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janu

@Janu75

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#801

Khushi is trying to move and include her family..a positive sign

Yet she couldn't forget Arnav ...

Akash has a past and Payal " a classy bitch"...when they mutually decided to get aprt she played a gruel some game and got away..

It was a very well written one ..a soul searching one

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#802

Amazing updt
Lov akash n khushi bonding
Payal such a bit*
Get well soon

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#803

Oh Sandy! Sorry to hear you are not well again.

Do look after your health.

You keep falling ill time and again.

I was waiting for the next part before writing my thoughts on the update.

Will do so now.

Childhood friends are the best.

We don't need to hide our real selves before them, since we know they'll accept us as we are.

The best part is that the closeness and the affinity remain despite the passage of years.

Khushi and Aakash met after years, but the love and affection for each other is the same.

Khushi opened up to Aakash and felt liberated.

Aakash too told her his life story without any qualms.

And Khushi understood him.

Can't wait to see the sparks flying between Aakash and Lavanya.

And I'm still waiting for the shirtless Arnav! 😉

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#804

take u r time sandhya...just saw u r note...

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ipkndlover75

@ipkndlover75

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#805

Wonderful update!!!!

Really enjoyed the trip that Khushi n Akash had...it was so refreshing... N specially the beautiful way that u describe the places...makes me feel like I am in Conoor!!!

Felt sad for Akash hearing his story.. Hope Khushi helps him come out of it...loved their easy camaraderie with each other ...despite the years... Speaks for their friendship...

Get well soon... N have lots of rest!!!

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#806

Hope you get well soon.

I was going to wait until Part 2, but guess, I better get a head start with my comments on Part 1.

Meeting Akash has finally given her an outlet to come out and meet the people around her. At least her inner demons are not destroying her further.

She celebrated their 8th birthday from the kitchen... suppose the mother thought she was not good enough to join them.

Am wondering the whereabouts of Arnav during the time Khushi, Anjali and Akash were together. There was only one reference made to him cycling past her, but how does he remember her eyes then?

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#807

Amazing part 1...I loved the bonding between Kuku and Aki...friends catching up...I love this.

Very heart warming chapter...it was full of Kuku and Aki...Khushi is trying her best to herself and all thanks to Akash who is helping her...he is a real friend to Khushi.

Get well soon Sandhya...take care!!!!!

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Manasa

@ManKiBaath

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#808

May be a little bit of that amber liquid might do the trick for you too😉. As per me, there is no issue that the medicine from a 750ml would not fix😃. All fun aside, really wishing you get well soon.

Firstly, let me admit that I was really looking forward for Arnav to resurface after that big entrance he made. But, once I got caught up with the bike ride and friends chat, I am sure Arnav was nowhere to be found even in my thoughts.

Khushi's thoughts were a perfect draw in for the chapter. Her points on friends, shared wisdom and mind being at ease were just spot on. She does need all the wisdom and emotional strength before she faces Arnav and her past again.

The highlight for me was the bike ride. A journey with an old friend, in nature's cocoon, and down the memory lane - that has to be something to remember. The cute Awww moment kind of showed how they are not kids anymore and the photo moment with Anjali in it shows they have never really left their childhood too.

The golf course was impressive but the friends chat was all I was focused on. 498A kind of shows how some good intentions without proper controls can just have the opposite effect. But for all the despair coming out of Aakash, Khushi really impressed being the objective one and still figured out a way to get Lavanya into the equation. Friends like that are an asset for anyone and I am really glad that found each other.

Looking forward for the next update and hoping to see our hero come back into action.

Edited by bhavali4RR - 10 years ago

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#809

Updated part - 2 on page 107

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smric

@smric

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#810

Read part 2 n I must admit that a green eyed monster pleases me so much. Enjoyed Arnav's jealous reaction and his POV on his deeds. So he is ashamed of what he said to Khushi..thats nice.

Its funny to see how Raizada boys are scared of Arti Raizada.

Arnav and Khushi's face off was soothing. .in a way tha; we know; Arnav knows Khushi is innocent. That's a relief.

God I absolutely cant wait to read more about our star crossed couple.

Update fast. Thank you😊