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Posted: 10 years ago
i am confused!
why were the words in italics? did khushi imagine all the conversation? or is it because u wanted to highlight that part... i am assuming it to be the later...
i am glad khushi talked to her mother...she let it all out...! phew!
i hope the leap is small... ;)

ps- where is jason? or is it not important..? :p
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally...she signed them...!
(its funny how more than wanting arhi romantic moments, we all were subconsciously waiting for the moment when lavanya would finally sign the divorce papers :p)
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Posted: 10 years ago
i knew it that khushi heard them... poor khushi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for te teaser
Vous nous tenez en haleine
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Posted: 10 years ago
Having just read this latest update still deeply affected by the sad reality portrayed in the brilliant documentary, India's Daughter's ( a film that will haunt me for a long long time), I can only feel a deep sadness at Khushi's parents' attitudes.

Unfair though it might seem, I am unable to see their responses outside of the framework of patriarchy that so many in India subscribe to. I know it is a rather unfair extrapolation and the one has little to do with the other, but I can't help making that link however tenuous and implausible it might be.

As for Khushi, she really needs to get away from it and find her resolution.

Arnav has suffered in the marriage and his relationship with Lavanya and come out of it, it is all clear to to him. But Khushi needs the space, a private space, where she can find out for herself if she can trust her love for him enough to place her trust in him.

I hope Lavanya grasps the hand of friendship that has been extended towards her and finds her healing in that friendship.



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Posted: 10 years ago
Jenny

You are a gifted writer and I love this story sofar. Although I have to confess I have only skimmed through last few chapters. I can't bring myself to read them thoroughly. It's like watching the terrace scene and aftermath... I have never watched a re run of the terrace scene or next few episodes...

Hope the dark phase of the story is nearing it's end and that we will get some lighter chapters soon.
Looking forward to the story unfold further...
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Posted: 10 years ago
please not now! come on! why now? please don't let khushi hate herself
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jenny hello... 😳

I am Lakshmi...from Kerala...😳
I joined here in 2012 towards the end of our show but became active only towards the end of my other favourite show...i read ur story A LATE SPRING few months ago, when I didn't even know what FF or SS or OS was...but ur ALS made me read the other stories...but ALS is my all time favourite...oh no I mean I think I read saffron fields first n when I came to know that it was ongoing I just clicked on the links whichever I saw n landed straight to your index...tadaaa... 😳

But I have a very biased love for ALS...coz that's my all time favourite...i think I have already said that... 😆 I just love it... Arnav n Khushi and Brandon...their childhood n the tragedy...i cried when I read Khushi struggling...i cried and cried n cried n... 😭 such a beautiful story...unconditional love from Arnav...just perfect...i have even imagined about making this story into a movie with barun n sanaya as main leads obviously...if I have that much money with me...not that I have that much money...but yeah...i know I am like going a bit overboard...but kya karein...ALS is one of the beautiful story I have ever read Jenny I swear... coz of ur brrrulllianttt writing and also my attachment to Arshi...

I know this thread is for saffron fields...sorry 😳
Saffron fields is somewhat very matured kind of a story right from the beginning I guess...the complexities of relationships...the societal norms n pressures...ohhh god its really annoying...and I am not a deep thinker or anything n I didn't feel anything when Navin and sujata didn't support Khushi when manya bad mouthed khush...but khushi's dialogue to her amma...it was a power packed dialogue n I found myself teary eyed... 😭 that's when I felt the feelings of Khushi n I just loved her more (if that was even possible...) ❤️ 😆

And that one dialogue had the power to force me type this comment with the backdrop of self centred Lavanya n idiotic manya and khushi's lovely lovely ophthalmologist Dr. ASR... 😆 and I couldn't stop myself from commenting here on this forum coz I never had the guts to do so...earlier... don't know why...maybe coz I am scared... 🤢


By this time jenny I have read some of the intelligent pieces here in this forum...but ur name uh huh I never forget...sometimes I forget the names of writers if u ask me (not all) but A LATE SPRING, JUST JENNY and IPK007...nope I will never forget...maybe SAFFRON FIELDS too...u r a great writer jenny...u really are...do I sound like Hermione Granger???? 😆 keep writing jenny...u r one blessed writer...thooo thooo thooo...kisi Ki nazar na lage...*kaala teeka on u* 😉

Thanks for doing this wonderful job dear...


Now please Khushi is a poor soul...don't make it complicated...jenny...i know u will make it...that's the way the story needs to be...but still she is already shattered...poor thing and this love thingy for Lavanya...I don't want that but huhhh...yes jaisi aap Ki ichcha...i hope...towards the end everything would be perfect...with Arnav n Khushi together forever n ever...

I am a biggg fan of arshi by the way...even now I watch it in my regional language n Tamil n Hindi and I cherish them even more...thanks for writing all these stories dear...and to all writers in this forum...this makes me love arshi even more... ❤️

Thanks jenny... 🤗 for u


Love Lakshmi...❤️
PS- I couldn't read 'a bride with a doll'
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Posted: 10 years ago
😭finally
arnav and lavanya will be seprated,

but what about khushi...
she was no whereto be seen????????????????

😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maybe its me being cynical, but I find it hard to believe that the Lavanya chapter is over. Just an eavesdropped conversation comprising her and Arnav has caused deep grief for Khushi; so it is only natural to expect some more trouble in the future.


Much time has been spent cogitating over how Khushi's relationship with Arnav is 'wrong'. From the perspective of Khushi's parents, it is. But as I was thinking about it, another thought popped in my mind. It isn't of the same seriousness as that of Arnav and Khushi, but in case things take a turn towards the yearned for Anita, what will be the stance of the elder Guptas? Will they see their younger daughter's happiness, or still consider Aman as the son in law they could have had through their elder daughter? Would be an interesting situation...

Excited for the Allahabad chapter of SF

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