Arshi FF: Like Never Before #3 - Thread 4 added(26.04.15)

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amita

@star_fan1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#631

Chapter 18

Sorry for late comment

It was really an emotional update

The way it started it was so light and full of love

But entry of buaji made it to o much emotional

She is really a cruel woman who cant see others happiness

She and her family was fed by Khushi's mom all those years but what she gave Khushi a worst and scary childhood

Loved the way Arnav teach her lesson and handle Khushi carefully in her broken state

Last part was really very emotional but both able to pull each other from their engulfing fears

Really loved the whole update too much

Will be back when read next update

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khushboo

@khushiarsha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#632

OMG
in one chapter there is too much
but i loved it long update
first how beautifully u described arnav emotions
then khushi fear her insecurities everything so beautifully...

in part A there was a part
she whispered, her voice laced with an unsure confusion, seeking assurance from him, just like a lost child. "You do know that, don't you?"
it was like aww
how much both are longing for each other love their strength...

he made food for her and then her possessiveness
his words "I've never been fed." "No one ever fed me, Khushi. Not when I was a kid. Not even when I needed someone to feed me when I was sick. None. Never."
how much he have been longing for love...
now he shared almost his past with her
and her excitement for meeting that woman..
just to cure arnav from his pain...
and every time they match😆😉

hate those sennar😡
loved his simple but dangerous payback
"I cant believe I'v done it with out breaking them or myself.
his simple payback was too dangerous than breaking...

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indhuza

@indhuza

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Posted: 10 years ago

#633

pinch pinch...wow...surprise chappyy...luv u to the core buddy...happy journey

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tanu_15

@tanu_15

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#634

oh fantastic update...
loved how arnav supported khushi in d beginning ...
felt sad for arnav for his past n liked it how khushi handled him ...especially how she got exited for d dinner...
nd d confrontation was superb
cant explain how much i loved d update ...

well have a very good GOOD FRIDAY with ur family...
will be w8ng 4 ur comeback ...

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anukutty82

@anukutty82

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#635

This is a very beautiful sorry i am so addicted to it ... and you are one beautiful writer my friend ...i love ...the love between arnav and kushi it is wonderful :) good job .. i will miss you for two weeks ...

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#636

that was superb update
awesome 👏

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#637

Brilliant , fantastic update. ...words fall short to appreciate the amazing , soul touching updates you give us with each chapter...the made for each other couple n the various emotions you bring about in their relationships is so very overwhelming to read...Thanks for such astounding awesome piece of work.n .Thanks for pm

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#638

Awesome , superb update...

This update had its share of revelations, this time from arnav's side bt it was fun...

U can say my reaction was like khushi , I was soo excited for d showdown.. N this was d most subtle yet the most impactful confrontation I have read in a long time...

Thanks for d pm... 😊

N also for d reply...

keep writing...

Love & hugs

Saakhi

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..ri..

@..ri..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#639

wow..what an update.
no words to describe..!!
loved it so much..

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#640

awesome update...both were fabulous...comforting each other...just being together...

so PRiya banerjee-Sennar is the woman...and she was lusting upon ASR...OMG, what a bitch...

their meet was awesome...though few times it was confusing bt who was talking to whom, when you just mentioned he or she...

one sentence did pop out to me, for the wrong reason...its the below one :

"With his arm raped around her, resting firm and warm on the small of her back, Arnav left no stone unturned to mark his wife as forbidden territory to all those lusty eyes."

the above mentioned bold word, shudve spelled as 'wrapped'...this spelling changes the meaning drastically...