Arshi TS: ...Yours truely :: Part 18(LAST) :: pg 153 :: 29 June - Page 70

Hey, sorry i forgot to UnRes for the part 😳 will do it soon!

Don't apologies dear,just be with your cousin in his hard time n about the story I think let the last update b as it is as make arnav beg for his mistake from khushi n aman. Take care

Trust me. The previous part was one of the best till date. I was getting irritated by Khushi bearing all Arnav's accusation. So yeah leave the story as it is going. You know the story, the plot n u should write.

Hey you don't have to apologies
you don't have change anything
It was awesome
My only request is don't separate them

sri, I don't know if I told this before or I am simply repeating again.
I enjoy reading your works. not because its about arshi. but because you show the reality.

in reality, every human brain is complicated, we wanted to do something but end up doing the opposite, the reason can be our ego, or some mu, etc.

u portray them very well. you are feeling sad that we are hurt with previous update and worried about negative comments.

you know, I read that and will be that particular update again and again. i liked it so much. you know why, you gave us an arnav who is just like us. he wanted to confess his love, but his anger made him do otherwise and broke the relationships.

you showed a khushi, who gave all her love to only one person, but in return got something that she doesn't deserve.

arnav can be wrong from others POV, but for me, this incident may make him realize his possessiveness for khushi, his love for her. he can part away with anything and anyone in this world even his friend a man if it meant parting from khushi.

may be his choice of words is wrong, but in anger who cares.

sri, you should be happy to receive negative comments.
confused?
yes, you should be happy. why do you think people gave negative comments for the previous update?
you made us so much attached to your characters that any pain they feel or any pleasure you make feel them, have an effect on us.

love you for this.

so please so thinking of discontinuing or rewriting the part and give us the next update soon.

Thanks for the update and sorry for the sad news... my condolence you and your family.

As for the update..everything turns out opposite of what had expected b'coz of Arnav's impulsive, ego and over jumping into conclusion which led to hurting everyone especially his close friend cum brother Aman and his own Choti.

Wonder how he is going to repent and rectified all his harsh words

sorry for ur loss.
No apologies required :)

I suggest you to leave the story/update as it and make it changes with the future update. BUT PLEASE DON"T STOP WRITING

Sorry for your loss.

Arre yaar why are you so upset. Please don't be. You can continue your story as it is. We are with you.