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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
What an interesting update...
i like your payal a lot in spite of acting aloof and indifferent at many times she is hardly that...is she falling in love with Akash???
Arnav is mamas boy many times...I wonder if Poonam Raizada in spite of being the strong woman she poses is insecure...is that why she has done all that to Kushi... now she is going to know about the Tiwari situation and Arnavs involvement she is not going to be happy...
Divyesh i like acha bandha hai...just how i like Preeto!!!
Now Mihir Gupta ..i wonder if he is Shyam by any chance???that will not do anything good for Kushi...does Akash know something is that why he spoke about Renubhabhi to Kushi...
The best part of the whole lot is the last...it was like Arnav and Kushi were thrown back to their old meeting but with their new understanding...Kushi hasi ...iska mathlab woh tho phasi..
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Posted: 10 years ago

NK might have said it in jest, but I do think that Payal has started to reevaluate her life - postponing her wedding was the first step in giving her time to sort it all out, but sending back the lehenga seemed like the final step for her to leave this relationship, at least symbolically (LOL even HP realizes it!).

Although Arnav cares about Payal and was distraught about her condition after her accident, there was nothing but a platonic feel during their scenes. I like that you have kept this consistent throughout the story.

I don't know what Horlick's is, but Jun and Jhalli always make me laugh with their eccentricities😆

So Arnav has gotten Divyesh to be Khushi's little Santa once again. When will this man understand why he's doing all of this for Khushi?

Good thing Khushi is smart enough to realize that all these good things won't happen for no reason - hope she gets to know that it was Arnav helping her out, and hopefully there are no more surprises coming her way in regards to the ownership of T&S.

When Arnav is putting on his fashion show, I would have thought there would be more support from his family, even if they weren't that type of family. The other Raizada's could have postponed their meetings for an hour, couldn't they? I guess Arnav didn't really have expectations of them coming anyways - lol he was more upset about Khushi not saving his phone number than he was about his whole family missing out on his fashion show. And was it just me, or did it seem like Arnav was hoping that Akash brought Khushi along to the fashion show?

Btw, I really wish we got to find out what happened in that phone call between Arnav and Khushi when she asked who he was! And why doesn't she have his number saved yet - did he hang up on her after she failed to recognize him?

So Payal does want to be involved in politics after all. Wonder how she and Akash would do together considering their fathers are on different spectrums of the political scene? Although I don't see how a nice guy like Akash would want Payal, I guess it's true that opposites do attract and stranger things have happened.

Who is Mihir Gupta? Please don't him be connected to Khushi...Poonam is definitely going to go for the kill! It was interesting that throughout the whole story, we have kind of thought of Poonam in a bad light but in this update, you showed how lonely she really was, making me actually feel bad for her. However, I think that's about to change because I know she'll start digging into what K, D, Avtaar and Tewari mean very soon and I know that won't fare well for Khushi.

I really liked the conversation between Preeto and Khushi - glad that Khushi is finally starting to realize that she might have felt something for Arnav once and she might still feel the same way after all these years.

What does Akash want to talk to Khushi about her bhabi...At first, I really did assume that he wanted to talk to Khushi about her because he wasn't to pursue her, but now I'm starting to think that he knows something about Renu Bhabi that he wants to share with Khushi - really wonder what it is!

And what an ending!!! Or a new beginning in this case for Arnav and Khushi - I absolutely loved it (LOL kind of reminded me of the very filmy, "Rahul, naam toh suna hoga!")


Absolutely loved the update Radhikaji but I'm craving so much more!!!

Btw, are we going back to the notes from the past or still in the current??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: A_BA


I don't know what Horlick's is, but Jun and Jhalli always make me laugh with their eccentricities😆



Aami, Horlicks is kind of a nutritional drink very common in India. Its just like hot chocolate here, you mix the powder in hot milk and drink it.

I think Horlicks has been in India from very long. Then followed Boost, bournvita and such drinks. Here in the west it is similar to ovaltine except that I think it does not have cocoa in it like hot chocolate.
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Posted: 10 years ago
oye howe update they yeah to ike dum.
especially the end.

thank god for roy being so cryptic. small mercies :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
What a satisfying read this story is.
I had missed all these people so much during this last 'shortish break' in between the updates. When the update came, I read and read again, thoroughly enjoying being immersed in their world again. The end reintroduction was the closest we have come to rabba vey and of course my heart went Dhak dhak...right along with Khushi's.🥱 And...Arnav helped her...get rid of the Tewari would be heir...that is the most important and a first for him and her!!! This is the exception to the Rule they talk d about on New Years Eve when she told him "The exception to the rule would be if you fixed some aspect of my life actually.."

Preeto and Khushi conversations are so much fun because Pretto always zones in on Khushi's beaus and I find the discussion hilarious. Today she totally nailed that it and made Khushi admit with her own words that she thinks Arnav looks good...lol.

Poonam and her lapdogs Shashtri and HP just creep me out. Poonam again violated her grown sons privacy and I am so waiting for the day she gets what she so richly deserves.

There are some loose ends that I find very intriguing.

When Arnav dropped by Tewari & Sons and saw Aman there (when he came to gift the phone to Khushi) and he, Aman and Khushi had their awkward moments, why did he not notice her bandaged hands and find out about the phone frying?

What happened when he texted her about Baig sir and she texted 'who is this'?

Khushi has a suspicion about where Shyam is? How, Why?

Why did Payal return the Lengha, if she is getting married now or later...to Arnav...would she not need it anyway? I think Payal has made some decisions...I actually like her a lot. she knows what she wants and has no inhibitions about it.



Edited by Anamika100 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update...glad that Arnav nd Payal marriage has been postpone...but the best thing was that Arnav helped Khushi through Devesh nd her problem has been solved...wonder how will she react after knowing the truth...love preeto a lot nd finally she made
khushi to except her feelings for Arnav...she is such a cute girl nd Khushi's true friend...Poonam Raizada...the woman who always scared me nd know she is curious to know abt Tewari nd sons... .i m praying that she won't hurt Khushi this time ...Renu bhabhi...after this update i have a feeling that there is some hidden truth abt her...the last line... Arnav reintroduction nd Khushi's response...glad that this time she is more open for this friendship nd this indicate the new beginning of their relationship...m excieted to see some raba ve scene between them...nd plz Radhika this time don't make us wait too long...






Edited by seema13 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Caught up with all the chapters.

Brilliant.
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is amaazing
I mean wow!

Its so good

Cant wait for more ❤️

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