#3 Arshi FF: Smitten By The Neighbour ~Next thread link on Page 134~ - Page 96

Originally posted by: SAM32

read it twice
commenting second time for the same chapter
just to tell. it still mesmerize me like the first time. :-P
loved their bond. update next soon

Originally posted by: Linsie

Originally posted by: shalbi

well that was one hell of an update.. I really loved it..

Update the next part soon

Originally posted by: srmirji

As much as the update started on a very ugly note with the most nasty talk between arnav khushi...I loved how u ended it in a beautiful way.

I should say arnav was very considerate to khushi towards the end.

Thx

Sri

Originally posted by: shruti46

tanvi get khushi onpills .sam doesnt like if his parentseven simply pet some other baby.but after the last update .if they continued like that .sam will get his young sis / brother soon ;)

Originally posted by: shruti46

Ok may be elders will understand suddenshifting INSTANT HONEEYMOon " they may call it

But what about Sam, mumma papa kyu ja rhe h 😉 😛

Originally posted by: rk2127

Girl you have way with words and it got me hooked to your writing style so much that first I finished 'Secret Desires' and than rushed here to catch up with the journey of 'Smitten by the Neighbout'.

I loved this cute, little adorable Samrat. The bond between Khushi and Sam and Arnav and Sam is beautiful. It just goes to say that blood relations are not everything especially in her where one mother who gave birth abandon her infant and another woman who is not yet a mother can shower a kid with all the motherly affection and love.

Coming to Arnav and Khushi's bond, there both have there share of first love found and lost. One to death and other to betrayal. But the beauty of there relation is there friendship, companionship and understanding. That was going perfectly until the physically attraction combined with feelings of love started rooting in there hearts for other.

Last two update scared me but by the end of last update, they both acted there age and maturely handle it all. True Khushi's needs time to realize her love and so does Arnav needs time to confess his.

Heard you don't give pm's and I think I'm good at stalking so yeah will be around.

P.S. Do you have an index of your stories or have you written or writing any other story?

Originally posted by: ashish27

Awesome update...

Originally posted by: sugu10

Wonderful update..read in one go..waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Pinky.Raizada

Tanvi, Please update today, India needs some wickets...Plzzz.