Arshi TS: ...Yours truely :: Part 18(LAST) :: pg 153 :: 29 June

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Raadhiya

@Raadhiyaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#701

2 buddy
there is no need to apolozise
this is ur story
we like it how ever u write

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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Posted: 10 years ago

#702

Sorry for your loss n my praysr for you n your family.

I don't think you need to apologise. .

The update just shows how ASR is when he is angry..

Moral is in anger human make some terrible mistake..

But I don't think you need to rewrite or stop writing. .Pl yaar don't be harsh on yourself. .

Hats off to you that in grief you still write..

According to me the update is apt to show ASR. .

Now ASR should work on manofying Aman n khushi n both of them make sure he work hard for it

Once again please don't be harsh on yourself. ..

Edited by madhu1210 - 10 years ago

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sfghfj

@sfghfj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#703

sorry for your loss. you don't have change anything

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megha Agarwal

@megha1996

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#704

feeling bad for the little baby... u don't have to apologize we understand ur condition... i m go with 2nd option ... update fast and plz pm me...

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Lily30

@Lily30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#705

loved the update, leave it

thank you for the pm🤗

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phillips_2909

@phillips_2909

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Posted: 10 years ago

#706

sorry for their loss

do as you think best

thank you

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#707

Hey Sri,

Hope you are doing better. One option we all would definitely not wan you to take up is stopping the story. I personally feel you can restore Arnav's character may be in an update or two and make him shed his ego and arrogance at least infront of his family and friends. Let him crib a bit to win back Aman and a bit more to get choti back and lot lot lot more to win her love. May be he should taste his own medicine from either Nani or Aren or Ratna.

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ankitabaran

@ankitabaran

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Posted: 10 years ago

#708

O I love this story so much... I know that how u have portrayed khushi... It difficult or impossible to move on for khushi... I just want that arnav don't betrayed khushi in future for other woman in any sense...although, she is ready to face... I feel bad for khushi because her suffering is not her fault... Fault is her loving and dedication to arnav... Arnav is suffering for his rude behaviour... Khushi is angry on her helplessness ... and arnav he just don't understand and hurt everyone...when will he understand that khushi mean to him... Just a friend... Or more than friend...

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@lovearshi01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#709

Read all parts of u story
Loved it, but hated the last part
Plz don't discontinue it, update soon

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Pdrover

@Pdrover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#710

Please don't apologize, it is your story and only you can give turns based on your imagination
Sorry to hear about your niece, may God give you and your family the strength at this difficult time and may her soul rest in peace