Arhi TS : Pyaar ke Lamhe [ Completed ]

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Loved Part 1! Can't wait to read Parts 2 and 3! I love the way you've written it!

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lala rukh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

wow its simply beautiful :)...lovely concept..written fab :)

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divya_divs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

loved it to bits😃😃😃 the concept is amazing😊both arnav and khushi are 28 years old now, right???? eagerly waiting for the next update😃

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SPraba

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

ust one word to say this was a beautifully penned down chapter
I got very emotional while reading and you have perfectly described Arshis feelings
Why do I have this feeling that this is arnavs plans to win back khushi?
Cant wait to read the next updates and perfectly suited song for the moment
Thanks for the pm and welcome back Mints

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BSDsarun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Omg... Double dhamaka...
Love it..
Super ...
Plzz dear update soon...

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amaypranay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Mints your writing is terrific:) waiting eagerly for the next 2parts

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Roop_P

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Beautiful Story👏

Love the strength in characters.Yes life and time makes you strong and that strength makes you see things at different angles.He is still attached to this broken but the strongest one and she is the very same.Lets see how they come together.

Do pm me please if you can.sending you a buddy request.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Nice beginning...made a little sad perhaps because just yesterday I walked on one of my friends making out with a woman in a coffee shop while his pregnant wife stays at home because she is under bed rest...

Understandably I feel we make a big hala baloo about love, does it really exist or is it just an initial attraction that ultimately wears off?

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aimmy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Mind blowing 👏
I've read few of your works, mostly OSs and TSs and they are just fabulous
This one is going to be my an other favourite
Everyone says about moving on but indeed it is the hardest thing to do
I'm waiting for the second part
Loved it! 👏

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kclovearshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Lovely story Mints!! I was shocked to read that Khushi was already married & divorced!!

I felt Khushi was irrational in divorcing him!! Though her being young & immature contributed it, she didn't even try to put herself through Arnav's shoes or try to understand what he is going through!!

Arnav is the most sensible here😉

Loved the endearment "Kitten"😳