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You are an awesome writter yaar... You have a way wid words which carves each emotion of yours perfectly.. I salute you writers, which inspires me to pen down my own stories.. And, i an doing exactly that.. I am writing a story myself, but in the maaneet forum.. Its a diff. kind of story, which i would lyk u to read as well... I hav send to buddy request, so that if i could, i would send u pm... Since my exams are going on, i will start it after 17.. I may be not a very gud writer, but i am eager to share my story wid all u guys and know the response of specially those whose works i adore, lyk u.. So pls pls pls, do tell me my about my weaknesses and strengths in my writing so that i can improve it further... And yes, u r the first one to know the title of the story which is--- "ISHQ... REDIFINED." How is it???

Now I understood why my friends were on back of me to read this SS , while I was reading it I felt like I was reading a beautiful poem and I can some how relate myself to Arnav and Khushi , Yes in India education has always been on the top priority and all others were considered as distraction but I think things have started to change. I am a mother of 2 and I know how kids show interest in different things. What I believe is every person is talented and unique.

A beautiful story, it was indeed..😊 I read it in one go. The way u have described Arnav and Khushi's love for their respective passions.. I wonder that u r also that much passionate about art. It was really beautiful to see that each painting that u portrayed through Arnav's canvas, I could actually visualise that.. So hats off to u..

amazing story... fab story no wrds to explain ur writing skills... fab dear...

keep writing and pls pm me... whn u update new story...

i really love to read...

Feeling so so so good :)

sorry for late comment
finaly arahi r together at end and everything is ok between arnav nd his family
beautiful ending
thnx for pm

Minty,

I'm heer!

Part 1

Oh damn... Arnav's the odd one out... But I've got this thing for Artist's because they are gifted people.. True talent!

How well you describe... I find ot hard to express. Munnr, backwaters of Kerala and then alas Panchagni. I've been to all these places and lived in Alleppey for 3years, work related.
Omg I'm really enjoying this scenic take... This is awesome!

So, Khushi is the dancer, there? A hell lot interesting.

Part 2

So, my guess was right! You've a painter inside you. How gorgeous Minty, I loved the painting...its a masterpiece okay. Just dont ever stop painting.. Ever!

I really love this ArHi. Very unique, simple and real. Loved their banters about their interests. They are so cute.. I wanna cry.
Will she say yes for Rajasthan.. Omg I need to read the next part...

Brb

Part 3

Woman, now I know why your banners always looked the best beautiful. *take a bow* you are amazing.

Oh god! They are leaving for Rajasthan... Yay!
Loved the way you described the hostel life... Have lived in one till I turned 17 so...

I'm really looking forward to Rajasthan, and you know why 😉

While reading the first chapter, I came across one comment that you are an artist too.Is it?Are you a painter too?
You write stories so well, I can only imagine how your paintings might be. 😊
It is said that, Beauty lies in the eyes of beholder. 😊
Only an artist can put up this beautiful nature in a piece of paper filling it with varient colours.
Arnav converting his thoughts into canvas was really beautiful. 😊
The way he travelled from one place to another learning different things to put it up in the paper, also his egarness to meet the school children should not he not only wanted to learn but teach too.It is said that Knowledge broadens on sharing, same is here too.
Talking about the family, they are the biggest support a person can get.But, in case of Arnav, it's just opposite, his family never supported him and his dreams.He was always neglect.A person can become hopeless and broken due to such things but Arnav made it his courage to stand up and fulfill his dreams. Here, he comes up as a honest and optimistic person.
Liking this Arnav.
He stood rooted to the stop, I guess he found his muse.
I'm so excited to read the next chapter.
Will read it right away.
Well, do I need to say how much I loved the starting?
It was brilliant and full of dreams update and loved every bits of it.

I knew that it was Khushi who made Arnav stunned.The way Khushi was dancing, it seemed like a bird freely flying.Her dance and her beauty, you have described it so perfectly that I felt I too was present in that hall along with Arnav watching her swaying her body in the rhythm of the music.It felt so real and natural.
I knew that Arnav would make the painting of Khushi, and he didn't upset me.
Arnav's concern towards her was so geniune, from an artist to another artist.
Arnav and Khushi sitting together having tea and pakoras, talking to eachother in the silent surrounding, it seemed like a date.That too their first one.
The way you have described the place and it's existance.It's really beautiful.
Arnav's proposal to go to Rajasthan, I somewhere feel that she will accept it.
Well, let's see whats in store for us.
Your painting, it's beautiful and I wanna tell you to continue it.
Loved this one too.

beautiful end