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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#221

awesome update..!!!!!!
love ur writing style..!!!!

will comment in detail later..!!!

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#222

Awesome update. Khushi and Arnav are adorable as painter and muse. And now that khushi and Arnav officially going to Rajasthan... can't wait for that journey to begin. How exciting !! 😳 Looking forward to the next update.

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#223

Awesome update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#224

very nice story... loved ur writing style ..

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#225

I love this song. It's on of my dad's favorite and he use to play it a lot and sing along, and that's how I remember it.

The update was beautiful, especially how you portrayed Khushi describing Arnav's painting as in reading his thoughts like an open book. And it seems to bee true to a ran a s well since he can read Khushi through her expression. No wonder they both have become others muse.

She wants to see world through his art and he through her eyes. Wow!

Now I wonder what Khushi will have to say of her own painting/s that Arnav made of her. I would like to read how she depicts, how Arnav perceives her. Like she said it's his art more than his words that she will see and believe in.

I'm happy that Khushi and other orphans at Swapnabhoomi were lucky to land in care of Mr. Vyas who took care of them as his own. The way he went the extra measure of doing a background check on Arnav was so fatherly.

These lines for Mr. Vyas and people like him who are rare to found...

"Kisika Dard mil sake to le udhar, Jina iska naam hai!!!"

P.S. I think I forgot to mention in my last comment but I really liked your painting, especially the way the bold color merged with those flowers. Well it's never late to appreciate good art, wh wether it's of words or of colors.

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Pdrover

@Pdrover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#226

What s beautiful update, felt like I was also looking at Arnav's painting
Khushi is lucky to have mr.vyas and rest in her life
Always loved this song

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#227

Wow... Beautiful update
I felt like am looking at Arnav's painting...
Mr vyas is such a nice man...

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kaprasin

@kaprasin

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#228

Wonderful update mints.. The words you described about children and their innocence without ego is absolutely true. I always think it would have been great if we just remained kids!! They both seem to be made for each other. Waiting for the journey to Rajasthan.

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#229

sorry for late comment dear
chapter 1
its mindblowing
i can understand arnav point
parents thought that we should become docter or something like engineers
arnav is enjoying his life but many time person r not able to choose his career due to family pressure
its strange thatarnav parents never call him in last months
and about siblings
its comman to do comparison between them
thnx for pm