~Pyar mein twist~ (Link to thread two added) - Page 21

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Awsme update
Loved it

Poor rd trying so hard to get close to sanyu
Bt she's broken
Her trust was badly broken



Valentine week

Omg rd proposed sanyu
Lgta h rd ko ek r slap padane wala h



Cnt wait
Update soon


Love u
Keep smiling

Thank you
😆
Lets c

Originally posted by: gargpurvi85

A cliff hanger again??😭

Don't dare telling that this was a dream again..😡I'll find u n kill u if that happens😡😆

Anyways.. About the update..

I just have one word in my mind to describe it - The chap was FAB!👏👏

Luvly going yaar.. Ind vs Aus ka dukh bhula diya..😉

do keep updating..

Update next Asap.

Thank you So much
😆 It isnt a dream 🤣

Originally posted by: priya_31

yeh kaisa twist hai...

last mein curious kar diya :D

update soon..

want to know sanyu's answer

awesome update

😆
Thanks

Originally posted by: shalbi

ahhh.. How romatic but I m dreading about her reply, which as per her previous behaviour is going to be a big NO for sure..

Continue soon

Thank you
😆

Originally posted by: shreeyoshree

it was beautifull as always di
just loved it
and i dont have problem with the short part but the cliffys...
argh...
really in cliffys ne meri din ka chain le liya hai rat ki ninde udda di h...
kya karu my pagal dil only thinks in free time is AGE KYA HOGA???????
really loved it

keep smiling
Be healthy
and aise hi update karte rahio...
love u and offcource PYAAR MAIN TWIST...

Thank you So much
😆 Hahaha .. Just wait & watch abhi isse bhi badi cliffies padi h

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi

hey tamanna u r making everyone crazy by Ur updates. awesome amazing splendid superb mind blowing update dear. what a unbelievable piece of writing by u. dis story is going to create history in dis forum...do update soon. eagerly waiting to c whats d answer of sanyu

Thank you So much
😆Kis cheez ka record?? Cliffies ka ya slaps ka?? 🤣

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

<font size="4">awesome update an thnks for pm👍🏼</font>

Thanks

Originally posted by: Rocking_Angel

goSh awhsmmy suprbb cutooo
amgnn updt..
loved ittt..
awww rd iz sho cuteee..
sanyuz ans oppsss.
egrly waitn fo da nxxt prtt

Thank you So much
😆

Ahan .. Second update by me in one day .. Seems unbelivable right??
but u have to belive it 😆
Coz the update is here itself ,and quite longer than usual updates of this story .. So comment big big


~Chapter 8~


R- Sanyukta jab se tum meri lyf mein ayi ho,i am felling like i am complete,jab tum nhi thi to aisa lgta tha k kuch khali sa tha,par ab lagta h k bs sab pura hogya tumhare ane se,1st day jb maine tumhein pehli bar dekha tha tab mere dil ne mujhe kha k SHE IS THE ONE FOR ME bohat bar koshish kikhne ki par keh na paya,sahi time ki wait kar rha tha,par lagta hai k aj sahi time agaya h.. Sanyukta i really really love you.. will u be my best friend,girlfriend,wife,lyf partner for my whole lyf.. will u??Every one was waiting for Sanyukta's reply

Sanyukta's eyes beemed with tears .. Ofcourse she knew that randhir likes her,but she hadnt expected his proposal so soon
She did said nothing,she just rushed towards her room,

V- kausto,lets talk to her

R- No vidushi,let her alone for sometime,she will be fine

K- but ..

Randhir cut off her

R- Just give her sometime,i am sure she will be alright

P- Randhir is right,let her alone for sometime

J- chalo toh hum log chalte hai,subh classes k liye bhi jana hai

And they left .. Randhir went inside his room,after sometime,when everyone slept,randhir sneeked in sanyukta's room through balcony and saw her shedding tears closing her eyes

Randhir went near her and wiped her tears gently .. Sanyukta was about to say somethinh,but randhir kept his finger on her lips to make her quite

R- Can i speak first?

Sanyukta noded,so he continued

R- You know what sanyukta,i really loves you .. But i didnt mean to hurt you .. I didnt want to hurt you .. We can be friends right?

S- No .. Mere koi friends nahi hai
She said in hicups

R- Common tell me everything .. My mom says k problems share karne se kam hoti hai

Randhir hugged her .. She could feel randhir's care in his words,so she told him everything from begining to end

R- sanyukta,jo kuch bhi huya .. It was bad,it shouldnt have happened,but you cant stop your life right?? Kanika always wanted to see you smiling,aur agar uski soul tumhein aise dekh rahi hogi toh use kaisa lag raha hoga?? So now stop crying and smile

Randhir wiped her tears with his thumbs

S- I am fine now .. Tum jao

R- No .. Smile first

she smiled

S- ab toh jao

R- We are friends na?? I promise that i will always be there when you will need someone to stand by you .. My feelings will never come in our friendship .. I cant take place of kanika,but i will always be there when you need me

S- Hmm .. Ok .. Friends

Randhir hugged her .. Sanyukta hugged for a second and then broke the hug

S- Ab jao na,i need to sleep

R- Ok then see you in class SANYU

S- by .. See you

Sanyukta was smilling,which means that she is ok no .. Randhir went back to his flat smilling and thinking about sanyukta



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This was soo sweet
Randhir was so concerned about sanyu
Loved it
They are friends now
Waiting to see how the story progresses