#2: The Alternate Universe- Retelling IPKKND (Thread 2 Complete)

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Desire6

@Desire6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#811

SHALU..TU SACHMAIN AWESOME WRITER HAI..
REALLY...LOVE UR WRITING...
KEEPS ME HOOKED TO UR STORY...
ND DIS WAS REALLY AN AWESOME PART..
MANY THING...CLEARED...I MEAN ...MANY OF THE MYSTERY SOLVED 😃😃 ND MANY POPED TOO IN MY CHOTU MIND...

DAT ...LIFT SCENE...DER..THOUGHTS..HIS TURNMOIL..HER EMOTIONS..DOSE..SPARK..
DOSE FEELING DAT WERE PENNED SO BEAUTIFULLY..
SACHMAI...A FEW MOMENT OF DARKNESS...HAD TRANSPIRED SOMETHIN IN DEM..FOR SURE..
ND WAT SURPRISED..SHOCKED 😲ME MORE WAS..KHUSHI OPENING UP TO ARNAV...I NEVER THOUGHT...DAT TO COME IN NEAR FUTURE..ND MORE LOVED D WAY ..ARNAV..CONSOLED NAH...ASSURED HER INDIRECTLY DAT HE LL HELP HER...DAT WAS REALLY A SWEET GUESTURE..ND BOTH WERE AFFECTED WIT D CLOSNESS..
I LOVED DAT CUTE DUPATTA SCENE WEN SHE WAS LEAVING D LIFT ..DAT WAS SO CUTE SO INNOCENT GESTURE..😳😳

AND INDEED DAT PROMISE N SINCERE APPOLOGY..AM SURE KHUSHI IS UNKNOWINGLY BUILDING HOPES FROM HIM..
AND I GUESS AS A RESULT OF DIS...WE GOT A GLIMPS OF PAST...
DIS DARKNESS AS ARNAV SAID IS TRUE..HAD GIVEN AWAY SOMETHING...
MEANS...ANDHERA KA ARNAV N KHUSHI KA PAST SAY KUCH TOH CONECTION HAI..PAKKA
LOVED D TRANSITION OF PAST N PRESENT..

GHOSH D WAY GLIMPSE OF PAST WAS SHOWN ..IT FELT LIKE AM WATCHIN A SERIAL..
ND U KNOW ..WEN DEY LEAVE AT CLIFFHANGER..HOW WE CRIB,...😡 SAME WAS MY CONDITION...
I KNOW ...I HAVE TO B PATIENCE FOR SUSPENSE TO UNFOLD..WAT HAPPEND IN SHEESH MAHAL..

ND DOES DAT MEAN...
LA..SPIKED KHUSHI KA DRINK..FOR DAT SHOW STOPPER THING...
ND ...ARNAV WAS ALREADY DRUNK AND MISTOOK KHUSHI TO B LA WEN SHE BIMISTAKENLY ENETERED HIS ROOM..

ND MORNIGN AFTER DAT DEED NIGHT..ARNAV BABA NEVER REMEBERERD ANYTHIN..
I GUESS..SO..
STILL WAT CONFUSE ME..IS WAS SHYAM IN ANY WAY INVOLVED IN ALL DIS CHAOS...
ND
DAT MEANS...LA KNOWS..KHUSHI..SO SHE SURELY GONNA RECOGNIZE HER..IF SHE SEES HER..
ND MAY B DEN ARNAV BABA KA TUBELIGHT JALEGI..😆😆

YEAH PHIR IN DONO KO ...PHIRSAY ANDHERE MAIN DAAL DO...SAARI POLL KHUL JAYEGI..HEHEH😆😆😆

AWW..LOVE D CUTIEPIE NIKHIL...HE IS SUCH A ADORABLE KID..
LOVED MOMMA ND SON MOMENT..

IN ALL A LOVLY LOVLY PART..

BT BT...SHORT THA I AM SO USED TO READING UR BIG BIG WALA UPDATE..
AND D WAY U PEN D STORY. ND D WAY U STOP D SAME. EVERYTIME...I HAVE D SAME REACTIION..SO CANT BLAME..ME 😛 LOVE UR WRITIN🤗

ND D NOTE ...U GAVE IN D LAST..

I DIDNT FEEL D PACE IS SLOW.. RATHER I LOVE D PACE IN WHICH IT IS MOVING..OKAY I KNOW ..I CRIB FOR LEAVIN US IN CLIFHANGER..BT STILL I AM LIKIN D PACE...

I know, I know...you are waiting for a lot of things to happen...

YES AM WAITN...EAGERLY..

and I guess it will take one more update before the past unfolds and the story progresses in the present...like- Shyam entering the picture,

SHYAM KA ENTER HONA ZAROORI HAI KYA🤔😡 HUM USKE BINA HI KAAM CHALA LENGE NA..

Arnav's reaction on well...a lot of things! Arshi dealing with each other...as the existing tension seeps away..

ME WAIITN FOR DIS.ONE ..

.Oh and lets not forget Lavanya.

NO NOW I WONT ..AFTER KNOWING ITS SHE WHO HAD INDIRECTLY GIVN KHUSHI D DRINK ..SO AM WAITN FOR HER REACTION ON SEEING KHUSHI

..and the school outing...and Arshi knowing about the true identity of each other.

.DAT AM WAIITN..

.and Shyam's evil plans😡😡😡...and I can go on.

AND I WONT MIND U GOOING ON AND ON....but I think this is enough to pique your interest...

ALREADY AM HOOKED TO UR STORY ..LIKE A FEVICOL..HEHEH😳🤗

OKAY NOW GN..

😃

Edited by Desire6 - 10 years ago

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amita

@star_fan1

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#812

It was really a beautiful update

Arnav and Khushi's chemistry was awesome

Nw everyone guess what happened that night and Nikhil is Arnav's son

I read some of comments and everyone is asking why Arnav didn't remember anything

I think you have mention it in previously that Arnav had small memory lose due to some accident

Let's she how Shyam come to in this pics

Waiting for next update eagerly

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thinkggreen

@thinkggreen

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#813

Superb update.
Does Shyam know who the father is,is that why he wants her son.
Arnav are Kushis so cute together.
Remembered the sceen from IPKKND were Kushis dupatta gets stuck in Arnav watch.
Thanks for the PM.

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#814

Loved the update.

It's now confirmed that nikhil is arnav's son..

Can't wait for arnav to find out who Khushi is.

Will wait for the next part.

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sweet-fairy

@sweet-fairy

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#815

awesome update

khushi get drunk and I think arnav also be drunk at that time

but she remember everything n he doesn't...why he doesn't remember her?

Is La gud or bad?

continue soon

thanks 4 pm

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bellarosa

@bellarosa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#816

awesome

please continue soon

thanks for pm 😊

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Sobia

@arhiforme

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#817

I was so eager for this update it was mindblowing Khushi's flashback was intervals eager for more Arnav is going to find out soon by himself I think

Loved every bit of it

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jheel

@Bhavikakosambia

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#818

hey shalini! i hope that is ur name,

I read the update and liked it but i think you are going around in circles..i mean while i enjoy reading this story it also rubs me the wrong way sometimes, there were instances when i was reading that i really wanted some characters to react differently (Read:arnav).the new plot point of arnav being the father of nikhil did not sit well with me ,because it actually made no sense to me ,i mean the idea of him as nikhil's dad is nice but that does not necessarily mean that he needs to be the bio-dad ,him stepping upto the role of nikhils father just because he likes the boy would have been just fine.but apart from that as i told before i like this story...khushi trying to make a name for herself is good,lavanya too is not a complete bitich -she shows me some depth.but by far i like akash the best(Heh).payal is nice too and i think even though khushi is a mother, payal seems more mature.rest all i find the same as the show...except arnav.

he kind of infuriates me...but then i guess he is just not the kind of guy i like?

Edited by Bhavikakosambia - 10 years ago