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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#841

beautiful update dear... loved Arnav's determination and confidence of 'them'... and this chemistry between them, it just sparks whenever they come together in the frame... lovely kiss... waiting to see ahead... thanks for the mail...

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shazia

@shaziluvbarun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#842

just came across this story it's just wow.. fabulous yaar. I just loved it. continue it would love to read more.

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canapoem

@canapoem

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#843

Mira, thanks again for liking my comments and mentioning them in your story. To get such a compliment from a story teller like you, its indeed my honor and privilege. 🤗

Mira, when we listen to something which gives us happiness, we say its like "Music to ears", then what do we say which gives the same feeling when we read it? Its not just visual treat only to eyes but a kind of peace and satisfaction to the whole being, mind and soul - that is what I felt after reading this update.

Her relationship with herself changed that day as well. She felt abandoned yet again, having to deal with being left behind, having to put her pieces together again.

The above sentence says a lot about Khushi's mental state and turmoils. Feeling of getting left behind alone everytime must have made some deep impacts on her heart and mind.

Whenever Arnav talks about Mohan, the pride in a parents' words or the worries behind them, MB, you bring it out so beautifully with your words.

Every child is special in his or her own way. You know MB, I meet so many parents who have children with special needs and each one of them talk about their kids' strengths with such pride and I can see their pain behind it too.

We as parents always feel that the we are responsible for our kids to grow up, but you know Mira, we are only responsible for providing the basic necessities of life to then and ofcourse love them, but irrespective of that, they grow up. No one can teach them the complexities and sensitivities of life, they learn it by themselves. Its only when they dont learn it by themselves, we realise how foolish we were to think that kids are because of what we have given them. We were unnecessarily taking credit for something which comes naturally to most of them.

Coming to their kiss - the passion, the fire, the chemistry, the connection, the intensity, the pull, everything between them exists even today. Its not going to be easy to ignore such passion between them by Khushi from here onwards.

I was also thinking, the kiss they shared today, without much thinking, Khushi took her first step towards happiness again.

But after this incident, taking the second step would become more harder for Khushi. The position she is in, either she can move forward or backwards and trust me for her now, taking that step backwards would become more tempting rather than taking the next step forward.

Eagerly waiting to see how Khushi would look at herself now, how Khushi would assess her position now and how she would deal with the situation on hand now?

A song I thought just perfect for Khushi today:

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JB_4xapDKlk[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by canapoem - 10 years ago

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Jayashree

@JshreeB

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#844

OMG AWESOME UPDATE 😊 and they kissed superb

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ipkviewer

@ipkviewer

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#845

Such a beautiful chapter this is Mira. I started reading this thru a note from @ToxicLove and I simply loved it so far. It may not be a fancy fairytale story that many people love to read and cherish and it takes and gives the reader the depth of what the life is when things does not turn the way they wished for. You have defined Khushi's character so well and matured, is current of the age, career oriented, modern yet respects the traditions and norms that come with those traditions that she goes thru the turmoil of what is right and what her heart is looking for. You defined all of that so well in prior chapters. A typical ArShi lover like me would want it differently such as disliking how she cherishes her life with NK and all that. But the reality is what it is where people can find love again despite their true chemistry and love for other exists but perhaps buried somewhere. Such is the complexity of the life and relationships. You have well managed and balanced your story and made me come out of that ArShi fancy and start following your story as yours. You are yet to unfold Arnav's monologue about his past 11 years and quite a lot detail yet to be furnished on what happened 11yrs back. Looking forward to read all that. A good story indeed.

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KeerthiRajkumar

@KeerthiRajkumar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#846

awesome update yaar
loved it

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#847

what an update!! loved it too much.. dil ki baat zubaan par aa gayi.. dekhte hain kya hota hai aage.. amazing update..

thanks for mail 😊

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dsbj

@dsbj

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#848

mind blowing .cant wait to see next .

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#849

Oh I just loved this update, totally loved it !! ⭐️ Arnav came back for khushi and finally told showed khushi how much he wanted her in his life. The connection between arnav and khushi is so beautiful, the way she feels his every pain about Mohan and the way he wants to be there for her at every step ... Is truly rare. Glad that arnav and khushi gave in to their passion and expressed to each other how much they desired the other... But then khushi broke it off. Is it because of guilt that she is NK's widow or is it because she considers herself unlucky for any man. Pick hope that arnav continues to pursue her and gets to the bottom of her feelings and love for him. So looking forward to the next update. You are just fabulous !! 🤗