The Alternate Universe- Retelling IPKKND (Thread 1 Complete)

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Shalini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: rk2127
I liked the update with you keeping the story particle with Khushi facing trouble with her weak command on English in a finding good jobs.
Plus here Arnav is engaged to Lavanya to keep his family off his back for marrying her but what are his thoughts about marriage is he the same as IPK or he wanna marry just not now?

I like Akash speaks up here just like Payal has her own mind which you showed in last update.

Hmmm... Surely Khushi can't get a in AR and certainly not as the assistant to CEO with her educational background. So it has to be something else. What did you plan to make them meet again?

What role does Lavanya has to play here? Just an arm candy for ASR or something substantial?

Hey Ripu...such a lovely thing to see your comment first thing in the morning. Yeah, a real world...a single mother...makes it for a tough life. LIked your inference about Akash and Payal 😃 and also you are bang on right about Khushi...

For the rest, lets see how it spans out. Your feedback surely gave me food for thought...thanks!

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Shalini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Spoonai
It's an really interesting story and it doesn't seems to be the usual track so I'm excited to read more.
But one thing I would like to happen in the future and it's that ASR knowing because of this arrogance of releasing the video of khushi and the trouble he cause her. I so wanted to happen in the show but unfortunately it didn't happen.
There is so much I wanted to happen in the show but nothing like that didn't come up :(

Hey dear...thank you. Yes the idea is to create something different from the usual track...becoz its an alternate universe right? Hehe 😆

I really liked your pointer about the video thingy...I will definitely make sure it happens...at least in this FF.

Apart from it, if there is anything else you would like to share...you are welcome here!

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Shalini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: renee.bee
Thanks for the pm
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Awesome story.
Bt this updt had so much of family.
Please bring out how Arnav ended up getting engaged n how come he is still stuck to la n the family is ok with him living with la.
on d show it was just to defy nani he got la at rm.

Hey Renee...

Thanks for pointing that out.

I will surely bring out how Arnav ended up getting engaged with Lavanya in a couple of updates!

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: arnaushi
Really nice update!!!
this story is getying intesrested as you dismissed all the possible ways arshi could meet as in the soap.
Waitinng for more..plz update soon

Hey dear...thank you so much!

Thats so funny the way you pointed out 'dismissed the possible ways'

Bring it on !

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Shalini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: addictedx53
You have left us rolled up in knots regarding the whats after this. Can' t wait!

Bingo!

My Job is done here...

Hopefully I can continue this as we go further with the story 😆

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Shalini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: addicted25
Hi there are you sure Anjali and Khushi are not married to the same man? They both seem to be absent. ? I take it that Khushi will end up at AR. La wants to tie the knot but Arnav hadn't introduced the family to her yet, so he is engaged? Is it to Anothef girl of nannies choosing? Ooh is he the two timing one?

please keep me posted ;)

Hey PK...thanks for the comment!

Naah. Am not sure about any of what you have said.

Lets figure out one thing at a time 😃 as the story progresses

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navjot7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

nice uodate
i donot understand why is khushi not giving divorce to shyam
and arnav he still remember khushi
he is engaged to lavnya may be due to family pressure but nit want to marry her
waiting for arshi meet
thnx for pm