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Wow this is one amazing story! Very realistic and characters are very well moulded and presented. Love the way you show Arhi along with natural occurences of day to day life. Khushi is filled with a lot of sadness but she has some how braved away to a better position in her life. Arnav seems to be having a mysterious past attached to him. Now it seems like Arnav has hopelessly fallen for Khushi. I hope he takes the initiative and display some feelings... Khushi has got a proposal, is it from Shayam by any chance as a way of revenging her for her outright rejection towards his advances? Last update was just fantabulous! It showed suppressed feelings of Arnav making an appreance and he didn't even try to mask it in front of Khushi when she questioned him for his abrupt behavior during the past few months, I hope this time they take a step forward in their relationship. You write marvelously and its an absolute treat to read your writings. Waiting to see how you will unfold the story😊

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Originally posted by: Usha30

Hi

Just came across this Ff .. It's amaZing
Keep going

welcome... 👏

Originally posted by: amus5

Payal and her friends were quite lucky to escape from such a hell hole. I'm sure this is a hard hitting lesson of life for Payal and she's once bitten twice shy. Though writing off that Payal cannot be trusted anymore is a bit extreme because she has learnt her lesson.Arnav has been truly god-sent for the girls in their hour of need

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

she is putting end to ... it so the wont be anymore .. for payal to realize...

well she is wound person... not when her sister

is doing the same...

Poor Khushi..

Originally posted by: Crystalcraze

I was literally stalking your story...it bore fruit😳

Nice going...hope to see where this is going...soon😃

join the club .. there is few people stalking...including me 😃 😃

Originally posted by: Aish002

wow..very event-filled update..well written.the moment ver arshi stand in middle of road at morning..vth her crying in his arms...tat was a great scene...loved it...😊

👏 👏 the best...

Originally posted by: zafi

Awesome update.⭐️

I loved it.❤️

I am glad Payal is fine.

I totally understand Khushi.

She feels betrayed by the only one she can count on.

I am looking forward to reading more.

Thanks.😃

she depend on payal... and her mistake... got question on her trust