Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD II) - Page 5

Congrates..

Thread1 would do..

Awesome chapter.. Can't wait for the second part..

Anjali is a super duper character.. I really like her.. She brings in the right amount of spice to the story..

It is funny how Khushi gets mentioned jn raizada more than Payal or Jun by one or the other..

"Ja Payal, ji le apni zindagi" 😆

Lovely update. Wonder who Poonam Raizada was thinking about when she talked about Akash's wife...and love her feeling of foreboding.

Sorry Radhika, I'm the last, most ungrateful reader of this beyond awesome fan fic who still hasn't commented on it. I don't even know where to start or how to praise you. All I can say is that ...like who writes like this man? how can you possibly write with such depth in each and every sentence, such intricately patterned everyday things that happen in this story. Did you think about all of this from before or is the story progressing with your thought process as you proceed in its writing?

Amazing update.I have just join this journey of your story.

Poonam Raizada surely surprises me. She is a woman who is so emotionally attached to her family, her father and for her to do something bad to Khushi is quite ironical. What did Khushi do to gain so much wrath from her?
Akash and Anjali's fight over phone is quite funny. But seriously was Anjali so glued to the phone? I mean people don't get so glued to their own private smartphones so much. Waise Lavanya's act here was amazing.
Payal is way too stubborn. The selling point does affect creativity in a commercial way so she can't just ignore it.
"And he also congratulated himself for managing to have a conversation with someone where Khushi didn't come up for a good thirty minutes. Must be a new record." Really?? Is Arnav so much into Khushi that she is a part of all his conversation? During all their school days Khushi had thought about him and now the tables have reversed. Now it's Arnav thinking about her and she is staying away from him, more like ignoring him like he behaved with her during school. Issey kehte hain history repeats itself.
Khushi doesn't want anyone to say bad about her friends or people in general. She is quite a positive person that way. She had stopped Preeto for saying anything bad about Lavanya before and now she doesn't want Preeto to say anything negative about Arnav. And I don't think her saving Arnav from Preeto's judgement has anything to do with Arnav's redemptive behavior from past few weeks. It's just the kind of person she is. She wants to stay away from people who have troubled her in past but still won't say anything bad about them. But Preeto is a very good friend and wants only best for Khushi. Isn't this a very common quality of true friends? They will like a person who likes you, respects you and is there for you and would dislike every person who has hurt you.
Garima and Shashi may have not visited her in past years but are concerned about her like all parents.
I feel so bad for Khushi but at the same time I'm glad she had Preeto because it was her who with her constant efforts forced Khushi to complete her degree even if it was through distance learning.
Life has a way of changing people. Who would have thought that the ever supportive and positive Shashi would one day turn bitter and would even stop talking to his daughter? Khushi is simply acting out of love for her parents. One for her mother and another to show her father and the world that she isn't a loser and can do something fruitful with her life.
I have a feeling that Raghu was calling to tell her about how their trouble has increased and a political party has gotten involved in all this land deal. I wish she had taken this call.
Uh-oh this surely is trouble. They are going to demolish the shops who didn't sell them their land? 😲 This is so bad. I wonder how much Anand Raizada know about what happened to Khushi. Does he have any idea about his wife withdrawing the scholarship given to Khushi and thus forcing her to give up her studies in Alchemy college? I think it'll be better if Anand too gets a loyal JP for himself to combat HP of Poonam Raizada. 😛 Uff.. Khushi always finds herself in the middle of the storm of Raizadas. I hope Anand talks with Arnav pretty soon without HP getting a wind of it. I think they should fix up a meeting via message😉 Also Arnav should do something pretty soon to help khushi. He should not allow someone from his family or his soon going to be in-laws to disturb Khushi's life once again. This time he better do something than feeling sorry later. There is no point crying over spilled milk.
Oh btw where is Aman? I thought we'll get to know about Payal's lunch with Aman. 😳

lol wat a point made on phones.its strange how khushi ends up in every convo.matter of hearts ...arnav need to think.i thot in thischap arnav khuahi meeting wikl happen

You know Murphy's law...

Excellent chapter.. According to me please invest your time in writing.. we will find out the previous chapters.. a link to thread1 is more than enough...So happy to hear that the next chapter is coming soon...

Enjoying the story and the way you weave the characters and how Khushi comes up in their conversations.
Love your writing. Looking forward to part 2.