Arshi TS: ...Yours truely :: Part 18(LAST) :: pg 153 :: 29 June

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WanieA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#671

ok..why are you apologising..as a writer, we should follow u storyline, how you wants to present, maintain and ended...its your baby..we as readers should respect your creative mind in coming up with a story which will make us hooked to it..off cos any writer will have their mood swing, mental block etc etc..while writing and heck, the next chapter may not comes as good as the previous but nevertheless, there is an update...its so hard to get regular update from all the writers, only handful are committed and I thank them from bottom of my heart. Now, back to you dear, these are my thought and choose no 2. All the best in your next chapter 👍🏼

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anjs

@anjs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#672

oh, m so sorry, that i hurt u more by my comment...and also so sorry bt the baby...poor child, may her soul rest in peace...

regarding the update...honestly i wud say, it shudnt reflect ur inner turmoil...best wudve been to let it be for a few days or weeks, till u feel ok to write...cause though the character will behave as per ur inner feelings, its wrong to let ur emotions overpower the story...

that was the best part about IPK the show, the characters used to drive the story, and not the writers or their emotions

i would suggest you go back and re-write that chapter...but only if you are feeling better, n are in a better frame of mind...

cause honestly after that slap, i dont know how you plan to redeem Khushi...well to put it bluntly the story is kinda spoiled for me...

i mean Aman knew how Arnav feels for Khushi, yet he goaded Arnav, so then why feel bad when Arnav reacted...why feel hurt when Arnav showed his jealousy...infact Aman shudve been happy n made Arnav realise what Arnav feels...

also how can Khushi, who does everything for Arnav, even ready to risk her life...slap the same guy for Aman...that means Aman has become more important for Khushi...right ? so that means Arnav has become secondary for her now...is it ?

so its better u re-write the chapter...but not now...take a break...then come back n rewrite it...and please dont stop the story midway...that will hurt us readers more, as we have also spent our precious time reading it...so we deserve it to be completed...

hope my comment didnt offend you

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ShiningHearts

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Posted: 10 years ago

#673

hey no need to apologize bt

bring sme nice twist in nxt update👍🏼

mke Arnav realize his mistake n apologize to Aman n Khushi.;)

ermm i dnt think u need to re-write the update

its ur story u cn present the way u want😳

nxt prt awaited😛

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finnie

@cute_monaya_fan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#674

don't apologise dear...i know you will make everything good by the end...we all trust you...asr needs some bashing from khushi...we know he is not that smart enough...so chill...you carry on with your story...we all trust you

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#675

Nice update...please do not apologize...its your story and let it be the way it is...

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nimzaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#676

1st option seems good ,2nd one better and 3rd worst of the all

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khwaish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#677

hey

sorry for the loss ... if we the totally strangers can feel the pain of loss , then definatly you will be in trouble situation and for diverting the mind , you would have written the update...

but seriously you dont need to be sorry for what you have written , and i think its fair enough what you have written and the way the characters behaved ... arnav we all know is short tempered and he will definatly behaved in same way at given situation ,...

so let it be like that and continue furthur with what you have planned for the story

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muskaansobti

@muskaansobti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#678

Hey dnt apologise

Its alright take ur time we can wait

We will wait :)

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fffan123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#679

Don't apologize Sri. It was bad to read about your niece's news. May her soul rest in peace. Take your time and may god give strength to your cousin and your family.