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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey dear i want to read ur other ffs too can u plz provide me d link???

if u.r not busy kindly ans my pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Will try to res the first two spots of PG. 15 :) Update is ready :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: IPK007

Will try to res the first two spots of PG. 15 :) Update is ready :)



Cool!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: IPK007

Will try to res the first two spots of PG. 15 :) Update is ready :)


Waiting eagerly Jen... See you on the other side. (Hopefully) 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sman

dhaK dhak ..dhak dhak ;-)


Same here Shaila... 😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I can write about only a handful of places in India and not have to rely solely upon my imagination. And Google:P I've already written about Bombay, Pune and Landour...and now I'm excited to write about Allahabad (Or Prayag as it was once called) I don't claim to be intimately acquainted with it but yes, there are tons of memories that I'm looking forward to harvest. If the coming chapters start seeming more like a nostalgia-fest or a wannabe writer's self indulgences, you are welcome to intervene at any time 😉


Hope you enjoy the next phase of this story,

Love,

Jen.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ha! I was close Jen... I had predicted Lukhnow.

Triveni Sangam or Prayag will be an interesting locale for the upcoming chapters, can't wait to read more.

About the update... Geez! that last part was simply cruel!!! Men! 😡 How could he??? 😡 Really, he freaking "LOVED" Lavanya?!?!?!? 😡 Now that's blatant blasphemy!!!!

Lekin, phir kya hua??

P.S. Jenny, I know you just updated & I really have no business asking you for another update now, but Jen could you please show us some mercy by posting the next part, however short it might be, soon. Need to eradicate from my mind those horrendous words from my memory ASAP.
Edited by pixiegirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lavernya the most self person😡...waste of talking about her...i have to accept that people in this world are selfish...
so its arnav kushi met at the parking lot, love their conversation arnav helplessness and kushi pain...they have to accept the fact that people take advantage of their kindness , thank god arnav realized...

bravo kushi atleast u talked now i guess its the impact of u r raizada😳 ,it happens air wobhi Hindhi me Bola that...

sujatha i am wondering is kushi her daughter, her first born,the one she gave birth, and experience the mother hood...i am getting doubts here, may be Iam wrong, they have lot of time to think ,but they just ignore it...thank god its kushi talked frankly not her sister...

jen in the end my hear just skipped year, but it has to happen...

thanks for the lovely chapter , and update jen...

cheers...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Jenny, at last the most dreaded update is here. The update was so emotional that I am still trying to come to terms with what happened and I am hoping words come out of me which could exactly tell you what I am feeling now.

Khushi wanted to know the other side of the story, the story of Arnav and Lavanya, rather like La's take on the marriage, but asking Manya now about it when her sister just attempted to end her life wrong move and expecting an answer which would free of whatever guilt she has, extremely wrong move. But Khushi did it anyway, she went to Manya, asked her, got hurt further, drowned more in the guilt of being a marriage breaker and while heading out meets Arnav.

Did Arnav understand the depth of her pain here?? I really don't know if he did. But this incident has almost pushed Khushi to the brink of going away from everything.

Sometimes its good to take the bull by the horns instead of beating around the bush. As much as one feels it is cruel of Arnav to take the divorce papers to the hospital, I for one felt it was the right thing to do. The sooner Looney signs the papers the better it is for all of them connected to her and this marriage. And as Arnav said it is better Manya stops blaming Khushi and starts concentrating on her sister instead.

What is Neville seeing in La that he is getting attracted to her?

Today for once I am so glad that Khushi stood up and spoke to her mother what she felt. When will Sujatha understand that Khushi is a human too and as any human, even Khushi is allowed to make decisions, allowed to make mistakes and be human instead of a human angel who would never make mistakes.

Jenny, what is happening in Arnav's apartment??

Why is Arnav hugging Lavanya and saying that there were times when he loved her?
Was it not Arnav who once told Khushi when Khushi specifically asked him if he ever loved La, that marriage with Lavanya was always a compromise right from beginning to end.

Jen I am quoting Arnav's words from chapter 29.

Her question took a while piercing through the gray fog of pain that flooded his brain, "You were together for almost three years before that. As husband and wife. Enough time for something that started off as compromise to evolve into something else...to turn into...".

Arnav's eyes flickered imperceptibly. Just for a moment before his mind clamped upon the undesired memories that threatened to stir in their frozen graves. He blinked and that fleeting expression vanished completely.


He met Khushi's eyes and surveyed their turbulence. He fathomed a naked need for reassurance in their murky depths.

"Well, it didn't", he answered shortly, his demeanour clearly indicating his distaste for discussing his shared past with Lavanya.


"It never turned into something else", he elaborated on his statement after a pause, "It started off as a compromise and it remained just that. Till the very end. And I really don't understand", he continued coldly, "the necessity of asking me this question right now".

Then what is happening in his apartment now?

Also can Looney be any more shameless then she already is, she is literally begging him for one more chance even after all this.

I hope Arnav better has an explanation to whatever he said to Lavanya.

Now more than eager for the time leap. I just want Khushi to go away from everything and if Arnav is worthy of her love, then let him win her back.

PS: Where is this Jason guy?? Is he dead or alive?
Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago

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