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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Part 323
In VM
family breakfast
Ranjan:(unborn baby) 13week began b4 ,maanak: (unborns) 13week begin after.
Virika:(in mind) Jo hamare saath hua, hamare bachchon ke saath kyun hora hai bhagwan.
Vigun:(get up take elders blessing) hum chalte hain.
Vibala:(get up) hum bhi challenge.
Vivaan: kal evening aye the advance formalities karne hum 4 gaye toh aj rehne do.
Gunjan: madhu, tum bhi nahi rahi toh mamma maasi chachi ko help kaun karega small works main, jaanvi di maansi di rest chodke help karnelagenge, yehbetter hai yahin raho tum.unse talk bhi karo
Jaanvi-maansi: (smiles)
Madhu:(smiles) ok
Vihaan: koi baat nahi main ajaunga.(smiles)maasi badepapa boliye. Woh competition kya? jahan judge nahi ho?:
Family nod in disbelief.
Vigun: side koi ek ke loge, humdono main koi alone hoga badfeel,madhu nahi asakti, tum bhi nahi aao
Vihaan:(smiles) okay fine
Vigunleft
Jeevika: I hope sab theek ho woh dono k saath:(get sad)
Maanvi: of course hoga di.
Vihaan: eveyone knows,?vivaan bhaiya aur gunjan bhabhi expert hai problemfix karne main baaki siblings type:(smiles for them)don't worry
) win karenge.
Family agree
Ranjan-maanak-vibala went to backyard and family in hall
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In hospitalroom!
Doctor:(going to start procedure) process start karungi,3 se 1 tak count karlijiye dono ok? Mrs gunjan vadera.
Vivaan:(hold her in visible fear)3
Gunjan:(smiles) 2
Vivaan:(chold her hand tightly)1.carefull plz
Doctor:(inject her and smiles)nothing will happened
Gunjan:(nod in amazementfelt pain shout ) aahh
Vivaan:(shout as he get injection) aahh
Gunjan:(control her fear and laugh together)
Doctor:(laugh and said) Mrs gunjan vadera aap lucky ho your husband loves u: deeplovers couple ho pain feel karnewale, lunch ke baad ghar jaana aap
Vigun:(smiles)ok
Doctor:(whisper to him)kuch side effect hunge make her rest and eat well.(went)
Vivaan:(listen but smilesfor gunjan)ok
Gunjan: promote honewaLe ho mamus ka aur aise reaction :(laugh)angels kya sochenge vivaan mamu big lawyer hoke ,choote baby types dartehai
Vivaan:(control his emotion setting hair)hota hai, gunjanji,apne superman se lawyer se leke har professional human hote first,heart hota hai, so yeh sab bhi hota humko ok., Soham ke comics dekho kabhi kabhi, reality main common man hote, pata lagega.
Gunjan:(with love)I know that Vivaan ji:(normally)doctor ne kya kaha
Vivaan:(smiles for her lies crossing finger) good,(normally) mujhe olden days bossy husband banna hoga:(smiles)bas
Gunjan:(smiles) family ke samne kaise banoge bossy husband. Scold hojaoge
Vivaan:(smiles for her) wait and watch ok
Gunjan:(smiles) ok
Vivaan:(With fakeSmiles shake hands)
Gunjan:(laugh and say) vivaan jab sisters aur hamara baby aanewale hoga na, tab aise shout mat Karna like today, Doctor admit karenge tumhe
Vivaan:(smile act as no idea) main kab shout Kara? Maine toh nahi suna.
Gunjan:(show phone recording) yeh dekho.
Vivaan:(smiles fakely offering) ice creams eating ya lunch karen outdoor,
Gunjan:(fakesternly) ek lawyer ki wife ko bribe karta hai koi? Very bad. Pata nahi not good its.
Vivaan:(fakesmiles) i am ready stuck karo khushi se, meri detective wife apni team ke saath nikal degi mujhe.
Gunjan:(smiles) really nikal sakti hai tumhari wife
Vivaan:(smiles) yes yes, topic bolna start karunga toh sunte sunte, tvshows types leap ayenge. Topic end nahi hoga I guarantee.
Gunjan:(smiles) same here.
The keep talking like friend about their lp
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In backyard
Ranjan-maanak talking about vigun
Vibala (bring juice for maansi-jaanvi) juice for u. My d
Jaanvi-maansi: (sadly)hamara mode nahi hai.
Vihaan:(fakelylaugh) let me complete my sentence,
Jaanvi-maansi:(madeface) bolo
vihaan:(smiles) mamu's ki angels k liye. Juice finish karke properly energy se god ko bologi hamara bodyguard bhai ya behen send kardo,(sign toward them) jaise hamari mamma and papa ke liye kiya send kiya
Ranvir-ronak: (smiles) agree with vihaan
Jaanvi: very funny logic(smiles and finish juice)
Maansi:(as well finish) nice bhi
Vihaan:(take glass back). Thank you.
Madhu:(smiles) angels aur mamma's ko kya eat karne hai?
Jaanvi-maansi: I am fine by this juice.
Vibala:ok(smiles and went)time spend karo aap couples.(left)
Ranjan-maanak:(nod in disbelieve)
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after lunch In VM
Family talking
Vigun:(enters)
Family gether and ask about medication
Vivaan:(Make her sat fakely smiling and telling) mamma aaplog ko aap jaisi beti milli but bahu nahi mili hai, first session main Dari thi:(sign madhu to take gunjan)
Jeevika:(smiles understood him) nexttime decide.Mat karo vivaan hamara relation.ok,
Vivaan:(hold ears)ok:(hug her and sobbing)
Madhu:(take gunjan away and went in)
Vihaan:(felt bad for his bhai bhabhi wipe tears which is coming)
Jeevika:(get worried and pat him incuraging him) sab theek hojaiga vivaan. Nahi ro,
Vivaan:(control himself smiles) main jaata hun, meeting hai.
Vihaan:(lies)vivaan bhaiya, as usual main fueling karana bhulgaya, drop me.
Vivaan:(smile a bit) ok chal.
ViHaan:(takes keys) driver vihaan karega,ok.(turn assure jeevika)
Jeevika:(get sadin lowtone) problems end kab hunge.humne struggle kiya already , pehle madhu vihaan main problem hogayi,maansi- ronak ko apni khushi ka secrifise Karna pada, phir dost jaise bhaiyon main problem hogayi distance agayi, phir ranvir-jaanvi & ronak-maansi strucle karne lege, ab gunjan-vivaan ko strucle Karna pada
Maanvi:(consoles) don't worry,(sternly) problem ko humse harke jaana pasand hai, is bar bhi aisa hoga.
Virat:(smiles) agree
Family talk
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In outdoor garden.
Vivaan-vihaan come and sat .
Vivaan:(with fake smiles) time spend Karna tha, but plz no word against our sister madhu
Vihaan:(hug him and said sadly) apna fear restless sadness etc share kardo mujhse mere bhai.
Vivaan:(hug him crying said) kal woh truth se jitna hurt nahi hua, aj hua mujhe gunjan ko treatment lete dekhke bravery ke saath, aisa laga kuch hrs aur treatment chala toh main marjaunga.
Vihaan:(felt bad consoles him) theek hojaiga.
Vivaan:(get separate) pata nahi? jaanvi di-maansi di- madhu, kaise sehgayi, ronak bhai ranvir bhai tumne kaise saha?hat off guys
Vihaan:(smiles for him) thanks behalf us, aap gunjan bhabhi bhi same team ke ho,strenth lose nahi hogi jitke rahoge.(normally) aap ko yaad haina mere hint ke bina trying ki thi mujhe bachane ki aur bachaya(madeface) phir stuck kiya
Vivaan:(wipe tears) meaning. Kab ?
Vihaan:(hold ears), Jo kabhi forcefully bitter medicine deti hai cold main, Jo kabhi mere cute face par Razer chaldeti hai, Jo mujhe parents ke behalf scold karti hai, jo hai madhu vihaan vadera.
Vivaan:(smiles)whatever she does is for u buddhu. She don't like see u sad aur hurt.
Vihaan:(smiles)I know, anyways main fan hogaya aapka, Jo way main bataya tha, its nice. But caught hogaye detective wife se
Vivaan:(smiles a bit) haan,(get up) mujhe office lejaiga.
Vihaan:(get up) ok
They
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Back to VM
In hall
Family member is busy in their rooms!
Gunjan look here and to assure vivaan is not home
Madhu:(notice her) vivaan jiju office main file readd karte milenge,
Gunjan:(smiles) pata hai.(start settling tables things)
Madhu:(smiles and stopping) yeh chodiye sisters ko join kariye,,otherwise vivaan jiju ko pata chala toh bed rest rehke karainge.
Gunjan:(smiles) main kuch bhi karun family ko ya tujhe pata hoga, family mere side hai tu bhi mere side.
Madhu: main bolungi(smiles) sorryi :(ran here and there)
Gunjan:(following her) yes( felt dizzy due to treatment)
Madhu:(save her and feed water and make her sat)now rest ok
Gunjan: okay
They sat and talk
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In evening
Family having dinner in tension.
Virat:(with fake smile)schildren hum fathers ko wish nahi Karna kya? Fathers day hai aj.
Chidrens: ( bit tongue happily) happy fathers day.(smiles)
Every Fathers( get happy)thank you.
Gunjan:(felt strangeand stop eating) main rest karsakti hun plz, roaming ke bcoz energy nahi hain eat karne ke.
Vihaan:(with smiles) sab eachother ke hands se eat kare? Sisters type. Except madhu and me.
Family: (with smile) agree, but why not u and madhu.
Vihaan:(show his fingers) cut fingers ke saath kaun achcha lagega.
Madhu:vihaan(madeface)
Vihaan:(showing family) glaring se cutting mode pe aanewali hai,bachao mere bhagne chances aare hain.
Family laugh share food
Jaanvi: dramebaaz bhai, eat karo chup baitke in fact madhu ko bhi food feed kardo.vihaan.
Vibala:(madeface and sharefood)
Ronak: nice idea jaanvi:(smiles)
Ranvir:agree(smiles)
Maansi-jaanvi:(smiles in disbelief)
Family and left
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In maanak room!
Maansi:(sadly) I wish gunjan fine hojaiye. More pain na face Karna pade
Ronak:(make her smiles) don't worry, aisa hi hoga, ok.
Maansi:(smiles) aap next week jaare ho office.
Ronak: (smiles) not at all, babies se milenge play karenge, phir (madeface) office work jaunga main.
Maansi:(fakesdly) mujhe bhulgaye. I hope ranvir nahi kare difference baby aur jaanvi main.
Ronak:(smiles) hum bhaiyon ke liya wife moon hai aur baby star hai, jiski shine humko new way dekhne main help karti hai.ok
Maansi:(felt nice) how sweet definition my husband.
Ronak:(smiles)thank you.
Maansi:(smiles) welcome. Definition toh batadiya, babies name batadijiye.
Ronak:(smiles) kuch months ki baat hai, wait karlona.waise bhi second baby ka name think karna hai, first baby ka name ranvir jaanvi think kar rahen hainPart 323
In family breakfast
Ranjan:(unborn baby) 13week began b4 maanak: (unborns) 13week begin after.
Virika:(in mind) Jo hamare saath hua, hamare bachchon ke saath kyun hora hai bhagwan.
Vigun:(get up take elders blessing) hum chalte hain.
Vibala:(get up) him bhi challenge.
Vivaan: kal evening aye the advance formalities karne hum gaye toh aj rehne do.
Gunjan: madhu, tum bhi nahi rahi toh mamma maasi chachi ko help kaun karega small works main, jaanvi di maansi di rest chodke help karnelagenge, yehbetter hai yahin raho tum.unse talk bhi karo
Jaanvi-maansi: (smiles)
Madhu:(smiles) ok
Vihaan: koi baat nahi main ajaunga.(smiles)maasi badepapa boliye. Woh competition kya? jahan judge nahi ho?:
Family nod in disbelief.
Vigun:no(smiles and left)
Jeevika: I hope sab theek ho woh dono k saath:(get sad)
Maanvi: of course hoga di.
Vihaan: eveyone knows,?vivaan bhaiya aur gunjan bhabhi expert hai problemfix karne main baaki siblings type:(smiles for them)don't worry
) win karenge.
Family agree
Ranjan-maanak-vibala went to backyard and family in hall
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In hospitalroom!
Doctor:(going to start procedure) process start karungi,3 se 1 tak count karlijiye dono ok? Mrs gunjan vadera.
Vivaan:(hold her in visible fear)3
Gunjan:(smiles) 2
Vivaan:(chold her hand tightly)1.carefull plz
Doctor:(inject her and smiles)nothing will happened
Gunjan:(nod in amazementfelt pain shout ) aahh
Vivaan:(shout as he get injection) aahh
Gunjan:(control her fear and laugh together)
Doctor:(laugh and said) Mrs gunjan vadera aap lucky ho your husband loves u: deeplovers couple ho pain feel karnewale, lunch ke baad ghar jaana aap
Vigun:(smiles)ok
Doctor:(whisper to him)kuch side effect hunge take make here eat well.(went)
Vivaan:(listen but smilesfor gunjan)ok
Gunjan: promote honewaLe ho mamus ka aur aise reaction :(starlaugh)angels kya sochenge vivaan mamu big lawyer hoke ,choote baby types darte.
Vivaan:(control his emotion) gunjanji,apne superman se lawyer se leke har professional human hote first,heart hota hai, so yeh sab bhi hota humko ok., Soham ke comics dekho kabhi kabhi, reality main common man hote, pata lagega
Gunjan:(with love)I know that Vivaan ji:(normally)doctor ne kya kaha
Vivaan:(smiles for her lies crossing finger) good,(normally) mujhe olden days bossy husband banna hoga:(smiles)bas
Gunjan:(smiles) family ke samne kaise banoge bossy husband. Scold hojaoge
Vivaan:(smiles for her) wait and watch ok
Gunjan:(smiles) ok
Vivaan:(With fakeSmiles shake hands)
Gunjan:(laugh and say) vivaan jab sisters aur hamara baby aanewale hoga na, tab aise shout mat Karna like today, Doctor admit karenge tumhe
Vivaan:(smile act as no idea) main kab shout Kara? Maine toh nahi suna.
Gunjan:(show phone recording) yeh dekho.
Vivaan:(smiles fakely offering) ice creams eating ya lunch karen outdoor,
Gunjan:(fakesternly) ek lawyer ki wife ko bribe karta hai koi? Very bad. Pata nahi not good its.
Vivaan:(fakesmiles) i am ready stuck karo khushi se, meri detective wife apni team ke saath nikal degi mujhe.
Gunjan:(smiles) really nikal sakti hai tumhari wife
Vivaan:(smiles) yes yes, topic bolna start karunga toh sunte sunte, tvshows types leap ayenge. Topic end nahi hoga I guarantee.
Gunjan:(smiles) same here.
The keep talking like friend about their lp
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In backyard
Ranjan-maanak talking about vigun
Vibala (bring juice for maansi-jaanvi) juice for u. My d
Jaanvi-maansi: (sadly)hamara mode nahi hai.
Vihaan:(fakelylaugh) let me complete my sentence,
Jaanvi-maansi:(madeface) bolo
vihaan:(smiles) mamu's ki angels k liye. Juice finish karke properly energy se god ko bologi hamara bodyguard bhai ya behen send kardo,(sign toward them) jaise hamari mamma and papa ke liye kiya send kiya
Ranvir-ronak: (smiles) agree with vihaan
Jaanvi: very funny logic(smiles and finish juice)
Maansi:(as well finish) nice bhi
Vihaan:(take glass back). Thank you.
Madhu:(smiles) angels aur mamma's ko kya eat karne hai?
Jaanvi-maansi: I am fine by this juice.
Vibala:ok(smiles and went)time spend karo aap couples.(left)
Ranjan-maanak:(nod in disbelieve)
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after lunch In VM
Family talking
Vigun:(enters)
Family gether and ask about medication
Vivaan:(Make her sat fakely) mamma aaplog ko aap jaisi beti aur bahu mili hai, first session main Dari hi nahi:(sign madhu to take gunjan)
Jeevika:(smiles understood him) nexttime decide.Mat karo vivaan hamara relation.
Vivaan:(hold ears)ok:(hug her and sobbing)
Madhu:(take gunjan away and went in)
Vihaan:(felt bad for his bhai bhabhi wipe tears which is coming)
Jeevika:(get worried and pat him incuraging him) sab theek hojaiga vivaan. Nahi ro,
Vivaan:(control himself smiles) main jaata hun, meeting hai.
Vihaan:(lies)vivaan bhaiya, as usual main fueling karana bhulgaya, drop me.
Vivaan:(smile a bit) ok chal.
ViHaan:(takes keys) driver vihaan karega,ok.(turn assure jeevika)
They left
Family felt bad for vigun and left left
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In balcony
Madhu: kahan gaye aap dono?
Gunjan: only hospital then here.
Madhu: aur phir?
Gunjan: nothing spl.
Madhu:(madeface) s.I.l bangayi isliye hiding haina?
Gunjan: okay theek hai, vivaan ko mat bolna ok.
Madhu: done.
Gunjan:(tells hospital story)
Madhu:(laugh with her)
Gunjan:(felt dizzy while laughing)
Madhu:(protect her and went saying) rest karo aap
They went
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In garden.
Vivaan and vihaan aarive.
Vivaan: garden main kyun aye him?
Vihaan:(hug him) saare tensions share kariye aur free hojaiye.
Vivaan:(hug him back breakdown and fall on knees)
Vihaan:(sat and hug him) problem hai kya aur koi serious.
Vivaan: main agree toh hogaya but dekha nahi saaka usko pain main.(cries)
Vihaan:(felt bad ) sab fine hoga ok.
Vivaan:(smile a bit) I know , I want to be her strength, but nahi hota
Vihaan: a try kariye aap Jo mujhe karne kehte ho self karo, ok
Vivaan:(sadly) now I understand yeh sab bolna easy hai but, self nahi karsakta koi.
Vihaan:(smiles for him) chahiye office drop karta hunhun.
Vivaan:(remind) main drop karnewale tha
Vihaan:(bit tongue) bhulgaya.
They left
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Back to hall
Jeevika talking about her son and daughter suffereing.
Maanvi : aap dekhna,problem more days nahi rahegi, again jayegi.
Jeevika:(got msg) all set with bhai, bhabhi bhi set hogi, plz u be happy warna sun hoga disapear and moon hoga appear, aur hum karenge dinner, earlier(smiles)
Viren: vihaan ka msg right
Jeevika:(smiles) right answer
Virman:(read SMS and nod in disbelieve)
Jeevika: I hope sadness bhi disappear ho.
Viren: hoga don't worry.
Virman: agree
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After dinner
In maanak room!
Maansi:(worries for vigun)
Ronak:(understood) sab fine hoga maansi , don't worry
Maansi:(smile a bit) I hope so, gunjan vivaan more struggle kare without win ho
Ronak:(smiles) believe main aisa hi hoga
Maansi:(smiles) ok fine.
Ronak:(smiles)ok batao name.
Maansi: abhi toh bola aapne wait Karna hai :(smiles)let's wait
Ronak:(lookup and said) god mujhse yeh rule kyun excepted karne lagaye aap ne?
Maansi: (laugh) ok fine now let's rest, pooja main kya denge is weekend ranvir jaanvi ko plz think
Ronak: ok.
Maansi: main bhi sochungi ok
Ronak: but don't stress your self ok.for everyone stay happy.
Maansi:ok
Ronak:(smiles) very good.
Maansi: if needed hum challenge
Ronak: uske liye sochenge
Maansi: aap great ho
Ronak: thank you
Maansi:(smiles) welcome
Ronak: gn
Maansi: gn
They take rest
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In ranjan room!
Ranvir: maansi bhabhi and ronak bhaiya ko pooja main kya gift Dena hai?
Jaanvi:(smiles) Jo bhi ho natural rehna chahiye?
Ranvir:(smiles) okay but kya?
Jaanvi:(sadly) nahi pata mujhe.
Ranvir:(make her smile cutely) its ok sad nahi hote. Aise.
Jaanvi:(smiles)oh hello wife hun , beti nahi, Jo aise tricks kar rahe ho saath.
Ranvir:(smiles) woh bhi cute hogi jaise meri jaanvi cute hai, toh same trick use karunga na.
Jaanvi:(smiles) oh ok but uske papa se less.
Ranvir:(get confuse) kiske papa.
Jaanvi: romi ke papa.
Ranvir:(madeface) indianwifes outer ke lp ki talk nahi karte.
Jaanvi:(smiles) apne life partner ki baat kar rahen hun.
Ranvir:(madeface) jaanvi, tumna eating resting karo, baby girl aari hai uska name main think karlunga.
Jaanvi:(smiles) tum bhi socho main bhi sochungi. Ok
Ranvir:(smiles) sure.
Jaanvi: good.
Ranvir: bytheway yeh after aane wale ka name tha ya pehle aanewale ka.
Jaanvi:(smiles) let's rest
They take rest
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In vigun room!
Vivaan:(smiles and wantedly say) aj itne log aye advice aur mujhe case ki baat ki in fact case fight ki baat ki, bore.
Gunjan:(smiles)its good thing. So famous you are as papa.
Vivaan:maybe:(smiles )tumhara day kaisa tha.
Gunjan:(smiles lies) best tha rest kiya, family ke saath time spend kiya, that's it.
Vivaan:(is notconvince ,with smile) are u sure.?
Gunjan:(smiles) yes.don't worry
Vivaan: meaning Jo pain hua dinner time , b4 nahi hua.?
Gunjan:(cantlie) dizzy feel hua tha subha thoda pain ab. Light tha, niddle ka
Vivaan:(get worried) kya?
Gunjan:(smile a bit) I am fine don't worry plz.
Vivaan:(smiles for her) are u sure,
Gunjan:(with smiles) don't worry,sab fine hai.
Vivaan:(smiles for her) ok fine
Gunjan: tum kya cook karnewale ho?(smiles)
Vivaan:(smiles) no idea.
Gunjan: achcha main aur mera vihaan best cooking karenge. Aur sab eat karenge.
Vivaan:(smiles) maybe win hojao atb
Gunjan: u to.
Vivaan:(smiles)
Gunjan:(smiles)
Vivaan:(in mind) vivaan u have to become gunjan'sbstrength , be strong plz
Gunjan:(in mind) gunjan u r so lucky, down to earth lp hai vivaan
They take rest
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In vibala room!
Madhu:(normally) Vivaan jiju ne kya bola?tense lagre the, maasi se milte time. Koi problem hai kya
Vihaan:(normallylies)problem yeh ke, hamare typesvivaan bhaiya jisse chahte hain unke liye afraid hote.
Madhu:(felt nice) awesome hai vivaan jiju.
Vihaan:(smiles) agree dono husbandwife actually awesome hai. Sab ok karenge
Madhu:(smiles)yeh toh double right hai.
Vihaan: otherwise kaun awesome hai.
Madhu: dono awesome hai.
Vihaan: agree with u.
Madhu: thanks.
Vihaan: welcome.
Madhu: I hope tum kuch hide nahi karre on Vivaan jiju order..
Vihaan: filmy nahi hai mera bhai, different hai. Hatke.
Madhu:(smiles) so toh hai.
Vihaan: anymore question?
Madhu: no.
Vihaan: great.
Madhu: let's rest
Vihaan: ok
They take rest



Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. IT WAS REALLY NYC UPDATE. SO TREATMENT OF GUNJAN STARTS AND IT HAS SOME SIDE EFFECTS. VIVAAN IS SO LOVING AND CARING HUBBY CAN'T TOLERATE GUNJAN PAIN. LOVES VIVAAN AND VIHAAN PART. ALL COUPLES SCENES R AWESOME. NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Part 324
In vm after breakfast
Maanak ranjan vigun: we will be back.(went hospital)
Jeevika:(with care)vihaan , vivaan theek toh hai yeh gunjan ko kuch hua, tumne pata kiya hoga na problem mujhe bhi laga problem hai.when he hug me
Vihaan:(sat beside her normally) maasi, aapka beta Jo haina apnon ko hurt dekhke emotional hojate bcoz hum unki family+life haina afterall, kal bhi wahi hua (normally) believe me plz, problem nahi hai.
Jeevika:(smiles) of course hai vihaan.
Vihaan:(laugh and inform childhoodstory) you know yeh nature costly hojata tha unko aur coach confuse hote the aur vivaan bhai ko treat Karne lejate the, aur doctor treat karte the mere instead.
Jeevika:(smiles) what
Vihaan:(smiles for her) yes maasi. Aap chaho toh call karke ask karlo,
Viren: no need tum hona boldo ok:(smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles) okay.
Jeevika: tum right hi bolte ho usko in-outt understand karke, jaise last time gunjan ke toward uske feelings bolre the, aur confirm Hui thi.
Vihaan:(smiles) oh yes yaad hai.
Madhu:(smiles) aj toh sweet banna chahiye, grow hote angels dekhnewale hain.
Virika-virman: (smiles)
Vihaan: oh yes. Aab tak SG start hogaya hoga.(smiles)aur next side treatment
Madhu:(smiles) agree.
Virika-virman: tumlog unlog ko join karlo, vivaan gunjan bhi join karnewale hai.
Vibala:(get shock) aaplog aur tense hojaoge jaise humse hote ho, fight dekhke.,
Family( get relief) that's our problem
Vihaan: anyways papa aur chachu ki team join karnewala hun hi.
Family:(miss understood happily) meaning tumlog parents banre ho.
Madhu:(start coughing)
Vihaan:(smiles) nahi.
Maanvi:(with smile)abhi toh bola tune, papa aur chachu ki team join karnewale ho.
Vihaan:(madeface) mamma stop dreaming,we are small still, main hamare papa bhi chachu hai just like shlok chachu, bolra tha main.
Family:(smiles) ok.
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Hospital
SG room!1
Maanak emotionally watching there unborn baby on monitor.with expert help.
Doctor:(showing) yeh hai rahe ho
Maansi:(emotionally in happiness) dekhre ho aap Ronak?kitna growth hai uski aur cutenesd
Ronak:(is speechless in happiness) hain dekha, cute hai, as u
Maansi:(smiles) bas fast fast ajaye. Hum lift Karen usko
Ronak:(smiles) haan. Agree with u.
Maansi:(smiles) kash k woh din aj ajaye. Jab hum three couple k babies, saath smile cry and smile. Kare.
Ronak:(smiles) aisa hi hoga Maansi.
Maansi:(smiles) are u happy.
Ronak:(smiles) obviously.
Maansi:(smiles) woh happiness main boldijiye Jo main chahti hun.
Ronak:(smiles) iloveu.
Maansi:(get shock bcoz of experts and whisper) ronak carefull hum hospital main hain.
Ronak:(smiles) maansi khud hi confession listen Karna chahrithi tum, aur khudhi shy hori ho.
Maansi:(smiles) mujhe baby ka name sunna tha, confession nahi.
Ronak:(smiles) wait Karna hoga sorry.
Maansi: ok fine,baby ko dekhenge .
Ronak:(smiles)
They watch unborn baby.
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In SG room2
Ranjan watching unborn baby with expert help
Jaanvi:(happily) kitna cute haina baby.
Ranvir:(smiles) exactly like her mamma.
Jaanvi:(madeface) not at all, he is like u.
Ranvir:(smiles) ok fine.
Jaanvi:(smiles) thank you.
Ranvir:(smiles) welcome.
Jaanvi:(get emotionally by remembering her past)
Ranvir:(get worried)are u ok?why r u crying.
Jaanvi:(emotionally said) nahi pata tha life ke yeh stage pe hhunge hum.
Ranvir:(wipe her tears) I understand, You know main bhi sochta hun, jab baby crykarte ayega ,main kaise react karunga, happiness main
Jaanvi:(smiles) mere liye woh reactions record Karna ok.
Ranvir:(smiles) ok fine boldunga family kissi ko advance main.
Jaanvi:(smiles) good idea.
Ranvir:(smiles) thanks.
Jaanvi:(smiles) welcome.
Ranvir: let's watch baby angry hogi ya hoga humko talk main busy dekhke.
Jaanvi: good idea
They watch baby
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In other hospital room!
Gunjan treatment begins.
Doctor:(comes fo checkup)Mrs gunjan vadera kal kuch reaction toh nahi yeh treatment ka. Like dizziness and pain.
Gunjan:(smiles) n
Vivaan:(intrupt and said looking gunjan) yes dinner time main pain feel hua tha doctor aur dizziness bhi
Hua. Is it common ya serious?
Gunjan: its not like that
Doctor: Jo medicines suggest kare the, eat karao aap ok. Pain less rahega. Its ok hota hai.(left)
Vivaan:(watch her in amaze) kya bolri thi tum?
Gunjan:(smiles) tumne suna haina I am fine by me and her.
Vivaan:(nod in yes with seriosness) I am telling you, next sach bologi not anything else like today.
Gunjan:(felt nice and smiles) okay fine, lawyer husband.
Vivaan:(smiles) good my headdetective wife
Gunjan:(get sad suddenly)
Vivaan:(get worried) kya hua?sad kyun hogayi
Gunjan:(sadly) I am sorry.for giving u tensions
Vivaan:(felt bad by thinking she felt bad bcoz of him hold forehead) its not like that gunjan and I am sorry for scolding u:(sadly) hurry main kuch bhi bola
Gunjan:(remove his hand and said sadly) mujhe nahi pata kya? Tum mere liye tense rehte ho, headetective hun,sorry for spoiling your life. Being friend first
Vivaan:(hold her hand and ask normally) ek friend ke bcoz dusre friend ki life spoil hoti kya,? Mrs vivaan vadera, let me complete sentence,what if main koi reason se cOMA jaata aur kuch years baad aakE sorry bolta har din k liye toh kaise lagta tumse look after karane,
Gunjan:(understands) achcha nahi lagta. mera double relation right hai,
Vivaan:(smiles) exactly, mera bhi toh double relation right hai. So Dont bring sorry or thankyou.
Gunjan:(smiles) ok
Vivaan:(smiles) yeh promise record karun kya?, humtum ghar and office main busy hote hain yaad rakhne ko easy rahega:(come very close and ask) Kaisa hai idea mera. Mrs vivaan vadera.
Gunjan:(feeling shy)vivaan
Vigun start lost in eachother
Ranjan-maanak:(arrive to surprise and sees get confortable)
Maansi:(whisper) hum chalte hain,time spend karne do.
Ronak-ranvir: (in union whisper) agree.
Jaanvi:(whisper) nahi milenge toh hurt hoga.
Doctor:(going from their and notice) aaplog kaun hai.
Ranjan-maanak:hum unke
Vigun:(comes in reality saw them get alert ) family hai.
Doctor:(smiles and left)
Ranjan-maanak: (arrive) whats going on?
Vivaan:(smiles) what a pleasant surprise,
Gunjan:( smiles) plz be seated Di's. Jiju's
Vivaan:(bit tongue) oh sorry be seated.
Ranjan-maanak: (sat their)hota hai.
Vivaan:(with care)dis and babies ok toh haina?hospital kyun
Sehgal sisters: we are fine. SG k liye aye the.
Gunjan:(felt nice) grow hogaye hunge.
Sehgalsisters:(show SG) self dekhlo.
Vigun:(get confuse) kahan hai,mujhe samajh nahi aara.
Sehgal sister: (point for them) here.
Vigun:(felt nice) nice.
Ronak-ranvir: chalen?
Maansi: sath hi chalte hain.
Jaanvi: agree.
Vivaan:(with smile) humlog ajainge Di's please aaplog ghar par eating resting karo, angels bhi family ke saath rehna chahte hunge.
Ronak-ranvir: (smiles) agree.
Maansi-jaanvi:(start talking with her) gunjan kaisi ho?
Gunjan:(with smile) theek hun.
Maansi-jaanvi: (smiles) good, always positive rehna,ok:(get up)
Gunjan:(fumbling) Di's abhi Jo hua plz dont
Maansi-jaanvi: (smiles) kuch nahi dekha except your closyness,
Ranjan-maanak: (left)
Vigun:(nod in disbelief)
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Back to VM.
Hall
Ranjan-maanak showing sgs telling about meeting vigun.
Family felt nice.
Maansi:(get emotional getting tears by remembering vigun)
Family( get worried) why r u crying.
Maansi:(sadly) vivaan aur gunjan ke liye bad feel hora hai.
Jaanvi:(get sad with tears) right saying. Even I feel bad to. I wish hum evil hote,problem nahi hoti.Jo good persons ko hoti.
ronak-ranvir: (consoles them) sab theek hojaiga, u see ok.
Madhu:(felt bad but control herself).
Vihaan:(change topic) god plz babies ko bhejdo, ronedhona ka department handle karne, otherwise babies case kardenge gfs se ya vivaan mamu se bolke, aur hum tiles count karte time aur age spend karenge hum,unka crying right lene ke crime main
Family laugh.
Vihaan:(smiles) ab nahi hoga kuch, family is happy.
Jaanvi: hasane ka right lene k liye bhi arrest hoge tum.woh dono se.
Vihaan:(smiles) jab woh ayenge dekhenge kya karenge woh.
Family went for lunch
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In hospital
Vigun going after treatment.
Gunjan:(happily)tumhe didis ki SG samajh aana start hogayi.
Vivaan: of course:(smiles) don't worry I will guide u ok.
Gunjan:(smiles) dekhenge, kaun samajhata hai?
They move away
A girls comes running collide with vivaan and falls and crying.
Vivaan(sat beside her wipe her tears like kid)kya hua, floor ne hurt kiya aapko , abhi punish karte hain.(start beating)
Gunjan:(felt amaze)
Girl: nurse ko mariye, woh mere tooth ko remove karne injection deri thi uncle, aap hi bolo pain hoga na (touch cheek)toh ice cream kaise khaungi.
Gunjan:uncle:(laugh)
Vivaan:( overhear)pick her up in arms and explaining)right bolri ho, but ice-cream eating ke liye new toth hona chahiye na, uske liye painfree injection Lena bhi hoga. Otherwise late hue toh ice-cream melt hosakti aapke eating se b4.
Girl thinking
Gunjan: he is right:(touch her cheek lovingly) he is right.
Nurse and parent:(call girl name) gunjan beta.
Vigun:(get amaze)
Couple: (take her back) sorry if she trouble u.
Vivaan:(smiles) its not like that, gunjan is sweet.
Gunjan: exactly:(smiles)
Vivaan: anyways I am vivaan v vadera, and she is my wife Mrs gunjan vivaan vadera:(smiles)
Couple (say)nice to meet u, your child is lucky but kahan hai, as your loving parents:
Vigun:(smiles)abhi toh nahi.
Couple:(smiles)
Vivaan:(tease)chalen ?vivaan uncle ki gunjan aunty.
Gunjan:(smiles) us gunjan ne kahan aur is gunjan repeat kiya.
Vigun left
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Back to VM
Family spending time.exceped sehgal sisters and vihaan
Vigun:(arrives with icecream cones) family ke liye ice-cream.(gave them)
Jeevika:(smiles) sab theek haina?.
Vivaan:(smiles) yes mamma, sab theek se hua:(notice madhu sadness went near her slowtone at dinning) kya hua madhu?
Madhu:(sadly whisper) i wont lie, mujhe gunjan di aur aapke liye bad feel hora hai.bcoz me Gunjan di hurt Hui. Vihaan is right mere name ke after bala hai (get tears)main bala hun. I wish mujhe kuch hota
Vivaan:(feltbad hug her slowtone) madhu, gunjan ne Jo kiya uski sister duty thi , don't feel bad aur bolo, tum save nahi karti thi kya?problem se.
Madhu:(sadly) ofcoure save karti thi.
Vivaan:(ask) kyun? Save karti nahi sochke, usko tumhare problem lene se hurt hua toh?
Madhu:(slowly) sisters hai, saving time,kaise sochsakti.
Vivaan: (smiles and whisper) answer agaya na roam karke, chalo let's eat ice-cream.
Both went and eat ice-cream with family
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In evening after dinner
In maanak room!
Maanak watching baby SG on wall.
Maansi:(smiles) kitna cute hai.
Ronak:(smiles) agree.
Maansi: (smiles) day by day aur cute hoga ya hogi.
Ronak:(smiles) agree
Maansi:(smiles)
Ronak: aj fun aya jaanvi ki teasing se:(smiles) tension less Hui. Vivaan gunjan ki.
Maansi:(smiles) I wish fully over ho tension.
Ronak:(smiles) don't worry aisa hi hoga.
Maansi:(normallys) gunjan humdono ko yeh condition ke bcoz kuch nahi bolri, vivaan bolta hoga na.aapdono ko.
Ronak:(smiles) nahi dikhatA woh problem, like his sisters
Maansi:(smiles)
Ronak:(smiles) so change notsharing nature.
Maansi:(smiles) ok
Ronak:(smiles) good then.
Maansi:(smiles) thanks.
Ronak:(smiles) welcome
Maansi: let's rest
Ronak: ok
They take rest
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In ranjan room!
Ranjan watching pic on frame.
Jaanvi:(smiles rp I wish gunjan vivaan successful ho.
Ranvir: (smiles) same here.
Jaanvi:(happily telling) kitna achcha lagega, three phir four sibling play karte rahe toh.
Ranvir: eight siblings. Fathers ki daughters aur mother ke sons. Husband bhi happy wife bhi happy.
Jaanvi: tumhara kya hoga tab main busy hogayi toh.
Ranvir: (smiles) adjust karunga any how.
Jaanvi:(smiles) promise.
Ranvir:(smiles) yes.promise.
Jaanvi:(smiles) god ko bolo..
Ranvir:(smiles) tum god ko bolo.
Jaanvi: okay fine.
Ranvir:(smiles) thanks.
Jaanvi:(smiles)1 condition hai.
Ranvir:(smiles) infity condition bolo.
Jaanvi:(ask him to come near her)
Ranvir: bolo.
Jaanvi: (shout)dress uske change tum karoge.
Ranvir:(smilescover ears) okay fine.
Jaanvi: thank you love u.
Ranvir:(smiles) me to.
They take rest
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In vigun room!
Vivaan:(with care) koi pain toh nahi haina?
Gunjan:(smiles) no vivaan uncle.(laugh)
Vivaan:(madeface)haso mat aur uncle bolo mat ok, lp friend hun main, samjhi.
Gunjan:(smiles) okay samajhi, uncle, ek baat bolna tha mujhe
Vivaan:(madeface) not again, uncle bologi toh answer nahi karunga.
Gunjan: (smiles) ok fine vivaan,tumhari bonding achchi lagi woh gunjan ke saath.
Vivaan:(smiles) main vihaan aur soham ke saath bhi waise behave karta hun, tab nahi bola.
Gunjan:(smiles) ab toh bola na, very good.
Vivaan:(smiles) thank you.
Gunjan:(smiles) welcome, aj pata hogaya mujhe tumhe bhi baby girl dear hogi other fathers type
Vivaan:(smiles) same here, mujhe bhi pata hai tumhe bhi baby boy dear hoga other mother type.
Gunjan:(smiles) right saying.
Vivaan:(smiles) as usual.
Gunjan:(smiles) good.
Vivaan:(normally)I hope best father hosakun main.
Gunjan:(normally) same here, but yeh treatment work kare
Vivaan: (smiles for her) don't worry, treatment bhi work hoga aur hum jaanenge best father mother hue ya nahi, (with guilt)tired hona bhi nahi hoga tumhe ok.
Gunjan:(smiles) its not like that.
Vivaan:(smiles) its ok samajhta hun, couple+friends hai.aftrerall
Gunjan:(smiles) sorry.
Vivaan:(smiles) plz don't say.
Gunjan: ok
Vivaan: let's rest
Gunjan: sure.
They take rest
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In vibala room!
Madhu:(tell vihaan about her and vivaan talk)
Vihaan:(smiles)ab se kuch mat socho aur bolo woh dono ok, humko unke saath same behave Karna hai jaise woh karte.
Madhu:(smiles) you are right.
Vihaan:(smiles) I always say right ok.
Madhu:(smiles) sometimes only.
Vihaan:(smiles) kaisi wife ho tum, agree nahi hoti.
Madhu: wrong matters main agree nahi hoti main.(smiles)
Vihaan:(smiles) really.?
Madhu:(smiles) yes.
Vihaan: condition bhulgayi,fake blame accept kiya tha.
Madhu: tum agree hone k mode main nahi thi toh kya karti main.
Vihaan: right ho.
Madhu: thanks.
Vihaan: welcome. Next time main bala call karta hun, nahi bolna, some members reverse hang karenge.
Madhu: tum bhi carefull rehna.accept hai
Vihaan: ok.
Madhu: thanks.
Vihaan: welcome
They take rest.



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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. IT WAS SO SWEET UPDATE. AWESOME MANAK AND RANJAN SAW THEIR BABIES ON MONITOR. SO CUTE AND HEART TOUCHING MOMENT IT IS. LOVES VIGUN CUTE MOMENTS IN HOSPITAL. LITTLE GIRL SCENE WITH VIVAAN IS AWESOME. VIVAAN IS REALLY GOING TO BE VERY GOOD FATHER. LAST PART WAS TOO AWESOME. LOVES EVERYONE HOW EVERYONE WANTS GUNJAN TO BE ALRIGHT SOON AND BECOME A MOTHER. NOW UPDATE NEXT PART SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Awesome update dear.
Loved it.
It was really heart touching update.
To saw babies on monitor by both couples is so heart touching.
Gunjan treatment also started.
loves family love and support with gunjan.
Hope soon she will become mother.
Update next part soon dear.

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Part 324
In hospital
Gunjan laying and getting treatment.
Vivaan:(smiles for her)
Gunjan: doctor 1 question hai treatment ke about main, can I ask
Doctor: ask
Gunjan: mere treatment main profit kitna hai
Vivaan: (smile intrupts) gunjan relax karo focus jayega doctor ka. 9days left hai complete hone main:(todoctor) sorry doctor main lawyer hun na meri investigation illness hogayi inko.(sign doctor not say result)
Gunjan:(notice it)
Doctor:(smiles) don't worry profit hojaiga.
Gunjan:(smiles nod in agreement)
Vivaan:(smiles) thank you.
Doctor left.
Gunjan:(with smile) vivaan, yeh sab signalig kyun hori thi tumdono main.
Vivaan:(act as hurt to stop) bangayi na dutiful wife se doubting wife. Very bad of u.once friends the hum
Gunjan:(felt bad) sorry vivaan, main toh bas.
Vivaan:(nod in no)
Gunjan: vivaan(tries to get up felt pain on inject spot) ouch.
Vivaan:(get worried) gunjan slow( made her lay down feeling guilty)sorry main bhi dumb hun help karne ke instead hurt kardeta hun(cover face)
Gunjan:(hold his hand) vivaan don't be sorry, main bhulgayi patient hun aur get up Hui.Tum tense mat ho:(rubbing his hand) I am fine
Vivaan:(smile a bit) sure na.
Gunjan:(smiles nod in yes)
They keep talking
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In VM backyard after breakfast
Sehgal Sisters talking about eachother babies growing
Ronak-ranvir: (arrive with juice) hamari talking last kab kithi.?
Sehgal sisters: kyun
Ronak-ranvir: bhulgaye na mere saath meri baat.
Sehgalsisters:(smiles take their hand) jealous nahi hote footballer babies se.
Ronak-ranvir:(smiles) aapne force kiya tha otherwise main nahi hun jealous.
Sehgalsisters:(smiles) sorry.
Ronak:(smiles) kitna fun ayega beautiful footballer k saath play karke.
Ranvir:(smiles) agree with u brother.
Jaanvi-maansi: (smiles) good looking footballer hoga.(madeface)final
Ranvir-ronak: ok fine.don't be sad, baby bhi sad arrive hoga.
Jaanvi-maansi: (\smiles) right.
Ranvir-ronak(smiles) very good. Let see babies kya kar rahen:(touch their lp tummy felt kick) respond kiya:(smiles)wow
Jaanvi-maansi: (smiles) kaha tha na.
Ranvir-ronak: (tries and felt nice)
They then tries to feel eachother baby kick)
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In hall
Family making plan for pooja day.
Jeevika:(with care) pooja postponed karen kya, gunjan bhi unwell hai.
Maanvi: hum manage karenge as always,
Madhu: main bhi hun, brothers chef bhi hain hamare:(smiles)aaplog food final Karna bas.
Viren: hogayi problem solve,
Sb: postponed nahi Karna hoga, gunjan bad feel karegi use pata lage toh
Maanvi: she is right.:(smiles)
Jeevika:(sadly) ok bas treatment work karke uska, chances kam hai vivaan ko pata hoga ke nahi.
Maanvi: pata hi hoga, gunjan ko nahi bolna chahta hoga already shock thi woh.
Madhu:(in mind) main hi responsible hun toh main hi kuch karungi I am sure vihaan agree hoga.
Jeevika: madhu kahan khogayi.?
Madhu:(smiles) nowhere maasi, koi work tha mujhse.
Jeevika:(smiles) tense lagi toh ask Kari, don't worry tumhari behen fine hogi.
Madhu:(get shock) aapko kaise pata?
Jeevika: hum sister main se koi unwell ho toh fine nahi hote humlog.
Madhu:(smiles) right ho maasi. Actually I was thanking god, itne saare relation ke liye.
Maanvi:ok.(smiles)
Jeevika:(smiles)
Family continue planing
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Back to hospital ROom!
Gunjan lost in thought.
Vivaan:(notice her decide something) gunjan remember hamari wedding kab Hui.?
Gunjan: 11 September.(smiles) dual wedding thi
Vivaan:(claps) wow kya wonderful memory hai.?
Gunjan:(smiles) aur tum wonderful lp ho.
Vivaan:(smiles) aisa kya kardiya.?
Gunjan: mujhe divert:(smiles)
Vivaan:(get amaze) what?
Gunjan: lawyer ho jhoot nahi bolna.
Vivaan:(madefakefaces) ok fine divert kar rahun,tumhe nahi :(get close) khudko.
Gunjan:(smiles) khudko.(cutely)aww darlagra hai mere pati ko
Vivaan:(cover her mouth slowly say) slow bolo, lawyer image spoil hogi koi sunega toh
Gunjan:(smiles) pata chalne do, kitne loving grandson,son,nephew,bhai,jiju,mamu ho.
Vivaan:(feltnice)you are right(telephone start recording her)
Gunjan:vivaan no plz(stopping him)odd lagra hai, family ko hurt hoga dekhke
Vivaan:(stop and cancel) okay fine cancel kardiya.
Gunjan:(smiles) ok
Doctor come and examining her
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After lunch in VM hall.
Family talking having tea.and juice
Vigun arrives.
Jeevika:(normally) sab theek toh tha.
Vigun:(sat with them) sab theek hi tha:(smiles)
Jeevika: rest karlo then.
Vivaan:(smiles) gunjan jao rest karlo, mamma right hai.(get up) main meeting karleta hun
Gunjan:(smiles) abhi toh
Jeevika:(smiles) dono ko order tha.
Vivaan:(smiles) mere behalf onehrs aur gunjan se rest karadijiye scolding karke, main jaat hun:
Jeevika:(smiles) ajib.
Madhu:(take her sister for rest along sehgal sisters)
Ronak-ranvir: vivaan, babies ko play Karna hai tumse chalo na bhai.
Vihaan:(arrives) kahan jaana hai.
Ronak-ranvir: tumhari behnon k paas.
Vivaan-vihaan: (went to meet sisters)
Ronak: I hope humne wrong nahi kiya.
Virika-virman: no and go
Ronak-ranvir went
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Inbabyroom!
Vigun-vibala feeling movements and smiling
Vihaan:(laugh)bygod kya babies hai hamari holiday kardenge ya kardengi fbg main.
Vivaan:(smiles) agree
Madhu: mamma maasi mami's ko win karainge.
Jaanvi:(smiles) agree.
Vihaan: dekhte hain.(,notice gunjan phone dp) yeh vivaan bhaiya ke saath bachchi kaun hai.gunjan bhabhi?
Madhu:(take 0phone) cute hai, cute lagre ho vivaanjiju .name kya hai.
Vivaan:(smiles) thanks?
Vigun:(together) gunjan name hai uska:(smiles)
Vibala:(smiles) gunjan vivaan gunjan bhi selfie Lena tha.nexttime
Vigun:(smiles) by chance mili thi
Maansi:(smiles) koi baat nahi, by god grace tumhare life aise chances ayenge.
Ronak:(smiles) i agree with maansi.
Ranjan:(smiles) name sochna start karo guys.
Gunjan:(smiles)
Vivaan:(smiles foreveryone,in mind) I hope family k words right ho, doctor ke words wrong ho:(get emotional suddenly)
Sehgalsisters:(notice) vivaan kya hua eyes main tears kyun hain?
Vivaan:(emotionally by mistake) gunjan ko pain main dekhna toh Rona aya mujhe
Gunbala (get shock.)
Ranjan-maanak also get shock
Vihaan:(getshock) and changetopic keep hand) which gunjan.? Boliye, ya free main so sweet ka tag leke bologe
Vivaan:(reliaze wipe tears) chooti gunjan ko,
Ranjan-maanak: (laugh) so sweet of u.
Gunjan:(smiles)
Vivaan:(smiles) thankyou
Vihaan:(felt bad for vigun in mind) problem solvers ke saath , problem nahi hone dene godplz
Madhu:(notice him and whisper for him) koi problem hai Jo vivaanjiju aur tumhe pata hai.
Vihaan:(whisper) bad main bolta hun.
Madhu: okay
They spend times
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In evening After dinner
In maanak room!
Maansi:(normally) I am so sure, vivaan wife gunjan ke liye roya tha apni.
Ronak:(normally) agree,he love her after all.
Maansi:(nrmally) I wish sab fine hojai dono ki life main.
Ronak:(smiles) don't worry sab fine hoga.
Maansi:(sadly)) pata nahi gunjan kaise treatment face kar rahi hogi.main toh nahi karti thi aap sab nahi rehte toh.thanks
Ronak:(normally)welcome don't repeat plz
Maansi:(smiles) sure.
Ronak:(smiles)our baby remind karo mamma ko, ok.
Maansi:(smiles)rest kar raha hoga kaise sunega aapko.
Ronak:(smiles) magic hai
Maansi:(smiles) then magic se meri bhi sunsakta woh.
Ronak:(smiles) she is papa girl, tumhari kyun sunegi
Maansi:(smiles) he is mamma boy.
Ronak:(smiles) kuch months ko baat hai, dekhte kaun aata?ok
Maansi:(smiles) done.
Ronak:(smiles) thanks.
Maansi: let's rest
Ronak: ok
They take rest
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In ranjan room!
Jaanvi: tumhe bhi problem ki feeing Hui vivaan ke behavior se right as me.
Ranvir:haan jaanvi.
Jaanvi: (normally) but kya hoga.?
Ranvir: hosakta hai gunjan ko treatment lete dekhke pain hora vivaan.
Jaanvi:(normally) you are right I think.
Ranvir:(smiles) then manlo baby girl aari hamari life main.
Jaanvi:(smiles) Jo impossible hai kyun agree hun? Uske liye.
Ranvir:(smiles) hurry main final mat karo.slowly socho aur agree ho.at least try karo.
Jaanvi: done
Ranvir:(smiles) thanks for trying.
Jaanvi: welcome.
Ranvir:(smiles) baby kya kar rahi?, angry toh nahi hai loud talking se.
Jaanvi:(smiles)habit mera hoga.
Ranvir:(smiles) kya jaanvi try ka promise next day se b4 change.
Jaanvi:(innocently) bcoz of baby main kuch agree hori hun, kuch kar rahi hun.
Ranvir:(smiles) stop blaming her.
Jaanvi:(madeface) abhi se party change.
Ranvir:(smiles) don't be sad, you both are equal for me.
Jaanvi:(hug him carefully) let's rest
They take rest
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In vigun room!
Gunjan: vivaan tum theek hona?
Vivaan:(smiles for her) of course theek hun, aur tum?
Gunjan:(smiles for him)theek hun, aur Di's ke babies k activity, miss kar rahi thi.
Vivaan:(smiles) same here.:
Gunjan: good. Maine kuch socha hai, agree karoge.
Vivaan: pehle bolo phir agree hunga:(smiles)
Gunjan:(smiles) kalse main hospital jaungi, tum work par jaana ok.
Vivaan:(get shock) what but y?
Gunjan: double duty se tired hore ho tum, so I want u to handle work, main apni care karlungi.
Vivaan:(felt angry but normally) sab hojaiga, forget it, only rest and medicine+food eat karo, ok if believe hai.
Gunjan:(smiles) ofourse hai.
Vivaan:(smiles) by the way, mujhe koi propose karegi fear hai kya?
Gunjan:nahi(smiles) tumhe pains tolerate nahi hore isliye bhi.
Vivaan:right hain but(smiles) it deasnt mean, main alone karun tumhe,
Gunjan:(smiles)okay fine. Jo chahe karo.
Vivaan:(smiles)thanks.
Gunjan: welcome
They take rest
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In vibala room!
Madhu: vihaan don't be angry ok.carefully suno.plz
Vihaan: bolo toh.
Madhu: Maine family ko baat suni thi, kissi pata laga yeh treatment successful nahi hota sabke sat 9% chance hai.baby aane ke
Vihaan: doctor bhi bole the, so.
Madhu: (hesitately)if u agree with me, hum apne future baby ke parent Gunjan di vivaan jiju ko banayein
Vihaan:(get shock) what?
Madhu:(with smile convincing ) socho vihaan apne bhai ki company main tum spoil american nahi bane the as him fine Indian rahe tum, aur gunjan di ne mujhe after losing parents sambhala, toh socho, baby ko care love real parents jaisa bhi denge, hum toh fighting main scare kardenge, so better haina, caring parents types ko baby mile
Vihaan:(smiles) right toh ho, (normally)two problem hai
Madhu: baby kabhi bhi ajaiga, tum adoption ko arrangements karkevrakho ok.
Vihaan: (smiles) yeh baat Maine kyun nahi Sochi.so nice of u.
Madhu: anger Jo hai mind main.
Vihaan: (madeface)how rude,compliment ke instead insult.
Madhu: Jo miles hai lelo, nahi milegi
Vihaan: okay
They take rest






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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. IT WAS REALLY NYC UPDATE. LOVED RANJAN AND MANAK CUTE MOMENTS. FEEL SAD 4 VIGUN. ONLY 9% CHANCES R THEIR FOR BABY. LOVED MADHU VIEW TO GIVE THEIR FUTURE BABY TO VIGUN. NOW UPDATE NEXT PART SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Part 325
In vm hall
Ranjan: (unborn 14 week started b4)
Maanak:(unborn 14week started after)
Family including sarag and guest gather for prayer.
Ranjan-maanak arrive and join family
Prayer begins
Virika-virman along elders(in mind) ronak maansi ,ranvir-jaanvI ki jodiyon KO hamesha saath rakhiye aur healthy rakhiye babys k saath, gunjan vivaan ke zindigi main yeh khushi Aane dijiye.
Maanak-ranjan(in mind) humain milane k liye aur yeh khushi jeene ka chance Dene k liye thank u god,hamare first siblings aur unke baby KO healthy aur happy aur saath Rakhiye , hamare third siblings ko yeh khushi jeene ka chance dijiye.
Vigun-vibala:(inmind) hamare firstsiblings ko aur unke babies ko healthy rakhiye.hamare saath rakhiye.
Vivaan:(in mind) plz hamare aim k way ki darkness kam kardijiye, aur humein successful agey hone dijiye, har baar k tarah, aur mujhe strength dijiye ke gunjan KO support De sakun uSko har haal main. UskeGood deed ke liyepunish nahi kariye plz
Gunjan:(in mind) plz good humko aur struggle mat kariye,sab jaldi theek kariye, family ki khushi aur vivaan khushi aur uska career effect hore hain mere treatment se.
Vibala:(in mind) hamare baki siblings ke kaise, hamare 3siblings KO yeh khushi Milne dijiye.
Pooja overs near lunch time
Guest meet and gave best wishes to ranjan-maanak
Family felt nice
Jeevika:(with smiles)gunjan madhu lunchpack aur prasad serve karneki preparation karo
Vigun-vibala (smiles) ok (and went to kitchen)
Jaanvi:(felt strange in sitting with guest bcoz of her growing tummy)
Maansi:(whisper) kya hua jaanvi, theek toh hai.
Jaanvi:(smiles) kuch nahi bas strange lagra hai tummy ke saath sit karne main.
Ranvir:(whisper) forget it jaanvi, VIP ho tum aur maansi bhabhi, enjoy karo, attention like us, jab angel ayenge toh humlog un VIP ke parents hunge, ab jaise attention nahi milegi humko.
Ronak:(smiles) agree.
Maansi:(whisper) point hai ranvir ki baat main.
Virika-virman: (comes to ranjan-maanak sat with them)
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In kitchen
Gunbala preparing prasad and is quite
Vivaan-vihaan:(settling cut fruits in boxes and talking and notice silence of their wife) any problem between both of u? Girls.
Gunbala:(smiles) not at all, why?
Vihaan:(smiles)mujhe laga tvshow DJW fight Hui aapdono main.
Vivaan-gunbala(get confuse) meaning.
Vihaan:(smiles) devarani-jithani war. Bhai
Gunjan:(laugh) very funny.
Vivaan-vihaan-madhu:(felt nice show thumb to eachother)
Madhu:(faklymadeface) but humdono toh dj hai nahii eachother aur family k liye bhI hum
Vivaan:(smiles) i agree with madhu.
Gunjan:(smiles) me to.
Madhu:(smiles) vihaan agree ho ya nahi, i dont care.
Vihaan:(smiles) ofcourse agree hun.
Vivaan:(smiles) good.(to his wife with care) gunjan tum baitke fruit arange karo, main prasad ko mixed karta hun cook hone tak.
Gunjan:(smiles) its ok humdono manage karenge,yeh aur fruits bhi, Di's k saath raho tumlog.
Madhu:(smiles)agree.
Vihaan:(with smile) kaun Jaye aur kaun rahe gunjan bhabhi, hum couples ya brothers
Gunjan: tum aur vivaan jao:(smiles)
Vivaan-vihaan: (get shock) what?no.
Madhu:(smiles) plz go to family side both of u.
Vihaan:(with smile) past brother aur present+future husband ki respect karo, humko get out nahi.
Madhu:(smileS)it'd not like that
Vigun-vibala talk and manage kitchen work.
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In hall
Guest and family talking.
Some guest: jaanvi maansi k in-laws kahan hai. Jaanvi ki wedding ke baad koi nahi dikhe.itne festival main bhi.
Ranjan maanak get sad along family.
Sammera:(smiles) out of state Gaye hain, np humdono haina.
Raghav:(smiles) agree.
Ranjan-maanak: (felt nice)
Guest: (smiles)ok
Vigun-vibala: (bring pack lunch and prasad and distribute them)
Guest meet them and left.
Family sat and relax and talk.
Jaanvi-maansi:(with head resting on sofa )
Vivaan:(get up and going say)gunj:(notice JM sleeping) Di's KO kya hua?
Ronak-ranvir: (notice and smiles slowly) tired hogaye baitke:(get up and lift them) hum abhi aate hain:(left)
Vivaan:(smiles) hum chalte hain hospital.
Jeevika: mujhe laga postponed hogaya.
Vivaan:(smiles) no mamma, Maine request karke time change kiya, aaplog teach kare delay is not good , wheater in homework aur eating food and medicine.
Gunjan:(felt nice on vivaan care)
Jeevika:(smiles) okay jao nicely aur aao nicely.
Vigun left.
Ronak-ranvir: (arrives)
Sameera:(with smile) humlog chalen, (get up)
Raghav:(geT up) haan right.
Jeevika: jab bhi cg aao, yahan rehna ok.
Sarag:(smiles) ok sure jeevika aunty. Dono bhabhi KO mera bye take care boliye.
Ronak-ranvir: (smiles) humdono KO toh bye boldo Sam raghav.
Sarag:(hug them) bye take care.
Ronak-ranvir: (smiles) take care.
Sarag left.
Family spend time
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In hospital
Gunjan having treatment.
Vivaan:(sat beside her) kitchen main kuch hua toh nahi tha na tumhe?chup thi
Gunjan:(smiles)nothing vivaan.
Vivaan:(smiles) okay fine.
Gunjan:(smiles) family ke saath rehne k liye Sunday hota, aur hum yahan hai,
Vivaan:(smiles) no problem, 1time yeh task toh complete hone do, phir rahenge family k saath, ok,8day ki baat hai
Gunjan:(normally) okay.sorry tumhe yahan aana padhra hai.
Vivaan:(smiles) no need to say sorry aur thank you, (normaly)actually I am sorry, hum home to hospital aur hospital to home aare jaare. Unlike other sibling roaming kar rahen hain.
Gunjan:(smiles) mujhe nahi pata mujhe tumse woh bolna hoga Jo madhu vihaan KO bolri hai.
Vivaan:(smiles) buddhu.
Gunjan:(smiles) almond eat karo.
Vivaan:(laugh) agree
Gunjan:(smiles) anyways vivaan, Jo din report reveal ki thi, us din aisa kyun kahan tha hum jeete ya haare saath rahenge?
Vivaan:(get shock but calmly) gunjan you are right mujhe almond khana chahiye, mujhe yaad nahi hai waise kuch bola. If I hurt u then sorry.
Gunjan:(smiles)nahi ,bahot achchi lagi woh baat.
Vivaan:(smiles) great news
Gunjan:(smiles)
They spend time
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Back to vm In hall
family spending time with Jaanvi maansi.
Sehgal sister eating fruit.
Maansi get lost in guest talk get sad.
Ranvir:(notice) maansi bhabhi, what happened tense lagre ho aap, guest talk se right.
Maansi:(get shock) I wish tumlog mere bcoz yahan nahi aate, sab perfact rehta tha.
Ronak: maan
Jaanvi:(felt bad)
Ranvir:(intrupt) maansi bhabhi ek answer denge aap,
Maansi:(smiles) bolo.
Ranvir: humdono simple employee ,vivaan-vihaan KO unke profession main chahe toh replace Karsakta kya bina gk.
Maansi:(nod in no)sorry ronak ranvir,jiske paas Jo gk hoti woh work karaskte
Ranvir:(smiles) exactly, then boliye life main first time SPL love shower person ka lp,devar,sister rehne ka chance kyun chodsake hain ronak bhaiya, main aur jaanvi
Maansi:(felt nice smiles) madeforeachother couple ho tumlog. Kuch bhi karke SPL feel karate ho?
Family smiles.
RaNjan:(smiles)
Ronak:(smiles)agree:(act jealious)what about me. Ranvir and maansi.
Jaanvi:(smiles) equal special ho.
Ronak:(smiles) thank you.jaanvi.
Vibala:(In mind) I hope hamare third siblings succesful ho, if needed hamare decision accept Karen family aur siblings.
Jeevika: vihaan madhu, kya hua tumlog KO?
Vibala:(smiles) nothing maasi.
Maanvi: vihaan fight toh nahi Hui madhu se. Aur tense kardiya usko.
Vihaan:(smiles) gunjan bhabhi return ayenge na ask karlo aap fight Hui ya cooking.
Virat: okay fine.
Virika: mujhe nahi lagta fight Hui hogi, siblings ka SPL day tha cooking kare yeh dono bhi for sure
Vibala:(smiles)
Family talk with eachother.
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Back to hospital room
Vivaan:(in mind) you should be careful vivaan.(his phone vibrating on bed but he is lost)
Gunjan:(shake him) Vivaan tumhe call aara hai:(smiles)
Vivaan:(smiles and take phone) tum rest karo main aata hun.
Doctor: (comes to check her) hello Mrs vivaan, how are u( and checking)koi sideffect toh nahi haina, are u able to eat well
Gunjan:(smiles) sab bahot care and help karte hain mujhe including my lp vivaan.
Vivaan:(felynice)
Doctor:(smiles) that's nice, what about u r health whole 24hrs by ivf.
Gunjan:(smiles) some time in midnights dizzyness throw up feel hota hain.but its ok late nahi jaata.
Vivaan:(felt bad to hear but hide it and comes) hello doctor and gunjan.
Doctor:(smiles and left)
Gunjan:(in mind) I hope vivaan kuch nahi suna ho.
Vivaan: (with fake smile) kya hua gunjan.?
Gunjan:(smiles) friend call tha hoga, fast jo aye the.
Vivaan:(smiles)Not at all. Bcoz main uske saath hun.(point toward her)
Gunjan:(smiles) very funny.
Vivaan:(smiles) reality hai my wife
They spend times
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Back to VM hall
Family spending time watching pics
Jeevika: (with care)vihaan madhu, vivaan gunjan fine toh the na kitchen main meaning happy
Vihaan:(normally) humne wantedly irritate kiya eachother KO toh stop kiya woh dono ne silence chodke.aj
Madhu:(normally) he is right.
Virika:(felt bad)
Vihaan:(with smile) aaplog tension nahi ho plz ,Jo battler 3rdcouple hai patience wale more then me madhu, win hoke ayenge,just like maansi di ronak bhai aur jaanvi di ranvir bhai.
Madhu:(smiles) agree.
Virika:(smiles)
Jaanvi:(with smile) kya baat hai,aj mangaye tum impatient ho.
Vihaan:(smiles)angels ke in front lie nahi Karna chahiye na, uski practice
Madhu: thank god angels ke liye change hore ho tum.
Vigun:(arrives) we are back:(sat with them)
Jeevika: kaisa tha aj ka session.
Gunjan: achcha hua mamma:(smiles)
Vivaan went from their thinking about doctor and gunjan talk
Vihaan ronak-ranvir (follow him.) Hum log abhi aate hain
Madhu:(gave juice to triple sisters)
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In backyard
VivaAn:(sat sadly) kya luck hai? Sab theek hone ke instead spoil hora hai
Ronak-ranvir vihaan:(arrives) what happened.
Vivaan:(take water and sprinkle on himself from fountain turns fake happily) aaplog yahan koi work tha. Mujhse
Ronak-ranvir: (made him sat) no need to pretend vivaan, hum jaante hain, lp KO hurt dekhke kaise lagta. Even tough problem alag thi but problem thi.
Vihaan:(sat with them) agree.
Vivaan:(sadly)aap three strength wale ho aur strength Dene wale but main zero hun dono main.
Ronak:(with fake smiles) its not like that, hum bhi same hai, bas strength share karte hain.eachother se.hum couples
Ranvir: agree:(with fake smile a bit) aur theek karlete eachother ki problem hum couples.
Vihaan:(with fake happiness) i am sure aise aaplog bhi win hoge baki siblings types.aur parents category main jaoge mujhe madhu KO chodke
Vivaan:(normally)hopeso . Woh fit fine bhi hojaigi toh bhi chalega.
Ronak-ranvir-vihaan:(felt nice) of course waisa hi hoga ok.
Vivaan:(with fake smile) plz Di's KO mat boliye , worried hunge.
Ronak-ranvir: okay fine bhaiyon ki between secret rahega trust us bhai maante hona.
Vihaan:(smiles) of course
Vivaan:(with smiles) of course maanta hun.(to Vihaan) tum bhi madhu KO kuch mat bolna, already worried aur guilty hori thi.
Vihaan:(smiles) okay boss
Foursome went to family side.
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In evening after. Dinner
In maanak room!
Maansi:(sadly) I hope humne Jo wish kiya apne liye aur siblings k liye, woh mile.
Ronak:(with smile) why not maansi, don't worry ok.aisa hi hoga?try ok. Vivaan-gunjan hurt hunge sad dekhke
Maansi:(smiles) okay try karungi.
Ronak:(smiles) 1 more promise karo, aj Jo kaha next time repeat nahi karo ok.
Maansi:(smiles) promise nahi bolungi,(normally)u know na, actually baby ke bcoz mode swings hore mujhe.
Ronak:(smiles) hamari baby KO blame mat karo , aake reality main irritate karegi tumhe.
Maansi:(smiles) aap toh manlo, woh cute boy hoga.apne papa jaisa caring bhi.
Ronak:(smiles) sorry impossible hai.
Maansi:(madeface) Ranvir hota toh manleta jaanvi k liye.
Ronak:(smiles) impossible hai stubborn hai woh.
Maansi:(smiles) nahi hai final.
Ronak: (smiles) prove dekhna hai kal..?
Maansi:(smiles) main dekhti hun aur dekhati hun aapko.
Ronak:(smiles) sure.
They take rest
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In ranjan room!
Jaanvi: thanks ranvir lunch main lift karke yahan laane.
Ranvir:(smiles) its my pleasure. (Withcare)I hope mere lift karne se kuch problem nahi hui
Jaanvi:(smiles) no not at all. (Withcare)Next months se rehne Dena, fracture hoga otherwise.
Ranvir:(smiles) tumko every month uthaunga toh bhi kuch nahi hoga mujhe, always same lagti ho.
Jaanvi:(smiles)nice of u.(sadly) I hope gunjan vivaan problem free hojai?
Ranvir:(smiles) of course hojainge, problem 1 aur woh 2 hai, win hunge for sure.apni team ke hain.
Jaanvi:(smiles) I wish same.
Ranvir: u be relax.(smiles) ok.
Jaanvi: okay I will. Anyways ab bhi same plan hai office se break ka.(smiles)
Ranvir:(smiles) of course hai. Change nahi hoga.enjoy karo mere saath jaise maansi bhabhi Ronak bhai k saath kar rahe hain.
Jaanvi:(smiles) okay.
Ranvir:(smiles) name boldo na dono angels ka.
Jaanvi: okay fine. Bolti hun.
Ranvir:(smiles) yeah finally name sununga tumse, bolo plz mode change hone k b4.
Jaanvi:(smiles) a for angel.
Ranvir:(madeface) very funny,(smiles) let's rest.
They take rest
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In vigun room!
Vivaan:(with seriousness)are u ok gunjan.?
Gunjan:(smiles) of course theek hun.
Vivaan: promise toh yaad haina.? Us din ka
Gunjan:(smiles) of course hai.
Vivaan:(smiles) good.
Gunjan: don't worry hum dono hai win hunge.for sure.
Vivaan: if needed back out karenge eachother k saath rahenge.
Gunjan:() vivaan defeat kyun manre ho, ? Tumhare bcoz Maine defeat hona scare hona forget kiya tha?(withcare)Koi problem hai kya mujhe theek hone main?
Vivaan:(hug her get emotional and wipe tears crossfinger) not at all:(with fake smile get separate) problem ke liye scare hun, defeat hoke jayega tumse.
Gunjan:(smiles) humse.
Vivaan:(smiles for her) of course. Humdono itna irritate karenge jitna hamare siblings ne kiya hoga problem KO?
Gunjan:(smiles) good idea.
Vivaan:(smiles) ab rest Karen,? Important hai.
Gunjan: done.(smiles)
They take rest
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In vibala room!
Madhu: tumhe mera decision se problem toh nahi hai na vihaan.
Vihaan:(smiles) of course nahi hai, wohlog siblings hai hamare after all, best care karenge humse.
Madhu:(smiles) let's see.result kya aata hai. Gunjan di ke report ka.
Vihaan:(smiles) you are right, yeh idea share mat karo early problem hojaigi.advance main
Madhu: uske baad bhi hogi, scold hone ready rehte hain.
Vihaan:(smiles) first time,I am proud of ur thought madhu.
Madhu:(smiles)first time thank you for supporting me, koi aur hota toh divorce kardeta aise matters main.
Vihaan:(smiles) thankyou, main tv ka negative husband aur sibling nahi hun.
Madhu:(smiles)i know and me to. Advance main a- formailty hosakti kya?
Vihaan:(smiles)no idea,pata Karna hoga
Madhu: ghar main try mat Karna, kahin aur pata karna.
Vihaan:(smiles) done.
Madhu:(smiles) thanks.(with care)sab fine haina dono k saath.?
Vihaan:of course hai(smiles) reports aate sunke try karunga.
Madhu: done.
They take rest



Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago
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Awesome update dear.
Loved it.
It was really awesome.
Loves the idea of madhu to give her baby to gunjan.
Now update soon dear.
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AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. IT WAS SO EMOTIONAL UPDATE. GUNJAN IS REALLY VERY BRAVE FACES THE PAIN VERY WITH BRAVERY. LOVES POOJA PART TOO. ALL COUPLES R AWESOME. PROLOGUE IS SUPERB. NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊

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