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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sman



Kavi(s) , Radhika didn't say when is she going to update Notes from past..very clever :-)
As much as I am eager to know what happens in Holi party but want to know exactly what happened between Kushi and Poonam in the past before they come face to face again on Holi party


Shailu, she said she is updating on Wednesday and it will be Notes from the past...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kclovearshi


You never know.. They say never say never right?😉

May be Arnav's hopes may come true.. We are already seeing some changes in her..

May be she won't out rightly apologize but may turn a blind eye to her son's budding friendship..if she is weighed down by her own conscience...

It is very likely that she will see the error of her ways. But she is also the main antagonist of the plot, so it won't happen for a long time. Unless YB has been misleading us all this while and someone else is the villain of the piece. Sometimes I am a little suspicious of Akash 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
okkk...so when is the update??
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all apologies for the delay..
Thankyou for the update and that too a long one.
So finally certain things got cleared up here.
Arnav and khushi on their way to frienfship and its good that she knows now that its Arnav and not Divyesh.That sofa thing was hilarious. Khuddar khushi had to pay a price for her khuddari and that too resulted in some umm rabba vey moments .I liked the way you put the moment short and no long aankon mein ankhen daalna...because that is how it is in reality these moments happen like it comes and goes away and then you reminisce about in solitude,smiling ,thinking ,dreaming.
Aman oh Aman you broke my heart.Ofcourse i wanted you to come looking for me but who told you to tell it to arnav.You were supposed to be the hukum ka ikka making arnav jealous and bringing them closer.
So anjali is adopting a son.Gud we are in dire need of people like Joon ji who remembers to think about drivers n all.But ofcourse a stable job is a must now that they are planning aadoption and all.

I remember saying i like payal.Another disappointment there.Why are you doing this lady?Live upto your name and be a music in lives of people.For mere politics dont do this.But human is human we live to err.Let see where will this take her.

So Mummy Mussolini knows the truth.Its good the quicker she knows the faster we get to know if arnav really has grown up and can he now stand up for what is right atleast now in front of his mother.

And ofcourse Renu bhabhi well...lets wait n watch her story.What on earth led her to raise a child fatherless when she knew (if she knew )her husband was very much alive all along.

And mr.Raizada instead of reminding others that the wedding is postponed and not called off why not do some solitude thinking.Retrospection is what you need.It will answer many of your doubts.

I dont know if you ll agree but whenever i watch ndtv news ravish kumar i find a kind of apnapan in the way he speaks ,discusses,pass sarcastic remarks.You have your own way.That apnapan is what i find in your story.In that gobi ki sabzi when renu bhabhi is apprehensive about serving it , gas getting over and changing it, counting money and problems,people siding their caste parties, love of father daughter..
these mundane and simple things make it relatable and close to heart.Such things happen with so many people around.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: YellowBoots

Folks, thank you all for the lovely comments as always. I loved reading all your theories and after all the Holi Party speculations am I glad that my next chapter will be a Notes From The Past?! 😆


I am always excited to read the delicate details that we get from the blasts from the pasts. Being a literature student who loves History... The historical nuances surrounding TEWARI & SONS is an exhilarating read.

But I was so looking forward to experience the strong undercurrents of the current times - especially at the prospect of Bhangra after Bhang!!

Thats the only way to break the barriers for Khushi to finally taste her HAPPINESS and Arnav to break the pretentious DAM.

Can we not have both??? History as well as Current Affairs!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Isn't this the need of the hour?!?!

Radhika...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: YellowBoots

Do you suppose it is better I do shorter updates but more frequent? Though I am so unbelievably verbose I am unsure if I can pull that off anyway. But will try.


Dear Authoressji - I am happy to read whatever length you write and like others, I never want my little trip into the world of T&S to end!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: _Mini_

Isn't this the need of the hour?!?!

Radhika...


Haaye... Maar daala
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Posted: 10 years ago

I know I know isnt it? I thought why to burn in hell alone..
Hum to doobenge tumhe bhi saath le dubenge..





Hows this one meri jaan!! Till Wednesday... isse kaam chalana hoga.
Edited by _Mini_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pmpm1

Loved it as always! You are weaving such an intricate web with all the characters. The best part is that each of these characters have an important part to play in the story... Many things happened in the update, the most important one being that Khushi has figured out Arnav's involvement in all this. But of equal importance is the fact that Payal invited Khushi for her party - of course it was for an ulterior motive, but still... I had the same feeling/expression as Khushi after she talked with Payal.

Also Aman finally did come to meet Arnav. Wondering how the Renu bhabhi angle is going to pan out though... But definitely worried about the impending storm that Arnav's mom will bring about knowing that Khushi is in touch with her son. She really is evil! Also won't Arnav's mom go for the holi party? Oh, I hope there is no showdown at the party!
I hope you update sooner next time. 😛😊



Thank you pmpm1 for putting my very exact thoughts into words.


Brilliant updates, YB, finally got round to reading them.

My main worry is Poonam Raizada whose hawk eyes spotted Khushi's name in the register.

Payal is obviously inviting Khushi and family as part of her new political strategy. Hope Khushi sniffs this out as quickly as she did Arnav's schemes to help her.


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