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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#951

Just caught up with this beautiful piecec of ur work nd read it in one go...

While ready it it seems like am in rajasthan itself..the way u written every minute detail...its truely amazed me...am in awe with the way u describe it.. just wow...loved it👏👏

Dnt knw how to put it in words...how beautifully u pen down this beautiful jouney of arshi...

Thier confessed brought tears in my eyez..so hearttouching..love the way u potrayed thier emotions..

Two lonely souls...who never thought to get love or to b loved finally found thier soul met..who finally got solace in eachother embrace...

khushi who fills arnav's lonely life with lots of color..who understand the depth his passion for painting..who understand him even arnav voicing it out...became his life and wife😃

Nd arnav who also support his muse his happiness to fullfill her dream..nd happily ever after..

Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi, Kismat Pe Aaye Naa Yakeen
Utar Aayi jheel Mein, Jaise Chaand Utar Ta Hai
Kabhi Haule Haule Dheere Se
Gun Guni Dhoop Ki Tarah Se Tarango Mein Tum
Chhoo Ke Mujhe Guzari Ho Yuh
Dekhu Tumhe Ya Main Sunoo, Tum Ho Sukoon
Tum Ho Junoon..., Kyun Pehre Raat Aayi Tum

Lovely ending with arshi forever..loved it😊

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ipkndlover75

@ipkndlover75

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#952

This has certainly been a different story... Mainly Arnavs character who's always been rich and mostly a business man and a control freak...over this artistic, struggling Arnav and of course creative Khushi too...but mostly the travelogue ...as I am a travel freak...it was mesmerizing and enchanting to read about those beautiful, wonderful places in India...

Thanks for a wonderful read Mints!!!!...hope u come with something again despite our note...

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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#953

OMG i read the whole story today and man i'm just speechless. You are such a wonderful writer.

Great Job 👏

Please write more 😳

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Maria Adam

@whatasurpise

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#954

Enjoyed reading this where Arnav is prorated in a different character to what he normally is.

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mothiaai

@mothiaai

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#955

Omg...this was so magical. ...I was completely transfixed...N completely on d story...it has a certain charm...all ur writings do...it's just awesome to see how u create magic with words
do write more

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varna23

@varna23

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#956

I read this for the first time and I just loved your journey.Arnav and Khsuhi here are very different more calm and composed but meant for each other.

The experience with colours was overwhelming

Regards,

Varna

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shreya

@Willy_Wonka.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#957

This is such beautiful read! I loved the first chapter... your words have magic dear! I left enchanted! ❤️

BOOKMARKED!

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coderlady

@coderlady

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#958

beautiful and sweet story. Arnav as an artist was nice to see.

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#959

Another masterpiece. I have read many stories where Arnav is not the regular business tycoon and they are awesome but honestly i must say Arnav as an artist is the ultimate one . To see the whole world through a painter's eye's is totally different.
I should say Rajsthan Govt should pay you hefty amount for the tourism advertizement 👏
The whole journey was beautiful and many time i feel like traveling to same place at that moment 😃
Thank fully Arnav's parent got their brain back and reconcile with their precious son and i am glad that Arnav took this step too. Parents need to leave their child from these doctor or engineer pressure and see other occupation as an option too.
And the epilogue was just perfect . A tiny view of their life so happy n so content.
Hope you come back soon with another journey ..