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Part 370
2days after in hospital.after breakfast
Doctor and Madhu's doctor sitting tense
Vivaan:(comes to collect his yesterdaystest reports)Hi doctor, meri reports agayi kal k test ki toh mujhe dijiye:(smiles)hello doctor.
Madhu's doctor:(normaly how are u vivaan vadera and how is madhu vadera
Vivaan:(smile a bit) main theek Hi hun,infact some months main. mamu, dad turn hora hun.madhu bhi OK hai.
Doctor&madhu doctor:(normally)congrats vivaan vadera.
Vivaan:thamks(ask) reports main sab theek toh haina.?
Madhu's doctor:Maine aapki reports check Ki and sorry to say aapke brain main clot hai?
Vivaan:(getshock) kya?(cover face with palms)
Doctor: are u OK.?
Vivaan:(ask) how its possible.?
Doctor: due to work or any stress aisa hota hai
Vivaan:(sadly)how much time I have to live.chances?
Doctor:three weeks, more then more day aftertomorrow . It's better aap fast decide karen so that u can treat, 50-50
Vivaan:(getworried)
Family-gunjan-kids:(reflection) say yes for us.:(repeats)
Vivaan:(normally) reports apne paas rakhiye, kuch discussions karke decide karta hun,(tomadhu's doctor) don't tell my family plz.
Madhu's doctor: okay.
Doctor: be fast.
Vivaan:(nod in yes) okay see u soon.:(left)
Both doctor felt sorry for what happened with him.
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Back to vm hall family spending time excepted ranjan-maanak vibala and praying for vivaan.
Vivaan:(arrives) I am back.
Family start asking.
Vivaan:(with fakesmile) jiske paas apke prayers ho, usko kya hoga family?stress headache hai:(sadly lies) papa mujhe ek person mila tha usko brainclot hai poorguy kissi ko nahi bataya, so I was thinking to help him in paying and staying with him in hospital,. Main works postponed kardun plz.for somedays
Viren:(smiles) yes u can..
Jeevika: (with care) kya age ka hai?
Vivaan: vivaan mere Age ka hai,mere types beta hai, mere types married aur tobefather aur brother aur mamu bhi hai,:(getemotional and sat their)
Maanvi::(cheerup)vivaan ,papa ko mamma ko ,chachu types tease karte dekhna chahte ho kya?
Virika:(nod in disbelief)
Vivaan:( wipe tears) I just felt bad for him(smiles)
Gunjan:(gave water to him)
Family: don't worry OK.
Vivaan:(smile a bit) anyways aaplog kitchen se break lijiye, master chef vivaan ka dish karne.for for today
Family: okay.
Gunjan:(ask) reports kahan hai vivaan?
Vivaan:(lies) woh vivaan k paas forget kardiya, main theek hun pata hainA mere saath sabko that's it.:(went to meet siblings with her)
Jeevika: I hope woh vivaan theek hojaiye.
Viren: agree.
Virman: don't worry sab OK hoga.
Family spends time.
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In babyroom!
Trio couples spending time.
Vigun:(arrives and join)
Maansi:(with care) kya bola doctor ne.?
Vivaan:(withfakesmile) theek hun stress se headache tha.
Vihaan:mera stupidity ka treatment sochte sochte hurt hogaya aapko sorry.(get sad)
Madhu:(normally)even by my hungama
Vivaan:(smile a bit) our dumb siblings+tobe chachu maasi and tobe babies name sochna main raho, Jo bhi thi meri aur gunjan ki responsibility thi we tries to completed it that's it.
Ranjan-maanak: he is right.
Vihaan: ek aur help kariye aapdono.
Vigun: kya?
Vihaan: mom will be babies favourite or dad will be babies favourite bolke debate karo.:(smiles)
VivAan:(by mistake) limited time main sad kaise karun.?
RanjaN-maanak-vibala:(get confuse) meaning.
Gunjan: koi vivaan ko brain main clot hai uske look after k liye vivaan hospital shift honewala hai.:
Ranjan-maanak-vibala (felt bad).so sad
Vivaan: aur fifth newmember ka name think karna hAi.:(smiles)
Ranjan-maanak vibala smiles.
Vihaan: main bhi chalun.
Vivaan: my brother sabko siblings ko gunjan ko madhu ko tobebabies entertain kaun karega nice singing se
Vihaan: main
They spend times.
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In guestroom!
Vigun hearing baby heartbeat by different droplers.
Vivaan:(writes) Humlog personally nahi milsakte I think, aaplog save rakho each other ko, mom ko family ko smile karao aur happy raho. I wish aap sunsKte:(getsad)
Gunjan-kasak:(notice) kya hua vivaan?
VivAan:(smile a bit) nothing spl.
Gunjan: vivaan main bhi
Vivaan:(intrupts)tobebabies bore hunge so tum raho but plz meri insult matkaro unse, care karo apni sad toh never ho
Gunjan:(smiles) okay
Kasak: kahan jaana hai vivaan?
Vivaan:(lies) aj hospital main koi needy vivaan mila uski hell karne jaara main.
Kasak: okay fine:(smiles)
Gunjan: kya time aaoge?
Vivaan: no idea, tum babies k saath rehjao OK.
Gunjan:(smiles) okay.
Vivaan:(get up) main lunch ready karke aata hun bye:(went)
Gunjan:(in mind) no idea kyun bolre ho? as rift time.
Kasak:(notice) kya hua gunjan?
Gunjan:(smiles) nothing
Kasak: if u want main try karun convince karne ki k tumhe lejaye.
Gunjan:(smiles) no need kasak.
Kasak: okay
They spend times.
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In lunch at dining
Everyone eating and praise him.
Vivaan felt nice take selfie with them.
Jeevika: vivaan eat karo selfies afterwards.:(smiles)
Vivaan:(normally) main aj aur two days tak aaplog k hands se eat karsakta hun.?
Family:(happily) yes
Vihaan:(praisehim) wow kya trick hai, actually lp k hand se eat karna hai so uncomfortable nahi hone humko add kar rahen hain.
Vivaan:thanks(felt nice come to eat by family)very funny
Family: welcome.(they did same with each other)
Vivaan:(in mind) sorry family to hide from u, if save hogaya toh next time aisa nahi karunga, promise.(made them eat)
Family felt nice with his effort.
Vivaan:(smiles) thanks for accepting my wish.
Family: welcome:(smiles)
Vihaan:(withsurprise) koi toh baat hogi bataiye.
Vivaan:(smiles) 5babies on the way hai bhai, after their entry humko self eating karna hoga aur unko eating karana hoga that's y.
Madhu:(with smile) kya amazing logic hai.
Vihaan:(ask) ek aur time share Karen?
Madhu: (sternly)u no need to do.
Vihaan:(felt strange but got its moidwsing)okay fine.
Madhu:(in mind) I should be careful
Family eats.
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In backyard
Vivaan doing advance booking of gift for ranjan vibala and gunjan for anniversaries.
Madhu comes eating sour fruits.
Vivaan:(notice her) are u OK madhu?
Madhu:(smile) haan kyun?
Vivaan: I mean angry ho kya vihaan se?
Madhu:(look otherside) no
Vivaan: tough thing ki tumne, good then.:(smiles)
Madhu:(smile a bit) thanks and sorry for telling tension and giving headache
Vivaan:(madehersat)don't say like that and be happy.(he to sat down) anyways sab OK haina? Angry lagi tum.
Madhu:(lies) yeh condition ke symptoms hai.
Vivaan:(smile and getup) if yeh baat hai toh OK,
Madhu:aapne well cooking ki(went)
Vivaan:thanks(felt pain and sat pressing head) God help me.
Vihaan:(come overhearing with dolls get worried to see him) kya hua my brother?
Vivaan:(stoppressing head and changetopic) kya baat hai to be dad two dolls k saath.
Vihaan: as u always said practice kar rahun close hone ki.
Vivaan:(smiles) good.
Vihaan:(gave him one)same class k student hain toh 7 practice karte hain.
Vivaan:(hold dolls near heart and felt sad)
Vihaan:(ask) kya hua my brother?
Vivaan:(gavedoll) I am feeling tired:(left)
Vihaan:(felt strange)
He left
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In hall
Family spending time excepted vivaan and talking
Jeevika:(is thinking)
Maanvi:(notice her) kya hua tense kyun ho?
Jeevika:(normally)mujhe feel hora koi baat hai? Vivaan k treat ke humse eat karne k behind.
Vihaan:(stop her worries) maasi, Indians are siblings study kare the humsab that's y sad hunge apke son aur hamare bhai. Don't worry OK.
Jeevika:(smile a bit) I hope tumjo bolre woh ho.
Vihaan:(smiles)
Gunjan:(in mind) right toh hai, vivaan is so caring as king:(smiles)
Madhu:(notice) extra eating se save hone ki khushi hori aapko.?:(smiles)
Gunjan:(whisper) tere stuck hone ki khushi hai.
Madhu:(smiles for family) atb.
Sehgalsisters: atb for what?
Madhu:(smiles) triple time dance karne in sisters bs party
Sehgalsisters: okay.
Vivaan:(comeback and join them after rest) I am back family.
Family: how are u?
Vivaan: I am fine:(smiles)only tired tha.
Family: okay.:(normally) photo main dolls k saath restkarte cute lage the.vihaan k phone main
Vivaan:(smile a bit) thanks.
Family: welcome.
They spend times.
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In evening after dinner!
In maanak room!
Maansi:(checking gift for ranjan)
Ronak:what's going on?
Maansi: hamare siblings ka anniversary gift option dekhri thi.:(smiles)
Ronak:(smiles) oh achcha dekho.
Maansi: aap kya gift karoge?
Ronak:(smiles) something good as them.
Maansi:(smiles) nice idea
Ronak:(smiles) tired nahi karo, first urself then to baby.
Maansi:(smiles) right saying.
Ronak: kuch weeks haina find karenge steadily.:(smiles)
Maansi: okay fine:(smiles)
Ronak:(smile a bit) jaanvi be baby name bola?
Maansi: no ronak, ranvir bola kya?
Ronak: no maansi.
Maanak:(2gether) what a couple:(laugh)
Ronak: wait karana hai toh karna hoga: (smiles)
Maansi:agree:(smiles)
Ronak: actually try karna hoga.
Maansi: agree.
Ronak: baby ko disturb hoga, lets rest.
Maansi: okay
They take rest
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In ranjan room!
Jaanvi is sad thinking she and maansi can't dance.
Ranvir: jaanvi I was thinking except vivaan gunjan, hum two couples vihaan madhu k saath sing karenge:(smiles) don't be sad by thinking hum kuch nahi karenge bs main.
Jaanvi:(getshock) kya lp ho direct pata kiya?anyways ok
Ranvir:(smiles) good.
Jaanvi:(smile a bit) okay.I hope koi gunjan ko hurt nahi kare.aur hamari care main enjoyment sacrifice kare gunjan.
Ranvir: don't worry for that.
Jaanvi:(smiles) OK.
Ranvir:(smiles) on bs babys bhi ayegi lagta mujhe khushi increase karne.
Jaanvi:(smiles) right saying.
Ranvir: triple happiness hogi:(smiles)
Jaanvi:(smiles) agree.(sternly) vihaan acting nahi kar raha na.
Ranvir: not at all.sab brothers se samjha aur change hua.:(smiles)
Jaanvi:(smiles) good then.
Ranvir:(smiles) don't worry sab OK hi OK hoga.
Jaanvi:(smile a bit) you are right.
Ranvir: room change Karen kya?
Jaanvi:(smiles) no.
Ranvir: I hope vihaan k sister k view change ho.
Jaanvi:(smiles) main Hi nahi tumhari bhabhi ke view bhi hai.
Ranvir:(smiles) lets rest.
They take rest.
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In vigun room!
Vivaan is lost in thought.
Gunjan:(notice) kya hua vivaan?
Vivaan:(smiles) I was thinking, tumhe car driving teach kardun, phir tum tumhara beta, main aur meri beti race karenge.while returning.
Gunjan:(smile a bit) sudden aisa kyun socha?
Vivaan:(smiles) sudden baby nahi babys aare pata chalsakta toh sudden aise nahi sochsakta kya main?
Gunjan:(normally)kal kab hamare ho?
Vivaan:(smiles) kal ka kal dekhenge, practice k liye yes karo. Aj k aj sikhadunga
Gunjan:(smiles) no need.
Vivaan:(smile a bit,ask) mere liye bhi nahi
Gunjan:(smile a bit) sorry.
Vivaan: its OK and sorry.
Gunjan:(ask) sorry kyun?
Vivaan:(smile a bit) copy karne tumhe.
Gunjan:(smile a bit) its ok.
Vivaan: sorry for not taking u with me.
Gunjan:(smiles a bit) its OK
Vivaan: sure its OK.
Gunjan: yes.
Vivaan:(smiles) good then lets rest.
Gunjan: okay
They take rest.
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In vibala room!
VihAan telling jokes to madhu from tab.
Madhu laugh on hearing.
Vihaan:(normally) meri draging se tumdono ko problem hui kya?
Madhu:(normally) no.
Vihaan:phir bhi I am sorry both of u.(getsad)
Madhu:(normally) its OK vihaan.
Vihaan:(normally) I promise aise behave kabhi nahi karunga. Next stage main baby ko sorry boldunga.
Madhu: as u wish.
Vihaan: are u happy?as we are together waiting for baby, or dejected?
Madhu:(change topic) nervous hun.
Vihaan:(smiles) I am happy tum USA nahi jaari.
Madhu:(normally)whole life tolerate karna hoga yeh guilt nahi hai kya?humdono ko.
Vihaan:(happily) not at all. Don't worry thinking little vihaan irritate karega? Main boldunga, if u want to be mom's dear then don't make her fear
Madhu:(laugh,then say by remembering his act) mujhe scaring relations nahi,caring relations chahiye. Tumne kab suna
Vihaan:(smiles) guess kiya, as u guess.
Madhu: lets rest.
Vihaan: kuch eat karogi?
Madhu: no.
Vihaan: okay phir bhi bolo.
Madhu: okay
They take rest.



Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Precept
vivaan to spend time with family b4 going.Vihaan to caught his problem &felt bad and stays with him .vivaan made him understand and ask not to reveal and enjoy new phase instead of doubting again.

Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago
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SUPERB PRECAP DEAR.
LOVED IT.
NOW UPDATE SOON.
TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 370 IS JUST AWESOME.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY NYC UPDATE.
OHO NOW VIVAAN HAS CLOTTING IN BRAIN.
FEEL REALLY BAD 4 HIM.
BUT HE DIDNT TOLD ANYTHING TO HIS FAMILY INSTEAD HE MADE A STORY OF SOME FRIEND WHO HAS THIS PROBLEM.
LOVED HIS LOVELY MOMENTS WITH FAMILY. SO HEART TOUCHING THEY R.
MADHU IS STILL ANGRY ON VIHAAN AND PRETENDING THAT EVERYTHING IS ALRIGHT.
NOW UPDATE NEXT PART SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.😊😊😊



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Part 371
In vm hall after breakfast! Surgery day
Family spending time with vivaan b4 he goes.
Vivaan:(get up and take elders blessings) bless me k main successful hun
Elders felt strange and nice
Virat: (stop him)vivaan aj courtcase thodi hai Jo blessing lera hai:(hug him)
Vihaan: I am sure koi case hoga:(smiles) friend ki help nahi karna hoga
Vivaan:(controls his feelings) aaplog ke without work main rehta tha to bore nahi hota tha na isliye bore na ho isliye blessing lera hoon(and meet siblings) take care my siblings along newmembers.love u family
Siblings and elders: (replies)love u to
Vivaan:(come to his wife side hold her hands)along all takecare yourself and elder tobe babies youngest to be baby k liye name thinking main busy raho,as always siblings k saath raho, babies k saath apni friend k saath rest karlo OK.ilove u my friend &wife&our tobe babies tobemom, kuch bhi thought nahi Lana okay. Mujhe nahi toh vihaan se driving learn karo. Don't miss me family and gunjan
Family felt strange and nice by his confession
Gunjan:(get emotional and hug him)
Vivaan hug her back
kabhialvidanakehna duat BG playing
Vivaan:(get separate and went running with tears) bye family:(in mind) thanks for everything and sorry for hiding.
Vibala :(consoles hers) somedays ki baat hai, don't cry
Gunjan:(get calm)
Family gather and consoles to her.
Gunjan:(get calm and inmind) vivaan aise kyun bolra tha
Vivaan phone rings.
Vihaan:(takephone) main phone deke aata hun:(went)
Ranjan maanak vaderasister went inside
Family spends time
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In hospital room! 2hrs after he reach
Doctors doing his checking him b4 taking for operation!
Someone push them and comes to him with tears and shock after learning from counter
Doctor:(sternly) who are you to interfere in our work?
Vivaan:(normally) sorry behalf himdoctor he is my brother. Give us some time.(with hand ask him)
Doctor and nurse went out.
Vihaan:(comes and sat)
Vivaan:(cataully) I know India k family members hai hum, it doesn't means rude behave kare anyplace pe.
Vihaan:(with tears) how come u hide? that you are in problem from all of us, and lie
Vivaan:(happily) stupid bcoz I love u all.(normally)mamma ki badcondition hoti thi, Didi's jijus aur babies ki complictions se resently holiday hui, gunjan ki sadding past se holiday hui bcoz of babies ,tumlog tobeparents ho, bata ?happiness ko blow kaise karta main unki ?Jinki reflection mujhe yeh step lene k liye help kari . sabse far jaate-jaate
Vihaan:(cover his mouth) kuch nahi hoga aapko.:(take phone and dialing number)
Vivaan:(ask) yeh kya kar raha hai?
Vihaan:(jokewith him) student apki antics parents ko batana hoga.
Vivaan:(getshock) no vihaan, already sadness main control nahi hua tha mujhse. Hardly convince kiya? For my sake stop.(getting up)u know me , Main aise ajaunga otherwise
Vihaan:(felt bad stop him) no.
Vivaan:(felt nice) thanks my obedient brother, anyways tum whole heartly ready hue na for baby. ?If aisa hai don't do late in getting ready and enjoy this phasewith madhu. By watching us Jo sath enjoy nahi karenge. Plz give time to twins behalf meri car teri:(gave key)
Vihaan:(get effect) fear hai, happiness ladunga. Not again hum milke roaming kardenge
Men nurses take him vihaan remember his advice
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Back to vm babyroom!
Sehgal brothers watching movie along their lps
Maansi remembering vivaan action and worrying.
Jaanvi:(notice her) kya hua? My sister.
Maansi: vivaan k action strange lage mujhe.
Jaanvi: same here.
Ronak: kisiko recover karane ki responsibility Liya hainana isliye, nervous hoga.
Ranvir: I think ronak bhai is right. Family se wife se confession karna good thing haina. Don't worry. And confess your love with your lp.(gave hi5 to his brother)
Jaanvi:h(ask)hum student hai kya Jo copy karenge.teacher ko (smiles)
Maanak: very interesting logic.(laugh)
Ranvir:(smiles) couples hai isliye bolra hun.
Jaanvi:(smiles) wait for it as we are waiting for baby.
Maanak: kya ?sensiblewfe hogayi cute wife se.
Jaanvi:(ask) main cute nahi hun:(made face)
Maanak:(smiles) unlimited cute ho.
Ranvir:(smiles) exactly, bas smiling continue karo.
Ronak:(ask) anyways to be chachu and tobemaasi, baby ka name kya hoga?
Ranjan:(lies) prince sehgal and princess sehgal.
Maanak:(smiles) nice. Actual name.
Ranjan: sorry u have to wait.:(smiles)
Maanak:(smiles) okay an u to wait.
Ranjan: okay.
They spend times.
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In guest room!
Kasak madhu hearing babys heartbeats.
Gunjan:(in mind) kaisa fear deke gaye vivaan APne talk se mujhe!
Kasak:(notice and ask) kya hua gunjan?
Gunjan:(smiles for them) nothing kasak.kuch chahiye tumhe.
Kasak:(gave dropler) heartbeat sunno again.
Gunjan:(smiles and take dropler and listen)
Kasak:(whisper) vivaan ko miss kar rahi hogi as she love him.
Madhu:(smiles)i agree with u.
Kasak: thanks
Madhu:(smile a bit) kuch chahiye tumhe.for eating.
Kasak:(smiles) no.
Gunjan: kasak madhu rest karlo if u r feeling tired.
Kasak-madhu: u to join us.
GunjAn: tumlog bhi na
Trio rest on bed.
Kasak-madhu: funny hai.
Gunjan: right saying.
Madhu: emotional good bye msg tha na.
Gunjan:(smiles) hhmm. Care bhi
Kasak: nice
They spend times
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In hall
Family spending time!
Jeevika:(call vivaan)
Otherside Vihaan:(recievecall and imitate vivaan) ji mamma.
Jeevika:(with care) tu theek haina, vihaan hai kya wahan , milke eat karo. Otherwise main talk nahin karungi, scold karega aane toh
Otherside vihaan:(felt nice)yes mamma main theek hun, haan hain send karna easy nahi hai usko hum clear karke, saath eat karenge. Don't worry woh sabka Hi nahi mera dear hai.out of ot hai , main market main hun to get something for vivaan sugery: aap sab pray kariye(cut call)
Jeevika:ok(get relax)thank god sab theek hai.dono bhai saath hain
Maanvi:(smiles)don't worry now, okay kyun bolre the.
Jeevika:patient vivaan k liye pray karo bolra tha:(smiles)
Viren: ab normal hojao, hamari betiyan darenge otherwise
Virman: agree.
Jeevika: okay.:(smiles)
Virat: I am impress by vivaan, itne loving way main talk Kara, unlike my brother alone main nahi.
Virika: as u both.
Virman:(smiles)Thankyou.
Madhu:(in mind) thank god, vivaan jijubhai k saath rehgaye unka irritating bhai.
Sehgalsisters:(noticeher)what happened madhu.?
Madhu:(smile a bit) nothing sisters.
Sehgalsisters: (smiles)
They spend times.
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After lunch in backyard!
Chalte-chalte sad song playing
Gunjan remembering vivaan words getting restless.
Imaginary vivaan:(joke with her)calm raho apni lp ki baat manke otherwise bura hoga uska.
Gunjan:(get emotional and tells) what to do,? I miss u, afraid hun tumhari baaton se.
Imaginary Vivaan:(point to her heart and ask) Jo paas hai, usse miss kya karna?, uske rehta kya darna uske talk se? My savior.
Gunjan:(sadly) I don't know? comeback for us vivaan by fulfilling your humidity.
Imaginary Vivaan:(smiles) sure you to be happy OK.
Gunjan: okay.
Madhu:(arrives) kya OK gunjan di.
Gunjan:(look around for lp) vivaan kahan gaya.?
Madhu:(satwith her) friend k saath haina? call karlo. If you are missing
Gunjan:(normally) let it be, woh busy hoga. Mamma se pata chalgaya that's it for me
Madhu:(smile a bit) exactly then y r u looking restless?
Gunjan:(smile a bit) I don't know, anyways rest karne kyun nahi gayi after lunch.
Madhu:(smile a bit) already bahot rest hogaya.
Gunjan:(smiles) okay fine.
Madhu: (ask)aap vivaan jijubhai ki wish complete kyun nahi kar rahe ho?
Gunjan: after dinner ki baat kar raha tha woh.
Madhu: family sath rahiye na as vivaan jijubhai said.
Gunjan: nahi rehne do, meri waste tensionlook se sabko tension hogi.
Madhu:(smile a bit) okay fine. As u wish
Gunjan: tum bhi relax raho
Madhu: okay
They spend times!
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Back to hall!
Family talking with ranjan-maanak and spending time talk with vihaan on handfree.
Jeevika: last but not the least, never mind your brother ok if he scold u.
Vihaan: yes don't worry. (Towife) take care yourself madhu and sisters somedays main milenge.
Madhu:(with fake smile) okay vihaan
Sehgalsisters and gunjan: okay vihaan.also
Vihaan: you to brothers.
Sehgalbrothers: don't worry, u also.
Video chat over.
Ronak: dono bhai good heart k hai, kissi ko bhai k types saath dere.
Ranvir:(smiles) agree.
Family smiles.
Virman:(in mind) yeh log saath talk kyun nahi kare second time bhi.
Virika: kya hua?
Virman: nothing.
Jeevika: I think humko jaana chahiye.
Viren: vivaan reason diya tha na.
Jeevika: mujhe laga vihaan se upset hai vivaan, sath talk nahi kar rahe na dono. Vihaan yahan nahi aya na siblings k liye madhu k liye, so patch up k liye
Viren: don't worry saath rehte rehte, talk karenge.
Virman: agree.
Jeevika:(smiles) okay
They spend times.
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In evening after dinner!
In maanak room!
Maanak spending time.
Ronak: next week k baad anytime baby asakte.isnt it amazing
Maansi:(smiles) haan. I wish sare babies save aye in our life & siblings life.
Ronak:(felt nice) don't worry, sabki blessing hai,
Maansi: right saying,(normally) ronak don't mind, if u need to choose one relation then choose baby over wife.
Ronak:(normally) meaning u want me to die?
Maansi:(felt bad) no ronak.
Ronak:(normally) then batao kaise li tumne send karne ka promise.family ka mera aur baby ka without soche?
Maansi:(felt bad and nice)sorry.
Ronak:(hug her carefully) don't worry couples aur parents win hunge.its OK.
Maansi:(smiles)I was scare that's y yeh sab boldiya.
Ronak:(smiles) no problem, sab perfect hoga.
Maansi:(smiles) I know.anyways ranvir discuss Kara gift payment ki.
Ronak:(smile a bit) future story sochte rehte hum ajkal.
Maansi:(smiles) nice very nice.
Ronak: don't get angry with smile, I will talk with him.
Maansi:(smiles) good then.
Ronak: thanks.
Maansi: welcome lets rest.
They take rest.
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In ranjan room!
Ranjan watching vigun video.
Ranvir:(smiles) tum amazing ho, sentiwife and caring lp ka video create kardiya.
Jaanvi:(smiles) I like their bonding that's y, also to them
Ranvir:(smiles) same here.
Jaanvi:(smiles) all husbands & wife's are lucky by getting each other including us.
Ranvir:(smiles) agree.
Jaanvi:(smiles) condition yaad haina?
Ranvir:(smiles) obviously hai. I am glad tumhe bhi yaad hai hai.don't shy OK.
Jaanvi:(smiles)don't worry for it.
Ranvir: (smiles) thanks.
Jaanvi:(smiles) welcome.
Ranvir:(smiles) achcha bs main kya sing karenge.?
Jaanvi:(smiles) actual day sochenge.
Ranvir:(smiles) okay no problem..
Jaanvi: but sentisong nahi socho.
Ranvir:(smiles) okay my loveparter.
Jaanvi:(smiles) jlp rlp better haina.
Ranvir:(smiles) right saying lets shift to babyroom!
Jaanvi: no,
Ranvir: don't worry adjust hunge.
Jaanvi: lets rest.
They take rest
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In vigun room!
Vaderasisters resting.
Madhu: gunjan di yeh kya aate khogaye?
Gunjan:(smile a bit) its not like that. Tumhe OK toh lagra na?
Madhu:(toherself) jab bhi khati, little vihaan attitude deta as dadvihaan, OK kya rahungi.
Gunjan: (smile a bit) kya bolri ho.?
Madhu:(smile a bit) sorry, aapko vivaanjijubhai ka plan change karna pada.
Gunjan:(smile a bit) its OK, vivaan ko mere lost rehna achcha nahi lagta, twins k saath rahun 5thbaby k saath rahun, one thing hai.
Madhu:(smile a bit) right saying.
Gunjan:(happily) don't think much OK.
Madhu:(smile a bit) okay.
Gunjan:(ask) babies ka name kya socha maasi madhu ne?
Madhu: we have to wait haina.:(smile a bit)
Gunjan:(smile a bit) vihaan ko milke ask karungi.
Madhu:(with fake smile) as u wish.
Gunjan: tumdono ne baat ki.? Again.
Madhu:(smile a bit lies) haan baat hogayi.
Gunjan:(smile a bit) good then.
Madhu:(normally) rest Karen ?
Gunjan: yes why not. Kuch bhi chahiye to bolo.
Madhu : okay
They take rest.
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Back to hospital room!
Doctors trying to bring back vivaan life.
Vihaan:(separate them and comes, fakehappily hold his hand) aapne ek grandson,son, brother,lp, tobedad, tobemamu ko win karaya hai. By family blessing,Get up and give hi5 to me in this happiness. Btw Humlog ka joke bhi toh bana hai younger baby k samne,sorry little rock star ka unique music sunna hai, aapdono ko triple dance karna hai. Elders baby ko pick karne fight karna hai(sadly) comeback for us, ( breakdown)
Vivaan:(start opening his eyes bcoz of bro tears)
Doctor:(notice and keep hand on his bro arm) u r successful.
Vihaan:(getshock and felt nice)
Doctor:(checkinghim) how are feeling?
Vivaan:(slowly says stamering) theek hun.ghar jaana chahra hun.
Doctor:(smile a bit) okay jaiye but abhi nahi, tomorrow ya day after tomorrow jaiye.(left)
Vihaan:(wipe tears) badepapa yahan hote toh, FM mamma ka fm beta bolke tease karte the aapdono ko, sleeping beauty k competer
Vivaan:(slowly) tu yahan kyun hai,? family k paas kyun nahi gaya.? Naming cermony kyun kar raha hai meri.?
Vihaan:(smile a bit) bcoz apne elder brothers agaye Jo lp aur sisterfigure ko handle karte the along family. Madhu k paas gunjan bhabhi hai,Aapne freedom enjoy kiya isliye, sleeping beauty competer ho aap.
Vivaan:(slowly) very bad u stay instead go.
Vihaan: apki advice follow ki mere heart ne, aur mera heart apne sibling group k yeh bhai k sath rehna chaha, anyways, Maine as u maasi se baat ki.(cover him properly) rest karo?(pressing upside of head) family main badepapa ya papa ko bole kya?
Vivaan:(slowly) direct milke bolenge,
Vihaan:ok(keep head on bed and close eyes)
Vivaan(cover bedsheet on vihaan head and of himself with fingers and rest).



Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb updates dear.
All parts from 367 to 370 r just awesome.
Loved all parts.
Feel really bad for vivaan.
Now he has brain clotting.
Hope soon he will be alright after treatment.
Update next part soon dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
MINDBLOWING UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY HEART TOUCHING UPDATE.
VIVAAN TALK WITH ALL FAMILY MEMBERS IS SO HEART TOUCHING.
GUNJAN AND ALL FAMIOY MEMBERS HAVE DOUBT THAT SOMETHING HAS HAPPENED.
ATLAST VIHAAN COMES TO KNOW ABOUT IT.
THANKGOD VIVAAN OPERATION HAS SUCCESSFUL AND NOW BOTH BROTHERS WILL COME TO HOME.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.😊😊😊

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Part 372
In vm after breakfast in babyroom!
RanjAn maanak spending time and laughing on comedymovie
Jaanvi: gunjan madhu ko invite karna chahiye, apne-apne lp ko miss kar rahin hungi.
Maansi: right saying.
Gunjan:(enter with juices) juice for u.
Sehgalsisters: Humlog tumhare aur madhu k saath comedymovie dekhna chahte the pata hai.:(takes)
Gunjan:(smile a bit) okay ,main,madhu kasak ko juice deke, madhu aur kasak ko leke aati hun:(left)
Sehgalsisters:(smile a bit)what a caring person she is.
Sehgalbrothers:(smile a bit) agree.
Maansi: gunjan aur vivaan ka love bhi achcha, hum sab couples jaise.
Ronak:(smile a bit) agree.
Jaanvi:(madeface) aym bhi aisa chahe madhu ko, turn nahi hojaye toh achcha hai.
Ranvir:(smile a bit) don't worry repeat turn nahi hoga, lp aur baby k close hoga.
Maanak:(smile a bit) tobebaby k infront real name lo, aym mamu achcha nahi lage hearing main.
Ranvir:(smile a bit) agree.
Jaanvi:(smile a bit)okay for u both.
Maanak:(smile a bit) that's like a good sister.
Ranvir:(madeface) aur main?
Maanak:(smile a bit) both of our good siblings.
RanjAn:(smiles)thank you & you to.
Maanak:(smiles) welcome and thankyou?.
Ranjan:welcome.
They spend times.
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In hall 4days after
Family spending time.
Vihaan:(arrive supporting his recover brother) belate good morning family.
Family get shock to see vivaan forehead bandage start asking
Vivaan:(normally) family Maine Jo brainclot detectnews bataya tha b4, koi aur vivaan ka nahi aapsabke vivaan ka tha, 4days pehle apne treatment k liye gaya tha,
Family :(getshock and sad, remember fb) kya?
Vivaan:(hold ears) sorry only aaplog ki happiness se apni strength increase karne k liye,hide kiya, plz forgive me.
Family:(smile)it's ok
Vivaan:(smile a bit)ek request, Didi's jijus madhu Aur gunjan pata nahi hona dijiye.let them enjoy this phase.
Family: okay.
Vihaan:(smile a bit) I am sorry to,(complain) uniquegoon bhai ki types warn kardiya mujhe.
Vivaan:(clear his throat)
Jeevika: kya bola.
Vihaan:(madeface) cockroach k box main lock karunga if tumhara mouth unlock hua toh.
Jeevika:(normally) very bad vivaan.
Vivaan:(smile a bit) sorry and thank-you, mere liye tu rehgaya without planing leaving work and family & madhu.
Vihaan:(warn him) aapne aisa again kaha toh crying babies hurt person k 7 lock karunga.
Maanvi:(normally) family ko double feeling kyun dere ho, quite vihaan
Vivaan-vihaan: (went to meet siblings and lps)
Family felt bad for not understanding his problem
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Back to babyroom!
Ranjan-maanak gunjan madhu watching comedy show.
Vivaan-vihaan:(arrives happily) surprise.
Ranjan-maanak gunjan madhu:(getshock) what happened?vivaan.
Vihaan:(make story) vivaanbhai friend k liye medicine lane jaare the badboys k bcoz chota accident hogaya, haina.
Ranjan-maanak: (feltbad)
VivAan:(smile a bit)haan. But main theek hun, aaplog kaise ho.?elder babies kaiise
Ranjan-maanak:we are fine and they are fine.
Vivaan-vihaan :(felt nice to their lps and sis) how are u and babies.
Vaderasisters: fine:(smile)
Vivaan-vihaan:(smiles) good then.
Ronak-ranvir: tumhara friend kaisa hai?
Vivaan:(smile a bit) okay hai aur family k paas reach hua hoga.
Ranjan-maanak: nice to know.
Foursome hear babys heart beat.
Vihaan:(get up and tells) vivaan bhai, chaliye rest ke liye. Nervousness aur accident k bcoz rest nahi hua.
Vivaan:(smile a bit) right hai tu, trio ke siblings se milke rest karunga:(take wife and went)
Trio couple felt nice.
Ranjan-maanak: what a caring he is.
Vihaan:(tries to listen their baby heartbeat bydropler)
Madhu:(fake happily) time lagega kaise bhulgaye.
Vihaan:(smile a bit) oh yes.
Trio couples spend times.
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In guestroom! Vigun tobebabies 15week begin after
Vigun hearing their tobebabies heartbeat happily.
Kasak: vivaan next time gunjan ko saath rakho anywhere, bola nahi usne but tumhe miss kar rahi thi:(smiles)
Gunjan:(smile a bit)
Vivaan:(felt nice looking wife)I know bcoz same here.
Gunjan:(felt nice, get shy) rest nahi karna kya?
Vivaan:(smile a bit) I will but later.
Gunjan:(smile a bit) later nahi now aur jao.
Vivaan:(tease her) secrets reveal hore isliye bhagari ho mujhe.?
Gunjan:(smile a bit) aisa nahi hai, tum tired ho hurt ho isliye.
Kasak: gunjan is right.
Gunjan:thanks(take him from their)
Nimrit:(comes after meeting Ranjan-maanak) are OK?
Kasak:(smile a bit)yes.
Nimrit: good then.(check her health)
Kasak:(stay normal)
Nimrit: perfect ho teeno.
Kasak:(felt nice) good.
Nimrit: be positive like this OK.
Kasak:(smile a bit) okay
Nimrit:(smile a bit)
They spend times.
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Back to hall.after lunch
Family spending time without ranjan maanak vigun madhu kasak nimrit.
Jeevika:(is guilty bcoz of her record pOf not knowing anything relate to dearones)
Viren:(notice)what happened?
Jeevika:(normally) apne gkless rehnewale record se guilty hun. In children's need
Virman:(smile a bit) don't be guilty plz, aapki aur hum sabki blessings sab OK hai.
Jeevika:(smile a bit) haan.agar hamara vihaan saath nahi rukta toh hamara vivaan alone suffer hota tha.how nice of him.
Viren: agree
Maanvi:(smile a bit) stop praising spoil hoga.
Virat:(smile a bit)
Virika: praise capable hai isliye .
Virika-virman mother: bahot achche hai saare bhai
Virika-virman: (smile a bit) thank-you.
Virika-virman mother: welcome.
Virat: daughters bhi.:(smiles)
Virika-virman mother: haan sahi hai.
Vaderasisters ranjan-maanak join them!
Maanvi: dono bhai kahan rehgaya.
Gunjan: vihaan, vivaan se rest kar raha hai.rukhke
Madhu: aap aur vihaan boring work Karane k behen aur bhai ho.(smile a bit)
Gunjan:(smile a bit) important work karate hum.
VivAan vihaan arrives
Madhu:(smiles a bit felt like throwup)
They spend times.
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In backyard
Madhu comes crying angrily bcoz she unable eat nowdays
Vigun vihaan :(arrives and join her) kya hua why r u crying.
Madhu:(complain) baby revenge kiska(looking lp) lera without my mistake. Pata nahi while entry kya hoga mera
Gunjan:(smile a bit) little haina little food enough hota hoga,don't worry kuch time main complete eating karega ya karegi.
Vivaan-vihaan: (smile a bit)she is right.
Madhu:(wipe tears) I am sorry vivAnjijubhai ,family aur gunjan di k saath rehne diya . Main outdoorhouse chale jaati hun, yeh sab handle nahi hora aur waste tension hogi: (remembering lpword)pata nahi kyun hui recover.
Vihaan:(felt on his blaming)
Gunjan: madhu
Vivaan:(stop lp) madhu, full family k saath rehna achcha hai mere liye, koi ek missing hoga toh mera office lock rAhega na.
Madhu:(wipe tears smile a bit) childhood main laughing excuse karte dekha hai, adultage main first time dekhri hun
Vivaan:(smile a bit) 5kids aare toh change hona hoga
Gunjan:(take her for her rest)
Vihaan is lost in thought.
Vivaan:(notice him) kya hua?
Vihaan:(lies) kuch nahi.
Vivaan:(ask) sure?
Vihaan:(smiles)
They went from their side.
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In evening after dinner
In maanak room, their tobebaby 30week begin after
Maansi:(withcare) aapdono, badboys se alert raho, after joining plz.
Ronak:(smile a bit) okay my wife, you don't worry
Maansi:(felt nice) thanks.
Ronak:(smile a bit) welcome , by the way few weeks rehgaye hain.
Maansi:(smile a bit) haan,then koi bhi din admit hona hai, baby k saath return hona hai.
Ronak:(smile a bit) by chance dono couple k babies agaye toh family , happyiest new badepapa aur new chachu, new mamus ko kya samjhenge along hospitalstaff,godknows
Maansi:(smile a bit) dekhne k baad pata chalega.
Ronak:(smile a bit) right saying, I hope main perfect father hosakun.
Maansi:(smile a bit) mujhe full believe hai aap perfect father hoge.
Ronak: tum bhi perfect mother hogi.:(smile a bit)
Maansi:(felt nice) haan but not more then u.
Ronak: baby ko annedo pata chalega.
Maansi:(smiles) right ho aap.
Ronak:(smiles) don't think much and watch happydream.
Maansi:(smile a bit) you to.
Ronak: exactly mere saath happy dream dekho my wife.
Maansi: (smile a bit) okay.
Ronak:(smiles) good.
Maansi:(smile a bit) thanks.
Ronak:(smiles) welcome lets rest.
Maansi: okay.
They take rest
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In ranjan room! Their tobebaby 30thweek begin b4.
Jaanvi:(smile a bit) I wish first yeh stage completion ho madhu ka. Tired hoke emotional hogayi
Ranvir:(smile a bit) don't worry.
Jaanvi:okay fine.(ask)Anyways meri name choice achchi toh haina.
Ranvir:(smile a bit) obviously achcha, main itne best name nahi think karsakta tha.
Jaanvi:(smiles) ek Hi baat hai koi bhi soche.
Ranvir:(smile a bit) I am sure Jo name hamare baby ko milega woh bhi same best hoga.
Jaanvi:(smiles) right saying.
Ranvir:(smiles) I wish hint milta.
Jaanvi:(smiles) hum thodi hint diye Jo hint milega.
Ranvir:(smiles) nice logic.
Jaanvi:(smiles) only baby arrival par pata chalega.
Ranvir:(request to baby)superbaby ajao na fast-fast.
Jaanvi:(smiles) thoda wait karenge.
Ranvir:(smile a bit) haan.
Jaanvi:(getsad)
Ranvir: kya hua?
Jaanvi:(normally) I am sorry I will miss u after your joining.:(getemotional)
Ranvir:(smile abit and wipe her tears) sorry bolne ki kya baat hai, main bhi toh miss karunga tumhe aur baby ko.
Jaanvi:(smile a bit) lets rest.
Ranvir:(smile) okay.
They take rest.
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In vigun room!
Gunjan getemotional infront of him and tells how she feels and ask about accident
Vivaan:(smile a bit) dont cry, main tumhare aur sabke best wishes k bcoz theek hun.agar pehle boldeta toh mera friend alone rehjata tha,uski family aur wife types yahan sab aur tum tense hote the small incident k liye, let it be next time aisa nahi hoga.
Gunjan:(ask) sudden advicess & confession karne ki kya need thi tumhe mujhse?.family k infront.
Vivaan:(smile a bit) friend+wife ho, tumse confession aur tumhe advice nahi karunga toh kisse karunga?
Gunjan:(smiles)tobetwins k tobedad hoke aisa karte hain.? Papa chachu aur jijus ko dekho.fight ho ya debate alone main karte wife k saath
Vivaan:(smile a bit) ok,I love you,
Gunjan:(smile a bit) I love you 2,
Vivaan:(felt nice) anyways madhu pe angry kyun hori thi.
Gunjan:(normally) usne wrong baat ki isliye, tumlog the phir bhi ask kar rahe ho.
Vivaan:(smile a bit) sab uski condition ka symptom hai easy Lena chahiye humko.
Gunjan:(smile a bit) your right I will be calm with her.
Vivaan:(smiles) good.
Gunjan:(smiles)next time drive carefully.
Vivaan:(smile a bit) okay.
Gunjan:(smiles) don't forget.
Vivaan:emergency thi isliye hua accident, next time nahi hoga I promise.
Gunjan:(smiles) okay then.
Vivaan:(ask) ek baat bolo mujhe request karke let it be kiya, baby boy ko kya karoge?
Gunjan:(smile a bit)no idea.
Vivaan:(smiles) lets rest.
They take rest.
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In vibala room! 7week begin b4
Madhu comeback after throwup
Vihaan:(ask) are u OK?
Madhu:(fake happily) haan.
Vihaan:(in mind) I promise you madhu, tumhare liye change lp ayega Jo tumhe aur baby ko sadness nahi happiness dega,in every situations.
Madhu:(in mind) thankgod gunjan di vivaan jijubhai ko doubt nahi along their vihaan.
Vihaan:(ask) hospital chalke symptoms control karne ki medicine ask Karen kya?
Madhu:(fake happily) no.automatic OK hoga.
Vihaan:(smiles)okay fine, if needed boldo hum challenge ok.
Madhu:(fakehappily) okay fine, rest karlo tumnebhi comfortable rest nahi kiya hoga.
Vihaan:(felt nice) right saying. Kuch bhi chahiye toh bolo midnight main
Madhu:(fake happily) okay.
VihAan:(felt nice ask) first stage completion k liye, kya gift chahiye tumhe.?
Madhu:(remind him) kuch weeks haina.
Vihaan:(smile a bit) options sochlo tabhi bolra tha.
Madhu:(smile a bit) okay fine.
Vihaan: great.
Madhu:(tells) lets rest.
Vihaan:(smiles) rightsaying.
Madhu:(in mind) again 2 choice kyun dere ho? New start karun again hurt hone, ya alone rahun again nahi hurt hone, nahi samajhara Mere.
They take rest.









































































Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY NYC UPDATE.
FEEL GOOD TO SEE VIVAAN ALRIGHT.
FINALLY BOTH BROTHERS CAME BACK AND ONLY TOLD ABOUT VIVAAN PROBLEM TO FAMILY.
EVERYONE IS HAPPY TO SEE VIVAAN.
LOVES VIGUN LOVELY MOMENTS.
ALL COUPLES SCENES R SO CUTE.
SOMETHING WRONG IN IS MADHU MIND.
HOPE SOON SHE WILL ACCEPT VIHAAN FROM HEART.
NOW UPDATE NEXT PART SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.😊😊😊

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11 sepPromo
In hall
Family and guest gather to celebrate anniversary and babyshower.
Madhu come in bridalatire thinking jeemaan gave her.
Family get happy and confuse
Vivaan:bride ka groom kahan hai?
Vihaan :(comes on knees by swinging in groom dress holding flowermala) I am infinty sorry for the past, plz give me chance to love u both protect u both from harm.
Family felt nice.
Madhu:(speechless)

Vo- will madhu agree to marry vihaan?
Edited by jeemanfan123 - 10 years ago

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