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Posted: 10 years ago
Whoa where did my res post go???
So finally here.

Arnav did manage to stop the lift.
oops khushi is now stuck literally and figuratively.
Then the light goes off .
However khushi's fear overtakes her.
she tells Arnav that she's scared and goes the to him for comfort.
Arnav gets the chance he wants first flirting then comforting her seeing she's scared.

However the most important they seem different people.
Arnav is oddly wanting to be close to her and khushi too can't stop herself from seeking comfort for a few minutes.
somehow they start talking as if they always did.
The way she asked if he doesn't have to catch the flight or she replied that she knows she doesn't want to trust him.

Arnav goaded her into sharing why she isn't opting for divorce. Khushi did share the snake wants something precious (nikhil) of Hers.

The way Arnav tried to assure her if he would take care it would she still not consider divorce.

The hug definitely made something shift Arnav feels something for her while khushi is apprehensive. Arnav doesn't know but khushi is description of their meet was contradictory if it was surreal then why she hates him and if they only discuss only job and money how can it be surreal.

Finally she's out of her misery and lift when the elevator opens there she takes off ASAP.

Arnav can't help but feel amused and yes he's keeping a watch On her to see if she's home safe.

However payal thought has been there for khushi but isn't she feeling a bit responsible for khushi being in that state. If she stood up for herself or supported khushi when she heard him talking to the snake khushi could have been better of.

THE PAST.

The past however is intriguing though it's seems a bit more clear as to what might have happened between khushi and Arnav.

However the part where you said khushi was in rick gnear her house while Arnav stand near the stage was it in past if yes then how did she fall in his arms and then go back to the room where Arnav was.

Their meet or rather they sleep with each other I guess Arnav thinks she's la and khushi somewhat got carried away with him and fell for him as well. However when she woke she realized the dreams were meant to be broken and specially if Arnav has no memory of it.


That's why is runs away lest her feelings come to fore before him.

Now I think the snake is impotent and can't have kids that's why he used khushi's weakness to blackmail her and marry her n khushi did that only to save her family from embarrassment.


Please keep the snake only for one reason to being Arnav closer to khushi on the show he took too much space can't tolerate him much. Get rid of him in one or 2 updates and banner too:-)





Edited by renee.bee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update.
i really liked how arnav took care of khushi in the elevator and has become very possessive about him.
I m really waiting for the part whete arnav ll get to know that he n khushi share some other kind of relationship and when ll come to know about nikhil
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Posted: 10 years ago
From where Should I start ma belle Shalini?
1- It was a fantastic update and I never ever complain of the pace. It was a "sensuel", marvelous, breathtaking, and sublime update. I read some sentences 3 or 4 times. I enjoyed every moment of it.

2- Hats off to you for creating the elevator scene. I adore how you take us back and forth between past and present; sentences in italics sometimes revealed something that happened in the past, in Sheesh Mahal precisely and of course in the darkness of that room... It was a pure artistic description. Speechless I am.

3- The puzzle of the past is slowly but surely getting a shape. Lavanya was going out with her boss, ASR, hai na? The same problem in the show occurs here in your story. Khushi goes to find her jijuji-to -be in order to convince him not to call off the wedding. A mannequin is late or lost and they mistake Khushi for the missing mannequin. Et la Voila, she is on the stage and a little bit drunk. She is not used to drink alcohol so the alcohol effect along with the stress and a very dark and cruel gaze make her uncomfortable.

4- She goes back inside the Sheesh Mahal to find Lavanya. She enters Arnav's room who is apparently waiting for his mistress/girlfriend or he assumes that the person who sneaks into his room, should be Lavanya. He calls her name LAVANYA!

5- He reaches out to her in the darkness. She feels good in his arms and he experiences some strange feelings while he is slightly touching her skin (skin-contact effect in the elevator). The reaction of Arnav and Khushi to the slightest of contact of their body is amazing. The past revives and they are not anymore in the present.

I mean, they are physically in the present but the sudden sensation and the strange feeling belong to the past. Therefore, they are both TAKEN into a TRANSITIONAL phase which is neither present nor past. This is not of course my theory but MARCEL PROUST's beautiful theory. :)))

6- See what your story is doing with me? It takes me to those French literature classes where we used to discuss over Proust, Flaubert, Aragon, Zola :)))

7- I know and I am convinced now why the mighty ASR doesn't remember Khushi and their encounter in the darkness . In the contrary, he deep down feels and remembers the emotion, sentiment, sensation, and feeling RELATED to Khushi.

8- I like the new Arnav as well and I am happy thet Khushi feels a little bit protected and is willing to trust him.

9- Payal is officially walking (getting) on my nerves hahahahaha I have zero tolerance for someone who shows me attitude hahahahaha I wish she was in my class, I would call her parents or I would kick her out hahahah JUST kidding.

10- Nikhil is a sweetheart and I love when he is mimicking his mommy.

11- I think Khushi is deliberately twisting the truth when she said that Arnav had promised her money and job.

12- There are much more to discuss about this awesome update but it is past midnight here and I am still sick :)

PS1.. I loved when Arnav said "What the..."
PS2. I love when he feels a sens of relief once he received th following message: She is home.
PS3. Have I ever told you how I love you and your story and your imagination and much more?

PS4; I think Arnav and Khushi should listen to Lag Ja Gale by Sanam Puri, once they are alone in the car or in a restaurant or a cafe. Arnav should stare at Khushi and Khushi should keep looking back at him and both should be under the spell of this song. Just suggesting of course :) 😉😳




Edited by mojgan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonalikarhi

a perfect written update...now things are getting clearer..khushi drank that juice or whatever and then get drunk i guess...then i think arnav also be drunk at that time ..but the question is how arnav got drunk ...and what had happen after that..but if arnav is father of nikhil then how come he does not know about this..also why shyaam wants nikhil's custody. Is he know by any chance that who is the real father of nikhil...and then to blackmail arnav he is using nikhil...but i also thought when shyam comes to know khushi is pregnant he should have left khushi...and now he knows about arnav thats why he has come back...thx for the update ...the update is surelly refreshing one...


Sonali dear...glad things are getting clearer...! I told you previously that you are quite close...😆
And rest you will come to know soon...!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonalikarhi

and yes khushi and arnav's thoughts and the whole scene of the lift is written so well that i m now going to read it once again...lol..


Haha...me too! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anaswara93

Awesome Update👏

OMG!!!So many twist and turns😃
You are a blessed writer⭐️ M so much in love with this story😊😛


Thank you dear...Glad you are liking it...!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh I forgot:
NICE UPDATE! 😉

PS. Waise...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: peachygirl

Surreal meeting?! So janu beta is arnav's beta..

Arnav slept with khushi thinking her as lavanya??? Or did he strike a deal with her for job and money? How did khushi agree for that??? Investigation karega padi!!
Loved their elevator moments!!
Grey was right afterall!


hey dear...loved your comment Mami's style- Investigation karega padi...lol
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi2503

The story is slowly unfolding. Shyam might be
knowing of their past and the secret of Nikhil's
The lift scene is aptly choosen to recollect her past.
Looking forward to know what was happened in
Sheesh mahal on that night.


Usha am so glad you said that !!
I was partly skeptical of the entire lift sequence as it was supposed to create a huge transition in the leads...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for late reply was busy
Just read Chp 9 10 and 11
Nikhil is a sweetheart
Lot has happened
Dinner date And lift part was nice
Waiting to read next

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