TaaRey OS: A Day in Amusement Park

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Guys this OS Specially dedicated to Niru (-CrazyNiru-) andradhikha. Its their birthday Today. So guys hit like and comment posting ur wishes to Crazy girl "NIRU" and cute girl "RADS".😛😛😛

TaaRey OS: A Day in Amusement Park
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"Taani, we have been waiting outside for half an hour at least we can get in" a guy said who was standing beside her. Taani was gazing at large entrance gate murmuring something under her breathe.

"Pls pls, can we wait here itself for few more minutes... pls" Taani made a puppy face to the guy.

"Ok anything for u, but don't make such face." Guy replied.

"Awww , Thank so much" Taani said with wide plaster of smile on her face and turned to look at entrance of gate.

Guy turned and looked at huge board which was hanging, "W E L C O M E" written on it. Beside them "ESSEL WORLD" , was carved on huge rock. Below it with some different font style and smaller font size it was written "IT'S YOUR WORLD" compared to letters of Essel World. (Essel World is an India's Largest Amusement Theme Park). ** Poor guy what else he can do standing outside biggest entertainment park** .
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Guy and Taani reached Essel World before 15 minutes of opening time, if they entered into Amusement park at sharp 10 a.m they would have been first persons to make entry. But Taani took another 15 minutes, impatiently waiting for something outside Essel World.
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Taani smiled when she saw a BMW car entering in to entrance gate of Essel World, a hot and dashing Guy got down from it. Both Taani and Guy(who came in BMW) started to stare at each other lovingly. But Taani gaze changed, when she saw a girl in short dress came out other side of car. This time Taani started to fume in anger.
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Guy and Girl(BMW ones) came towards Taani.
TAANI: Shivam can we get inside
SHIVAM: Taani did u see even Rey and Sara(who came in BMW) r here
REY(forwarding his hand): Hi Shivam.
Shivam smiled and did a friendly handshake. Shivam did same with Sara
REY forwarded his hand to Taani, Taani with fake smile, did a handshake with Rey. But Rey held Taani hand tightly yet gentle so that it did not hurt her. Taani was trying to pull her hand away from his grip instead Rey was giving Naughty smirk to her.
After few minutes of Struggle Taani won, oops Rey left her.
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TAANI: Shivam it's already half an hour late. Can we at least get inside now(pointed her finger towards entrance of Essel World).
Shivam blinked numerous time at her, for last few minutes it was Taani who made him wait but now she just turned the table.
"Haan Shivam get inside or ur date may be Spoiled" Rey said in Sarcasm dipped tone.
"Oh no no Rey it was just friendly visit has Taani reque..." before Shivam could finish Taani dragged him with her.
"Taani I think Rey is misunderstanding us" said Shivam.
"Shivam u just don't bother about him, we came here for enjoying. So let us enjoy'"(these line she said as louder as she can so that Rey came hear). Hearing enjoyment Rey started fume in jealous.
They all got their tickets, before entering a boy who stood at entrance
BOY(to all four of them): Mam and sir, we have organized a spl show strictly only for couples. would u like to join?
REY: Of course it's my pleasure and I am here with my girl friend.(Rey said this words looking at Taani, Taani just turned head to other side).
Rey who got annoyed, grabbed Sara's shoulder ...
REY(commanding tone): Ok what's the procedure
BOY: Sir its so Simple just write ur name and girl friend name in this card and drop it in glass blow. Randomly one card will be picked and Lucky couple will be called to dance floor.
Rey nodded and Took card and scribbled something, finally dropped in glass blow.
REY(to Sara in husky voice): Baby we will be lucky couple tonight.
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Taani rolled her eyes and mocked silently "Bube we will be ducky douple donight"
TAANI: Shivam shall we move. And she circled her arms around Shivam's arms.
SHIVAM was shocked oops no no scared and gulped deeply looking at Rey who literally giving him "I will Kill U looks".
Shivam tried to remove, but Taani held him Strongly
Taani and Shivam walked towards first ride "SHOT-N-DROP", Taani got excited and looked at ride as Small Kid. Shivam turned and looked at Rey, who was standing behind them with Sara, still giving him deadly glares. Shivam with scared type smile, slowly removed her arm around his. Rey gave winning smirk.
All got into first ride, first Shivam then Taani beside her Rey and Sara.
"Sorry Sweetheart" Rey said in pleasing and low tone. But Taani ignored him.
Ride slowly started, they went to top of ride which gave a beautiful view of busy Mumbai city. All people seated started to shout. Rey turned his face towards Taani said "I LOVE U". Taani smiled little yet maintained Stern face "Excuse me".
"Am I Excused baby" Rey said hoping answer yes from her.
"Of course not Mr.Singhania" Taani replied him in stern tone.
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Suddenly the ride from top dropped to down. Which made all four of them shout "Ahhh"
"Stop it stop it..." Sara shouted on top of her voice to save her life. All got down from ride.
"What Mr.Singhania ur girl friend looks scared. Better u should have taken her to kids ride not to adult ones" Taani said with smirk.
"Oh ya then Miss. Shekhawat I hope even that suits u" Rey said looking at Shivam who was holding his head.
Taani stamped her foot like Kid moved towards Shivam and again dragged him to next ride.
Rey smiled at her kiddish behavior followed Taani and Shivam along with Sara.
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Next Ride was "TOP SPIN". Looking at pale face of people who got down from that ride, Shivam and Sara said no.
TaaRey got into Top Spin, which turned upside down making their hair look clumsy. After short ride TaaRey got down, Rey held her wrist and went closer to Taani, tucked her hair strands behind her ear which was falling on her face.
"Baby u r exactly looking like, after our night together" Rey said in sexiest tone with made Taani blush like hell. "Go and set ur hair properly or else it would be more difficult for me to control" again Rey made Taani to blush.
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Rey and Shivam moved to Boys washroom, Taani and Sara towards Girls washroom.
IN BOYS WASHROOM
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As soon as Shivam and Rey entered, Rey locked washroom inside.
"How Dare you Shivam, came on date with MY Girl Freind" Rey said holding Shivam's collar.
"No no Rey u r misunderstanding, actually in Morning only Taani called me saying both of us were going to Essel World. Even though I refused her, she literally dragged me here. U know na we r just friends, its just a friendly visit", Shivam said in scared tone.
Rey could find truthiness in his word. Still held his collar more tightly "Whatever, I don't want see u more anymore with her".
Shivam nodded like a kid "But how can I go "
Rey replied" Don't worry about it I have plan, I will give u ring to ur mobile. Act as u got important work and move".
Shivam" I hope now u can leave my collar".
Rey leaving his collar "Haan, go and wait outside I will be back in few minutes".
Shivam left. Rey looked at mirror, yesterday incident started to play...
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Flashback
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Taani and Rey were dating for 5 yrs. Sterday night Rey promised Taani to take her out for Dinner.
Taani looked into Mirror herself for numerous times to make sure she looks perfect. After wait for 1 hr she called Rey.
GIRL: Hello
TAANI: Who the hell r u?
GIRL: Mam, I am Sara, I mean his PA.
TAANI(Shouted): Whatever, Where is Rey?
SARA: Mam, Sir his in board meeting.
TAANI: What? Just transfer my call to him
SARA: I am sorry mam I can't since Sir gave strict instruction not disturb him until meeting is finished.
TAANI(Calming herself): See Sara I am not requesting U, I am commanding u to transfer call to him right now. Or else u won't be there tomorrow to attend calls.
Sara got scared of Taani, rushed to Board meeting room.
SARA: Excuse Sir, may I coming in
REY: S u may
SARA: Sir there is an important call for u
REY: Sara I already gave clear instruction, no calls still meeting ends
SARA: Sir actually Mam on another end, I think she is angry on u.
Rey gave a confused look and hurriedly picked the call making excuse to members present there.
REY(lovingly): Taani, My sweetheart
TAANI(Shouted): What the hell r u doing, I am waiting for u for past 1 hr.
REY: Wating for me? Why baby?
TAANI: U r asking me y. Rey how can u forget, u promised me that u will take me out for dinner
REY (bite his tongue): Oh I am so sorry baby. I totally forgot, u known na when it comes to business I totally forget this world. Now I am in meeting baby. I promise tomorrow pakka we will spend whole day together.
TAANI: Ok Mr.Singhania. Now listen to me, tomo I am not free. I am going on date with Shivam to Essel World. And u can spend ur day with ur stupid business. Bye and Don't try to call me. Good Night Mr.Singhania. ( Taani purposely informed place bec she knows Rey will come to meet her)
REY: Baby no no... (before that Taani cut the call). (to himself, running his fingers through his hair) shit again u forgot her Rey. She his damn angry on u. U r dead
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IN GIRLS RESTROOM
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TAANI: Look here Sara, its not ur fault u came with Rey. I know Rey brought u here to make me jealous.
SARA: Thanks Mam for understanding
TAANI: Ok now u can leave Rey
SARA: Mam but Sir
TAANI: No Sir or Wer. Just go away from my sight. Or else don't make me regret later. I hope u got whatever i said.
SARA nodded in accepting her order.
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Four of them gathered at once place. As planned, Rey gave a ring to Shivam mobile. Sara also acted as if she got important work. Both Sara & Shivam made excuse and went away. Rey and Taani looked at each other caught into Eye lock.
REY (pulled her towards him, held her waist): So Miss. Shekhawat r u ready to spend whole day with me?
TAANI: Not even in ur dreams Mr.Singhania
Saying this she pulled herself away from him and moved to Next Ride.
REY(himself): Oh god this much anger on me. Pls help me... saying this he ran behind Taani pleading her.
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Rey started to Sing[Song selection: jahnvi]
''''''''''''''''''''''''
O Meri Jaan Na Lele Ke Meri Jaan 2
Teri Ada 2
Jaan Jala Na Tujhe Pe Deewana 2
Mein Hoon Fida 2

(Taani sat on bench, Rey came sat beside her. She moved little away, Rey to came nearer to her.
They continued this until Taani stood as it was dead end in bench and walked away)

Gustakhi Maaf Karde
Abb To Insaaf Karde
Apna Dil Saaf Karde
Kehna To Maan Le
O
[Jaane Bhi De Bhi Hua
Jaane Bhi De]4

(Rey plucked a flower and forwarded to her, Taani turned her head. But she got shocked when Rey
Gave flower to old lady who was standing beside her and winked at Taani)

[Gussa Tera Jhootha
Jhoothi Moothi Berukhi Hai
Jaanu Main To Jaanu
Teri Naa Mein Haan Chhupi Hai]2

(Rey made some few steps around old lady and Taani. He gave a hit on Taani shoulder with his shoulder.
Taani sighed and moved to food stall bought a cold coffee. When she started to sip, Rey took it from and started
To drink)

Aye Sanaam Na Kar Sitam
Tujhko Khuda Ka Vasta

( Taani folded her hand around her chest giving sad face, A small kids came near to Taani gave
bunch of balloons and bouquet of Red Roses. Taani smiled and kissed kids cheek. Kids
pointed towards Rey)

Hey..
Gustakhi Maaf Karde
Abb To Insaaf Karde
Apna Dil Saaf Karde
Kehna To Maan Le
O
[Jaane Bhi De Bhi Hua
Jaane Bhi De]4

( Rey along with kid stood in front of her. Kids where holding S O R R Y single letter boards in
Each other hands. Rey was holding his ears and giving pleading look to her)

[Tanha Na Kategi Zindgani Jaanle Tu
Meri Hi Zarurat Tujhko Hogi Maanle Tu]2
Mar Ke Bhi Na Chodunda Teri Baahien Tera Raasta

(Taani smiled seeing his cute face. Seeing her smiling Rey started to jump along with kids.
Kids brought Taani towards Rey)

Gu.Gu.Gu..Gustakhi Maaf Karde
Abb To Insaaf Karde
Apna Dil Saaf Karde
Kehna To Maan Le
O
[Jaane Bhi De Bhi Hua
Jaane Bhi De]4

(TaaRey along with Kids started to dance)
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Dancing both of them reached a place which was bit dark. Spotlight fall on boy who they found at entrance(remember guys Some spl show only for couple)
BOY: Good Evening. I Welcome U All for our spl Show. Its time I am going to pick a card. Let us see who is that lucky couple.
(He picked a card). Lucky person is MR.Reyaansh Singhania
TAANI(jealous tone): See Lucky guy is U, but unluckily Ur so called Girl Friend Miss. Sara not here.
REY: Jealous. Just wait baby
BOY: And Girl name is Miss.Taani Shekhawat
Taani gave a surprising look and Rey chuckled at her reaction.
BOY: MR.Reyaansh and Miss.Taani, Can we have both of u on stage.
Rey dragged Taani to center of stage, Intertwined his hand with her and with another hand grabbing her waist. Taani placed her one arm on his chest. Both of them got into eye lock and danced according to romantic tune played in Background.
Still dancing...
REY: So Sweetheart how is my surprise.
TAANI: Surprise??
REY: Haan this show(winked at her)
TAANI: Rey did u arranged this show for me.
REY: S baby. I am extremely Sorry for sterday.
Taani eyes got brimmed with tears seeing his effort and hugged Rey. Rey smiled and hugged her back.
TAANI: Its ok Rey, even I reacted little over sorry.
REY: No baby... Ok leave it. Lets us enjoy this moment.
Taani nodded her head, Rey smiled and kissed near her lip. Taani smiled and blushed looking at him. Again Rey kissed her cheeks
REY(whispered): I LOVE U BABY
Taani kissing his cheeks and small & quick peak on his lip
TAANI: I LOVE U too much My Prince Charming.
REY: Just a peak that's not fair baby.
TAANI: Rey its public... Before she could finish, Rey Sealed his Lips against her, Taani first felt embarrassed but later gave up, grabbed his head for grip. Their Kiss turned into more deeper and passionate one. 😳😳😳
⭐️
Guys hope u at least like it. I mean i know its not up to expectations. I am sorry .
All feedback, tomatoes and eggs r welcomed.
If u like hit like and comment.
ALWAYS KEEP SMILING :)

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IMPORTANT NOTE
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Guys this OS Specially dedicated to Niru (-CrazyNiru-) and radhikha. Its there birthday Today. So guys hit like and comment posting ur wishes to Crazy girl "NIRU" and cute girl "RADS".

For Niru
On this special day, I wish you all the very best, all the joy you can ever have and may you be blessed abundantly today, tomorrow and the days to come! May you have a fantastic birthday and many more to come... HAPPY BIRTHDAY


Niru I hope u like this

For radhikha
Wishing u all the great things in life,
Hope this day will bring you an extra share of all that makes u happiest.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY, and may all the wishes and dreams u dream today turn to reality.

Come guys start to post ur wishes
Edited by Jasmine_ash - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Firstly happy birthday raddihka..
Awesome os...
Awww cute taarey..
Poor Sara n shivam
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hilarious n cute dii!!!
Taani n Rey r so jealous!!!
Hehe..
Loved it..
Keep writing!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely cute
Os thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow.. Marvellous.. Essel world.. Meley tou b jaana hai.. Ek din mai b jaawongi waha... He is singing song.. Hehehehe.. Shivam charcter was so cute.. Bt i would prefer if Sara ki jgh Kriya hoti.. Ending was bst.. Birthday walo happy birthday
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Awsome os
Loved jealous rey and taani

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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres!
first of all...
a big wala huggiee to u fr making dis birthday so spl fr me🤗
thank u so much fr dis OS!
i just luvd it 2 d core!
aww...
TR misunderstanding😛.
woh toh hamesha hota hai😉
n Taani wid Shivam😡
n Rey wid Sara😆
nothing can make Rey more angry than seeing Taani with Shivam😆
aww... Rey saying sorry but Taani ignoring him😆
hahaha! TaaRey threatening Shivam and Sara to leave👏
that was just epic😉
awesum song selection!
and d sequence was beautifully described
finally Taani forgives Rey!
and TR happily ever after😃
lovely os yaar!
do write more!
thank u so much again

love,
Niru

Edited by -CrazyNiru- - 10 years ago
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Marvellous 😊awesome update
Thanks for PM
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Awsme yr

Beautifully written

Loved it

Love u
Keep smiling

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