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kaprasin

@kaprasin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

It is a Valentine treat mints..do you like or hate the number 8? 8 years together, 8 years apart.. It was such a nice start. V.emotional too. The way they talked, they are still v.much into each other and living with memories. Anjali is trying to bring them together. Shyam is a villain here too, but a different one this time.😆. The song was perfect.

And if you make a banner like that how are we supposed to read further. I am stuck there for few minutes. Waiting for the next shot.😊

Happy Valentines day to you.

Edited by kaprasin - 10 years ago

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bellarosa

@bellarosa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

marvellous

i loved so much

please continue soon

thanks for pm 😊

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Beetee Lamhe a beautiful songs and it's lyrics speaks for itself.

The way this strong, beautiful and independent woman of the successful fashion studio remembers the past memories, good and bad both. Remembers her living all the good memories in her good times and missing that special someone by her side yet living her moments with him through memories. The way she accepts to herself that she now at present doesn't remember the reason of her falling out of love with him at that time to go ahead with divorce and the fact that it was the working of there immature hearts and mind which didn't let them stood by other it testing time. There can't be better story to depict this song.

I loved how she gets all green monster at the thought of Arnav's marriage and how shocked she gets at finding there wedding band at his ring finger. That shows that she never forget his love, there love and still hold the torch of reconciliation. As you said he came back to her after eight odd Cruel years of Separation.

But now there are mature and there love even being a part is still strong to make Arnav and Khushi both accept there mistakes and the fact that they missed each other.

Loved it! Another way of celebrating valentines day. Reuniting lovers!!!

When will be the next part coming?

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PSharada

@PSharada

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

WOW mints-ve, Itna dard bhara story. Sigh I had tears in my eyes when I was reading the first part. Sometimes life is cruel to some people and I felt so bad for Arnav and Khushi. It is no one's mistake that they are now separated. Hope they realise that they are bound to each other always and give their life another chance together. Can't wait for the second and third part. You better update soon because I simply will not be at rest till I know what happens in the next 2 updates. And the song - Hayee, got my childhood memories refreshed after listening to it.

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xBabyAngelx

@xBabyAngelx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Simply beautiful and a bit emotional update

Well written

Loved it very much

Childhood lovers and they got married very tender age and then they separated.

Now after eight Years they met again.

Looks like they both still love and miss each other.

Can't wait to see what happen next.

Eagerly waiting, continue soon

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

vow another sweet story from you waiting to read what happens next

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barun ki deeewani

@.aarnav

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

they r already divorced..oh...

niceone..waiting for nxt ones

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ARS24

@ARS24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

loved it

thank u for pm !!! 😉

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Anupama Jinethri

@AnupamaJY

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Loved it

Beete lamhe song is one of my favourites. And it was perfect for this update

They were eloped and married but got divorced. Well i think it was circumstances that made them do so.

And now after 8 years they are very successful in theur careers.

Anjali is re-marrying and wants khushi in india.

Can't wait to know what happens next. Nevertheless they still love each other :)

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

A beautiful treat from you Mints...beete lamhe is a beautiful song. Such a beautiful start...very intense too. Loved the way she gets green monsterat the thought of Arnav's marriage and shocked to find their wedding band in his ring finger.

Loved the way you have shown Khushi...a strong, beautiful and independent woman...beautifully wriitten. She remembers the good and the bad part of their past life.