OS_Love To Be Continued.......

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Love To Be Continued...


i was sleeping beside him,still i had engrossed with a severe loneliness.at this moment of life,wont we've any need of love?he was sleeping facing opposite.his big breathings were ensuring his presence.she reminded how she would continuously chatted wid this sleeping prince just after their marriage.now hardly he talks at night.he had been very busy.but he should also realise he was the only person for whom she waited all day long.she kept her all desired conversations for him.she was alone in this house with his growing kid.she was bored all the day now even in night.they had a girl baby 4months ago,n she started feeling ignored by him already.what about her rest of life?she felt a football match was much interesting for him than her.her thoughts got interrupted by baby's noise.she jerkly took her n went to balcony to pacify her with milk.she didnt want to disturb him,his dreams like such.she was talking with her life,the baby.she-baby,dont cry.papa sleeping na,he has office tomorrow u know.baby-so what mumma?he always goes to office.he should be with u too.she-babyy,why troubling him?u r with me na?so i need none.baby seems like it so she was quiet.after sometime she slept,so she silently lie her on bed.she felt hungry.she went on downstairs kitchen for having some food.she made a quick noodles n went to dining.she switched on tv.she was lazily watched that.all this was only thing of her life's entertainment.she seemed tired of fighting with her mind.she was never lived alone till he entered her life.this sudden loneliness killed her.she searched for a sheet,didnt find in dark.so she slept curling up.in morning,he woke n looked for her.till she became mom,he never expected her to make his breakfast.rather he felt it was his responsibility to do this for his swthrt,newly mom.he felt she must be in kitchen to give him surprise,but he found her in drawing room,with tv on.he offed tv,felt very guilty adoring his sleeping beauty.omg!she looks diseastered.he said by himself.why i didnt notice that earlier?her health was broken n her eyes was full of black marks.her hair was messy like she forgot caring of herself.he kissed slightly on her cheeks,so that she couldnt feel it.he kept the baby in a trolly beside her.he made n had breakfast fast,kept for her too.he wished he would be with her all day long.in office,he couldnt be attentive,he felt what need of this money,job.if she was unhappy.he thought of calling her.then he found 3 misscalls of her.shit.it may be urgent.he called at once.she picked saying-wont i disturb u i guess?he-i'm always free for u.tell me.she-i need some pampers for ur princy n chips for me.will u bring with u?he-ok,i dont know about pampers,better u get ready.we'll go together in the evening.okk.she-really?i hardly remember when i go outside with u last time after my delivery.ok i'm making ready to my baby.he-oh its my baby.she-really.thats why u hardly take her on ur lap n spend sometime.he kept silent.he was very guilty.he kept the phone with big sigh.was that he changed so much?his small world,beloved family saying this.he thought to gift her something.then he felt nothing was worth to gift her what she does for him everyday.she had sacrificed her career,her happiness,her freedom, her everything.he went back early in the home.she was really surprised to see him.she just shouted-ooppss lunch is not ready yet.u should inform me na.u know i'm very slow cook.he laughed,gave her a tight hug.no problem my kids mom.u manage everything so smoothly,i cant manage u and office.i'm very bad hubby he na?she-not so.but bad papa i must say.he-ok u go on.i'm handling my princy.he took the baby,went to change.he wished the kid would grow up soon,whether till she was confined in this house.he played with her,after sometime she cried out.she came hurrily saying-now give her to me,i feed her.he-ok i serve food for us in dining.she-really?it's so sweet of u.she went to bedroom.she fed n made her sleep.they had lunch together.he took a nap.she was getting ready.she felt herself so ugly.she shouted i wont go outside with this face.he came near her,said-u r now a mom.u should take care of urself.she was silent.she-i'm not used to do.he-u r a beautiful lady with a beautiful mind.u dont need any make up.i dont get my chit-chat fairy being so mature mom now-a-days.she laughed.she made ready the kid n went out with him.in car,she felt finally she was breathing.they had some grocery shopping.then he gave her chocolate icecream treat.he went to a market.they did some shopping.she was buying all kid things n dresses.he was buying her stuffs.then she bought some tshirts for him.they had dinner at a restaurent.there kid suddenly woke n cried.she was embarassed.he took her on his lap,asker her to complete food.then she fed her in the car.they had a long tiring day when returned home.she was busy cleaning the kid.so he helped keeping cloths proper way.he didnt sleep today,waited for her accompany.she came in a while.she was feeding baby to sleep,he said-did u ever imagine u've to manage all this stuffs alone in this house?she-never.i was satisfied till u were with me.like pregnancy time n few months ago.now i feel all this a burden.having a kid,still loneliness kills me.she hugged him.said-i wish u wud pay a lil extra attention to me.he-i know i should.u became so lean n thin.like my baby sucks u all.she laughed-for sure.he stopped the conversation with a passionate kiss on her lips.she was being hungry for it for a long days.then he embraced her like his baby.he caressed her silky hair n made her sleep.she needed a peaceful sleep a lot.his selfthought-thanks god,its all upto the mom.who carries baby in her womb for 9months,then bringing it up alone.he felt shattered for her.next morning,she woke up while found him getting ready.she-can i want somthing from u?say u give me.he-did it ever happen u wanted n i didnt giv it u.she-make a flights ticket.i wanna go to my home city,my house.i feel very bored here.he was shocked.he could understand her mind's condition.she had critical condition in pregnancy even that time she lived with him.now it was different.his ignorence cant bear to her.so she wanted to be with her family.he-ok,i'll.u pack soon.she smiled lazily.she was very happy thinking of her home.she would treat as a princess there.she didnt ask him to come along her.as she knew he should live somedays without her.she left for home with kid that night.he didnt hug her,he knew he couldnt separate their embrace.he was silent.in her home,she was free like a bird.there r lots of servants n her cousins to handle the baby.her parents were too much happy.they keep feeding her with her fav receipes.she went to park with her angel.then shopping for her whole family.she suddenly had bunch of happiness.he called her many times a day,she talked merely once.he couldnt sleep without her,neither the kid.he felt it was better to die to live such.he made tickets n went to his in-laws house.he was searching for his lady,then mom told she went outside.he found the baby in her lap.he took her n kissed,he knew how much he missed her.when she returned,she was not surprise to see him there.she gave him a side hug.he-so seems u dont need me anymore.she laughed-yaah u r so boring.at night,he was given a room to share with her little brother.he came to her with a pout face.he-wont i get entry in ur room?is this ur punishment to me? She smiled.she-ok,but no talk,only sleep.he-okk.in bed,he hugged her tightly n said-u can leave me,but i wont leave u.they slept embracing each other.next day,she was not seen anywhere with kid.he was irritated.he went out to find them.he was tired looking for them.then after nightfall,he came home without them.he entered home n found there was a party for him.omg he said.today is my bday.how can i forget that!she smiled n baby made some cheerful noise.he had a great bday party.after somedays he was packing his things.hej asked her if she wanted to go with him.she replied my world is incomplete without u bt i dont want to keep my baby's world incomplete.he-ok.but think about me once.she-now u'll get to know how i used to feel.he understood it already.



Do like n comment plj...enjoy it..ignore mistakes.thanks-muna
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice OS. Great job expressing the emotions of both persons involved.
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after long time muna...
lovely os...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely OS. She made him understood of her loneliness.

Thanks for the PM. Missed your OS.

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