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sman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

omg Archi..you took my breath away..amazing update

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segad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Gut wrenching. could've, should've, would've

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luvbug

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

OMG 😔 ... such a heart wrenching update... Garima is no more and so is Arnav walking away from her...and Akash wants nothing to do with her either... oh Khushi...and shyam is away to on a business trip...la and anjali pls come to the hospital...

oh pls update soon...very beautifully written chapter

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Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

What a beautifully written yet painful chapter. Her emotions so evocatively portrayed. Their rawness leaps out at you. And then to have to hear Arnav distance himself from her ...

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angullgrl91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

That part was phenomenal!!! You did a fantastic job writing it! I could feel Khushi going spiraling down as everything falls apart.. it was sad but so well written! I can't wait for the next update!!

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anu1017

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Congrats on the new thread!!! Awesome but heart wrenching update, felt so bad. Please update soon!!!!

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Jyothi Rockzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

I agree it's the most difficult n most tearful updates of this story... Great job writing it.. So is this an interlude...? Where will the story go from here.. How will Khushi react to this loneliness n abandonment..? Will she just close out all emotions from her life... Will she have a mental break down..? What is Arnav planing to do..to his life

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canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

OMG Khushi, what must be going on in her mind now.

She just lost her mother and Arnav breaks up with her on the phone.

Really I never thought Arnav could be so insensitive. Who breaks up on the phone? Who says such things in a voice message. What an asshole he turned out to be in this matter.

Please Archi, show some mercy on Khushi.

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sankadevi25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

This was such a sad post! Poor Khushi, she recognizes how important her mother truly was to her :(
And I know Arnav wasn't aware of this, but I can't help but feel that Khushi is going to have such a hard time getting over this--these two incidents are more than enough for her to go back to an even more bitter state than previously.

Arnav's decision seems to not refelct what he truly wants--he loves Khushi, and I don't think he understands how much this will set him back with her, when he realizes his mistake and comes back.

Also, what would Shyam say about all this?