Just an UMBRELLA- Epilogue- Satin--Pg 135 - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

Josh smile, "come on man I wasn't about to miss ur wedding." He looked at kripa and smiled cheerily, her eyes narrowed slightly with suspicion, but she smiled back, shaking his hand.

"Umm…we will be right back" angad said smiling at kripa. She smiled back, moving a step forward, to be more comfortable, but she tripped on her dress, angad got her just in time, she got up using him as a support, "I am sorry its just this stupid dress."

"Lets go josh, I have some important 'business' to discuss with u." angad said still angry.

Angad and Josh left, there was small smile on kripa's face, as she watched them leave, and wondered silently that angad looked so cute in a coat and tie.

"What the hell are u doing here!! I told everyone specifically that I do not want anyone, in the 'business' to be even closely associated with me, not for 8 more months."

"Sorry dude, but I had very important news to give u."

"Don't call me dude u know how much I hate it."

"Ok, boss I have just found out some very important information."

"My name is angad not boss."

"U are our boss now, after Prithvi, it travels down the family line u know that."

Angad cooled down a bit "And u are my best friend so call me angad. Anyways what's the news."

"Well I just found out that a very inside secret was just leaked to the FBI."

"Wait, what?? how can that be I thought the inside man was from our rivals Apriks, that's how they found out where Prithvi was staying and then had him killed."

"That's what I thought but its obvious that we have 2 traitors and not one. One is an FBI agent, and the other is an Aprik (member of rival group)."

"hmm… FBI agents are dumb, he will be eaiser to find.

"How do u know it's a he it could be a women."

"Women are even dumber then FBI agents, there is no way. But we need to find out about the aprik as soon as possible, its very important."

"Don't worry I ll get down to it, he will be reveled in no time."

"I hope so, we cannot afford to lose anyone else, anyways thanks josh I think this will be very valuable information, I ll be at "the place" at 2 o'clock tonight, I want u to be there, and on TIME. Pass the word around, bring as many people as u can get."

"Are u sure aren't u er…going to be busy tonight, u know its ur wedding night."

"Josh u know why I married her."

"Ya ya I know anyways see ya later du…angad. Have a nice night, hope u can make it at the meeting, of course we will fully understand if u can't." He said winking.

Angad rolled his eyes watching him leave.

He walked in the church to find kripa with some of her friends she smiled as he came in. Angad was surprised that kripa had reacted in such a way he had left her alone on their wedding day and she did not seem to mind, object, or as far as he could see even care. Women were dumb, he concluded, and it was going to be easy fooling kripa into believing almost anything.

Edited by munizaaa - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
okay me first nice continue soon I hate angad he is so mean i feel bad for kripa 😭😊
Edited by ~*Milly*~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lol i hope kripa turns out the be that agent from the FBI lol and i hope she turns the tables on angad and makes him feel really dumb! love his attitude though! lol hes sucha woman hater LMAO u came from one haha! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful plz cont soon like numera89 sed hope kripa is de fbi agent 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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can u share ur brains with me 😭 😆
wonderful part and very different. continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part. I just noticed sumthing-
APRIK is jumbled up from KRIPA. 😉

KRIPA
APRIK

is this supposed to b a clue? lol 😆 i bet the traitor is Kripa and she kiled prithvi becuz she hated him or loved angad. hmm...interesting plot. So many questons! 😳 now u have to answer them! lol cont soon- i cnt wait to read more! 😊

x3 Prakriti
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
The title of this fan fic definately got my attention 😊. I like the concept and Kripa seems like a totally sweet innocent girl unaware of the reality. I feel bad for her. Angad is not sooo bad. I just hope he does not go against the law completely and turn out to be a villian 😭. hope we see some positive changes in him as the story progresses.
Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: prakriti

nice part. I just noticed sumthing-
APRIK is jumbled up from KRIPA. 😉

KRIPA
APRIK

is this supposed to b a clue? lol 😆 i bet the traitor is Kripa and she kiled prithvi becuz she hated him or loved angad. hmm...interesting plot. So many questons! 😳 now u have to answer them! lol cont soon- i cnt wait to read more! 😊

u no i was just thinking the same thing prakriti.. lolz... i think she married prithvi cuz she hated him and wanted revenge.. and thats wat i htink.. the kid is just a kid.. u no.. it happens.. when u wanna do something.. rite?? i dunno i want that to happend cuz angad is all women are stupid. well thats it. thats wat i want him to regret!!!!!!!

comtinu soooonn

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: prakriti

nice part. I just noticed sumthing-
APRIK is jumbled up from KRIPA. 😉

KRIPA
APRIK

is this supposed to b a clue? lol 😆 i bet the traitor is Kripa and she kiled prithvi becuz she hated him or loved angad. hmm...interesting plot. So many questons! 😳 now u have to answer them! lol cont soon- i cnt wait to read more! 😊

x3 Prakriti

😡😡😡 noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.................... God i hate u so much for figuring it out but ya its a clue😛😆😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part! I think Kripa might be the "traitor" or like the FBI agent or whatever, I loved this part! Cont. soon!

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