Hello,
As usual amazing update . Loved the way you started the chapter with light & lively mood. I love the way khushi lightens up & finds happiness in simple things, however it's understandable that she has never subjected to such warmth, care & love all along her life. Most amazing part is the way khushi finds it unbelievable yet pleasurable in all the small mundane things arnav does, like preparing breakfast and so does the man himself, like being fed by khushi. Arnav's vulnerability and agony was so well described in just that single sentence - I've never been fed. My heart went out to the guy. So much he has endured all his life, right from kid to adult to man and khushi is truly an angle & a great blessing in his life. How contrasting yet similar were the 18th & 19th chapter. For me this chapter was all about arnav - his pain, his sufferings, his love for khushi, his dedication, his command, his negotiating skills, every single thing was bang on. I'm too happy with the way you have planned previous chapter - revealing khusi's past and this chapter - revealing arnav's chapter. Algother, both the parts were bang on and just like khushi I do pity Mrs.sennar. Let the game begin and I can't wait to see the trio ( aman + La + arnav ) to buckle up & work together to show mrs.sennar her actual place.
No updates for 2 weeks, that's really sad :-(. Anyways, enjoy your long weekend with a bonus holiday.
Can't wait to read the next chapters
Lots of love,
Pinky
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