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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#931

From the sand dunes of Rajasthan to the land of the long white clouds you write everything so well. I can liteally see and feel those places.

From the struggling days of Arnav to seeing him so successful, from Khushi wanting to pursue her dancing dreams to now herself being a professional... Inki success mai mujhe khushi hoti ha 😭

I liked the reason why Arnav's mother wanted to have a grand wedding. Der aaye, durust aaye 😃

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abby2181

@abby2181

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#932

I just stumbled upon this story and read it all in one go. It was a beautiful read. I loved the artistic theme of the plot. It is a story I would love to read again just to savour it.

I read that you wish to take a break from writing. Enjoy your hiatus. I know there will be many readers waiting to welcome you back to the forum when you next wish to share your work with us.

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Mystery Girl

@mysterygirl06

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#933

It was a nice experience reading this ss... It was so deep and gives a new way to look at the I... I love this ss. .. .

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#934

I loved this epilogue following reasons, the obvious being it's an epilogue to hues of happiness and it has Arshi happily ever after.

But for me the most important being the location And you carrying the them of travelogue till the very end. New Zealand is my dream location for sky diving and a real long vacation since I watched LOTR. So yeah you had me at the very beginning.

About the epilogue love the fact that you continued the travelogue theme with Arshi enjoying the place and it beauty with there own simering passion and live for each other and nature.

Loved, loved and loved the epilogue!!!

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#935

Beautiful ending.

Hope you will be back with a new story soon.

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#936

Wonderful Epilogue

Arnav - khushi have carved their life beautifully . They have achieved their goals in their respective fields . Life is perfect . They are exploring new things daily , their love is growing more with each passing day . Arnav - khushi & their love hameshaa 😉

I am in love with the epilogue , re-reading again 😃

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hema

@Itsflora

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#937

loved it.really.
I hope you can understand how much that I read it in a go leaving my xm study which is in 2 days & I'm gonna crazy tomorrow due to overload of study...
but still I'm gonna sleep tonight with a happy smile reading this peaceful happily ever after arshi piece...thxxx a ton for writing this.

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hiya

@coolhi1988

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#938

amazing beautiful epilogue..mints🤗
loved it..
just like d story epilogue was cute, sweet & creative...😳
loved hw arnav's family accepted khushi wholeheartedly...😳
arnav's mom arranged a marvellous wedding for arshi & khushi's family of swapnabhoomi attended it & enjoyed fully...😃
khushi achieving her dream of learning various dance forms across d world...😳
very well written...👏
hope u continue writing such lovely stories soon...😉
happy vacation😉
thnks 4 d pm..
sorry for late comment..