Arshi FF: Like Never Before #3 - Thread 4 added(26.04.15) - Page 65

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb chapter. The way arnav made breakfast and khushi promised to feed him the first bite every time ... Was really heart warming. Their love for each other is beyond any words.

Mrs. Sennar... Yuckk... She want lusting after ... I feel disgusted to even mention that.

Khushi and arnav's dresses very really nice. Wow... What a meeting that was... Both were fantastic. They showed mrs. Sennar her place, and Khushi's last word to her was bang on.

Very nicely written chapter and I enjoyed reading it. Have a nice vacation.
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Posted: 10 years ago
superbbb!!! but that priya is a true b***h...lusting on the man she had given birth!! anyway, i did thoroughly enjoyed their dinner...
we know we look stunning together...sooo trueee...
continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey thanks for the pm. Loved the update. Wonderful enjoyed every bit of is. Cudnt be more better. So arnav and khushi came over here their horrible past both have some inhibitions. Khushi feels if arnav steps into the kitchen he burn himself. They met arnav's mum and the face off was superb. Update at that moment was very energetic. Awesome update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
bingooo... i meannn awesome... mindblowing... oh my God... what an update... yaaayaaahhhooo...
I hate his mother.. :p...
m soooi happpyyy...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Buaji's entry has opened both Arnav - khushi's past . Khushi is struggling badly to make peace with her mother's past , seeing her agony Arnav has told his deep hidden secret . Both had a bad childhood with no parents to nurture & raise them They both connect painfully .
Arnav has defeated his own demons & said his past to khushi , as a young boy he has suffered a lot . Poor Arnav 😭 Khudos to Akilesh & Akash who has took Arnav out of the shit he was living & pumped him with confidence to live his life . Sad that Akash is not there with Arnav to witness his brother , friend take his revenge with vengeance ,
Priya Sennar is a bitch , she was lusting after her own son without even knowing his identity . She is hell shocked to see the child whom she abandoned for whoring around .This women is an excuse for the women kind . Loved how both Arnav - khushi handled the meeting without even speaking a single word with the bitch . Khushi's parting words nailed the bitch 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic update
Loved it
Beautifully written
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello,

As usual amazing update . Loved the way you started the chapter with light & lively mood. I love the way khushi lightens up & finds happiness in simple things, however it's understandable that she has never subjected to such warmth, care & love all along her life. Most amazing part is the way khushi finds it unbelievable yet pleasurable in all the small mundane things arnav does, like preparing breakfast and so does the man himself, like being fed by khushi. Arnav's vulnerability and agony was so well described in just that single sentence - I've never been fed. My heart went out to the guy. So much he has endured all his life, right from kid to adult to man and khushi is truly an angle & a great blessing in his life. How contrasting yet similar were the 18th & 19th chapter. For me this chapter was all about arnav - his pain, his sufferings, his love for khushi, his dedication, his command, his negotiating skills, every single thing was bang on. I'm too happy with the way you have planned previous chapter - revealing khusi's past and this chapter - revealing arnav's chapter. Algother, both the parts were bang on and just like khushi I do pity Mrs.sennar. Let the game begin and I can't wait to see the trio ( aman + La + arnav ) to buckle up & work together to show mrs.sennar her actual place.

No updates for 2 weeks, that's really sad :-(. Anyways, enjoy your long weekend with a bonus holiday.

Can't wait to read the next chapters

Lots of love,
Pinky
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Posted: 10 years ago
first of all
i love the way u reply to ur readers
yes i have read rasgulla -sp one winter
and really liked this way of connecting with readers
easy and wonderfull 👏
continue it this way
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsommmiiieee its damn ah-mazing!! It strtd with ArHi's sweet momnts, how cute Arnav made breakfast awww!! Hehehe poor Meerah is irritated with Raizada couple lolz. Khushi made sure Arnav goes cooking along, i get hr fear related to burning but i didn't undrstnd fully why? Mayb u cud elaborate it somtyms. Khushi's fb on morng was gud, waiting whn they dig on Khushboo..hopfuly somhow Khushboo's POV is shwn. Finaly Arnav revealed his dark phase to Khushi, vry heart-touching. The epic dinner was truly epic..Mrs. Sennar is more digusting than hr stories, gud she got well-deserved silent slap & humilation..dil ko sukoon mila dekh ke. Da hero sentence was Khushi's departing once "I pity you. And you knw why" hats off to dat! Wnt an insight to Mrs. Sennar's post-dinner shaken mind, definately she got most earth-shakning news, da son she rejctd without word, 2day without word reject hr..truly karam is bitch & she learned it hard way. Nxt chp update sooon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful
marvellous
updates
happy that the effect of hurtful and dreading night were no longer effecting arshi
loved how arnav cooked breakfast for khushi alone

ufff
how u make a couple soo lovely and awesome?
hats offto ur romantic creation
👏
and
meera
no worriesss
i think u are sooo damn lucky to get a hefty pay for watching adorable arshi cooking and caring for each othrr 😉

the office meeting and missing ,kissing ofarshi was awesome
and then the past openup of arnav
fabulously written

thedinner with Sennars was mind blowing
hate mrs.sennar
and what a revenge taken by arnav
finally he will feel some
inner peace
thanks for amazingly fab parts

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