Aham FF: Till the Day I DIE (collab with Texie)

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: rima4ever
amazing start

Thanks 😊

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
<font color="#0000FF">Nice Starting !! Loved How The Two Girls Helped 'The Man' From The Road and Got Stuck In The Hospital !!
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Thanku dear 😊

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.Vaikartana.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Nice start Sweetiee.Loved Amanyata.She seems to be a compassionate human being.And Armaan is too intriguing.Eager to see how the story unfolds.Continue soon dear

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sankadevimaha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

I dont think so she would prescribe medicines n d letter.. anyways lets wait fr d next update to knw abt dt.. abt ds update - it ws amazing.. whos dt girl getting married to sum1 else??? Well I ll ignore hr nw.. I want to knw whether armaan ws aham?? 😉😆

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...Hemangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Loved it so much😳...u both did a gr8 job by coming up with a such refreshing script 👏...Loved Amanyata...she's so helpful, compassionate😊 & Armaan' character was interesting, he lost himself in the sorrow of his betrayed love...😭

Okay I want to ask one question...
Amanyata & Armaan are the lead pair right...is Amanyata taking treatment for her illness...may be some terminal illness...& Armaan finds his solace or a new hope of life in her...but she is herself moving towards the other end of the life bridge...just my guess 😊

One more thing...can I name them ArMi or ArTa or ArMa...Just think of some cute nickname for this pair

Almost forgot this...the chapter name is same as my 1st chapter in my Dwaparyugi FF... & Sansii dearie..u are doing a fab job. U have written some memorable dwaparyugi pieces & Im sure ur Kalyugi piece will be an outstanding one too

Continue soon 😛

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Sphinx.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

aww!!! so cuteee girls..take this girlsrealy the script is wonderful..well written..so amanyata is sona right?? and my God!!! may I know what inspired u to make this script? soo dense and deep script..surely i am gonnapoor armaan again he is gonna he would have some hard times..I guess..the characterizations are good..sansi and sami to my opinion I too don't write character sketch and prologues..spoilers..the readers should know it on the flow of the story..it would make the readers more attached to the story line and falling short of words happens normally..It is a very big threat while writing something..but u people did a fantastic job.hats off darllus

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Aarti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Very interesting and well written 👏
Thank you for PM dear

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Nice Starting !! Loved How The Two Girls Helped 'The Man' From The Road and Got Stuck In The Hospital !!

Thanku Radhey😊

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Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: vaikartana
Nice start Sweetiee.Loved Amanyata.She seems to be a compassionate human being.And Armaan is too intriguing.Eager to see how the story unfolds.Continue soon dear

Thanks Vani😊
Yups Armaan is intriguing😳