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SPraba

@SPraba

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#241

I am left spell bound reading these 2 chapters Minty
How do u capture such little nuances and write them so nicely that I am left in awe
How well u have described about Khushi's passion for dance, the plight of orphans and how well Arnav has shown all this in his paintings
Now I cant wait for Arshi to leave to Rajasthan and see how well things work out for Arnav and his muse.
Thanks for the pm minty

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#242

Ok, Arnav has love at first sight 😉

I thought it was too soon for Khushi to say yes and I'm glad she didn't say yes right away.

Her folks at Orphanage seem to be nice people caring enough to let Khushi make her own decision at the same time ensuring her safety by doing Arnav's background check..

Loved Arnav's interaction with the children :)

Can't wait for Rajasthan with the Artist and his muse :)

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#243

Awesome.

Loved the update.

It's like a soulful piece of art.

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#244

Mints, another beautiful update from you.

So true that somewhere in the process of growing up we lose the childlike innocence in us and become immune to the beauty of life.

The soul connection between Arnav and Khushi is so beautiful, so pure just like the early morning sun rays which is so soothing or the wonderful rainbow which appears after a refreshing rain fall on a hot sunny day.

Swapabhoomi - the name itself suggests how many dreams are turned into reality here, how many children are given a chance to grow up and make their identity in this world.

Glad that Khushi will be accompanying Arnav as his muse on this wonderful journey of art and inspiration.

Now waiting to begun the artful journey along with the artists who are also the muses of each other.

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#245

Awesome update. . Beautifully written. .👏

Loved the way Arnav bared his heart to khushi. . He could tell her any reason but he didn't. . His honesty just warmed by heart..

Loved khushi for taking permission of Orphanage authorities.. They are her family and its just right to ask them.. And I could see how difficult it was for Mr. Vyas to allow her to go with a Arnav. . He is a stranger to them but they trusted khushi judgement.. Can't wait for their trip. .

Loved the update. .

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hiya

@coolhi1988

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#246

it is just beautiful...⭐️
loved d song so much...❤️
awesome update...😳
well written...👏

finally khushi's guardian agreed for khushi to accompany arnav to rajasthan...
wat an irony.. arnav khushi's muse... khushi arnav's muse... wow...
liked mr. vyas protectiveness towards his orphanage children... doing background check of arnav & asking him to stay at his friends place during his trip was a proof to it...
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...
sorry for late comment...

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#247

Mints, I'm loving this story as I've said already! But each new chapter reaffirms that😃

It's obvious that Khushi is definitely very interested in going on this journey with Arnav. But it shows how much she respects her elders and the people who raised her to defer to them for final approval even though she's an adult at this point. I'm glad they gave Khushi the permission to embark on this journey. I for one can't wait to get introduced to Jaipur and also to the blossoming relationship between the artist and his muse😛

Great job Mints! Can't wait for the next chapter!