar aaram karo, aur sujal ko bhi kal office jana hai

they all retires to their rooms

naina ne agle hi din duty join karli aur sabhi yani uske frnds ne naina ko call kiya aur sabhi naina k liye bahut khus the . kashish bhi office jati hai , aur sujal k sath apni dosti puri imaan daari se nibha rahi hai, sujal bhi kashish ki dil se respect karta hai isi tarah inki zindagi aage badh rahi thi

3 months later

in 3 mahino me ali aur pooja ka bhi nikaah ho gaya now they are verry happy with each other, aur sujal , naina aur kashish ne neelu k parrents se baat ki aur aalekh & neelu ki bhi saadi ho gayi, par humara huda abhi bhi jananiyon k peeche hai aur sherry use sudharne ki kosis me lagi hai,& yudi , he is waiting for his soul mate, kashish ka haal bilkul bhi achha nahi hai,use sujal ki pal pal yad aati hai par wo chhup hai isliye usne ye faysla kiya hai ki wo ab shimla me nahi rahegi wo banglore jaa rahi hai do dino k baad waha reh kar r&g ka kaam sambhalegi sab maan bhi gaye uske is fasley k liye.

kashish apne kamre me hai, uska dil aaj bahut bechain ho raha hai,jabse sujal aur naina ki saadi hui hai aisa ek pal bhi naa raha hai ,jab usne sujal ko yaad na kiya ho. wo apne bed se uthi aur

Kashish (to herself): kitna bhi bhulne ki koshish karoon ..na kabhi bhul paungi na kabhi durr ja sakungi...

Rabba Mere Ishq Kisi Ko Aise Na Tadpaye...
(She sat on the floor..holding the photo of sujal & her's sangeet...she ran her fingers over his photograph..as her eyes turned moist..she held the photo against her heart..closing her eyes)

Dil Ki Baat Rahe Is Dil Mein, Hothon Tak Na Aaye,... (Tears gently flowed down her cheeks...her heart full of pain...as she tried to say his name...through her tears...but she couldnt...she couldnt express how she feels for him...her heart cried for him...as she slowly managed to whisper his name...relieving her pain...).

Kashish:S...Sujal...

Sujal who was on other side back at mall with naina was shopping ...when he looked at the painting of a girl & a boys in the rain and dancing and picked up thinking about Kashish..

Sujal: Kashish...

Kashish opened her eyes widely...looking around in surprise...she felt him call out to her as her heart beats rose..and she slowly panted...standing up in a hurry as she looked around the room..,trying to find him...she wiped her tears and walked out of her room...looking for him..and now she is walking on the empty road .

Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayee Kisi Se Ab Kya Kehna ...
Dil Roya Ki Ankh Bhar Aayee Kisi Se Ab Kya Kehna...
(She broke down on the road on her knees...lowering her head as she cried...)

Kashish was sat in her room silently...Sujal and her,s pic in her hand

Tujhe Har Khushi De Di Labon Ki Hansi De Di...
(her eyes full of tears...making their way down her cheeks...as she touched his photograph...)

back to sujal & naina, both r dancing in hand in hand in a pool site resturant

Zulfon Ki Ghata Lehraayee Paigaam Wafa Ke Laayee...
(he smiles gently moving her hair behind her ear as she looked up into his eyes holding his hand...he smiles and moves forward...kissing her forehead...)

Tune Acchhi Preet Nibhayee Kisi Se Ab Kya Kehna...
(naina looks into his eyes and goes into his arms...Kashish who was lost in deep thoughts came back to reality...as the pic flew away from her hand...she goes and again picks it up & again her eyes falls on sujal's smiling face)

Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayee Kisi Se Ab Kya Kehna...
( she looked at it...running her fingers over his face...tears dropping onto the photograph)

Kashish: tumhari aur naina ki shaadi ko 3 months ho chuke hai lekin phir bhi main us shaadi ki raat nahi bhul sakti jis din maine Sujal ko naina ko de diya..

Wo Chand Mere Ghar-aangan Ab To Aayeega...
(Sujal and naina lay content in each others arms as they snuggled closer to each other...after spending a blissful night...he slept holding onto her...as they carried beautiful dreams of there future and of parenthood...that is all they wanted now...)

Tere Soone Is Aanchal Ko Wo Bhar Jaayega..
(They woke up feeling complete in each others embrace. naina saw Sujal staring at her and lowered her gaze...pulling the bedsheet over her to hold her embarassment..while Sujal held the end of it...moving it down...his eyes staring deep into hers...as he took her into his arms)

Teri Kar Di God Bharaayee, Kisi Se Ab Kya Kehna...
(Kashish was sat on a parks bench not wanting to go home...she was lost in deep thoughts...when her eyes fell on a couple with a baby..playing with the baby on the small slide...she imagined sujal and naina with d baby...)

Dil Roya Ki Ankh Bhar Aayee Kisi Se Ab Kya Kehna...
(She sat there watching the couple...her heart in complete pain...which could be seen through her tears...she stood up leaving from there in tears)

Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayee Kisi Se Ab Kya Kehna...
(She stood by her car holding onto it as she was crying bitterly...she could still not forget the fact that he was no longer hers..why did she ruin her life...?)

Khata Ho Gayi Mujhse Kaha Kuch Nahin Tumse...
Ikrar Jo Tum Kar Paate To Door Kabhi Na Jaate...
(She wished he had realised her love for him..then maybe she wouldnt have lost him.her love for sujal is fire which is burning her completely...and would do forever...)

Koi Samjhe Na Peer Parayee Kisi Se Ab Kya Kehna ...
(She cried as no one understood her ,and her feelings..no one knew what she was going through...her heart was in pain yet she couldnt express her pain openly)

Tujhe Yaad Na Meri Aayee Kisi Se Ab Kya Kehna...
Dil Roya Ki Ankh Bhar Aayee Kisi Se Ab Kya Kehna...
(She cried with her heart and soul.and then she returned to her house & determine to go away from sujal's and naina's life as soon as possible)

next day r&g house

sujal:- nia kya baat hai tum pareshaan lag rahi ho?

naina:- sujal pareshaan hone wali baat hai to pareshaan houngi hi na

sujal:-are batao na kya baat hai

naina:- sujal ,wo actually, mujhe ab kisi aur bhi bahut pyar karna padega

sujal:- kyaaa, pagal ho gayi, hey agar mere alawa kisi aur k baare me socha na to ,jaan se maar dunga

naina:- aap mujhe maroge?

sujal:- are tumhe nahi use

naina:- aur agar main aisa kahu ki , aap use mujhse bhi jyada pyarr karenge tab

sujal:- main use kabhi pyar nahi karunga

naina:- sujal aap apne bachhe ko pyarr nahi karoge?

sujal:- haan , maine kaha na ki (sujal is happily shocked) kya kaha tumne ( naina is sharmofying, then she placed his hand on her tummy) sach me , tum ,tum mumma aur main papa ( naina nods in yes & sujal picks her up )

naina:- sujal kya kar rahe hai chhodiye naa, plzzz sujal

sujal:- oh nainaaa, thank u , thank u , thanku, so muchhh ,u gave every thing

naina:- aap khush to hai naa sujal

sujal:- today ,i m d happiest person on the earth yaar , aur sirf khush hone ki baat kar rahi ho.(& they both hug tighly after some tme they informed every one at the house and all are extreamlyy happy to know about her pregnancy)

varun and mehek's room

varun :- kya mehek, main sirf 2 dino ke liye hi to jaa raha hu aur tum ho ki aise behave kar rahi ho jaise main hamesha k liye jaa raha hu

mehek:- plzz aisa mat kaho , pata nahi kyun par is baar mera mera dil bahut ghabra raha hai, plzz tum apna khayal rakhna ( tabhi naina peeche se aati hai)

naina:- varun mehek tumse pyaar karti hai ,isliye wo aisa keh rahi hai ab tum jaldi jaldi jaao aur jaldi jaldi contract lekar wapas aao samjhe , aur mehek dont worry varun pehli baar thode hi kahin jaa raha hai , wo jald hi jayega

varun:- achhabhabhi, mehek main chalta hu byee

mehek & naina:- byeee

mehek:- bhabhi wo aaj kashish di banglore jaa rahi hai

naina:- aaj lekin use to kal jana tha na?

mehek:- ha lekin wo aaj hi jaa rahi hai, to main unse milne jaa rahi hu aur unhe airport bhi drop kar dungi

naina:- mehek main bhi tumhare sath chalti hu , main bhi kashish se mil lungi ( they both left for the kashish place)

shinha house

kashish:- are mehek , naina tum dono aao

naina:- yeh kya kashish tum to kal jane wali thi naa aur aaj hi

kashish:- wo naina waha bahut kaam hai is liye main der nahin karna chahti aur aur kal jaun ya aaj kya fark padta hai

mehek:- di chaliye main aur naina bhabhi aapko air port drop kar dete hai

kashish:- theek hai chalo

in the car

mehek:- dekho na dii aaj hi varun bhi aaj hi gaya hai aur aaj hi aap bhi , waise abhi varun air port par hi hoga aap bhi use mill lena ( tabhi naina ki nazar raste me hue ek accident par padi)

naina:- driver, zara gadi rokna

kashish:- kya hua naina

kashish wo dekho sayad kisi ka accident hua hai i think ,we should help him ( phir 3no hi road cross kark jaate hai aur dekhte hai ki kisi ka bahut hi buri tarah se accident hua tha , naina mehek aur kashish uss insaan ke aur paas jaate hai aur use seedha kark uska face dekh kar shocked reh jaate hai , maano unke pairo tale se jameen khishak gayi ho)...

end of part 29
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PART 30

phir 3no hi road cross kark jaate hai aur dekhte hai ki kisi ka bahut hi buri tarah se accident hua tha , naina mehek aur kashish uss insaan ke aur paas jaate hai aur use seedha kark uska face dekh kar shocked reh jaate hai , maano unke pairo tale se jameen khishak gayi ho

sujal and akki are running v fast in hospitals corridor, then sujal eyes fell on kashish and naina, both of them runs towards them

sujal:- varun kaisa hai ab, kaha hai wo , doc ne kya kaha? ( naina instantly hugs sujal and started crying )

naina:- sujal varun ko bahut chot aayi hai uska operation chal hai doc abhi kuchh nahi keh paa rahe hai, sujal, sujal varun ko kuchh hoga to nahi na.? ( sujal is also crying, meanwhile aalekh and neelu also reached there, kashish goes near to mehek)

kashish:- mehek dont worry kuchh nahi hoga tumhare varun ko wo jald hi theek ho jayega ( mehek didnt speak a word & after some time doc come out)

doc:- ji wo aapme se mehek kaun hai , wo paiteint unhe bula rahe hai,( sabhi ander jate hai siway sujal kashish akki aur naina k)

sujal:- doc varun ab theek to hai naa?

doc :- mr garewal, aap ja kar unse aakhiri baar mil lijiye , unke paas waqt bahut kam hai ( dhamaake on all's face)

sujal(holds doc's collar ) :ayeee, tumhe mere bhai ko bachana hi hoga kuchh nahi ho sakta use samjhe tum , kuchh bhi nahi.

akki:- sujal chhod unhe chal ander chal

sabhi ander jaate hai varun apni aakhiri saan le raha hai mehek uske bagal me baithi hai aur kuchh nahi keh rahi

varun:- m m mehek , wada karo ki tum mereee jj jane k baad khush rahogi aur rogi nahiin ( then looked at lalita and vasu they both r crying) momm, dad plzz nahi ( then looked at sujal naina and kashish)bhaiyaaa, aapho to mujhe koi chintaa nahi hai ( & finaaly looked at rishi who is also crying) iska kahayaal rrrakhana ( and varun passed away all r crying bitterly exept mehek she is not responding for any thing till now)

r&g house sabhi varun ke antim sanskaar ki tayyariyon mre lage hai

kashish aur naina mehek k room me aate hai

naina:- mehek , chalo neeche , wo log varun ko le jaa rahe hai jaa kar dekh lo

kashish:- mehek plzzz say some thing wo log varun ko hamesha k liye l jaa rahe hai ab varun kabhi nahi aayega wo marr chuka hai mehek wo marr chuka hai wo plzzz( then kashish aur naina mehek ko pakad kar late hai aur stairs se mehek varun ko dekhti hai wo zorr se chikhti hai varunnn aur daud kar jati hai aur sujal ka coller pakad kar kehti hai)

mehek:- sujal bhaiya , sujal bhaiya plzzz mana karo naa di ko wo ye kya keh rahi hai, aur bolo na ki uth jaye wo aapki baat manta hai, aap kahenge to wo uth jaye ga ( sujal ko mehek ki yeh haalat dekhi nahi jari thi usne kashish aur naina ko ishara kiya to we aakar use le gayi aur varun k pass bitha diya , mehek is crying bitterly on varun's chest after sme time we sabhi varun ko e kar chale gaye aur aaj r&g house me maatam chhaya hua tha)

varun ko gaye hue 13 din ho chuke hai sab thode normal hue hai aur kashish kal banglore jaa rahi hai,
sujal ko office k kaam se delhi jana pada isliye naina aur rishi kashish ko chhodne aaye hai

rishi:- kashish ye rahe tumhare tickets abhi flight ko time hai chalo waha wait karte hai, bhabhi plzz aap baith jaao is halat me aap plzz aise khade matt raho

kashish:- is haalat me matlab, naina tum theek to ho na

naina:- wo kashish i m pregnant is liye ( kashish smiles)

kashish:- sach naina oh i m so happy for both of but , naina mehek ka khayal rakhna

naina:- mehek ka dard koi nahi samajh sakta par main apni taraf se poori kosis karungi.

after some time kashish left for banglore and naina& rishi returned to r&g house. and in the evening sujal also came back from delhi.

8 months later

in 8 mahino me bahut kuchh hua kashish ek bhi baar shimla nahi aayi par waha bhi use sirf sujal ki hi yaad aati thi, huda realised his true love is sherry and sherry also accepts his praposal, yudi also find her soul mate aur inki bhi saadi hogayi hai 2 month pehle hi aur r&g house me rishi aur mehek ki saadi ho gayi hai , varun k jaane ke hi vasu ne apne rang dikhane suru kar diye, bat bat me mehek ko taane deti thi aur use ghar se nikal jaane ko kehti thi par ek din kareeb 5 months pehle

flash back

in living room of r&g

vasu:- mehek ab tum is ghar me nahi reh sakti mehak...tumhara is ghar se rishta hi kya hai? (everone was quiet and shocked...at vasu's reaction...mehak had tears and was holding roshan's hand... )

mehak:...is ghar se varun ki yaad...

vasu:..band karo yeh natak..

sujal:...AUNTY!...

vasu:...sujal tum beech mein na bolo...

sujal:...ap jo keh rahi hain woh galat hai...mehak ka khayal rakhna hum sab ka farz hai...

vasu:...mehak ka is ghar se ab koiii rishta nahi hai,mein ne faisla kar lia hai...mehak ab yahan nahi rahe gi

everyone got shocked...

sujal:..mehak nahi jaye gi...

vasu:...sujal...dont interfere...i have decided

sujal:...yeh mera bhi akhri faisla hai...

mehak:...rehne dein sujal bhaiya

naina:..mehak...plz...tum fikar mat karo...yeh ghar tumhara

mehak:..nahi bhabhi...mama sahi keh rahi hain...is ghar se ab mera koi taluk nahi...jis shaks se taluk tha..jab wohi nahi raha to ab mein yahan reh kar kya karungi...(she cries)

naina:-roshan...kya usko haq nahi apne dada...dadi keh paas rehne ka?

vasu:...yeh mera pota nahi.pata nahi kis gali ka...

rishi:...BUSSS! (everyone turns around to see rishi standing there )

rishi:...bahut huwa... (vasu stares at him.)

rishi:...mein big b ke faisle se sehmat hon...mehak nahi jayegi...

vasu:...aur tumhari bhi koi special wajah?...(she raises an eyebrow)

veena:...vasu...yeh aaj tumhe kya ho gaya hai...

naina:aunty .plz...kam se kam is chote se bache ka hi khayal keejiye (vasu and rishi were staring at each other)

vasu:...tumen jawab nahi diya?...kis rishte se rakhna chahte ho mehak ko yahan

naina:- AUNTY (sujal holds onto naina's hand...while..mehak weeps.)

vasu:...uske bache keh baap to ban hi chuke ho...ab kya...

sujal:...ENOUGH

everyone was shocked...sujal slowly walked upto rishi...

sujal:...ek bar tumhari wajah se mehak ne apne ghar khoya tha...izzat khoyi thi...aj zindagi ne tumhe moka diya hai rishi...usse uski khusiyan...uska ghar lota do...(rishi looked at sujal )

rishi:..Big B?

sujal:...shaadi karlo usse...apna lo...

mehak and naina were stunned...actually everyone was..

mehak:...sujal bhaiya yeh

sujal:...mehak...tumne muje bhaiya kaha hai...aj muje us rishte ka haq ada karne do... (naina places her hand on mehak's shoulder )

mehak:.bhabhi.mein yeh nahi... (rishi had picked up the sindoor ki dabiya and filled mehak's mang.mehak stood there shcoked.)...(DHAMAKEEE)

sujal and naina smiled...

rishi:...mehak...yeh mat samajhna keh mein ne kisi keh kehne par yeh rishta jora...shayad yeh woh kaam tha jo muje bahut pehle kar lena chahiye tha...AAJ mein ap sab keh samne...apne bete ko apna ta hon...(DHAMAKEE).roshan ko apnata hon..(DHAMAKA)...aur aj se...koi bhi mehak peh ungli nahi uthaye ga...woh is ghar ki bahut thi...hai...aur rahegi...(he leaves...)...vasu too leaves after a while.

flash back ends

kuchh mahine mehek aur rishi k beech kuchh bhi theek na tha but rishi ke pyarr ne mehek k dil ko pighla diya now mehek loves rishi & rishi also loved her alot & both are happy with roshan

sujal is pacing around operation theater& every one are laughing at his condition

mehek :-sujal bhaiya plzz aap baith jaao , sab theek hoga

veena:- beta kuchh nahi hoga naina aur bachhe ko dekh lena bhagwaan ki kripa se dono hi achhe honge

rishi:-yes big b dont worry ( tabhi sab ko baby crying ki aawaj sunaai di )

aalekh:- oye neelu apun ka bhanja ya bhanji aa gaya re

sujal opens the door gradually and sees kashish lying on the bed...her eyes are closed... he walks over to her and sits beside her... sujal keeps on staring at her...

naina:-:...s...sujal...agaye aap!

sujal has tears in his eyes..one of them drops on naina's eyes...she opens her eyes...and smiles weakly...

naina:-...sujal...mein...

sujal puts his finger on her lips before she could say anything:-.is waqt ko yun hi thaam jane do naina

naina ki ankhon se ansoo nikalte hain sujal hugs her while she is still lying down...

naina:..humare...bete se mile? (she asks) main jeet gayi sujal hume beta hua ?

sujal:..(lets go off her slowly).ji aap jeet gayi but agli baar main jeetunga aur humein beti hogi (just then the nurse enters with the baby and hand over the baby to sujal..)
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sujal looks at teh child with teh cutest smile he can give:...bilkul muj par gaya hai...hain na...

naina sits up:...bilkul...dekhiye na...hans bhi nahi raha...

sujal:- naina.tum phir se shuru ho gayi . (suddenly the child gets a smile on his face..) acha bache...tum bhi ate hi apni mama ke ho gaye... (naina kisses the baby on his forehead...and sujal kisses naina's on her forehead...)

sujal:...thank you! (naina smiles.)

sujal:..aaj zindagi ka sab se khoobsurat toofa diya hai tumne , achha ye batao kuchh naam socha hai tumne iska , maine soch bhi liya hai

naina & sujal ( together):- NAVEEN

naina:- aapne bhi yahi socha

sujal:- ha naina isse achha naam to hume mil hi nahin sakta na ( naina nods and both smiles tabhi peeches se sabhi aate hai aur baby k sath koo chi koo kar rahe hai)

rishi:- big b he is hanspme like u,

mehek:- dekho bilkul naina pe gaya hai par aankhen bilkul sujal bhaiya ki tarah hai.

akki:- mera no kab aayega,

charu:- pehle mera ayega fir tumhara ( then charu takes naveen)

veena:- thanx naina beta , meri sujal ki family ko pura karne k liye. waise tum logon ne iska naam socha,

sujal:- ji mumma naam hoga naveen sujal garewal

lalit:- bahut pyara naam hai

aalekh:- wo to hoga hi aakhir apun ka bhanja

naina:- waise aalekh tu mujhe bua kab bana raha

aalekh:- kya naina, apun to always ready hai is neelu se bol

neelu:- no way abhi nahi , pehle tum to bade ho jaao phir baap banna( all of them laughs at this)

do din baad naina naveen k sath ghar aati hai ghar me sirf aur sirf khusiyaan hai, mehek ne kashish ko jab bataya ki naina ko beta hua hai kashish bahut khush thi.
yunhi inki zindagi chal rahi thi khushi - khushi aur unke sapne bhi pure ho rahe the.aur isi tarah sujal aur naina ki zindagi ke 3 saal kab gujar gaye pata hi nahi chala...

3 years later,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

end of part 30
plzzz do comment
with love Chandni...

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Edited by rkchandni - 10 years ago

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

kuchh readers like snjana... nilu... naujoker ( sorry dear dont know ur real name ) k gusses bilkul sahi nikale... now keep reading and keep guessing... what will happend further... or what destiney holds for SUjal Kashish and Naina...

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naujoker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Oh god!!!
I am crying, this is the most beautiful updates u have given
I really don't have the words for this updates
Naina and sujal marriage
Their lovely moments
Their honeymoon awww!!!
Their dance at the restaurant
The happy news of naina and Sujal's baby
After 8 months the baby
Loved the scene where he was pacing outside the operation theatre and mehak teasing sujal
Naina saying she won that beta uha hai, that was awesome!
And sujal saying jee naina ji
I was soo sad varun died 😭
But happy that rishi accepted mehak and roshan
Alekh and neelu married!!!!
Ali and pooja married!!!!!
Huda realized his love for sherry that was nice!
Yudi also found his soulmate!!!
What will happen after 3 yrs?
Thanks for the pm
Eagerly waiting for the next updat

👏 ❤️ 🤗
Loved the scenes were they named the baby naveen
And naina said to alekh when is he going to make her bua
And alekh saying that he is ready ask neelu
Neelu saying no way first u grow up
That hilarious 🤣

Edited by naujoker - 10 years ago

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psruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

You have portrayed everyone's emotions very nicely...

I feel bad for kashish but i love sujal and naina together. Plz never separate them.

Let Kashish meet someone in Bangalore who will love her and make her fall in love

Eagerly waiting for the next update..

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Vishaka Sanjana

@Sanjana4Rajeev

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Hey Chandni!!

Wow!! That was one of the best updates i've ever read..I was feeling extremely bad for Kashish..but somehow she has realized that Sujal and Naina were always meant to be together no matter what..and what will happen in 3 years..it's a warning from my side..please don't ever ever ever separate SN together...cause they're simply made for each other..however why don't you introduce a new guy to Kashish..perhaps Gurmeet Chaudhry or Raqesh Vashisht( the guy who has paired with Aamna in Hongey Juda na Hum) ..they'll look fabulous together!!😳..It's an order!!😆..Let Kashish go to Banglore..and I suggested these 2 actors name..well rest is in your hand..but I want by SN to be always together!! 😳😳

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rkchandni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#70

thanx everyone for liking my story...

i want to clarify one thing from my side that... i only love Rajeev khandelwal... i m not a particular fan of Sujal kashish or Rajveer naina... i know many of u like only Sujal naina together... and many of u want the re union of Sujal kashish...

i love both the couples...

i love sujal kashish as well as rajveer naina...

i cant change story line but do what will suit to my story...

i have told u guys earlier that this is not a particular SK fic or RN fic...

this is SKN fic... and there r no other hero... sorry sanjana...

hope so u all will understand...

and one more thing i have 2 more fanfic ... i will write them after 15 may or onwards

from 2

1 :- Rajveer naina fanfic :- humko tumsey pyar hai... ( only RN based )

2 :- Sujal kashish fanfic:- pure love ( only SK based )

plzzz do watch #Reporters :- starring Rajeev khandelwal and Kritika kamra... from 13 april 2015... mon - thurs... 9:00pm ...only on sony...