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Chandy

@-PurplePeach-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

It was damn good

Completely out of box..

She threw the food and was behaving wierd...

N he left her without telling her n he is back now after 2 years

The flash back was awesome

Luved it

In was more mysterious..

Waiting for the mystery to get unveiled

Thx for Pm

Chandu

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Aanya.RS

@Aanya.RS

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

ok to start kahan se karun...
everything was just perfect
i like ur way of combining the present nd past👍🏼
i am getting restless now to know ki akhir hua kya tha
he used to love her..nd still love her ..then why he left her
i have a feeling that randhir's bro is somewhere involved in all this...but i like mysteries so i would love to be wrong😉

aanya😊

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Ayushi.

@-.wanderlust.-

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Res

*Unreserved

How am I supposed to start?? It was one Flawless update. The way you narrate the story, combing the present & past with such ease and beauty is Commendable.

According to me, that's the toughtest thing for an author. Well done, there!

Coming to the update, I am loving Mysteries here :D

All the 3 past scenerios have been penned beautifully, showing drastic difference in Sanyukta.

Fearless, Bold & strong- headed girl became Weak, heart broken, blank & pale.

The end was an absolute beauty. Their love-hate relationship is set to start.

Keep writing & update sooner :D

-Ayushi

Edited by ayushimehrotra - 10 years ago

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--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

The way write its amazing..

You balanced past and present beautifully..

The flashback was awesome.. I loved it..

Sanyukta always take unnecessary fights with ppl, but she stood for the right though.

After their kissing. The feeling is mutual .. Lol..

Loved the last part..

Nice update..

Thanks for PM.😊

-Shivani

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Awsme update
Loved it to the core

The flashback is so contrary with present situation
Sanyu was so bold n fierce

Fighting for others
Rd was shocked to see her vulnerable state
He cnt believe she's the same sanyu

Who fights for wrong

They shared a hatred love relation

I m so eager to know what hppnd to sanyu

Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling

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vidhichaudhury

@vidhichaudhury

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

It was awesome.loved it
thanks for pm & pls update soon

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

awesome update... loved it... u r rockstar dude... 👏

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Srishti

@srstrulez

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Notice:

Okay, so maybe I've had a bad day and I am just feeling low about things a little. But this was going on in my mind for some time but I kept pushing it away for as long as I could. Guys, I appreciate you all giving your time to read my work and to actually like it. And I know that probably this is not the best story I have written so far. But still I have put a lot of effort into it and a lot of hours to lay out the entire thing. And it is a little disappointing when I find only about ten comments. I don't like to admit it, really, but now that I have said I am going to say it completely. At least get some of the frustration out. I am disappointed and maybe a little bit hurt too. It is kind of making me lose interest in updating the story. But don't worry, I am a fighter and I will keep updating till the very end. :) Only I will be left discontent, that's all. I mean after the amount of love I received from the two FFs that I posted and the VMs I made, even on Sandhir (I don't know how many of you saw them but they were quite acknowledged when I made them), I am left quite dissatisfied from this forum.

As far as the next update is concerned, I have my midsems this week so there might not be any update before the next friday. Sorry about that, but trust me, I do appreciate the love that you all have given me. Only that maybe, it's not really enough to keep me going.

Srishti