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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. IT WAS REALLY NYC UPDATE.LOVED FAMILY TIMING VERY MUCH. LOVED THE OUTING PART OF VIBALA VIGUN AND KASAK. THEYR MAKING KASAK COMFORTABLE. LOVES RANVEER AND JAANVI PART TOO. NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Part 334
In VM after breakfast
Family sending time.
Sehgal sister went for check along there respected lps
Vigun:(get up) we will be back everyone.
Vihaan:hum bhi Chalte hain:(to everyone) bye (went b4 them snatching keys vivaan and madhu)
Family smiles.
Vivaan:(laugh) stormy couple hai.(went with lp) bolna ka chance nahi diye
Family (smiles): agree.
Jeevika: caring hai.(normally) bas Agey, gunjan KO hurt nahi ho jaise maansi KO hua tha, people talk se.
Viren: nothing will happened just as our time.(smiles)
Virman: humlog shopping chalen kya plz, siblings toh jab chahe gifts buy karte.
Jeevika:(smiles) nahi letv it be.
Viren:(smiles) agree.
Virman : okay
Elders went
Jeevika: kasak comfortable hona tum?
Kasak:(smiles) yes.
Maanvi: good then.
Kasak:(smiles) mujhse household work main help chahiye toh boliye mujhe.
Jeemaan:(smiles) its OK
They talk with her.
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At hospital
Outside chair
Vibala sitting and waiting for vigun works to over.
Madhu: I wish dono ki victory ho:(smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles) of course hogi.
Madhu:(smiles) I wish hamara idea approve karte hamare siblings. Every time khudse b4 us:(smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles) no problem somedays aur month main, unke right ki khushi milegi.
Madhu:(smiles) agree.
Vihaan:(smiles) bas yeh dekhna hai, past coincindence hota hai ya nahi.
Madhu:(smilee) meaning.
Vihaan:(smiles) first 2 sis entry, then brother entry, ya brothers entry ya sis entry.
Madhu:(smiles) football players aare hain..
Vihaan:(smiles) pretty fairy.
Madhu:(smiles) hospitsl main hain hum agree ho tum.
Vihaan:(smiles) main kab bola forest main hain.?
Madhu:(smiles) main chodke jaungi yahin admit karake tumhe.
Vihan:(smiles) not so easy my wifey.
Madhu:(smiles) i will keep trying.
Vihaan:(smiles) sure wait karo.
They wait for vigun with talking.
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On the way.
Ranjan-maanak going back home.
Ranvir:(in mind) thank god sab theek hai.
Jaanvi:(smiles) humlog baby's k third siblings KO gift buy karne chalen.
Maansi:(smiles) good idea.
Ronak:(smiles) ghar jaake, window shopping karte hain.
Ranvir: nice idea.
Sehgal sisters: okay fine.
Sehgal brother smiles.
Jaanvi: ranvir, mere kal k behavior KO serious nahi lo OK, doctor bhi boldiye sab fine hai.(smiles)
Ranvir:(smiles) its not like that,
Jaanvi:(smiles) stop being vivaan part 2.
Maanak smiles.
Ranvir:(smiles) we love our lp, that's y. Isliye panic hhote
Jaanvi:(smiles) okay fine.
Maansi:(smiles) nice answer ranvir.
Ronak:(smiles)
They went away.
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Back to hospital
Vigun: (arrive completing their turn work)
Vihaan:(smiles) everything is OK right
Madhu:(smiles) sure OK hoga,
Vivaan: right, bas 4 ya 5 days k baad aana hoga:(smiles)
Gunjan: kasak k saath:(smiles)
Vibala:(smiles) awesome.
Vihaan:(smiles) party chahiye humko. Aaplog se sadness defeat karke gayi na.
Vivaan:(smiles) tumne party diya humein.
Vibala:(start cough)
Vivaan:(smiles) stop shying, music main earning karke.
Vihaan:(smiles) sabko breakfast prepare karke diya toh self.
Vivaan:(smiles) hum bhi aisa karenge.
Vibala:(smiles)
They went.
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in VM in lunch
Everyone eating
Vihaan: I hope video lock kardiye hunge sab, record karke.
Family: yes:(smiles)
Madhu:(smiles) ab plz eb mat Karna, family KO name k liye?

Vihaan:(smiles) sure nahi karunga. Angels k near careful raho, they can hear.
Madhu:(smiles) fine. U 2.
Vivaan: vihaan aj agaye, Next time work miss nahi Karna ok.(smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles) try karunga
Family smiles.
Vivaan:(smiiles and use childhood trick) ajao.no problem.
Family:(smiles) happy ho vihaan
Vihaan:(madeface)kya? not fair.
Virman:(smiles) not fair wali kya baat hai?
Vihaan:(smiles) vivaan bhai ki habit hai, mujhe opposite bolte kuch aur main oopposite karta tha.
Vivaan:(smiles) right saying.
Family smiles.
Everyone eat and left.
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In backyard!
gunbala and kasak sitting.
Kasak:(with smile) if u dont mind,ek baat ask Karun? LS k bare main.
Gunbala:(smiles) ok.
Kasak:(smiles) who tell first their feelings. Aap ya vivaanji?
Gunjan:(smiles) humlog jaanvidi ranvirjiju k liye, gift lane Gaye the, wahan queue main khogaye, goons se milgayi main by mistake, wahan rescue kiya mujhe.
Madhu:(smiles) fear main confess kardiya humne?
Kasak:(smiles) nice storys.
Gunbala:(smiles) thank you.
Kasak:(smiles) welcome.
Madhu: you know yahan, husband wife fasting karte hain kc par:(smiles)
Kasak:(smiles) really.
Gunjan:(smiles) yes. Each other k best lp hai sab.
Madhu:(smiles) agree.
They spend times
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Back to VM hall.
Madhu:(sees article)cg bahu no1 competetion!, (jeemaan) aaplog ne kabhi kiya kya?
Jeemaan:(smiles) nahi, tumhe Karna hai kya?
Gunjan:(comes) kya Karna hai.
Madhu:(smiles) bahu no1 competetion.
JM: nice hoga, fast decide Karo aur agree ho.(to jeemaan) boliye na mamma.
Jeemaan: why not.
Gunjan: Di's need us, uske baad kasak, madhu tum karlo competetion ek hi baat hai, main rehti hun.
JM: its OK, tumhare jijus hai saath.
Jeemaan: kasak k saath hum hunge.tum tension nahi raho, believe us.
Gunjan:(uncomfortable to compete with sister) mujhse nahi hoga, pehle bhi mcompetetion toughly kiya.Plz madhu KO join karadijiye, humlog guest banke dekhenge.
Madhu:(keep paper fake sadly) mujhe bhi nahi karna, alone.
Gunjan:(with smile) big deal nahi hai madhu, hum different standard main studies kare the, yeh bhi aisa hoga, humlog help karenge tujhe, vivaan ki baat yaad hai, win koi bhi karo ek hi baat hai.
Madhu:(thought something) thanks for helping
Jm jeemaan:(felt nice)good.tips lene asakti ho humse..
Madhu:(smiles)
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In evening family eating.
Madhu:(text vivaan)
Vivaan:(text madhu)
Maanvi: vihaan tum work se time leke Madhu ko join karo competetion main.
Vihaan:(smiles) video grapher hote hain, main kya karunga.
Maanvi:(smiles) khud . Dekhlo jaake.
Vihaan: vivaan bhai gunjan bhabhi aaplog excited ho na.(smiles)
Gunjan:(smiles)yes, we are excited for u.
Vihaan:(madeface) only humlog.
Gunjan: hum 4 busy honge, sisters ko company kaun dega.?(smiles)
Madhu:(get sad)
Vivaan:(text her)main noon na, tum sad nahi ho.(smiles)
Madhu:(read text and smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles) jaana kab hai?
Madhu:(smiles)kal jaana hai
Ranjan-maanak: all the best madhu vihaan.
Vibala: thankyou
Everyone eat and left
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In maanak room!
Maansi:(smiles) kitna achcha example set karsakte gunjan madhu, haina?
Ronak:(smiles) agree.
Maansi:(sadly) bcoz of us ROK gayi gunjan.
Ronak:(smiles) don't be sad and blame your self. Plz, she will feel bad.
Maansi:(smiles) okay.
Ronak:(smiles) by the way, she has other reason.
Maansi : right saying.
Ronak:(smiles) tumhe chance milta toh kya karti thi.?
Maansi:(smiles)main aur jaanvi competetion karke ajate thi, win ho ya nahi ho.
Ronak:(smiles) good idea.
Maansi:(smiles) thank you.
Ronak:(smiles) welcome.
Maansi:(smiles) aap kis k liye wish karte the
Ronak:(smiles) dono ke liye.
Maansi:(smiles) nice idea.
Ronak:(smiles) no problem, eat karte raho strong bante raho babies k saath tumlog.
Maansi:(smiles) okay fine.
They take rest
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In ranjan room!
Jaanvi: kitna amazing hai, couples time spend karenge like us:(smiles)
Ranvir: right amazing.
Jaanvi: (madeface)buddhu vihaan KO happy hona chahiye, akdu vadera.
Ranvir:(smiles) wrong,madhu KO bhi bolna chahiye, saath rehne vihaan KO.
Jaanvi:(smiles) let it b, let's be what v r OK.
Ranvir: okay fine:(smiles)
Jaanvi:(smiles) kitna maza ayega gunjan agree ho toh,?
Ranvir:(smiles) right but I don't think, vivaan gunjan compete karenge, they have new chance
Jaanvi:(smiles) agree.
Ranvir:(smiles) thanks.
Jaanvi: In case main aur meri behna compete karte toh kis k liye pray karte tum?
Ranvir: (smiles) other competitors k liye.
Jaanvi:(made face) how rude. Koi 1 family girl karna chahiye.
Ranvir:(smiles) tum aur mere bhabhi genuinely play karte, others nahi, tolerate karne k himat ho failer KO.
Jaanvi:(smiles) okay nice.
Ranvir:(smiles) thanks.
Jaanvi: I am sure, good example set karenge.
Ranvir: OK
They take rest
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In vigun room!
Vivaan: gunjan, compete kyun nahi Karna tumhe.?(smiles)
Gunjan:(smiles) reasons pata hai tumhe.
Vivaan:(smiles) family ne assure kiya na?
Gunjan:(smiles) I trust them,(normally) bas compete nahi Karna mujhe. Madhu ho ya main kya problem hogi?
Vivaan:(smiles) nahi hogi, saath rahogi to strength banoge each other k.
Gunjan:(sadly) problem aye toh.?jaise vihaan madhu main hue the
Vivaan:(smiles) gunjan, tumlog couples nahi siblings ho, problem kyun hogi.? Saath milega.
Gunjan:(sadly) sorry to remind u vivaan, but problem tum brothers main hue the.
Vivaan:(smiles) its OK, but tum girls more understanding hote hum boys se, JD banne k k baad bhi seriously fight nahi kari tumlog ne.
Gunjan: jaanti hun.
Vivaan:(smiles) then manjao mujhse plz otherwise apni madhu KO bura lagega.
Gunjan:(smiles) tumse complain Kari usne?
Vivaan:(smiles) wish batai apne vivaan jijubhai KO.
Gunjan:(smiles) really. Tumhe time milega.
Vivaan: try karunga.
Gunjan: let's rest
Vivaan: okay
They take rest
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In vibala room!
Madhu: kitna maza ayega na?
Vihaan:(smiles) agree.
Madhu:(smiles) sab smoothly ho bas.
Vihaan:(smiles) agree.
Madhu:(smiles) I hope name spoil nahi ho family ka.
Vihaan: don't worry.
Madhu: only gunjan di ka agree ho vivaan jiju bhai se.
Vihaan:(smiles) right saying.unke bolte agree hunge as us.
Madhu: hamara select hona possible ho bas.
Vihaan: don't worry.
Madhu:(smiles) tum aur vivaanjijubhai best beta competetion kyun nahi karte?
Vihaan:(smiles) chance ayega toh dekhenge.
Madhu:(smiles) okay fine.
Vihaan: (smiles) I hope mujhe saari wearing karne ka chance nahi mile.
Madhu:(laugh) don't worry.
Vihaan: let's rest
Madhu: OK
They take rest!



Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. IT WAS REALLY NYC UPDATED. WOW BAHU NO 1 COMPETITION IS GOING ON. MADHU PARTICIPATED IN IT. KASAK PART WITH GUNJAN AND MADHU WAS ALSO GUD. NOW WAITING FOR THE COMPETITION. SO UPDATE SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 335
In VM
After breakfast.
Hall
Family spending time.
B-no1( selector arrive) hello everyone, my name shilpa grewal, cg main bahu no1 competetion honewale hai uski selector hun, three rounds ka competetion hoga, aaplog main se intrusted hoga, 1 ka
Madhu:(sadly) my answer is.
Gunjan:(smiles and get up stand beside her) our answer is yes.
Family felt nice.
Madhu:(hug her spin around happily)
Family:(smiles)
Vivaan:(laugh then say)) note down Mrs gunjan vivaan vadera &
Vihaan:(smiles)mrs madhu vihaan vadera.
Selector:(note names) thanks.(left)
Gunbala:(suddenly realize and stop) my name is.(search selector) oh no
Vivaan-vihaan:(smiles) mrs exciter vadera, oh yes bolo.
Madhu:(smiles) vivaanjijubhai.thank u
Vivaan:(smiles) welcome,
Madhu: thank you gunjan di.
Gunjan:(smiles) WWelcome(normally) promise Karo, main fail Hui toh wantedly Tum nahi fail hogi, jaise tumlog ne past days main kiya hamare liye, otherwise I will be to much sad.got it
Vibala:(get shock and look vivaan)
Vivaan:(hold ear and whisper) sorry guys.
Madhu:(smiles) okay gunjan di.
GUnbala:(take elder blessing)
Sehgalsisters:(smiles) congrats gunjan madhu, Go inpire other sisters with your relation, who has forgots first relation bcoz of second relation and competetion
Gunbala:(smiles) thank you, di' we will try.
Vihaan: (smiles) our behnas kyun chahti ho competetion ki trp down Karna,?(slowtone) most important humein family se sunana, fight chodo apni-apni wife jaise milke rehne sikho
Vivaan:(hears and smiles)
Jaanvi:(smiles) kya bolre the vihaan last main.
Vivaan:(smiles) competetion k end after family party main singing karega.
Gunbala:(smiles)
Maansi:(smiles) good gift hoga vihaan ka.
Jaanvi:(smiles) vivaan tum kya karoge?
Vivaan:(smiles) main kya karunga nahi pata mujhe
Vihaan: praise Hui gunjan bhabhi toh aapko chair pe stand hoke bolna sabke samne, I love and proud of my wife, jaise hm pe bhangeffect main kiya tha.
Vigun:(get shy)
Family smiles
Madhu:(smiles) khud bhi chalo idea par.
Vihaan:(smiles) sure karunga.
Vigun:(reminds) elders and angels k samne carefully talk Karo vihaan.
Elders & siblings smiles.
Vihaan:(smiles) ok rokta hun,
Vigun:(smiles) good of u
Vihaan:(smiles)personally triple angels KO bolunga. How are there parents
Family start laughing.
Vivaan:(smiles) main bhi foursome angels KO bolunga, unka 2ndmamu and chachu and dad, unki second mami aur maasi aur mom KO kitna tease karte hain.
Vibala:(in union) yeh ags maindad mom aur main(start coughing)
Vigun:what happened(smiles)
Vibala:(get normal) angels sunre hai.careful rehna plz
Vivaan(smiles) let them learn.
Jeevika:(smiles) vivaan don't irrite them.
Vihaan:(join his aunt) suna apne my brother
Maanvi: bhai dono hai toh right dono ka hai teasing ka:(smiles) only vihaan ka nahi.
Vivaan:(join his aunt) suna tumne my brother
Family spend times
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In baby room!
Jaanvi:(smiles) vivaan gunjan bhi, badepapa maasi types lagte hain mujhe, aap dono ke baad.same caring and supporting.
Ranvir:(smiles) agree.
Ronak: maybe,ab bas waise parents banna hai:(smiles)
Maansi:(smiles) right saying ronak.
Ranjan: learn karenge aur thoda best parent banenge.
Maanak:(smiles) agree.
Jaanvi:(normally) ranvir kash tum hanky nahi dekhte toh, raja name final hota tha.
Ranvir:(hold ears) sorry.
Maansi: let it be jaanvi :(smiles)
Jaanvi:(smiles) its OK.
Ronak:(smiles) best name tha.
Ranvir:(smiles) superbeti1 superbeti2 name rakhte hain na.
Maansi:(smiles) nice choice.
Jaanvi: no ways. Ladkonwalaname hoga hamare beton k.
Sehgal brother: dono name sochte hain.
Sehgal sisters:(smiles) good idea.
They spend times.
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Inbackyard
Gunjan:(normally to herself) kasak ka gs ka final step hona haii, vivaan ka work hona hai, kaise hoga god, sisters KO family care chahiye (made face)I hate u madhu and vivaan for stucking me..
Vivaan:(overhear)how can u theft this think from our mamma ?
Gunjan:(get confuse) meaning.
Vivaan:(smiles hug her from behind) tum advance main Fikr minister kyun hori ho.? Like mamma.
Gunjan:(get separate rudely) tum nahi samjhoge. Gs left hai, sisters ki conditions hai, saara work mamma maasi par ajayega.
Vivaan:(smiles) aana jaana rehta humko, biggboss nahi hai, manage hoga, I respect your thought.(cup her face) don't worry.
Gunjan:(bit tongue) sorry vivaan maine tumhe rudely bola.
Vivaan:(smiles) its OK gunjan,.anyways after gs result ready rehna tum mere surprise k liye.(bit tongue)sorry main jaata hun:(turn to go)
Gunjan:(normally) no vivaan ,mujhe surprise mat karo I have no right to get surprise from u. Hamara case siblings se different hai, waisa kuch hota toh main accept karti thi.
Virika sad tune playing
Vivaan: oh ho,don't be sad(hug her,in mind) gunjan, I promise u, very soon 1 day bhi yeh problem yaad aane nahi dunga.
Vibala:(arrives and sees them and sings mhmthh)
Vigun:(get shock and separate) not again.
They spend time.
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In lunch
Family eating along kasak.
Vihaan: humein kya Karna hai? bahu no1 competetion main.
Madhu: I think mujhe eat karana:(smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles) ya phir tumhe mujhe tea Dena hai, leg press Karna hai mere.
Madhu:(made face) what stupid understanding.
Family smiles.
Vihaan:(made face) right bolra hun, tabhi lp rehna hai saath.
Sehgal:(smiles and said) our brothers, allow hai toh record Karna video
Vivaan-vihaan: (smiles) sure sisters.
Gunjan: mamma , kasak k liye change milega, lejain kya humlog?
Jeevika: if she want to come, lejao.:(smiles)
Gunbala:(smiles) thank you,( tokasak) ready rehna OK. I insist along family
Kasak: okay:(smiles)
Vigun-vibala:(smiLes)
Vihaan:(smiles) madhu dishes recipes yaad haina tumhe.?
Madhu: of course hai.
Vivaan:(smiles) strong competors hai yeh log,vihaan, surprise karke rehenge.
Vihaan:(smiles) right hai,
Gunbala:(smiles) eat food.
junior v Bros: okay fine
Family smiles and eat
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In evening after dinner.
In maanak room!
Ronak: tumdono ke tips awesome the Jo gunjan Madhu KO diye:(smiles)
Maansi:(smiles)if hum tips nahi bhi dete toh example set karke aate the.
Ronak:(smiles) agree.
Maansi:(smiles) dono sisters alone nahi hunge , very best thing hai.
Ronak:(smiles) agree.
Maansi:(smiles) Madhu ne theek Kara vivaan KO bolke. Jaise jaanvi be aapko bola
Ronak:(smiles) right saying,
Maansi:(smiles) thanks for that time to handle her when she need me but get helpless.
Ronak:(smiles) maansi no need to thanks me, we r family after all.
Maansi:(smiles) okay fine nahi bolungi.
Ronak:(smiles) good, humdono sune promise, change mat hona.
Maansi:(smiles) baby is resting. Okay I will not change.
Ronak:(smiles) good.
Maansi:(smiles) apne name record kiya?
Ronak: (smiles) daily sochta hun aur record karta hun.
Maansi:(smiles) let's rest.
Ronak:(smiles) okay
They take rest
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In ranjan room!
Jaanvi:(smiles) baby aane k baad, humlog competetion Karen kya?
Ranvir:(smiles) why not. But humlog meri babygirl ya tumhara baby boy main busy hogaye toh kaise karenge competetion ?
Jaanvi:(smiles) ten yrs ya five yrs rokte hain?
Ranvir:(smiles) good idea.
Jaanvi: hamare siblings KO bhi bolenge.(smiles)
Ranvir:(smiles) awesome idea.
Jaanvi:(smiles) babies dekhenge toh enjoy karenge.
Ranvir:(smiles) agree.
Jaanvi:(smiles) condition toh yaad haina?
Ranvir:(smiles) of course hai.
Jaanvi:(smiles) good.
Ranvir:(smiles) humne app download karke best kiya na? Baby k activities ki gk hori.
Jaanvi:(smiles) agree. Other to be parents KO guide karsakte hum.
Ranvir: kardiya humne guide, apps name deke.
Jaanvi: agree:(smiles) right.
Ranvir:(smiles) let's rest now.
Jaanvi: okay
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In vigun room!
Gunjan: hamare saare sibling kitni care karte hain hamari:(smiles) haina.
Vivaan:(smiles) agree with u.(normally) I am sorry as lp mujhe try Karna tha.but.
Gunjan:(smiles) its OK , half time saath rehte mere tum. Woh kya less try hi:(sadly) pretending main jiye tum mere bcoz. Happy hone ki
Vivaan:(smiles) its not like that.
Gunjan:(smiles) itna baad secrifice karne ready the.next relation ka
Vivaan:(smiles) its not big thing for me, bcoz tum thi. Along family, ek relation nahi Milne se kya sad hota main.aur tum bhi for sure.
Gunjan:(smiles)
Vivaan:(fakeseriously) next time se no counting whatever I do for u ya to u,, got it.?
Gunjan:(smiles) okay.
Vivaan:(smiles) good.
Gunjan:(smiles) u to remember same.
Vivaan:(smiles) okay fine.
Gunjan:(normally) kal task kaise karungi I don't understanding.
Vivaan:(smiles) hojaiga.rest Karo.
Gunjan: okay
They take rest
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In vibala room!
Madhu: i hope hum sisters ko best comments mile:(smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles) dont worry milengE.
Madhu: koi rift nahi ho bas. Hamare competetion k types.
Vihaan:(smiles) nahi hogi, elder sisters understanding hote like elder brother, nahi hoga rift. Tum more follow karti ho apni behen ko. Unlike me.(smiles)
Madhu:(smiles) agree.
Vihaan: lie bhi bolti tum bhi best brother ho vihaan.
Madhu: copy paste:(smiles)
Vihaan: (smiles) very funny.
Madhu:(think of prank) vihaan ear near Karo mujhe kuch bolna hai.
Vihaan:(did same) bolo.
Madhu:(fake shyly whisper)main aur tum, I mean tum aur main couples nahi rahenge ab se.
Vihaan:(get shock) what a stupid talk. Your doing, clearly bolo.
Madhu:(lookdown)hum parents banre hain.
Vihaan:(get shocked) oh no Itne jaldi
Madhu:(felt bad ) sorry vihaan, main tumhara test leri thi,last time training se b4 irritate the na.
Vihaan:(made face) stupid joke karta hai koi.
Madhu:(sadly) mujhe laga training se change hue tum.
Vihaan: let's rest.
Madhu: kabhi yeh baat each hogi toh terminate karadoge.
Vihaan: next year se b4 hua toh.
Madhu:(fakehapply) let's rest.
Vihaan: sorry if I hurt u.
Madhu: its OK
They take rest



Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago
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Part 336
In VM hall
After breakfast.
Vigun vibala is ready to go competetion place
Gunbala taking elders blessing.and went with their lp and kasak.
Family sat back.
Jaanvi:(smiles) saare d.I.l ki band play karenge gunjan madhu.
Maansi: jaise husbands waise wife's hai:(smiles) after all.
Ronak-ranvir: (smiles) agree madeforeachother hai?
Jeevika:(normally) I hope kasak ke bcoz problem nahi ho, others k in front. Kasak ki reality ayi toh.
Jaanvi:(smiles) don't worry, vivaan gunjan main problem nahi hogi.They love eachother
Viren: main tired hogaya hun repeat bolkes ,tum nahi ho tired Jaanvi.
Jeevika: I just don't want people comment on gunjan bcoz of her unfitness.:(get sad) I trust my all means all childrens
Viren: okay sorry:(smiles)
Virman: don't worry sab smoothly hoga.:(smiles)
Family spend times.
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At bahu-1 completion show
Host:(smiles) hi friends main hun apka dost and host mohit sehgal. Welcome hai aapka bahu-no1 competetion main.
Everyone claps for them.
Mohit sehgal:Thankyou, rules pata hunge, phir bhi again batate hun, first round main aapko decoration task milega sorry less facility k saath aapko adjust karke creativity show karna hoga alone without sservent ,second round main aapko limited budget main shopping Karni hogi 10,000 main,third round main apke hands tie karenge aur lp aapko ready karna hoga, aapko har task k baad points, if 90 se less point mile toh aapko humein chood jaana hoga
Contestants felt nice And nervous
Lps Felt nice.
Mohit sehgal: let's invite our four contestant plz, Mrs payal mehra from amritsar- mrs geet khurana from Delhi, Mrs gunjan vadera from Chandigarh, Mrs madhubala vadera from Chandigarh.
Payal- geet- gunjan-madhu:(bow down)
Audience claps for them.
Mohit: let's begin with decoration task, bring items plz.(smiles)
Someonebring items.
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Back to VM babyroom!
Ranjan-maanak spending times.
Jaanvi:(smiles) kitne interesting task hore hunge haina?
Ranvir:(smiles) aaplog bhi best perform kar raho baby's KO healthy food juice send karke.
Ronak:(smiles) I am sure aise hi careful rahoge eat karoge toh tie hoga healthy babies ka.future main.
Sehgal sisters:(smiles) thanks.
Ranvir:(smiles) welcome.
Jaanvi:(smiles) ronak jiju, aapko kya lagta hai future main kaun win karega? Main ya ranvir. In baby matter
Ronak:(start thinking)
Ranvir:(get bore by waiting) boldo ranvir win karega, simple.
Jaanvi:(smiles) nahi its me who going to win.
Ronak:(smiles) your right jaanvi:(smiles)
Jaanvi:(show tongue)
Ranvir:(madeface)
Maansi:(smiles and said) ranvir jaanvi KO twins milenge.sad nahi ho wishes fulfillhunge
Ranvir:(smiles)
Jaanvi:(madeface) no I am zero in front of u,
Ranvir:(laugh and said) married hote hain baby kya b4 time.Jo mention kar rahi ho.
Jaanvi: (madeface) nahi bas bolri hun.
Maanak:(smiles)
They spend times.
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Back to competetion.
Judges watching contestant creations aand writing marks
Contestant are scare.
Vivaan-vihaan:(is worried)
Judges went back.
Host:(gave money to everycontestant and went) shop for family .
Contestant thinking and purchasing thIngs.
Vihaan,:(whisper) madhu ka anger ho ya love unlimited deti hai, money kya save karegi.?
Vivaan:(whisper) wait and wait my brother, madhu is like chricketmatch, unpredictable.
Vihaan:(whisper) right saying, anyways mujhe gunjan bhabhi pe believe hai.
Vivaan:(whisper) okay karo believe.
Kasak is silent watching them
Foursome contestant shopping things.
Vihaan:(whisper) I am worried makeover kaise karunga,?
Vivaan:(whisper) let's be relax like them, afterwards dekhenge.
Vihaan:(whisper) okay.
They watch them.
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Back to VM
In lunch family eating.
Jaanvi: aaplog KO pata hai vihaan bolra tha khudko gunjan mafdhu main rift hone do, otherwise aap elders vivaan vihaan KO fight karne par, milke rehnewali gunjan madhu se united rehna learn karne bologe.
Family:((laugh) very funny.
Ranvir:(smiles) are u sure.
Jaanvi: very much:(smiles)
Maanak: (smiles)
Ranvir: (smiles)
Jaanvi:(smiles) family kya gift karenge aap gunjan madhu KO.
Family: Jo woh chahein:(smiles)
Maansi:(smiles) nice idea.
Jaanvi: I don't think woh log kuch gift chahenge.
Jeevika: madhu ne achcha socha, yeh competetion karne ka, thoda tension less hoga gunjan vivaan ka(smiles)
Maanvi: agree:(smiles) tension se far karne main aur tension forget karne main winner hunge dono Sisters.
Virat:(smiles) agree.
Virika: (smiles) agree.
They eat and left
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Back to competetion area.
Oneside
Host: can v have contestant husbands plz.
Vivaan-vihaan- raman- maan join their wife.
Host explain.
Makeover task begins after handcuff contestants
Vivaan:(remembers gunjan style look and starts) if mistake hojaye toh forgive me gunjan.
Gunjan:(felt nice) I believe u. Continue.
Vivaan:(smiles and doing makeover)
Otherside
Vihaan:(is confuse)
Madhu:(remind him) complete task, my hands are paining.
Vihaan:okay(begins) mistake hotoh fight mat Karna abhi se.
Madhu: okay:(smiles)
Tujh main rab dikhta hai dual playing in background.
Vivaan-vihaan: (comb their wife's hair)
Gunbala smiling.
Vivaan-vihaan:(fills partition of their wwife forehead)
Gunbala:(close eyes and remember their wedding Time)
Vivaan-vihaan:(put simple jewelry along bangles)
Gunbala:(smiles)
Vivaan-vihaan:(stop)done.
Other couples still doing task.
Judges:(watch them and remind)yeh less jewelry, makeup bhi nahi kiya
Vivaan:(normally) sorry , actually Maine learn kiya parents se outside beauty se more important nature hota hai Jo har kissi k paas nahi hoti,
Vihaan:(smiles) main bhi yeh maanta hun,
Gunbala:(smiles)
Vivaan-vihaan:(normally) if I commit mistake, sorry.
Gunbala:(stand beside their husband and sidehug them)no you are right I am with u
Judge get back to their place.
Vivaan-vihaan:(smiles and hold hands)
Judges discussing.
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Back to vm hall
Family waiting.
Jaanvi: (smiles) yeh log kab ayenge.
Ranvir: ajayenge
Kasak vigun vibala arrive hiding something behind fake normally.
Family miss understood and consoles them
Vivaan-vihaan :(smiles and show trophy) tie hua our family.
Family congrats them.
Gunbala:(smiles) yeh sab hamare lp k bcoz hua.
Family :meaning
Madhu:(explains)
Family:(felt nice) weldone vivaan vihaan.
Vivaan-vihaan: (smiles) its not being thing I did
Jaanvi: dual treat Dena hoga couples.(smiles)future main makeup jewelry main help Karna experts:(smiles)
Vihaan:(smile and said) bahot sweet praise hogayi, rokjaiye otherwise dentist ke paas jana hoga humein force ke saath family ke. Aaplog aur wife's k praising se
Vivaan: agree even diebatic bhi hogi:(smiles)
Family( smiles) stop negative talks.
Vivaan-vihaan: okay.
They spends time
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In evening after dinner
In Maanak room!
Maansi:(smiles) aj ka din unforgettable hai.
Ronak:(smiles) agree.
Maansi:(smiles) I am sure main win ya lose karega, sochte the gunjan madhu.
Ronak:(smiles) agree.
Maansi:(smiles) aur ab relax hunge.
Ronak:(smiles) right ho.
Maansi:(smiles) very caring LPs is our vivaan vihaan.
Ronak:(smiles) agree.
Maansi:(smiles) I wish saare couples wise united rahe.
Ronak:(smiles)for sure hoga.
Maansi:(smiles) 3 days k baad ,awaited happiness bhi milna easy hojaiye
Ronak: yes right.
Maansi:(smiles) aj ka din dekhke hamara day yaad aya mujhe.
Ronak:(smiles) tumlog me defeat cancer ko kiya aur humne pray madam.let's rest
Maansi: okay
They take Rest
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In ranjan room!
Jaanvi(smiles) amazing dono sisters win hogaye.
Ranvir: agree. All bcoz of LPs.(smiles)
Jaanvi:(smiles) okay fine.
Ranvir:(smiles) tum dekhna ronak bhai ki baat truth hogi.
Jaanvi: (smiles) right saying.
Ranvir:(smiles) healthy girls ayengi.
Jaanvi:(smiles) healthy boys ayenge.
Ranvir:(smiles) debate chodte hain, future main dekhte hain best.
Jaanvi: (smiles) agree.
Ranvir: very good.
Jaanvi: anyways makeover aata hai tumhe: (smiles)like makeup jewelry wearing
Ranvir:(smiles) why not.
Jaanvi:(smiles) done tum mere makeup artist.baby shower day ke.
Ranvir:(smiles)only jewelry main help karunga. Painting main zero tha main.
Jaanvi:(smiles) kab?
Ranvir: school main.
Jaanvi: okay theek hai jewelry main help kardo.
Ranvir:(smiles) okay thanks for saving me from making u jokerr.
Jaanvi:(smiles) welcome
They take rest
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In vigun room!
Gunjan:(smiles) thank you vivaan.tumhare aur vihaan k bcoz , hum win hosake.
Vivaan:(smiles) welcome, humne try kiya only, win self hard work se hue tumlog.
Gunjan:(smiles) 1 work karte hain hum, 3 babies KO bolenge, aur woh log decide karenge.
Vivaan:(smiles) they will supports us.
Gunjan: why not us.
Vivaan: beautiful nieces aur daughter hogi:(smiles) always se rule raha yeh.
Gunjan:(smiles) good looking nephews aur son hoga,(smiles)
Vivaan:(smiles) agree hojao better hoga.
Gunjan:(smiles) tum lawyer ho, but main judge nahi hun. Jo convince karne lagre ho.
Vivaan:(smiles)loving couples to hain.friends k baad
Gunjan:(smiles) yes hain.
Vivaan:(smiles) then yeh baat main agree ho.
Gunjan:(smiles) sorry agree nahi hungi.
Vivaan:(smiles) as u wish.
Gunjan: thankyou:(smiles)
Vivaan:(smiles) welcome.
Gunjan: let's rest
Vivaan: okay
They take rest
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In vibala room!
Madhu:(in mind) god plz humein 1yr se pehle, baby se bless mat Karna,
Vihaan:(smiles) kahan lost ho madhu?
Madhu:(smiles) sorry but cousins hoke achcha tuning hai, vivaan jiju aur tum main.
Vihaan:(smiles) its OK thank you.
Madhu:(smiles) welcome.
Vihaan:(smiles) tuning gunjan bhabhi aur tum main bhi achchi hai, mujhe alone KO laga tum fail hogi.
Madhu:(smiles) thank you its OK.
Vihaan:(smiles) welcome,
Madhu:(smiles) aur kisko nahi laga tha.
Vihaan: vivaan bhai KO laga hoga tumsisters win karoge, so mujhe wait karne kaha.
Madhu:(smiles) nice.
Vihaan:(smiles) tum reality main cricket match ho.
Madhu: meaning?
Vihaan:(smiles) win hogi ya lose karogi, nahi bolsakte.
Madhu:(smiles) okay fine.
Vihaan:(smiles) samjho ab.
Madhu: yes
Vihaan: let's rest
They take rest.


Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATES DEAR. LOVED THEM. SORRY FOR LATE COMMENTING DEAR. SOME HEALTH PROBLEM WAS THERE. COMING TO UPDATES BOTH R JUST SUPERB AND MINDBLOWING. LOVED THE WHOLE COMPETITION PART. VERY WELL WRITTEN BY U ALL ROUNDS. SO BOTH SIS PARTICIPATED IN IT AND WITH THEIR TALENTED PARTNERS BOTH WIN AWESOME IT IS. LOVES GUNJAN CARING NATURE FOR HER SASU MAAS. LOVES CUTE FIGHT BETWEEN RANJAN OVER BABY BOY OR GIRL. NOW I THINK SOON MADHU WILL BE PREGNANT.OVERALL VERY GOOD UPDATES. NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Part 337
In hall family spending time. After breakfast
Maanvi: Madhu, two days se tense lagra ho, vihaan irritate Kara kya?
Vihaan:(madeface) mera name vihaan hai toofan nahi, Jo irrite kardun.
Madhu:(smiles) actually,competetion remember kar rahi hun, win Karna tough tha 1 ka bhi, hum sisters win kardiye
Family smiles.
Madhu:(smiles) yeh sab vivaan jiju k bcoz possible hua, otherwise humdono ghar main rehte the, (to vivaan)thankyou for convincing.
Vivaan:(smiles) its OK, otherwise siblings competetion hota toh main saath rehta, gunjan agree nahi hotitoh.
Gunjan:(felt nice)
Madhu:(smiles) I will remember to invite u.
Vivaan:(smiles)
Jeevika: final process k liye next kab jaana hai vivaan,
Vivaan:(smiles) Monday jaana hai.
Gunjan:(smiles)
Jaanvi:(smiles)phir kuch months baad little vivaan ayega gunjan ka.
Gunjan:(get shy)
Ranvir:(smiles) jaanvi dear, at least now think in your brother favor and say little gunjan ayegi vivaan ki.after your sisters
Vivaan:(smiles)
Someone:(comes and hug him from behind and complaining crying) papa school k teaser irritater student ko jail bhejto aake,(bitween cryingtelling) mujhe aur siblings ko irritate karte hain.
Vivaan(get emotional pull her in hug and said) okay aap rona band karo gun papa ko aap happy dekhna achcha lagta sad pating her back)
Family:(get amaze cough)
Vivaan:(comes to reality)kuch ask Kar rahe the aaplog mujhse.
Vihaan:(smiles) vivaan bhai, not fair, family KO chance Dena tha baby name searching ka , khud hi ready nahi karna tha name.
Ranvir: kash hum 2 brothers KO name miljate, jaanvi KO mila
Ronak:(smiles)agree.
Vivaan:(smile a bit)
Madhu:(smiles) choice achchi hai vivaan jiju.
Vihaan:(smiles and ask) Gunjan bhabhi aap bhi sochke k rakho OK. Main work sochliya
Gunjan:(smiles)
Vivaan:(smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles looking ronak ranvir) two angels apne papa's KO join karenge same work main, but hamari story different hogi,
Vivaan:(smiles)meaning
Vihaan: (smiles)rock star banaonga main third baby as boy arrive ho toh aur launch karunga uske music's.
Vivaan:(smiles) done, main fourth baby as boy aya toh, usko calm lawyer banaunga.
Family smiles.
Vihaan:(smiles)sure
Maansi-jaanvi: fourth baby ara kya? Jo adoption, phir profession ki baat kar rahe ho.
Family felt nice
Vihaan:(smiles)mujhe bhi laga competetion ke baad k evening main madhu k prank se,thank god aisa nahi hai aur kuch years tak nahi ho,by the way kabhi single Sim phone main dual Sim note kya.?Humlog each other ko handle karte hain toughly, lookalike ko kya handle karenge along each other.(laugh)
Family get shock on his desicion left
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in baby room!
Foursome girls spending time.
Jaanvi: madhu jab tumlog ka baby on the way hoga na uske aane tak vihaan KO hoga jaise ranvir KO hua.
Madhu: ranvir jiju aur vihaan different log hai jaanvi di.(smiles) aaplog tension chodiye. Pray Karo, koi din innocent ko early aane se hamare hands se death nahi mile.
Gunjan: (smiles) don't worry,
Madhu:(smiles) okay.
Sehgal sisters:(with smiles) anyways gunjan, vivaan ka decided name achcha hai haina?
Gunjan:(smiles) right saying.
Sehgal sisters: convince karalo vivaan KO k boy ayega?
Gunjan:(smiles) aapka bhai lawyer hai, convince Karna jaanta hai, hona nahi.
Vivaan:(arrive and intrupt) main convince hota hun, tum late convince hoti ho.
Ronak-ranvir:(arrives with juice)
Sehgal sisters:(take juice)thankyou.
Vihaan:(arrives with guitar) music sunoge aaplog?
Gunjan: kasak KO bolati hun(text kasak)
Kasak:(arrive) kya help chahiye gunjan di
Gunjan: sit with us and listen music.vihaan
Kasak:(sat with them)
Vihaan:(playing guitar)
Youngsters enjoy it.
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Backyard.
Virman virika sitting
Maanvi:(sadly) oh god, hamari without thinking others and madhu,talking habit kyun ayi vihaan main.?
Virat: agree.
Virika: don't worry, change hoga vihaan.tumlog bhi change hue.(smiles)
Virman:(smile a bit) dekhna hai.training toh waste gayi.
Virika: dont worry. Anyways vihaan ka idea best tha.
Virman: vivaan ka bhi best idea tha.(smiles)vivaan ka new form cute tha.(smiles)

Maanvi: itna saal vivaan k saath rehke bhi vihaan boring Raha.(smiles) relations value hai hi nahi, as madhu said, kahin hum wrong baby KO toh nahi ladiye.
Virat:(laugh) what a thought.
Viren: maanvi don't worry apna hi hai.
Maanvi: online check karte hain usdin fire toh nahi hogaya.
Virat:(smiles) very funny.
Jeevika: don't worry vihaan opposite bolne karnewala hai:(smiles)
They spend times
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Back to babyroom!
Everyone enjoy music.
Vihaan:(smiles)happy now?
Maansi: (normally)vihaan , baby upset hai tumse,
Vihaan:(smiles) kyun 1 song sunaya isliye.
Jaanvi: tum babies KO like nahi karte iisliye. Sunke, ek aur sibling nahi wish karke late isliye.
Ronak-ranvir: don't be scare
Vihaan:(changetopic)abhi happy karta hun(bend down) hello bAbies, woh baat apke liye nahi thi. We all love u,Sorry if u got hurt. 1 time aaplog ajao, phir 3rd new baby aate uske saath roaming karenge, secret hoga,
Vigun:(smiles)
Ranjan-maanak: (smiles) its OK.bolre hain.
Vihaan:(smiles) thanks.
Vivaan: pehle main lejaunga elder hun tujhse.
Ronak-ranvir: sorry vivaan vihaan, 1 badepapa aur 1 chachu pehle lejainge:)smiles)
Vivaan-vihaan:(smiles)its OK.
Ronak-ranvir: thanks: (smiles) thank you.
Maansi-jaanvi: woh goodlooking hero alike grow hoke humein first drive pe lejinge.(smiles)mamma,maasis,mamis KO. Kyun gunjan madhu?
Madhu:(taunt looking vihaan) excepted gunjan maasi., hum three maasis.
Ranjan Maanak vigun felt bad
Vihaan:(angrily butsmiles) madhu, behave yourself.
Vivaan:(with smiles) calm down guys
Gunjan:(comfort her) madhu. No.
Jaanvi: gunjan bhi maasi banegi:(smiles)
Vihaan:
Madhu:(went from their)
Vihaan:(went as well)
Triocouples talks
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In lunch
Family and kasak eating.
Gunjan: I am glad tum comfortable ho kasak:(smiles)
Kasak:(smiles) I never thought itni early comfortable hojaungi, aaplog amazing family members ho isliye comfortable hogayi main, thank you.
Family: welcome:(smiles)
Madhu:(in mind) I am sure jaise socha waisa karenge god.(smiles)
Vihaan:(in mind) madhu sudden yeh sab talk kyun kar rahi ho, ?
Jaanvi:(smiles) humlog bs abhi nahi karsakte kya?
Elders: 3 months aur wait Karo :(smiles) uske baad bs hoga.
Jaanvi:(smiles) okay fine.
Elders: tumdono Jo chahiye waisa karenge.
Vihaan:(smiles) brothers entry chahte hogi, family think for them.
Family smiles
Vivaan:(smiles)favorite movie tvshow hero's KO boladein kya?
Jaanvi:(smiles) nice idea.
Ranvir:(smiles) humlog hero se less kya?
Maansi: right saying.(smiles)
Family eat and left
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In VM play ground.
Vihaan play basket ball with seriousness
Vivaan:(arrive their and join him)hi
Vihaan:(smiles) hi.
Vivaan:(smiles) angry ho kya? Football pe nikalre ho.
Vihaan:(stop playing) pata nahi kahan se madhu KO baby syndrome hogaya hai,? kabhi fake good news deti hai, aj taunt kar rahi thi indirectly.jealously hori hogi usko aap3 couples se, I can't help it,
Vivaan:(made him sat on bench sternly) stop it vihaan,
Vihaan: usko bhi bolo na, baby aane se hoga kya, ? uski bad acts KO compare karenge jaise mamma papa karte hain aur fight kardenge, milke rehna hoga nahi, jo ab hora hai humse. most important humko insult milegi, jaise mamma papa ki hoti hai main aur jaanvi di kuch karte toh aur guilty rehjate samajh aye tu. Hamara rift yAad haina
ViVaan:(normally) vihaan, jo bhi hua hum mein nahi hua only, parents k between hua hoga, phir bhi they wish for us and get us.yeh sab socha nahi hoga ,accept kare hunge. U to try and ready ho us time k liye. Aur sidhe decline mat Karo family ya madhu se.sad hunge
Vihaan:(smile abit) ok.
Vivaan:(smiles) lets go.
They went
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In evening after dinner.
In maanak room!
Maansi: I hope yeh topic tension create nahi karde.vihaan madhu main
Ronak:(smiles)don't worry, ranvir KO dekho hesitated tha, but news Milne k baad, happy karta hai rehta hai.
Maansi:(smiles) right saying.
Ronak:(smiles) I am sure vihaan madhu ki sTory waisi hogi.
Maansi: (smiles)aap ki baat right hojai.
Ronak:(smiles) don't worry.
Maansi: okay fine.(normally) mamma papa Ki death anniversary aari hai,(smiles) ranvir ka birthday bhi ara hai, Monday ko
Ronak:yaad hai: (smiles)
Maansi:(smiles) I hope dono hosake is time bhi.
Ronak:(smiles) jaanvi haina,possible kardegi.(emotionally in tears) usko parents blessing milenge chachu maasi se.
Maansi:(wipe his tears) ronak plz don't cry.
Ronak:(emotionally) pata hai, every birthday ki pehle ki night KO awake rehta tha. GIfts k liye.But mom dad k jaane k baad, woh excited ranvir bhi lost hogaya, agar woh nahi rehta toh main uske liye sorrows forget karke nahi rehta tha normally'
Maansi:(felt bad for them and cries more)
Ronak:(bit tongue and hug her carefully) sorry maansi,(get separate and wipe tears) mujhe khush rakhna chahiye tha, past books sad kardiye.
Maansi:(wipetears) isliye aap woh secrifice kare na.
Ronak:(smile a bit) yes.let's rest.
Maansi: okay
They take rest
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In ranjan room!
Ranvir:(watching calendar)
Jaanvi:(to baby) baby, aapko GPS soul realive k liye pray karne ka day aara,aur thank you bhi karne ka day hai bcoz the brinngs your papa that day. For us, don't forget ok(massage her tummy)
Ranvir:(smile answer as baby) okay mamma.
Jaanvi:(smiles) very bad. Koi intrupt karta hai?
Ranvir:(smiles) main lp aur papa hun.two Supergirl's ka
Jaanvi:(smiles) r u ready for birthday?
Ranvir:(smile a bit) pata nahi JP.
Jaanvi:(normally) hamari talk bhulgaye kya?
Ranvir: (normally) yaad hai.
Jaanvi: ready raho then.
Ranvir:(normally ) try karunga.but plz chef mat bana tum.
Jaanvi: okay try karungi.
Ranvir:(madeface) main room arrest karunlunga advance main tumhare saath.
Jaanvi:(smiles) baby k samne careful talk Karo, otherwise tumhe Lock karega.
Ranvir:(act to be scare) sorry JP and baby. Don't lock me, I am not bad
Jaanvi:(laugh)
Ranvir:(smile a bit) very funny.
Jaanvi: let's rest.
Ranvir: okay.
They take rest.
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In vigun room!
Gunjan:(normally) sudden vihaan madhu main kya hora hai? Vivaan.
Vivaan:(normally) nothinghappened,humse Jo strength madhu main aari, vihaan main strength nahi aari.kuch dounts hai.
Gunjan:(normally) are u sure?ab kya hoga
Vivaan: don't worry, ek idea hai mere paas, uske baad sab OK hoga.
Gunjan: kaisa idea.
Vivaan: dekhte jao mera kkamal(smiles)
Gunjan:(smiles)tumhe naHi hota doubt's.
Vivaan:(smiles) no.aur tumhe?
Gunjan: no:(smiles)
Vivaan:(smiles) good.
Gunjan:(smiles) apointment liye tum ?
Vivaan:(smiles) don't worry hogaya appointment.
Gunjan:(smiles) nice humdono aur driver jayenge.
Vivaan:(smiles) why driver,?why not me?
Gunjan:(smiles)tumhara pass full day time kahan hoga?
Vivaan:(smiles) you don't worry hum saath jayenge. Adjust hoga.
Gunjan:(smiles) okay fine.
Vivaan: rest karte hain.
Gunjan:(smiles) okay.
They take rest
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In vibala room!
Vihaan:(smiles) family ready hogi, bs main entry k liye?
Madhu:(smiles) maybe yes
Vihaan:(smiles) thank god, aise sab yes Karen.
Madhu:(smiles) sorry aj k liye?
Vihaan:(smiles) its OK I am sorry to.
Madhu: (smiles) it's OK.
Vihaan:(hesitately) anyways tumhe lagra hai kya, k tum.I mean hum
Madhu:(smiles) nahi.
Vihaan: (smiles) okay.
Madhu:(smiles) pata nahi hum each other k look alike kaise jhelenge.?
Vihaan:(smiles) baad ki baat hai woh, abhi chachu chachi turn hone ka time aara hai.
Madhu:(take revenge) right saying mausAji.
Vihaan:(madeface) main vihaan chachu turn hunga ya vihaanchachumamu. Bcoz gunjan bhabhi third ssister hai.
Madhu:(smiles) Mr vihaanchachu mamu bade smArt ho tum, mere aur third se change karne chale the, khudka relation change hua toh ,relation wiki open kardiye.
Vihaan:(smiles)madhupartner, excitement main hogayi mujhse gadbad. Sorry.
Madhu:(smiles) okay fine.don't forget.
Vihaan: sure:(smiles)
They take rest.



Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago
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Awesome updates dear.
Loved them.
Both updates r just superb.
Now update soon dear.
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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. IT WAS REALLY NYC UPDATE. LOVES COUPLE SCENES VERY MUCH. A ARGUMENT HAPPENED BETWEEN VIBALA BUT FINALLY IT IS SOLVED. I THINK MADHU IS PREGNANT THAT IS Y SHE IS BEHAVING STRANGE. NOW RANVEER B'DAY IS COMING.EXCITED FOR IT. SO UPDATE IT SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Part 338
In VM hall afterbreakfast
Ranjan unborn is 17 week begin b4,Maanak unborn 17week begin after
Vigun kasak has went hospital.
Maansi is sad for ronak ranvir from Saturday night.
Ranvir- jaanvi( notice her hold her hand together) what happened? Dull ho aap.
Ronak:(understood and change topic) ranvir ka birthday aara hai second time bhi cake prepare nahi karsakegi main stop kara isliye sad hai.
Family smiles.
Maansi:(support him) pehle ranvir KO nahi pasnd tha isliye saath diya uska cakebake nahi kiya tha jaanvi KO manage karne diya , ab toh aisa nahi but aap ROK re hain jaanvi KO support karne main first hogaye, mujhe support karne main last hogaye.(cross hands)
Ranvir:(smiles) its OK, maansi bhabhi, baby KO aane dijiye, phir everyday birthday cake bake kariye sabke liye, meri liye. Sad nahi Hui() family bhi object nahi karegi, ronak bhai KO main store room arrest karunga.(make her smiles) u believe me.right?
Maansi:(smiles)
Family smiles
Ronak:(madeface) main kal se samjhaya toh nahi hua effect, ranvir k bolte hogaya effect not fair.
Ranvir:(smiles) strictly bola hoga aapne,? With love nahi bola hoga.
Sehgal sisters(smiles) relax ho,family aur angels kya sochenge, papa apne bade bhai ki respect aur choote bhai KO nahi chahte.
Ronak-ranvir: (smiles) they smart enough to understand, cute fight thi, dishum dishum nahi hai.until u make story.
Sehgal sisters:(made face) what main aur story.
Family smiles.
Sehgal brothers: yes u and story.
Jeemaan: us time hum cake bake karenge.
Ronak:(smiles) ab anger chodo plz.
Maansi:(smiles)
Vihaan: jaanvi di KO cakebaking kab ayi.(get amaze)cooking learn kar rahe the
Ranvir:(smiles) magic hoga.
Vihaan: madhu dekho aur learn Karo. Mujhe bake kiya tha outdoor rokh ke cake nahi bake kiya
Madhu: buddhu vihaan humlog family + couple vocation par the tumhare birthday . almond powder Lana hoga tumhare liye normal water band almond mixed water and food start tumhara
Vihaan:(smiles)big heart wala hun, tumhe bhi dunga.
Madhu:(smiles and cross hands) no thank you tumhara last name aur family enough hai mere liye.
Vihaan: record karlo, future main remember karne.(smiles)
Madhu:(smiles) no need.
Family smiles.
Vibala: main hospital main company Dene:(smiles)
Family :OK
Vibala went
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In hospital
Vigun watching baby disk and their talk video and on his phone.
Gunjan:(smiles) tum kitne bade hurry master ho vihaan se bhi, disk ki photo leliya tumne.very funny
Vivaan:(smiles) first time aisa chance mila tha na.future main confuse rahunga main. SG time par. Anyways cute hai abhi se.
Gunjan: like u.
Vivaan: like u .
Gunjan: he will be like u.
Vivaan: she will be like u,(show disk photo0 dekho
They keep debating
Vibala:(arrive) calm down hospital hai.
Vigun:(get nice surprise) tumlog yahan.
Vibala: aaplog kuch hrs bore rahoge, isliye entertain karne aye but lagta hai jaana hoga:(turn to leave)
Vivaan:(smile) rokjao guys, apne third nephew niece KO dekho.(gave phone)
Vibala:(sees video and listen vigun convo with it)wow how small it is. Aj confirm hoga kya?gn.
Vigun:(smiles) 10 ya 12 days aur wait Karna hoga.
Vibala :OK.
Someone baby arrive in the world and cries.
Vigun(went to there and congrats) congrats. V r Mr and Mrs vivaan vadera
Someone:(smiles) thank you.(notice nurse) my wife is OK?
Nurse (bring baby) mother OK hai aapki baby bhi.
Someone:(play with baby and tell) sorry to you baby ten yrs b4 aapko aur mom KO care nahi diya, aapne us job dreams KO fulfill karne main,phir bhi aap forgive kare ten yrs after agaye thankyou.
Baby smiles
Vigun:(gets sad) hum dekhe baby KO.
Someone:(gave them)
Vigun play with baby.
Madhu:(join them)
Vihaan:(get effected sat were vigun was sitting with him) kitne hogaye wedding KO.first baby kab aya tha.?
Someone: (normally slowtone)11 yrs hogaye, wedding k one yrs complete hone se b4 aara tha, but main Jo milra tha nahi apna ya aur Jo time lera tha Milne main usmain busy hogaya. I wish KO person yeh nahi kare Jo main Kara. Secrifice kardiya wife se.
Vihaan: go and see.
Baby cries.
Someone:(get up and went running to take baby and with him)
Vihaan:(rest his head on chair stands close eyes)
Madhu:(notice) kya hua vihaan?
Vihaan:(come to reality) nothing.
Vigun:(comeback) so sad story of them,(smiles) thank god fine hogaya.
Vihaan:(normally) agree.
Vivaan: thank god di's and jiju's se yeh happiness second first time far nahi Hui, otherwise each other KO nahi handle karsakte the.(smiles)
Gunjan:(normally) like us.
Madhu:(smiles) woh siblings ko milne wala hai,10 ya 12 day main result milnewala hai aapdono ko why r u sad?
Vivaan:(smiles) right saying.
Vihaan:(smiles) aaplog k jaate , comedy Hui ghar main ronak bhai ranvir bhai main Di's main.
Madhu:(smiles) right saying.
Vigun:(smiles) I am sure vihaan madhu main bhi Hui hogi.
Madhu: right saying.:(smiles) vihaan starts first.
Madhu:(smiles) anyways gunjan di, aapko baby boy as lawyer dream nahi aata? Jaise hamare bhai ko aya tha..
Gunjan:(get shy) hhmm.
Vihaan: I think 3 couples main tie hoga, triple couple KO twins milenge:(smiles)god denge
Madhu:(smiles) right saying.
Vigun:(hold their siblings ears) no masti.
Vibala:(smiles) sorry sorry.
Vigun:(smiles)
They talk
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Back to VM babyroom!
Sehgal sister resting and doing vegetable cutting happily.
Sehgalbrothers(smiles) let us cut it, u will become tired.
Sehgalsisters:(smiles) no.
Sehgal brothers: why no.
Sehgalsisters: first time, three month k baad work mila nahi chodunge:(smiles)
Sehgal brothers:(smiles) not fair.
Jaanvi:(normally)anyways rp tumhe baby se problem toh nahi haina first day se, jaise vihaan KO hai. First day scare the bhi
Maanak:(smiles) of course nahi hogi.
Virman virika (arrives overhear it)
Ranvir:(normally)lie nahi karunga, hui problem. In fact terminate ka socha tumhare mood swing dekhke.
Virika virman maanak get shock.
Jaanvi:(look him with shock stop working tears coming)kya? meaning tum adjustment kar rahe ho.
Ranvir:(hold her hands) no ,I love u both, jaise mujhe tumhari important aur lov day by day hua waise hua love is baby se day by day as with u,
Jaanvi:(getshock)
Virat:(understood his situation) jaanvi, hum mens na stupid hote hai, Jo tum jaise gift ko easy lete, actually blind number one hote, love heart main rehta but samajh nahi aatA, fast, isliye turn hojate aur aisi baat sochte hain, forgetit forgive him jaise mamma se karaya tumne mujhe.
Jaanvi:(wipe tears with smile) its OK.rp.
Virat: me to sorry.(smiles and hug her)
Virika maanvi maanak smiles.
Ranvir:(keep hand on her tummy close eyes with tears)super daughter,sorry,aap aake 24 hrs disturb Karo, but papa love nahi karte mat understand karna, plz:(felt movement) aapne forgive thank you so much baby.
Virika virman maanak:(smiles)
Jaanvi:(smiles) superson hai woh.
Ranvir:(smiles) ek condition pe agree hunga main.
Jaanvi:(missunderstood) shut up rp. Family hai.
Ranvir:(smiles) mamma, main vegetable cut karunga toh , taste main effect hoga kya iif hoga toh main eat karunga, jaanvi KO boliye cutting chance Dene k liye.
Ronak: maansi KO bhi.
Sehgalsisters: (to their lps)hum cut karenge aaplog eat karo.
Viren:(smiles) ronak ranvir rehne do beta,jab tak complete nahi karenge, rokenge nahi.
Virat:(smiles) mamma maassi k habits hai.
Sehgalsisters: papa ke bhi:(smiles)
Viren:(smiles)okay okay
Foursome couple spend times
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Back to VM hall after lunch.
Family sitting and talking.
Gunjan comes after dropping kasak to guestroom!
Vivaan:(stopping his mother) mamma , 2didis KO bhaiya KO eat karaiye,
Jeevika:(smiles take another bite) gunjan, tum bhi khao.(made her eat)
Vivaan:(try to ask) main jaun ab strong hogayahun.gunjan agayi na usko strong Karo aap as u.
Jeevika:(smiles) dono eat Karo.
Vivaan:(notice vihaan) mamma vihaan KO eat karado aap,(get funny with her) akhir bhai hai hum, blood relation hai hamara.
Maanvi:(smiles to herself) poor vivaan
Virat: (to himself) maasi fan
Jeevika:(smiles) tumhe ,gunjan vihaan madhu company desakte, don't worry.ajao vihaan madhu.
Vibala arrive and eat
Vihaan:(smiles) indirectly no bolre hain, good boy hona aap waise rehke eat karo.
Vivaan:(madeface) tum bhi toh good bhai bano.good boy to ho hi.save Karo jaise every problem se large ho.
Vihaan:(smiles) yeh sweet problem hai, lift kariye
Vivaan:atleat god KO bolo mujhe badepapa banane k liye:(smiles)tumlog k instead help karegakaregi
Vibala:(smiles) eat first
Vivaan:(smiles) mujhe lagra hai main vihaan tum main ho.
Vihaan:(smiles) same here.
Madhu: vihaan piche padhta hai aap nahi:(smiles)
Vihaan:(madefaces) tumse permission leke chahun ya fight karunga kya? Brothers itni fightkarte hi.
Vivaan:(smiles) both of u is right
Madhu:(smiles).
Vihaan:(smiles) stop doing tie my bhai.
Vivaan: both of your views and both of u I love. Kyakarun main.?
Vibala: right saying:(2gether) woh video show kiya?
Vigun:(get shy) no.
Vihaan:(take his phone and show to family) dekhiye I mean suniye parents and baby talk.
Everyone felt nice.
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In backyard.
Ronak ranvir sitting.
Ronak: sab clear rehna couple main is good thing ranvir, but hurting matter forget karne chahiye in condition main repeat nahi. Sab the managekare otherwise maansi types breakdown hoti woh.
Ranvir:(smiles) yes ronak bhai. I will remember this, maansi bhabhi he babyrelate dream dekha kya Jo sad the ya koi aur baat thi.
Ronak:(normally) humlog tumhare birthday ki talk kar rahe the aur main past main gaya without realize her state, aur woh humdono ke liye cry Kari.
Ranvir:(normally) next time careful rahenge hum,
They went from there.
Gunbala arrive
Gunjan: kya amazing day tha na.
Madhu:right(show photo) gunjan di, yeh photo dekha aap dono kya cute large ho baby k saath.
Gunjan:(look picture and smiles) right saying.
Madhu:(smiles) bahot jald triples cryings sune ayegi.
Gunjan:(smiles) ayega.
They laugh and talk
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In evening
In guest room!
Kasak get up to join family.
Vigun:(come with plates) its OK aj yahin eat Karo.
Kasak: aaplogne formality kyun ki, servants se send Karna tha.
Gunjan:(gave her food) aj hum 3 eat karte hain kal ya next kal family k saath, main sister manti hun tumhe formality kya baat ki?(to him) kyun vivaan.?
Vivaan:(smiles) right saying.
Kasak:(smiles) sorry gunjan di.
Gunjan: its OK:(smiles) I hope tumhe change diet se problem nahi hai.
Kasak:(smiles) no its fine, only bad feel hora aaplog mere sath yeh eat kar rahe ho.
Gunjan:(smiles) its ok, tum hamare liye big thing kar rahi ho, toh mujhe bhi kuch karna chahiye na.
Kasak:(smiles) its nice aap mujhe company dere hain vivaanji aapko.
gunjan: (smiles)right saying.
Vivaan:(smiles) tum chaho toh jiju ya bhai bolo mujhe, jaise gunjan KO di bolti ho, but no vivaanji plz.
Gunjan:(smiles) ya humdono KO name se bolo as friend, hesitate hoti ho.no force
Kasak:(smiles) thank you.both of u.
Vigun:(smiles) welcome kasak.
They went
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In maanak room!
Maansi:(smiles) I am happy ranvir jaanvi main problem nahi Hui.
Ronak:(normally) phir bhi hamara careful rehna important wife aur baby k liye.
Maansi:(smiles) aaplog humein hurt nahi karsakte.
Ronak:(normally) kal tumne cry toh kiya mere bcoz.
Maansi:(smiles) aapno k liye hurt hota haina ronak, apno k bcoz nahi.
Ronak:(smiles) right saying.
Maansi: then don't separate me.
Ronak:(smiles) tumhare separate karke alive rehna possible nahi hai.
Maansi:(smiles) same here.
Ronak: baby ka name kyun nahi bolti then?
Maansi:(smiles) rule hai that's y.
Ronak:(smiles) I was thinking, hum baby's aane k baad shift hojaiye, apna that hoga toh baby's k in front speechless nahi hunge, mgp k ghar kyun hai hum ask kare toh. Baby's KO tease karenge world.mode nahi last time types
Maansi:(smiles) I am with u.
Ronak:(smiles) thank you.
Maansi:(smiles) welcome.
Ronak: let's rest.
Maansi:(smiles) OK
They take rest
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In ranjan room!
Ranvir:(smiles) JP tumne real main forgive kiya na mujhe?
Jaanvi:(smiles) yes, bcoz main bhi toh same step Sochi thi mood swing se irritated home karke.
Ranvir: (smiles) I am glad waisa kuch nahi hua, tumlog ho mere sath.
JaAnvi: main thi ... Main hun aur rahungi always.along baby.(smiles)
Ranvir:(smiles) thanks.
Jaanvi:welcome, (normally ) I hope papa aur tumhare types vihaan impotence se new happiness.
Ranvir:(smiles) don't worry hoga, aur hamare types wife aur baby care karte rahega jaise last time problem main Kara tha.
Jaanvi:(madeface) strick care nahi kare toh better hai.
Ranvir:(smiles) meri talk hori ya mere bhai ki.
Jaanvi: family ki bhi.
Ranvir:(smiles) we love u that's y.OK.
Jaanvi:(smiles) same here.
Ranvir:(smiles) kya way hai l confession ka?
Jaanvi: maine nahi Kara l confession.
Ranvir:(smiles) let's rest.
Jaanvi: okay fine.
They take rest
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In vigun room
Gunjan: I can't believe hamari life main change aara hai.
Vivaan:(smile s) sab same hoga, bas new level main jayenge humlog.at least main same rahunga, family aur tumne chahne wala
Gunjan:(smiles)me to.
Vivaan:(smiles) promise.
Gunjan:(smiles) yes.
Vivaan:(smiles) thank you.
Gunjan:(smiles) welcome.
Vivaan:(smiles) ab bhi name hide karogi? Jaise angels ka name hide kar rahii ho?
Gunjan:(smiles) yes.
Vivaan:(smiles)don't forget, friendship,love,couple relation hai hamare.
Gunjan:(smiiles) yaad hai, but hum different team main hai.
Vivaan:(made fake sad face) not fair.
Gunjan:(smiles) Jo bhi samjho.
Vivaan:(smiles) stop changing, anyways madhu ne good news di kya unke baby ki tumhe.?
Gunjan:(get shock ) kya bolre ho tum.
Vivaan: yaad hai one time jaanvi di ki maasi chachu se convo ki baat ki family se(smiles) so mujhe laga madhu bhi.
Gunjan:(smiles) nahi toh.
Vivaan:(smiles) amazing day hoga bhi.
Gunjan:(smiles) agree let's rest
Vivaan:(smiles) OK
They take rest
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In vibala room!
Vihaan:(is thinking that person talk)
Madhu:(notice) vihaan, kya hua?
Vihaan:(smile a bit) nothing.
Madhu:(smiles) birthday par jaise bolre the woh honewala hai, neck shoulders strong karlo.triple angel sit karenge.
Vihaan:(smiles) already hain. Test drive karogi full cg main
Madhu:(madefaces) moody horse par nahi sit Karna mujhe, anger main throw kiya toh.?
Vihaan:(madeface) how rude.
Madhu:(smiles) reality hai.
Vihaan:(smiles) then theek hai angels ka good kar rahi nahi baitke.
Madhu:madefaces) main fat hun according to u.
Vihaan:(smiles) yes.
Madhu:(madeface) dekhnewale ki eyesight fat hai ,main nahi hun.
Vihaan:(madeface) very rude then me your eyesight is.
Madhu:(smiles) rest karte hain very best hoga, otherwise boxing se pyari family disturb hogi.
Vihaan: okay
They take rest






Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago

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