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N0306

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

I feel so much for Khushi.. Poor her.. Arnav is gonna regret this voicemail big time.. I know why Arnav is doing this but such a bad timing.. I hope shyam is with khushi soon.. She would need someone before she is shattered into several pieces.

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praseetha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

emotional update.

feel bad 4 khushi 😭

Edited by praseetha - 10 years ago

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crazyff-fan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Such an emotional update... Felt really really Bad for khushi... 😭

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LoLo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Sorry but boo hiss for this chapter. To see your mom breathe her last and at the same time have your love to reject you over the phone, no less. That's cruel. Yes wouldn't wish this moment on even the worst of my enemies.

Btw Arnav is a coward. At least say your weak excuses to her face.

The critique is for the situation in the chapter,not the writing btw.

Edited by LoLo - 10 years ago

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Jessie

@jessjazz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Nicely written!

She went through all that 'emergency' with her mother by herself. Poor thing. And you ended the chapter with Arnav's message... talk about bad timing!

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srilathas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

mmm...speechless!!!!

Ya arnav's message has come to her at a time where including khushi, even we did not expect...but yes it has to happen...certain things are not under our control and we need to just face it...

I know what khushi is going through is not at all easy or shouldn't happen to anyone...BUT Khushi is Khushi...She will definitely bounce back...

Waiting for the next step to unfold...

Awesome update dear...not even a nuance away from the flow of the story...it just gels with the way things are supposed to happen in this story...

Great great keep it up...

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Oh that was a very sad and emotional update - well written archi

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shree10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

OMG!! What a terrible double blow to Khushi!!

I wish Shyam was there with her. and Arnav- over phone?? really??

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jisa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

khushi's remorse for garima's death brought tears to my eyes... !!!
No word to explain that..
n Arnav couldn't have chosen a better moment to finish everything between them..!😡
well...it wasn't his fault that he didn't know about Khushi's situation that her mother had just died..
but...how can he say that on phone...because he was afraid if he saw her while telling all this...he could never do this...
But really feeling bad for khushi...!!
He lost too many thing in one day...first...it was her best friend Akash...then her mother...n now..Arnav...
Even shyam is not here...!!
She is truly alone..!!!😔