TaaRey FF : GO AWAY.., BUT I LOVE YOU [Index-page 2] (PART 4 : PG-8) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
nice teaser
waiting for you to update
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Nice teaser
Confusing nd full of suspense
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
nice teaser awesome story pls update soon and thanku for pm
Posted: 10 years ago
#64
tks for the pm..
nyc teaser
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Wow nice teaser. Wanna know the past
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Interestng story
all parts r wondrful
teaser is nyc:-)
plz update nxt part want to knw the actual story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
wow wot an amzaing start of my day.. Amazing Taarey's stories dat too both by u.. U are brilliant writter.. lybd dis concept too. but m being confuse too. TaRey got married b4 also. nd incident wot kind of incident.. very curious to.knw.. plzz pm me plz plz plz & updte soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
interesting concept and nice story
read all the chap in one go
2nd marriage of them
dint get it
confused... loved the dress selection
interesting teaser
do cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
mind-blowing concept and updates were awesome
just read all chapters
teaser is amazing, really suspenseful
hope taarey doesn't separate cause of Rey's turmoil's
please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70

PART 5

Opening the door.., He saw her his newly wedded wife was standing near the window lost in her thoughts.. She was looking like a shining moon..Taani felt some one is gazing her, she turned only to meet his eyes.. the moment itself they got lost in each others eyes.. But Rey broke it and this made Taani too come out of their trance..

Rey : mm... Taani tum change karo.. mujhe kuch kam hai..

Taani nodded.. Saying this Rey went to the Terrace...Taani too changed and was sitting in bed..

Rey look at the sky... a pool of past memories came into his mind... Taani too was drowning in the ocean of past..

FLASH BACK

Shekhawat mansion is very grantly decorated.. Everyone is busy moving here and there to complete the arrangemets as the marriage starts in some hours.. In one of the rooms in upstair, a girl is standing before the mirror.., her beautiful almond eyes is shown which is dipped in kajal... her face is angelic with the very light makeup.. She wore a beutiful black dress having sparkling silwer white stone works.. She now wore a silver heavy diamond ear ring and a beautiful necklace and wore a set of black-silver bangles on her both hands.. and last she completed her dressing by puttig a sigle small white stone bindhi..


Knock.. Knock..

Avantika : Taani... abhi thak ready nahi huyi...? yeh ladki bhi na kitni time leti hai ready hone mein..

Taani : Nahi maa.. am ready... Taani opens the door, Avantika enters in her room without looking at her to take something from the cupboard and says..

Avantika : kitani time leti ho tum.. thumhari nahi.., thumhari bhai ka shaadi hai..

Taani : haan.. haan..time lagta hai.. akhir meri eklouta bhai ki shaadi haina.. toh acha toh dikna haina..

Now Avantika looks at her and gets wonder

Avantika : meri beti bahot achi lag rahi ho.. and she take some kajal from her eyes and put it on the back of taani's ear and says.. Meri beti kop kisi ka nazar na lage...

Taani hugs her and went see her bhai

Mean while

A handsome dashing guy enters the manshion.. each girl present there go weak on their knees.. they are dying for his one look.. he was wearing a sherwani with black and cream colour... he walks in avoiding the attention he is getting.. then a lady enters followed by him.. They are none other Rey and his mother Nandini Singhania. Rey's dad and his elder brother is in london for business purpose. He was a famous business tycoon. She want her son to get married but dont know why he is refusing... taayum's parents and rey's parents were bffs from college days. Rey and Swayum are bffs from childhood. Rey and taani dnt know eachother as rey rarely come to shekhawat house and that time taani would not be at home. And when taani was at the age of 17 she went her bua's house in delhi to complete her studies.

Rey and Nandini were warmly welcomed by Avantika... Avantika hugs Nandini.. Rey took blessing from her

Avantika : aao beta..

Rey : haan.. aunty swayum kaha hai..

Avantika : getting ready beta.. aur tum apne dost ki shaadi attend karne mein abhi time mila hai kya..? swayum is very much angry on you..

Rey : oh damn.. vo aunty mujhe ek case solve karna tha

Avantika: Oh then its ok beta.. aur tum (teasingly to Nandini) tum itani jaldi kyu aayi ho? Kuch hi ghantome shaadi hoga na toh uski baad aana hain na thumhe...

Nandini : Are sorry na.. voh meetigs ke wajah aa nahi paayi

Avantika: what sorry.. u told me you will be here 1 week before the marriage.. aur tum aayi ho shaadi ki kuch ghanton se pehle.

Nandini : Avantika am so sorry.. Yash aur Rithvik had gone london.. so yahan ke meeting mujhe handle karna pada and thats y i couldnt come.. sorry na.. Riya toh do hafte se yaha hai...

Avantika: mmm.. chal maaf kiya.. aur dekh lena mein Rey ki shaadi mein isehi late aaunga.

Rey : Aunty no... mom is eating my head with this word.. please aunty aap bhi shuru mat karo..

Avanthika : Tum tabi late aaungi na jab iski shaadi hogi.. vo nahi hone wali hai.. Tum nahi jaanti durga.. he is not willing for any marriage..

Rey : oh.. not again.. mom stop na.. its not good for me to stand here.. am going to meet swayum.. he goes..

He ewent upstair to see swayum.. he was just walking looking the direction... suddenly he heard a melodious smiling voice..cool breez started to blow..making hairs fly in air...he looked at that direction.. world stood still for him.. there he a girls walking in his direction and talking in phone.. wind was playing with her hairs.. a sweet smile was plastered on her lips.. that makes her more beautiful...while speaking on phone she was doing actions with her hands also that makes sound of her bangles..she was not bothered about the surroundings..she was smiling, frowning, poutig while talking.. automatically a smile start playing on his lips.. she was nearing him... her smell is intoxicating him.. she passed him.. he put his hand on his heart and closed his eyes and leaned to the pillar.. he opened his eyes and looked for her but she was no where to be seen.. he went in swayum's room

Rey : hai dude

Swayum : hai re..(suddenly he remembers that he is angry on Rey).. tu.. tu.. jao yaha se.. abhi time mila hain na thumhe..

Rey : Sorry na yaar.. ek case solve karni thi.. please sorry na..

Swayum : Not accepted Mr.ACP...

Rey again hears the same melodious sound of her.. he got lost in her thought..

Swayum : Rey.. Reyy..

Finally swayum shook him..

Rey : haan.. haan.. kya kar rahi ho

Swayum : tum kaha lost hogayi

Rey : vo ladki..

Swayum : kaun ladki..?

Now rey got sense

Rey : nahi.. case ke baare me soch raha tha

Swayum got suspicious and asked : toh vo ladki kaun hai?

Rey : kaun ladki... tum bata (changing the topic) u forgive me right?

Swayum : ya.. now u r safe but agli baar yeh kiya na toh ur sorry will be never accepted.

Rey : agli baar mathlab tu dusari shaadi bhi karega? Kamal hai yaar abhi pehli shaadi bhi nahi hui lekin dusari shaadi ki planing bhi kar liya? Kya mein sharon ko bolun?

Swayum : are yaar.. chup kar.. mera agli baar ka matlab meri little sis ki shaadi.. oh.. ab yaad aaya.. tune kabi use mili nahi hain na..

Rey : ya.. i hadnt met her.. see thats so strange na.. matlab our parents are bffs, we are bffs, aur thumhara hone wali wife I mean Sharon tumhari sis ki friend hai aur mera bhi friend hai lekin abhi tak teri sis ko nahi mila...

Swayum : the day may be today.. chal meri sis ko intro karvaata hoon tumhe..

They went downwards...there he spots taani standing with her friends...

Swayum : there Taani is look..

Rey too looks at the direction and got shocked as that was the same girl rey saw before and got lost in her beauty...

Rey in mind... Taani strange name hai but cute bhi hai..

Swayum : Taani..

Taaani : haan bhai...

Swayum : meet my best friend Rey... I mean ACP Reyaansh Singhania, Crime Branch of Police.

Taani by hearing the name itself got butterflies in stomach..she slowly moved her eyes to look at him..She met his eyes... she got lost in that ocean blue eyes.. she felt a shiver.. Rey too got lost in her chocolate brown eyes..but came back to sense and saw swayum watching them with wired looks..so he thought to make light the environment.. that time swayum mom called him and he went from there..

Rey : Hai.. am Reyaansh...

He forwarded his hand.. but she was too lost in him...he waved his hands.., then she came back to him and composed herself..

Rey : Hai am Reyaansh... and forwarded his hand..

She hesitatingly took his hand.. rey and taani both skip some beats.. and both felt a shiver ran through their spines... both got in an intense eye lock... both come back to sense hearing sound of something falling..

Taani : Hai.. am Taani...

Again silence..

All these scenes were seen by Mr&Mrs Shekhawat, Riya, Swayum and Nandini.

Riya : Mom.., aapko Rey ki shaadi ki chinta ho rahi hai na... lagta hai us chinta ko chodne ka time aagaya hai...

Avantika : Haa mujhe lagta hai aaj Swayum ki shaadi ke saath saath kyu na hum Rey aur Taani bhi shaadi kare..

Dev : Haa mein bhi yahi chaahta hoon..

Swayum : Kya mera best friend aur meri behen...mujhe wired lagta hai...

Nandini : Wired...? Dekho kitane ache lagthe ho vo dono saath mein.. they make a cute couple... I love take Taani as my daughter..

Dev : Yash ko aane do.. hum hamare chote princess aur prince ko jald hi tie up kare...

Like this they all were planning to TaaRey's marriage... Swayum was happy as he know Rey jaise ache ladka Taani aur koyi nahi milega.. Both Singhania and Shekhawats always had this wish but couldn't express.. But may be god have given them a chance..

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