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Archna

@archnahardik123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Comment on page 14.

Thanks for pm

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divya_divs

@divya_divs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

''there will be sunshine, there will be rain...there will be romance...there will be hotness(LOL) ...soon...'' these words at the end of the update made my day😃 but the update is heart-wrenching😭 but as u said there will be sunshine soon, so I am eagerly waiting for it😛 thanku soo much for the pm😊 eagerly waiting for the next update😃

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citi

@citi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

It is bad for all of them caught up in this tangle. Thanks for the update. It is a pleasure to read the story.

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Climax...everything is out in the open...can't wait for next chapter...I feel bad for all of the charecters...lets see how everything falls back in place...a very emotional update...loved it!!!

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Honestly I am very happy that Aastha told Shashi about Aarav's paternity

I was absolutely tired of everyone condemning Arnav for abandoning Lavanya when she needed him most

In truth he should have left when he found out about Lavanya's deceit but Arnav did not want to cause Aarav any pain so he stayed

Damn I hope Khushi does not give up because of this

After all Lavanya's manipulations, deceit and lies now she wants to get better?

I could just slap her senseless

Because of her stupidity she is causing more grief and pain in Arnav's and Khushi's lives

And Khushi being the person she is will want to back off from her relationship with Arnav

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docs

@docs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Well written...take your time dear i m happy with the updates

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swtsam

@swtsam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

gud that shashi now knows truth. ...hope this stunt by lavanya don't push arshi away...can't wait for arshis confrontation. ..plzzz update soon..

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Poju

@Poju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Hey Jenny.. Beautiful update.. Loved it..

Poor Arnav.. Wat all he has to go through.. I jus hope Khushi doesn't hurt him more..

Now Lavanya wants to get better n get over him.. Now after screwing Arnav n Khushi's life..

Didn't she have sense before..

Anyways now that u mentioned all the romance will be back.. I can't wait anymore..

Plz update sooner this time..

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Jenny ... you say that you keep to your plot sketch but I feel the need to tell you that you have indeed gone into the intricacies of the plot(and I welcome it 🤗 )... no character is left loose and adrift...nobody is unimportant...each has their POV,duties,responsibilities and actions...It doesnt matter if it is Daddy Gupta who was introduced in the first few chapters or Daddy Kashyap who is the latest entrant ...each has an equally important part to play in this Story of the life of arshi...this doesnt seem to be like a Fiction ... and so, eventhough I eagerly watch out for the teasers, It doesn't matter to me if the teaser is not reached in the chapter...Infact, this situation gives me an extra chappy to read(please dont feel embarrassed) ... we just love the way you have brought to life all the characters.Spin many more with your magic wand - or should I say your magic keyboard(laptop) 😉

Mammas will always be mammas...they know when to standup for their kid, not because the kid does not know how to fight his own battle but because they know that he will not fight the battle and Arnav may not fight trying to be just to Aarav but may lose sight of the injustice to a living person - Khushi 😊 ... anyway it is the duty of one parent to reveal the cause of this mess to the other parent as this would definitely give Kashyap a right direction to handle his child...

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

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Arilip

@Arilip

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Posted: 10 years ago

#130

I feel bad for Arnav...he is being stretched from all sides...as a lover as a father n with his duties still being Lavanya's husband ..

Loved the way Astha finally defended her son n khushi...

This is what I wanted to say from beginning that atleast ppl who r directly effected by these relations should know the truth,...I know Arnav doesn't want Araav's memories to be blackened but it's also imp for all the parents to know the reason behind the broken relationship...

Good that Lavanya survived else poor khushi's heart wouldn't have taken it...