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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Desire6

SHALU..TU SACHMAIN AWESOME WRITER HAI..
REALLY...LOVE UR WRITING...
KEEPS ME HOOKED TO UR STORY...
ND DIS WAS REALLY AN AWESOME PART..
MANY THING...CLEARED...I MEAN ...MANY OF THE MYSTERY SOLVED 😃😃 ND MANY POPED TOO IN MY CHOTU MIND...

DAT ...LIFT SCENE...DER..THOUGHTS..HIS TURNMOIL..HER EMOTIONS..DOSE..SPARK..
DOSE FEELING DAT WERE PENNED SO BEAUTIFULLY..
SACHMAI...A FEW MOMENT OF DARKNESS...HAD TRANSPIRED SOMETHIN IN DEM..FOR SURE..
ND WAT SURPRISED..SHOCKED 😲ME MORE WAS..KHUSHI OPENING UP TO ARNAV...I NEVER THOUGHT...DAT TO COME IN NEAR FUTURE..ND MORE LOVED D WAY ..ARNAV..CONSOLED NAH...ASSURED HER INDIRECTLY DAT HE LL HELP HER...DAT WAS REALLY A SWEET GUESTURE..ND BOTH WERE AFFECTED WIT D CLOSNESS..
I LOVED DAT CUTE DUPATTA SCENE WEN SHE WAS LEAVING D LIFT ..DAT WAS SO CUTE SO INNOCENT GESTURE..😳😳

AND INDEED DAT PROMISE N SINCERE APPOLOGY..AM SURE KHUSHI IS UNKNOWINGLY BUILDING HOPES FROM HIM..
AND I GUESS AS A RESULT OF DIS...WE GOT A GLIMPS OF PAST...
DIS DARKNESS AS ARNAV SAID IS TRUE..HAD GIVEN AWAY SOMETHING...
MEANS...ANDHERA KA ARNAV N KHUSHI KA PAST SAY KUCH TOH CONECTION HAI..PAKKA
LOVED D TRANSITION OF PAST N PRESENT..

GHOSH D WAY GLIMPSE OF PAST WAS SHOWN ..IT FELT LIKE AM WATCHIN A SERIAL..
ND U KNOW ..WEN DEY LEAVE AT CLIFFHANGER..HOW WE CRIB,...😡 SAME WAS MY CONDITION...
I KNOW ...I HAVE TO B PATIENCE FOR SUSPENSE TO UNFOLD..WAT HAPPEND IN SHEESH MAHAL..


ND DOES DAT MEAN...
LA..SPIKED KHUSHI KA DRINK..FOR DAT SHOW STOPPER THING...
ND ...ARNAV WAS ALREADY DRUNK AND MISTOOK KHUSHI TO B LA WEN SHE BIMISTAKENLY ENETERED HIS ROOM..


ND MORNIGN AFTER DAT DEED NIGHT..ARNAV BABA NEVER REMEBERERD ANYTHIN..
I GUESS..SO..
STILL WAT CONFUSE ME..IS WAS SHYAM IN ANY WAY INVOLVED IN ALL DIS CHAOS...
ND
DAT MEANS...LA KNOWS..KHUSHI..SO SHE SURELY GONNA RECOGNIZE HER..IF SHE SEES HER..
ND MAY B DEN ARNAV BABA KA TUBELIGHT JALEGI..😆😆

YEAH PHIR IN DONO KO ...PHIRSAY ANDHERE MAIN DAAL DO...SAARI POLL KHUL JAYEGI..HEHEH😆😆😆


AWW..LOVE D CUTIEPIE NIKHIL...HE IS SUCH A ADORABLE KID..
LOVED MOMMA ND SON MOMENT..

IN ALL A LOVLY LOVLY PART..

BT BT...SHORT THA I AM SO USED TO READING UR BIG BIG WALA UPDATE..
AND D WAY U PEN D STORY. ND D WAY U STOP D SAME. EVERYTIME...I HAVE D SAME REACTIION..SO CANT BLAME..ME 😛 LOVE UR WRITIN🤗

ND D NOTE ...U GAVE IN D LAST..

I DIDNT FEEL D PACE IS SLOW.. RATHER I LOVE D PACE IN WHICH IT IS MOVING..OKAY I KNOW ..I CRIB FOR LEAVIN US IN CLIFHANGER..BT STILL I AM LIKIN D PACE...




I know, I know...you are waiting for a lot of things to happen...

YES AM WAITN...EAGERLY..

and I guess it will take one more update before the past unfolds and the story progresses in the present...like- Shyam entering the picture,

SHYAM KA ENTER HONA ZAROORI HAI KYA🤔😡 HUM USKE BINA HI KAAM CHALA LENGE NA..


Arnav's reaction on well...a lot of things! Arshi dealing with each other...as the existing tension seeps away..

ME WAIITN FOR DIS.ONE ..

.Oh and lets not forget Lavanya.

NO NOW I WONT ..AFTER KNOWING ITS SHE WHO HAD INDIRECTLY GIVN KHUSHI D DRINK ..SO AM WAITN FOR HER REACTION ON SEEING KHUSHI

..and the school outing...and Arshi knowing about the true identity of each other.

.DAT AM WAIITN..

.and Shyam's evil plans😡😡😡...and I can go on.

AND I WONT MIND U GOOING ON AND ON....but I think this is enough to pique your interest...

ALREADY AM HOOKED TO UR STORY ..LIKE A FEVICOL..HEHEH😳🤗


OKAY NOW GN..

😃






Dear Divya...never ever think that I might have missed your comment...you are one of those special people whose comments I await eagerly...and not to forget..that I read your com👏ments twice, thrice and then sometimes rush back to read the update again..hehe...I know...silly me...But thats the effect of your comments, analysis and Point-of-View!

Well, this update was a small update to clear things like you said...before the next one...😆
Glad you liked it!
And yes, you gazed it right...The entire lift scene was articulated in a different way...focusing on both the leads present...showing dono ka thoughts and state of mind...!
And the past-present transition...haha...like a serial you said...will it be mean if I say, that I felt the same...hehe...
I would only say that you will (hopefully) be pleasantly surprised by the coming updates...and yeah...you are right on most of the counts..well almost...(I know you are thinking...thats so mean Shalini!)

🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: star_fan1

It was really a beautiful update

Arnav and Khushi's chemistry was awesome
Nw everyone guess what happened that night and Nikhil is Arnav's son
I read some of comments and everyone is asking why Arnav didn't remember anything
I think you have mention it in previously that Arnav had small memory lose due to some accident
Let's she how Shyam come to in this pics
Waiting for next update eagerly


Thanks Amita, glad you liked it!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: renee.bee

Whoa where did my res post go???

So finally here.

Arnav did manage to stop the lift.
oops khushi is now stuck literally and figuratively.
Then the light goes off .
However khushi's fear overtakes her.
she tells Arnav that she's scared and goes the to him for comfort.
Arnav gets the chance he wants first flirting then comforting her seeing she's scared.

However the most important they seem different people.
Arnav is oddly wanting to be close to her and khushi too can't stop herself from seeking comfort for a few minutes.
somehow they start talking as if they always did.
The way she asked if he doesn't have to catch the flight or she replied that she knows she doesn't want to trust him.

Arnav goaded her into sharing why she isn't opting for divorce. Khushi did share the snake wants something precious (nikhil) of Hers.

The way Arnav tried to assure her if he would take care it would she still not consider divorce.

The hug definitely made something shift Arnav feels something for her while khushi is apprehensive. Arnav doesn't know but khushi is description of their meet was contradictory if it was surreal then why she hates him and if they only discuss only job and money how can it be surreal.

Finally she's out of her misery and lift when the elevator opens there she takes off ASAP.

Arnav can't help but feel amused and yes he's keeping a watch On her to see if she's home safe.

However payal thought has been there for khushi but isn't she feeling a bit responsible for khushi being in that state. If she stood up for herself or supported khushi when she heard him talking to the snake khushi could have been better of.

THE PAST.

The past however is intriguing though it's seems a bit more clear as to what might have happened between khushi and Arnav.

However the part where you said khushi was in rick gnear her house while Arnav stand near the stage was it in past if yes then how did she fall in his arms and then go back to the room where Arnav was.

Their meet or rather they sleep with each other I guess Arnav thinks she's la and khushi somewhat got carried away with him and fell for him as well. However when she woke she realized the dreams were meant to be broken and specially if Arnav has no memory of it.


That's why is runs away lest her feelings come to fore before him.

Now I think the snake is impotent and can't have kids that's why he used khushi's weakness to blackmail her and marry her n khushi did that only to save her family from embarrassment.


Please keep the snake only for one reason to being Arnav closer to khushi on the show he took too much space can't tolerate him much. Get rid of him in one or 2 updates and banner too:-)






Renee dear...after reading your comment (thrice so far 😉), I would just say...I am simply bowled over by your line of thinking...!
No, I wont say anything more...rather I should not say anything more...WHY you ask? I think you will soon figure out why 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini.ranjan


Renee dear...after reading your comment (thrice so far 😉), I would just say...I am simply bowled over by your line of thinking...!
No, I wont say anything more...rather I should not say anything more...WHY you ask? I think you will soon figure out why 😆
[/QUOTE. Please help I got confused with this part.

Arnav Singh Raizada was no more than a darkened hulk down the stage when Khushi's auto pulled up in front of her home in Laxminagar.

But as she stood in front of him, nervous, she found him staring at her at the same time, his eyes so firm and pitiless, and his expression utterly unyielding.

Confused and nervous, she turned to return back only to get stuck in her dupatta and land straight into the waiting arms of Arnav Singh Raizada.



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: renee.bee

No Problem Renee...I will try my best to clarify...
1st line- It talks about the present state of mind of Khushi- when the auto she was travelling in had reached her home. Means as her auto had reached her home, she was still lost in the memory of what had happened- which was- when she stood on the stage and saw ASR for the very first time (think episode 1)-her feelings at that point of time.
2nd line- She continues to think of him- and this line provides ASR's description from Khushi's point of view-means how she found ASR staring into her, without any emotions on his face.
3rd line- this line describes what happened afterwards- means when she decided to go back and return from the stage, her feet had got stuck in her dupatta (or maybe it was her lehenga) and she had fallen into ASR's arms.

Basically all the above 3 lines are from their first meeting from Khushi's point of view (and as it had happened exactly on the show)...did it help? 😊 let me know...if this looks still confusing?
PS- I am glad you asked Renee...am happy that you are absorbed into this story as much as I am!
😃😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
So amazing updates, but somewhere I expected more for dinner date.
The lift scene was executed nicely and waiting for the mahaupdate
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nature-lover

So amazing updates, but somewhere I expected more for dinner date.
The lift scene was executed nicely and waiting for the mahaupdate


Natureji...Thanks...for liking the lift scene...
And please share what more did you 'expected'? It will help me taking the story forward and I will try incorporate that 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mushfika

OH MY .. YOU UPDATEDDD!!!

no point of reserving the spot, however, I don't wanna be the last one to comment.. so

RES 😳
*Runs back to read*

*UNRES*

Okay ... alright.. hmm...yes i get it... I'm really late... I know...rotten tomatoes are welcome... but dear, that will only delay the comment... cuz i need to get freshen up and then write the comment... so you decide whether you wanna forgive me or stick to your decision of giving me a piece of your mind (by throwing rotten tomatoes)😳

Alright jokes apart... I apologize for commenting SO late.. Got caught up with something. And btw, don't go by that green sign beside my name... IF always shows me online😆

Coming to the update, wow, how do you read my mind?! I was hoping that the elevator somehow gets stops and they can have their own sweet moments or to be more precise, ARNAV can have his own oh la la time and bang! there it is🥳 All those caring gestures from arnav were really something to look forward to and thanks for not disappointing me there... absolutely loved the entire scene in the elevator.

Coming to the flashback, as I guessed, Khushi met Arnav there then... but then since you said nikhil is not shyam's son, it only leaves me with one answer which is Arnav. But then If something like that happened between Arshi, how come Arnav has no clue about it whatsoever. One might forget one's face, however, forgetting such encounter? That's the only part that's holding me from drawing the conclusion of nikhil being Arnav's son😕 GOD im CONPHOOOSED! 😡

You wanna know what I'm waiting for?😳 hm? hm?😳

To see shyam doing something really bad to khushi and seeing the beast in Arnav come in life ... and take some action against it that will lead to the safety of her... May be by marrying her?😉

UPDATE SOON SHALINI!!!


Musfi darling..what do I say!! Lets start with 'Thank you' for writing these beautiful words 😆

Am glad what you thought and wanted was there...and coming to what you want now...ahem ahem...are you a mind reader 😉

Well, I understand your confusion...hopefully next update will clarify it...and waise, did you forget all those nasty dreams Arnav has been having which drove him to ask Aman for medicine and Aman in turn asking him to go on a date; all of which drove to the lift scene...what say? 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
You really an outclass writer hats off to u
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Posted: 10 years ago
teaser 8...

arnav find out about... khushi married

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