T2 | ArHi FF Second Chances | Link to Thread-Three, Pg 140 - Page 78

Your are such a phenomenal writer.

Finally the lingering fire has made its appearance after all these years😊. A journey of thoughts, honest discussion of the realities, and some passion at the end, this is a bit of everything chapter with the classy stamp of Mira all over it. I already read it a few times just for the sheer pleasure of experiencing your word magic. Made me spellbound as usual.

Khushi's realities of life and her actions may sometimes be confusing but her emotions are always making sure that she can never lie to herself. Her thoughts about NK's passing is a refreshing change in her. The passing of a beloved has a strange way of resetting the stopwatch of life for any of us. But, just like the watch dial, life has to keep moving. And only after a few rotations, the watch seems to work and only after a few rotations life feels like living.

Coming to the Mohan, Maya and NK talk, it was a breathtaking read for many reasons. How that is only our demons in the heads and the monsters in the closets are hard to deal with. But somehow, we offer an immediate counsel and an understanding of others demons and monsters. But, I think it was an important exchange of pain for Arshi and an important first step for the journey.

The kiss of passion and the feel of agony - I was so out of my own world reading through that section. Khushi's guarded desire might have won the day but Arnav's steely determination has definitely caused enough dent in her defenses and that is all Arnav will need to win this long drawn war. As you so eloquently put it, "this is not over not by a long shot".

This feels like the feeling that you get when you are watching movies and the action sequence has just about started. The time when you adjust your seats and get more comfortable. The time when you make sure everything is handy so that your eyes won't waver from the screen. The time when everything else can wait and only the screen in front of you matters. Yes, it's that time Mira, we are ready for the action:).

Girl What an update! You bring out Khushi's & Arnav's emotions and turmoil so beautifully, it totally sinks in and you can feel it. Which there was an emotion icon which holds the hands to the heart. It is so poignant. What else to say.

ok only 2 words I LOVED IT N YOU WRITE BEAUTIFULLY THK U

Thank you MB for your love and kind words about me. I am feel honored and touched by your gesture. 🤗

It was such an awesome update!!! Loved it MB!!

The man is just not giving up on her. Great! She is fighting her own demons unsuccessfully of course - the fear of losing someone close to her is so strong that it overshadows any possibility of happiness. A tough battle faced by two lovely people in pain, in love and you're doing a wonderful job bringing out their feelings.

Speechless.. The way you have written, all the intense emotions of both Khushi and Arnav feel live...