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Previous : Chapter 15



Part 16:

Arnav looked at her and whispered "Di, Choti..."

"Sh... Chote... she will come, relax..." both the siblings turned to their back, hearing their grandmother saying

"This is all my fault. Chutki left the home because of me. I can never forgive myself. Oh... Chutki, mera bacha..." Nani cried her heart out

"Amma... what are you talking? How can you be the reason for Chutki leaving this house?" Ratna asked confusingly.

Aran, who is leaving from there, stood at his spot and turned to look at his MIL. He also looked at Arnav, Anjali and stepped down.

"What are you talking Ma Ji?" asked Aran, sitting beside Nani

"Yes, I was the reason for all this mess, because of me, Aman and Chutki left the house"

"Amma, can you tell us clearly?" Ratna is getting irritated with this indirect talk.

Nani looked at everyone and said "Yesterday night, I came out to drink the water, I saw Garima walking out. I couldn't understand where she was going that late. So I followed her outside. But what I heard there made me overwhelmed with happiness. I saw Chutki and Aman talking about Chutki's love towards Chote"

"WHATTT???" everyone shouted. All the four looked at each other.

"Yes, Chutki loves Chote, that's what I heard yesterday. After hearing this confession, I saw Garima shedding her silent tears. I took Garima to my room and confronted her. She said everything about Chutki's feelings about Chote. She is such a wonderful soul Ratna, if Chote can't marry her then he will be the unluckiest man in this world"

"That's okay, if you know that Choti loves Chote, then, what all this mess Nani? I mean, why did you propose marriage for Aman and Choti?" Anjali is confused and angry

"That is the mistake I did" with that Nani said what happened yesterday night

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When Khushi was being dragged by Arnav towards guest room, both Garima and Nani stood there in shock. They saw Aman trying to stop Arnav from doing any blunder. But as usual Arnav didn't listen to his words or Khushi's pleas. He locked Khushi in the guest room and dragged Aman with him. When Arnav is out of their sight, both Nani and Garima ran to the guest room. When they opened the door, they saw Khushi crying on her bed. Both rushed towards her and sat beside her

"Ammaaa..." Khushi cried her heart seeing her mother. She stopped before saying anything, seeing Nani there

"What happened Chutki?" Nani asked

"Nothing Nani Malkin, just had a nightmare" Khushi wiped her tears and said trying to smile

Nani's heart swelled with happiness seeing Khushi's love towards Chote. She knew, Chutki will never keep her Chote Malik in mistake

"Oh, okay. By the way, why did the door is locked? And why did Chote drag you here and locked?" Nani asked straight.

Khushi looked at Nani with wide eyed. Her heart started beating fast

"Nahi tho..." Khushi tried to say something

"We saw everything Chutki, don't try to sidetrack the topic and don't dare to support him now" Nani is serious now

"Then there is no discussion Nani Malkin" Khushi too serious.

Nani and Garima looked at her surprised.

"You both can go and take rest now"

"You can't say that to me Chutki, I'm your grandmother, you have to answer my questions. I know, that you know Chote don't like you to be rude at elders" Nani used her main weapon.

Sighing deeply Khushi said "Fine, I will say normally then. You and Amma can go from here"

"But not before you answer my questions. I swear on Chote"

Khushi jerked her head up and looked at Nani "You shouldn't have said that Nani Malkin" Khushi said with tears in her eyes. "You know that I don't like when something harm Chote Malik. You used Chote Malik. I can never forgive you for this Nani Malkin, I never expected this. Fine, Ask me what do you want to know?" Khushi started with pain in her voice, but ended with anger in her voice

"What has happened between you three? Why did Chote drag you here and locked you? And why aren't you saying Chote that you love him?"

This is really a big shock to Khushi. Khushi expected some other questions like why you fight with Chote and all. But this? She immediately looked at her mother with confusing eyes.

"Don't look at Garima like that. I forced her to say after hearing your confession of your love for Chote to Aman in the garden"

Khushi couldn't understand what to say. She sat silently thinking what to tell to Nani. Before she could say they heard Aman telling

"Choti in love with Arnav from long Nani. But she doesn't want to reveal this as she doesn't want to force Arnav" Aman is angry on Khushi

"Bhai..."

"Don't talk with me Khushi. I'm really angry at you. This is not the way to deal the things. You know about Arnav and his anger, didn't you see what has he said? Why are you making things difficult Khushi?" Aman is really angry on Khushi

"I can't do that. I can't push him for anything. He is my weakness" with that Khushi sat on her bed controlling her emotions

"If she can do that, she would have done that long back Aman beta. She loves him more than herself. She is ready to take any pain instead of forcing him. Please, don't force her. She already faced a lot in her life" Garima took her daughter's side.

"I'm not forcing her aunty. I'm asking her to clear the things with Arnav"

"I don't want to spoil my friendship with him. What if he doesn't feel the same about me? What if he sees me like his childhood friend? I don't want to take any risk in our relation. He is important to me. Whether he loves me or not, is not at all important. He is my Chote Malik that's all matters"

"But Khushi... what if he doesn't want you to go?"

"Of course he doesn't want me to go. Here that is not the issue you are saying. If he is happy being a friend of mine, then what's the need to tell him that I love him? I need him in my life, when I will get his support as a friend, then what the need to tell him about my bloody love for him?" Khushi is getting anxious

"Stop it you both. I know what to do," said Nani

The trio looked at her in question. "Let's make him confess his feelings"

"How Nani?" asked Aman

"Simple, I will propose marriage to you both. If he doesn't like your marriage, then he will stop that. If he doesn't have any problem then he won't say anything about this marriage and he will be happy for you both"

"Do you really think this will work Nani Malkin? No, it won't. You may not know your grandson well, but I know my Chote Malik well. He will kill both of us for this proposal. You can never guess how much this will hurt him, Nani Malkin. Don't do this. It won't work for sure"

"Oh come on Khushi, what's there to try? If he doesn't like this marriage, we will catch him red handed"

"What if he likes this relation? What if he won't have any problem with our marriage? What will we do?" Khushi asked straightly.

"NO way... he likes you, I know, he told me that. He said he doesn't want to lose you. He said that he wants you here, with us. He said he can't lose you" Aman tried his best to make Khushi agree with this plan

"Let me clear one thing for you all, if Chote Malik wants me here, he knew, with his one word I will stay. If he wants that, then he will come to me and orders me same like before. I am not in this. And I don't want to hurt Chote Malik. And Aman sab don't you think after his confession to you, it will hurt him more? Don't you think he may feel that you are betraying him?" Khushi is stubborn and clear

"Why are you behaving this stubborn Chutki? We are doing all these for you and Chote. Why can't you understand this?"

"If you are doing this for Chote Malik's happiness, then I will ready to give my life Nani Malkin. But whatever you are planning will hurt Chote Malik to the extent. Don't expect him to behave normally after hearing this. Don't expect him to be cool after hearing this so called marriage proposal. I know, how bad he will get hurt by this. I know him well, he can't take this news. Please Nani Malkin, I beg you, don't do this to him, please..." Khushi sat on her knees folding her hands before Nani. "Please Nani Malkin, he can't take this. Please don't force him for anything. We can't"

Nani, Aman and Garima looked at Khushi with tears in their eyes. Garima closed her eyes, feeling her daughter's pain. But both Nani and Aman stood there seeing the immense pure love. They both looked at each other with determination in their eyes to give this pure soul what she deserves.

"As his grandmother, I know what to do and what not. I know how he reacts to what. I know him well"

"NO, YOU DON'T KNOW HIM" shouted frustrated Khushi.

"Aman, you along with Chutki are doing this. And Garima, you too are a part in this. I don't want anything to go out of the plan"

"I'm not doing this. I am not going to hurt Chote Malik" with that Khushi started leaving the room, but stood rooted in her place hearing Nani's words

"I swear on Chote again. If you don't do this I swear on Chote..." Nani doesn't want to slip this chance. She knew and she understands how much Khushi loves her Chote Malik. She will do anything for making Khushi agree for this, for bringing them together.

"You could have asked me to give my life than this Nani Malkin; this was the last time I'm talking with you for using Chote Malik. You didn't do right. And Aman Bhai, don't make this mistake, you will regret it. You are waking the worst of him. Don't do this..." Aman looked at Khushi's eyes, for the first time he felt they shouldn't do that. Now, he completely understood how much Khushi loves Arnav.

"I know what I'm doing and I know what I'm asking you to do" said Nani.

"Nani, maybe we should drop this idea. Look at Khushi; she is not ready to do this. Then what's the need to force her or Arnav? May be Khushi is right, it will hurt Arnav badly"

"I don't want to hear anything. We four are going to do this and its final"

"What if he reacts wildly? Can you even guess how much wild he can be? Are you sure you can control him when he goes wild?" Khushi tried her last time

"NO, we can't control him. You will do that", said Nani looks at Khushi an intense look

"Why would I?"

"Because I swear on Chote"

"STOP THIS NONSENSE NANI MALKIN... I'M LETTING YOU TALK, THAT DOESN'T MEAN YOU CAN SAY ANYTHING ABOUT CHOTE MALIK. DON'T TEST MY PATIENCE"

"Chutki..." Garima held Khushi's shoulder to control her anger

Both Nani and Aman stood there looking at angry Khushi. They gulped seeing her red face from near.

Nani composed herself gulping the unknown fear and said "But you have to do this, if you want him safe" Nani knew that she is playing with lion and lioness

Khushi looked at both Nani and Aman "You are going to regret it badly. You will never get forgiveness from me for doing this. I will never forgive you. And you, Mr. Aman Mathur Raizada, you will regret it in your life for doing this. You can never face your brother in your life. YOU WILL REGRET IT", saying this Khushi strode outside the room, leaving the three members in her room

"Garima, what's this?" Nani asked with shock

"Chote Malik's Choti" Garima closed her eyes, shaking her head. She folded her hands "Devi Mayya, meri bachi ko raksha karna ( please save my child)" She sat on the floor, leaning on the wall "You didn't do right, Malkin. You don't know about my Chutki. You never can guess what she will do after this. You did wrong... you did wrong..." Garima burst into cries making Aman's heart beat in worry

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"Whatever Chutki and Aman did today, that's all because of me. I forced Chutki to do that. I forced her to do that swearing on Choti knowing Chutki can't back off from that. There is no fault in her. This is all my fault. She guessed correctly, she guessed Chote's reaction. She never wanted to do this. She knew it would hurt Chote and he will react like this. She warned us not to do this. But I was adamant. This is all my fault. Her slap for Chote too... I only asked her to control him if he will get out of control with his wild reaction."

"So, stopping him from regretting of throwing Aman out of the house by his hands; she slapped him" Aran thought out loud

Nani nodded her head, crying on Ratna's shoulder.

Arnav sat there, holding his head with his hands while resting his elbows on his knees. He doesn't know what to do now, where to go, whom to meet and how to face them or what to talk. He closed his eyes to see tears filled Khushi's face and hurt filled Aman's face. He is regretting now, but he knew there was no use of this. He now understood what his Choti meant, when she said his anger will make him lose his precious'. He knew what blunder he did with Aman. He knew what his Choti meant when she slapped him and he can understand her pain for being in that situation. He now understands how much his Choti and his brother were upset and hurt by his behaviour. After sitting for more than an hour thinking about the happenings, he stood from his place and marched towards the door

"Arnav"

"Don't worry dad, I know what I did and I know what I have to do. I was the reason for all this mess. I will clear everything, I will bring Choti and Aman back home. Or else, I won't come back. After all, I can't lose either of them. I need them in my life. Don't worry dad, I will be back with them"

Before Arnav leaves the house, the landline rang with its high volume. HP answered the phone and gave it to Arnav

"Hello..." Arnav said controlling his anxiety and controlling the urge to bash the person, whoever it is for wasting his time. But the next second, when the person called him, his senses became alert

"Arnav beta..."

"Aunty...? What's wrong?" asked Arnav with thudding heart

"Chutki... please come fast, please save her..."

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SECOND OPTION - leave whatever written and continue - got much votes, I'm going with that. I am not deleting the previous update.

Hope, you all satisfied now. This is what I thought. If I still upset you guys, hmm... then I'm sorry... I can't help. Thanks you so much for your condolences and concern and great support and understanding.

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That's all for now...

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