Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD II)

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Kamala

@Kamala05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Does Anand Raizada know about the rude act done by his wife to Khushi? That one selfish act messed up Khushi's family.

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

looks like all the players are coming to the same page, finally...Like where this is going...
nice update 😊

what I enjoy most, may be more than the story itself, is your commentary on the characters...I love your analysis of Anjali...very relatable. And preetho, someone who would bring notes and copies and break khushi's self imposed exile... amazing friend.

I wonder if Anand Raizada is aware of Poonam's hand in Khushi's failed dreams!!

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Unreserving on thread 2.

First of all congratulations on thread 2.

All roads from the Raizada-Mallik-Singh clan lead to Chandni Chowk; to Khushi to be precise.

The emotions that you generate in me through this story are not describable. A lower middle class family trying to make it big, the high handedness of upper class people, a father who failed on all levels and becomes bitter, a daughter who survives through her failures, they are all around us yet we dont wait for a minute and observe them closely. Arnav, Payal, Anjali, Garima, Baba, Preetho, Poonam, every one of them make me think, "Oh Yes! I have known a person like this" but retrospectively, in our journey of life we never really care.

The other day I happened to chance upon Saiyyu (Rasgulla_sp) commenting on a story. I became so wild. That woman ditched my story saying that she resolved not to read any ongoing FF. Then I saw it was yours where she had commented, I couldnt be cross with her any longer. After all, Khushi is so irresistible, toh Saiyyu kya cheez hai?

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shimmy_ruble

@shimmy_ruble

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

loved the chapter radhika! Nd this is only part one..now we get a clear picture of what went wrong between khushi and her father..though it was warming to witness taking his 1st step towards hs champion! Does anand raizad knws what hs wife did to the grl whu saved hs life? ...and why do i have a bad feeling about khushi nt taking raghu yadav's call..the story is getting interesting with every chapter!

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

That was fantastic part A Radhika...

Progressed quite a lot...

As Anand says, somehow or the other all are connected to Khushi... Either they like or dislike... Emotions seem to be on the extremes where she is considered... Life has been a big doldrum for her... But she is one strong girl to withstand these without cowering! You know her life is filled with people thinking thats its okay to hurt her over and over again as she can bounce back... In my eyes definitely a girl with the strength and grit of a warrior...

So Arnav has changed for the better... Now he has taken after his father and shed the shadow of his mom! No wonder he keeps seeking out Khushi and tries to amend his wrongdoings...

Nice to see Anjali and Arnav's bond and understanding...

Loved the update..👍🏼 Now waiting for Part B...