[PARSH] aka Sandhir New SS [PART 8] 'Commitment'

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: ILuvParsh
Read both d updates...
Girl, what majestic enteries of all of dem !!!!
Aww luving dis strong,determined Harshi..
And d fact Param is a dancer makes it all d more exciting.
ParSh nd Vidharth both d couples are lovely 😳
Fab storyline..
Continue soon :)

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Parshlove
==THIS IS PARSH SS NOT SANDHIR...
WHY PEOPLE WRITING.. SANYU RANDHIR INSTEAD OF HARSHI PARAM...LAME!!!!!

THIS IS PARSH NOT SANDHIR...

AWWW...THIS WAS SO CUTE...

THE ENTRIES WAS AGAIN CREAVTIVE AND DIFFERENT...

I LOVED HARSHITA AND PARAM..

PARTH CALLS VIDHUSHI CHARM.. AWWW...

HARSHI SCARE THE MEDIA GUY OFF...THAT WAS AWESOME MOMENT...

PARAM INDEED HAVE BEST CHOICE...

PARSH ARE THE BEST...

PARSH ARE A COUPLE IN THIS SS... AWWW

THANK YOU...

UPDATE SOON...

WAITING...

ASAP..

LOVE RIYA

LOL 😛 Thank you Riya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

"Commitment"

Chapter 3 - 'You're my Priority'

'She is so late. I won't talk to her for one day. What the hell I'm speaking? One day? You can't even manage 18 hours without talking to her. Yaad haina teko jab voh London gyi thi. You Roz Skype her for 6-6 hours. She avoided her sleep just for me. She is good.. What? I'm suppose to be angry at her. Why am I melting? *He pouted* Ok.. Calm down and take a breathe. Breathe? Teri breathe toh yaha hain hi nhi? Yeh tu kya bol rha hain Param? Don't talk to her for.. For.. Um.. 4 minutes. It is enough. Zyada toh nhi ho jayega?' Param continuously murmured to himself.

He booked the best table for their dinner in his favourite restaurant. He sat their from past 30 minutes alone. All people around them were giving him looks as if they saw an alien doing push ups.

He heard someone whistling but he was busy gossiping with himself. Then again someone whistled. This time he turned around as it was disturbing him.

'Kon hain?' He shouted at the person.

'Me Hu.' The Voice giggled.

'Harshita?' Param looked in horror and then he glanced around his surroundings. People stared at him with anger for disturbing their dates.

'Sorry, Sorry.. Please continue.' He bow down to everyone smiling embarrassingly.

'Why are you bowing down?' Harshita asked.

'You Awara woman..' He glared at her.

'Awara what?' Asked Harshita being confused.

'Shut up and sit silently.' He dragged her hand and took her to the corner most table.

'Hero apan yaha kyo baith rhe hain? Meko voh middle vali row me bethna hain.' She pouted and Param made her sit on the sofa like chair.

'No arguements from now on. We'll sit here only.' He glared again.

'Okay!' She silently agreed to him.

'You're late. Very Late.' Param rolled his eyes.

'Sorry. You know na Media work?' She made a puppy face.

'Last warning. This is our private time don't give them to others please!' He sighed revealing his insecurities.

She holds his hand and kissed it. He smiled at the gesture.

'From next time, I'll be careful.' She smiled back.

'Leave all this. Now tell, what are you going to do about the hero?' Asked Param caressing her hand.

'No work talks on the dinner table. Its my rule.' She pat his hand and smirked.

'Okay!' He agreed and they had their dinner finally.

>>>>>>>>

'I'm missing you so much.' Said 'Vidhushi kissing her phone screen.

'Control, Charm. Wait until you arrive at my place. Then we will have lots of fun.' Said Parth calmly from the other side over his laptop.

They both were video-chatting.

'I'm bored, Parth. I should have come in the car instead of bus.' She pouted.

'I want you to be habitual of travelling in bus.' He smiled.

'Why?' She pouted again.

'Surprise Charm.' He winked.

'Its late. You should sleep now. The whole day you were practicing and you have busy schedule tomorrow morning.' Vidhushi caressed the screen.

Parth closed his eyes as if feeling her touch from the phone. 'No.. I want to talk to you the whole night.'

'Parth?' She glared.

'Huh! Not today please! I'm feeling low.' He pouted.

'What's wrong, baby? Is everything okay?' She asked being panicked.

'Calm down Charm. There's nothing wrong.' He kissed on the screen.

'Are you sure?' She looked in his eyes.

He looked away for a while and instantly smiled back. He nodded and she was still worried but they continued the whole night.

>>>>>>>>>

Param and Harshita came out of the restaurant and the clock hit 11. He gestured her towards his car and followed at his small apartment which he rented for both of them. So that they could get some privacy.

They entered inside the apartment and straight sat on the big black couch.

'I'm super tired. Just want to cuddle with you.' Said Param leaning over her frame.

'Uh-huh! I have to get back tomorrow early in the morning. So I'm going to sleep.' She giggled at his expression.

'But that's not fair Nona! You promised me that you'll be there with me on the Valentine's day.' He pulled through her shoulders.

'Are you sure you don't have any important dance rehearsal tomorrow?' Asked Harshita clearing the doubts.

'I already arranged everything for you.' He snaked his hands around her waist.

'Let me make a call.' She pulled the phone out of her pocket.

'What?' He made a puppy face.

'Its for us.' She rubbed her nose on his.

'Then make it on the loudspeaker.' He nuzzled on her cheek and wrapped her into a side hug.

She dialled Kaustuki's number and made it loudspeaker. While he was busy in his own business.

'Yea.. Harshi.. Bol!' Kaustuki received.

'Kal koi important cheeze hai kya?' Asked Harshita.

'Yeah..' She answered in her sleepy voice.

Param made a sad face and in frustration he bites her cheek.

'Oww..' She cried.

'Harshita are you okay?' Kaustuki asked concerning.

'Yeah.. Yeah..Bus Mosquito tha..' She glared at Param and hit him on his shoulder.

'Okay! Kal Audition ke liye select karna hain na new actor.'

'Cancel all the auditions tomorrow and all other works. I'll be busy. Good Night.' She hanged the phone while Param stared at her.

'What?' She looked at him.

'You cancelled them only on my pleading?' Param sounded a bit low.

'So what? Yeh kam toh baad me bhi hote rahenge.. Aur tumne bhi toh Mere liye apne classes chodh diye.. You gave me first priority on your list so why can't I do the same?' She winked at him.

'How do you know? Were you stalking me?' Param widened his eyes in shock.

'Silly Guy, why would I stalk you?' She made a face.

'Whatever. Lets just forget all this. Probably for our best.' He kissed her forehead.

'Yeah.. So you wanna cuddle?' She giggled.

'You're asking like its an activity..' He Digged inside her neck.

'Its good for our health.' She laughed.

'Gosh! You're so pathetic when it comes on marking a joke.' He eyed her.

She pushed him lightly and rolled her eyes showing him that she was angry.

He sat on his knees front of her. She looked away. He held HER eyes and made a puppy face.

'Sorry..' He laughed.

'You are so insane.. You're holding my ears instead of yours.' She hit him on his hands.

'When you are angry you look like a Witch.' He teased her.

She frowned, 'Go to hell. I won't talk to you ever again.'

'Arey.. I meant to say that you look like world's beautiful witch ever.' He snaked his hands around her neck.

'Not funny.' She rolled her eyes.

He leaned closer to her face and nuzzled his cheeks with hers. He kissed her eyes one by one. She tightened her hold on his t-shirt.

He kissed her nose and finally captured her lips. She responded well and they broke apart.

'You sleep inside. I'll sleep here.' He pecked her lips.

'Good Night.' She smiles cutely.

'Param dreams. 😛' He whispered in her ears.

Shd glared at him playfully and left inside the room. He probably lay there on the couch dreaming about her with a genuine smile on his face. But he frowned and looked at the room's direction.

'I need to help her find the guy for the film.'

To be continued...

Zumi

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Kiara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

awehsmm...
hehehe skype chatn..
awara women!!
itz toh 1 updt
2ble dhmka..
loved param harshita
lil cozy romnce..
n parth n vidhushi
phone pr ho yr!!
realyy suprb!!
waitn fo nxt
updt soon...
n thnxxx fo da pm 😊

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anu_anya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

superb
lovely
beautiful update
sandhir r so cute
loved it
thanx for pm
continue asap :))

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Rashi Bhargava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Awsme update
Loved it to the core

The starting was so cute

Awww param talking to himself he was angry on harshi for being late
He was planning not to talk to harshi bt he cnt live without talking to her

He decided not to talk to her for 4 mins awww dat was so cute

Harshi was admiring his antics

Parsh was spending quality tym together

Vidharth so happy together
They were missing each other

Parth was sounding so low
What hppnd to him

Parsh together
Their cute little fights

Harshi teasing him
She cancelled everything for him

Thou both r so adorable

Wtng for next
Update soon

Yr update ur other fics too

vote for patakha pankhis

duniya k chakhe chuda de hum sandhirianwale

sandhir din ane wale h

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Sarim.fatmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

awesome marvelous amazing update dear. it was one of d best update so far. this ff is going to b d bestest ff on parsh. parsh n vidharth love each other beyond limit. they give first priorities to there relation. param antics at restaurant was very funny n harshi she is just admiring his antics. there convo was so cute. parth n vidhushi talks was beautifully penned down. they really love each other unconditionally n there care for each other is uncountable. I think parth is hiding something. now parsh cozy romance in there personal apartment was bliss to read. param has asking her to take a leave for him n she takes leave instantaneously only for param. even though she has a very pack schedule but her love for param comes most important than any other work. now param has decided to find a hero for haeshi film. let c what happen next. do continue soon zumi.

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Zumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Rocking_Angel
awehsmm...
hehehe skype chatn..
awara women!!
itz toh 1 updt
2ble dhmka..
loved param harshita
lil cozy romnce..
n parth n vidhushi
phone pr ho yr!!
realyy suprb!!
waitn fo nxt
updt soon...
n thnxxx fo da pm 😊

Thnkx

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Zumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: newmoon18
Awsme update
Loved it to the core

The starting was so cute

Awww param talking to himself he was angry on harshi for being late
He was planning not to talk to harshi bt he cnt live without talking to her

He decided not to talk to her for 4 mins awww dat was so cute

Harshi was admiring his antics

Parsh was spending quality tym together

Vidharth so happy together
They were missing each other

Parth was sounding so low
What hppnd to him

Parsh together
Their cute little fights

Harshi teasing him
She cancelled everything for him

Thou both r so adorable

Wtng for next
Update soon

Yr update ur other fics too

vote for patakha pankhis

duniya k chakhe chuda de hum sandhirianwale

sandhir din ane wale h

Thanks moon. Will update soon

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Zumi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi
awesome marvelous amazing update dear. it was one of d best update so far. this ff is going to b d bestest ff on parsh. parsh n vidharth love each other beyond limit. they give first priorities to there relation. param antics at restaurant was very funny n harshi she is just admiring his antics. there convo was so cute. parth n vidhushi talks was beautifully penned down. they really love each other unconditionally n there care for each other is uncountable. I think parth is hiding something. now parsh cozy romance in there personal apartment was bliss to read. param has asking her to take a leave for him n she takes leave instantaneously only for param. even though she has a very pack schedule but her love for param comes most important than any other work. now param has decided to find a hero for haeshi film. let c what happen next. do continue soon zumi.

Thank you so much Sarim.. Love you for this