ArHi FF: Silent Whispers Thread 3: Link to Th 4 Pg 1 - Page 28

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U r one awesome writer dear.

I followed your story from the very beginning l, love the plot and concept , it's a very modern realistic version than what we see in the soaps ,I would make Shyam help akash and arnav realise that as they love anjalie he loves his sister too and how would they feel if he ditches their sister for what they put khushie through because they were emotional cowards and not man enough to own up to their own mistakes they made khushie a victim ,but he and anjalie shd make them feel guilty by predenting tha t they broken up , khushie shd move on and work for a new company give ahem a year to come out of her moms death ,then try and get her and arnav to talk it out .

Finally Arnav confessed to Anjali dat he loves Khushi..

Awesome update loved both siblings conversations

Beautiful as usual, quite intense as well! Thanks for the pm.

Loved the much awaited Khushi and Shyam talk along with Anjali making Arnav see the reality..

update was superb.. luv the conversation between arnav and anjali even khushi and shyam.. luvd the update and waiting for next already.

khushi and Shyam had that much needed talk.