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Nice update. But a bit too long. Especially for Anjali and Shyam's love story. 😆 They are my least favorite character from ipk. I know you wanted to justify all the important characters from Ipk. But you genuinely justified their love story.
It would be more interesting if you would've written some part about Arshi along with them.
In your tale shyam seems a really nice guy and loves Anjali immensely. It amused me how he followed her everywhere like a shadow and helped her when she was in need. And also never took her advantage even after the marriage. Slowly he won Anjali's love and trust.
Anjali also impressed me. How she strongly handled anshuman was plausible.
Looking forward for Arshi story in next chapter.
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