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sangeetadas

@sangeetadas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#831

OMG, it's sooo beautiful!!!!!!!! Loved the update...so intense...very nicely written 👏

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Brishti

@brishti84

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Posted: 10 years ago

#832

OMG they kissed 😳 ❤️ That was so unexpected. But that doesn't mean that it seemed forced. Not at all. My favorite chapter so far.

Firstly Khushi's reaction to seeing Arnav. It was a perfect mix of longing and pure bliss of having him with her. Especially after the disappointment earlier.

Next their convo and Arnav continuing to open up about his fear and insecurity regarding Mohan. I loved the part when he lashes out against Mohan being labeled autistic and how just that word seems to define him in his entirety. Both reminisce a little about their marriage and then...

The kiss was perfectly build up to. And thankfully it wasn't a quick innocent peck. Oh no this was full on passion. As expected Khushi pulled away but Arnav didn't back down. I want him to keep pushing her until she understands that she has every right to move on. It'll be very difficult for her to overcome the guilt which is naturally. Can't wait for the next updates.

Oh and the last scene with Arnav admiring what she did to him was brilliant. I can't stop grinning. 😆

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Shereen_J

@Shereen_J

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Posted: 10 years ago

#833

You write all your scenes so beautifully Mira. Their closeness, leaning support to each other, friends sharing their past. And the kiss, the emotions seeping out of them. It was beautiful. Khushi has drawn an invisible line that reaches her heart. She is just insecure. But he is not going anywhere, and he, has all the time she needs. :)

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Aathira

@chikkus05

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#834

I just caught up with this story and loved it.your writing skill was superb.really loved the story line and every character.looking forward for this journey.once again brilliant job

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MEsw

@MEsw

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Posted: 10 years ago

#835

The update was sooo...hot, sensual, romantic, emotional and amazing.

Yes, they connected...their fiery chemistry ..resurfacing but when Khushi asked him about his divorce and the reality behind it. They were on the way to reconnect ( or may be connect, first time) emotionally. Being emotionally there for each other is also as important.

Her story is kind of known and straight forward ( if in some future update some other things may not spring up, that is) she loved him, and still didn't or cudnt be with him.( because of her past and insecurities ) NK was there for her, he became pillar of strength for her. He became her true friend and with patience won her and gave her all the happiness he could. And also gave her a daughter and a mother who in his absence can give her a reason to live and support to survive...she has friends like La and Akash who can be her alter egos and keep her sane and also happy.

He had divorce...how, why, not clear yet, why did he got married even that is not clear yer.( atleast yeh to meri parwah Karti hai to kar lo shaadi...is not exactly the reason to get married ...may be that's why it didn't last)

But at least he is at the place where he is emotionally free of the ties. Guilt free, because they have done it mutually and not only that she is happy in her life. Helping him. Caring for each other. He is guilt free...he is emotionally and physically free to pursue his life's happiness...where ever it lies...

What about her? Her reasons for the marriage and her situation now is clear, reason behind them are clear...but her freedom from NK and this relation isn't there. He died...they did not got separated because they wanted to...because they didn't wanted to or couldn't live with each other...he didn't leave her happily and willingly... She might be a widow, but she is widow of NK...there is a relation...

Also what about all this years,,,,okay he went away that day,..when she was not ready to take step further and name this fiery hot chemistry...but why did he not come back? Did he? Did he try to find her...or get her back? If not why not? If yes? What happened and why did he gave up than?

What if he wouldn't have come for a conference to U.S. What if he wouldn't have time to meet Akash...what if he wouldn't have been informed about her widowhood?

Pease do not take me wrong. I am just thinking out loud...

Why did they need to unite? Why now? What is the absolutely essential reason for that...obviously it can't be the just chemistry ..right...than what ...what is the crux of this story...is her being widow at young age the reason...is his being divorced the reason...they being single again...enough a reason for them to get together again?

She has a wonderful MIL/ mother / support . She has a daughter - a reason to live. Enviable friends. She is educated, independent, strong woman...( not an 18th century totally dependent woman, who needs a man to live her life) lives in US, even less push from society to have a husband to be a respectable woman ( even in India it is not that difficult to live without a husband or a man- and she being in US it is even easier for her)

Why ...why this union is necessary ?

Love is caring and unconditionally wishing and doing everything for someone's happiness...as simple as that...

Could that be achieved only by them being a couple? If he cares for her than other than their physical needs why that can't be achieved without even being a couple - or marrying...or living in ...what ever they might decide as their next step.. Why he needs her to accept and vocalize that she loves him? What would that achieve other than them going ahead with physically reuniting(s*x). He knows she has feeling for him. But than why does she needs to accept it and say it?

Sorry, I need to stop too...

Please no offense. This are just my thoughts...I know they will be answered in future updates...but than if I had that much patience or the brain to take a story only as a story and enjoy the ride and not get too..too...tooo much into it ...than what else was needed...

So ya, would wait for the amaZing story to proceed and have fun discovering all the aspect ...

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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Posted: 10 years ago

#836

superb chap 12...

Arnav visit madea significant difference...

hope buaji n manorama sense it..

loved the way meera n arnav bonding is going..

khushi n Arnav .. bringing back the ease n support.. the way he told again n again u dont have to do it alone..

loved the way at the end khushi just hugged him n cried...

Chap 13...

wow!1 Nani can see happiness in his garndson's eyes..

what a friendship between Arnav n Maya. his faith that she is a good mother superb..

loved the way Manorama n Khushi convo went..

khushi n Arnav's textx superb...

chap 14..

A visit to shantivan superb...

khushi was lossing again in Arnav wow!1

Arnav tensed state she understood than god Arnav open up lit bit about mohan...

the way khushi assure him was superb..

the way Arnav accept it this time he wont give up...

nice timing Maya... khushi was shocked to see easy friendship ..

loved the way Maya asked for her opinion on Mohan.. n told about Arnav

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#837

That was beautifully written MB ...

It seemed we were all waiting along with Khushi for her Arnav to reach her ... 😆

and when finally he did there was magic ... friends finally finding each other and

pouring the turmoil in their hearts out ... knowing that the other will understand ...

I loved the way Arnav corrected Khushi by telling her that it was him and Mohan

who had come and not him and Maya ...

So Khushi considers her relationship with NK as a "Second Chance" after she and

Arnav parted !

But obviously Arnav was quite broken by the divorce between him and Maya !

It was good to see the passion between them is still very strong ...

am glad that Arnav has realised that he has to go slow with Khushi ...

And his determination to stay this time is of utmost importance ...

Thank you MB ... waiting eagerly for the next one ...

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niza fazal

@nizahairu

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#838

Our first love never fade
It remains our heart...
Pls pm me

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cocoamob

@cocoamob

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#839

Beautiful update!

Khushi has somehow convinced herself that she is a widow and has already had all her chances in lifei with a partner. Your Arnav here is a wonderful human being thru' and thru'. He has realized that he has to be patient with her and it is all worth it because the fire is still there, just like it was all those years ago!

The conversation between them about NK and then his marriage is so natural and is definitely a step (or two) in the positive direction of their relationship. Without realizing it herself, Khushi's wall is slowly crumbling! It will take all of Arnav's patience to break it completely, but it is better that those walls are broken now before they get together in a permanent relationship.