~ArHi FF~#2~The Hands of Time~ - Page 67

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Posted: 10 years ago
The last update was so upsetting..

Saansien hi ruk gayi thi meri...

This update changed the melancholic mood..

Akash Singh Raizada..

The most sane n sensible person of the family came to meet his childhood frnd...

He knew very well that they shared a great loss..

Anjali was his twin sister n Khushi's best frnd..
He dint blame her to be responsible like his mother..

I almost cried when the two frnds cried in each other's embrace..

"I cannot leave this place for long. What if she comes back when I am away?"

"And I couldn't come back here because I couldn't imagine this place without her."

"I miss her."

"I miss her too."

"Everyday."

"Every single day."

"She is never going to come back."

"No."

"But it doesn't make a difference."

"Never."


Khushi invited him to join in her next adventures from Anjali's wish book...

Now..
I m waiting for Arnav's reaction..

And last but not the least..

La is definitely going to be my Ladli..😳

I wanna see her with Akash at any cost..

I also wanna know what happened with Payash in past..
Edited by pakpearl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
There is something in the innocence and belief that a child brings to a relationship and I thinkI said it before that innocence, faith and belief until an adult or the cruel world brushes it over with its perception of reality.


But Akki was lucky - I think his mom's abhorrence of everything to do with the Raos and her subsequent neglect of her remaining children, foxed him to rebel, to see what he wanted to see and believe rather than be led by his mother's angst and vengeance and his father's abandonment. Maybe perhaps as an act of defiance but I am glad that he does not hold Khushi responsible but wanted to come see her and reconnect with an old friend...



... this is what Khushi needed to help her begin the process of healing...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Sandhya you have beautifully depicted the meeting of Akki and Kuku... despite a gap of 20 years they are able to pick up the threads and renew their childhood friendship; the years melting away as these long lost buddies reunite. Their anguish for all that they have lost, most importantly the person that bound them together Anjali' was superbly portrayed. I hope that these two broken souls will help each other find closure and heal along with strengthening their bonds of comradeship.

Lavanya in your story is the epitome of a strong, independent, self-reliant woman of today. I love how you have sketched her. The electric exchange between Akash/Lavanya was a riveting read... hoping for more sparks to fly and the attraction between these two to grow!!

Sandhya, you have once again captured our hearts with your finely etched, lifelike characters woven into a gripping narrative, embellished with breathtaking locales. I am thoroughly enjoying the unveiling of each character as we continue on this fascinating journey "the hands of time".

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Posted: 10 years ago
Akash and Lavanya encounter was the start of something? I hope so. Lavanya's story just got to me because it is such a common occurrence in families where to make one dream come true, there are sacrifices, often untold that are made by parents and other siblings. This is a woman who had found herself and will chart her own course.

I like Akash and am eagerly awIting his story. He seems such a nice, uncomplicated and warm human being and the tragedy that befell his twin has not changed his friendship with Khushi. The meeting of the two friends brought tears to my eyes. Their love for the Nilgiris and their reintroduction was simply poignant.

I am not sure why but I am really not 'feeling' Khushi yet. I sympathize with her but I do not Know and understand her. Have I missed her real introduction...or is she a character to be revealed slowly. What would make Khushi Happy...it's certainly not her work...does the tragedy and guilt and she has not yet allowed her to connect with herself even?
Edited by Anamika100 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank God, someone is normal in the Raizada family. I like Akash and I loved the way you described his and Lavanya's scene and then Khushi joined them. I could envision it perfectly, thanks to your skill with words.
I think a lot still has to unravel, so I'm not going to judge Arnav for the way he is behaving but one can't help feeling bad for Khushi. Each has their own demons, their own baggage and it will be interesting to read about it all.
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Posted: 10 years ago
ahaan...
so not all the members of Raizada clan are judgmental and nasty...
khushi and akki..their friendship is such a breath of fresh air after the back to back intense updates...
m really loving this interesting n thrilling story...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
please continue soon...
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thnaks a lot 4 pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Goddd, what an amazing story Sandhya Di... this is amazing... already loving it to core...
Khushi and Anjali's friendship at that age... Her Highness & Her Happiness... its super cute... nd her fear when she lost her friend... how amazingly u have portrayed it Di...
then the changes in their lives... so many times have passed... so much has happened... but Khushi, the pain she's been going through after losing her friend, even after so many years... her unimaginable guilt though it was not her fault in nany way... poor her...
loving Khushi's family... her parents, her paati, her atha... everyone is such amazing people, they are trying their best to support her emotionally, still she's failing to overcome...
nd her returning back to the place where she lost her highness... remembering the memories, yet trying to move on...
loved ArShi first meeting... it was thrilling... their convos... his flirting with her... trying to please her not-so-secretely... gosh, this man is sooo hot, her own feelings... despite her defiance... her helplessness know who he is... finally when he knew who she is... leaving without know how to react... but later gathering news about her... trying to know her reasons of coming back... misunderstanding her motive... coming back for answers... their face of... those talks... her asking desperately if he really thinks so low of her... her pain when she said 'She was my best friend'... his answering with equal sadness... and the ultimate pull between then, admixed everything else... every moment of it... this is way too amazingly portrayed... Brilliant piece of work Di...
as for Arnav's family... the fight that took place... the ups and downs of their lives... the bitterness... yet, the love and care for each other is there... still emerging as a unit when needed despite everything else makes it a family... indeed, families are messy...
and Aarti Raizada... just like Khushi, she too is stuck in her loss, in the past... i sympathize her... but she is sooo high-handed... she's one of those people who never sees things beyond she herself perceives... too much proud, nd too much stubborn to see things clearly... i do feel bad for her, but i actually cant like her enough to empathize with her...
and Aakash's coming to meet her... the reunion after so many years... this is an overwhelming and amazing experience to only read, loved it so so sooo much... its BEAUTIFUL... aur ha, before i forget, i'm loving Lavaya here...
such a brilliant story Sandhya Di... i was so impatient to read it for so many days... missed you Di... and FINALLY i am back... will be regular from now-on... looking forward to read more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Never expected Akash to share such a tangible bond with Khushi! Despite being Anjali's twin, Akash never detested Khushi and voluntarily stepped into her life!!
Looking forward to the the coupling up of Akash and Lavanya!! Interesting!!

I thought that Arnav's foul experience from the media stemmed from Anjali's disappearance, but I was surprised to see that it stemmed from roots much closer in time! I am guesssing that the seperation scandal with Payal led journalists to dig up and drag everything about the Raizada's including Anju's disappearance!! Poor family!

Edited by Natalia - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Enjoyed every word of the update! Looking forward to their adventure together !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome...again!! 👍🏼

I was worried about Akash after his reaction when he found out about Khushi's return, but am very happy to know him now.

Loved his entry and interaction with Lavanya.
I like your Lavanya, her self determination, sacrifice and overall attitude. 👍🏼
I can picture her being a great friend of the Rao family especially Khushi.

How easy it is for good friends to catch up and feel like they never parted.
Waiting for Akki and Kuku to have a blast completing the bucket list.
Cute nicknames 😆

Missed Arnav in this update...I can't wait to read about his reaction when he runs into Kuku and Akki. 😃


Edited by bkamber - 10 years ago

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