OS : A Fallen Star - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

25

Views

6.4k

Users

26

Likes

130

Frequent Posters

PSharada thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Aww - this story is so cute. Perfect fit for Valentine day contest. Did it win any prizes? Loved reading the story - Mahi and Adi were so cute and I loved the way you have penned down the difficulties that our Army face when they defend our country. Kargil war has personal resonance with me in the sense my best friend's husband was Lt. Col in Infantry division in Kargil war and those few months, I could see my friend go through hell and come back every time there was some news of death.

Every time there is a war, the families always have the fear as to what if their beloved cant make through it. Gosh can't imagine the torture the family would be going through and loved the way Adi tried to break the engagement but Mahi was adamant that she would be with him only. When I went to visit Delhi and went near Amar Jawan jyothi, I felt so small and so insignificant when compared to these brave heroes and their families. I felt so humbled standing at that place paying my respects to the dead warriors and the writing - We gave up our today so you can have your tomorrow. Hats off to the warriors because of whom we have a safe nation
ranogill thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#12
story of every young girl and boy in north india...in our village ones brother, father or husband is either a farmer or in the army
.ButterCup. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Beautiful and a heartwarming love story. I think no words can do justice, the way you've written this OS ❤️
Frozen_Ana thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Superb OS! Beautifully written! 👍🏼
mit0905 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Wonderful... Lovely ...OS...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Arjuhisis thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Oh mints that was truly beautiful
An awesome OS
Lovely one
Iam surprised u didn't win the competition
Itsflora thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Well...its really nice... So nice that I read it though it's a non-arshi os;normally I don't do that in if.
dikshitamehta thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#18
It's awesome, mind blowing, fantastic...
I just loved it. I am speechless mints.
This OS is one of the best I've ever read.
Good that you posted it otherwise your readers would've missed reading a beautiful ff. 👏👏👏
1chilly thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Loved this story of a war hero and his lady love.
And the string of stars.
Loved how he taped back the broken star.
And won back his love.
aquagal thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Beautiful piece Mints. I loved this story of Mahi-Adi. It was such a heartfelt story of people in love. For a moment I had doubted Adi thinking he is intentionally hurting Mahi but I was wrong and I couldn't be more happy. And those stars!! He gifted her what he broke in a way. Loved it.😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".